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Okay but

Has anyone been brave enough to say Mazikeen x Ella Lopez

Because fuck me that would be cute

Endless sunshine Ella and her gruff gf Mazikeen beating the shit out of Ella's enemies in the background (enemies she has no idea even exist)

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This blogger is proud of Charoltte Richards

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Happiness Will Come To You.

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Putting out “we are pleased to inform you...” vibes for everyone out here of any age working toward their dreams in school, career, etc.

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That look tho.

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Ashley Benson and Cara Delevingne are engaged! 💍🏳️‍🌈

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How surface texture affects bloodstain patterns. (Video)

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Don’t call me out like this

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Coming into a fandom late

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I’ve said this to people in their face and they still keep doing it. Ugh…

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If boomers insult millennials, they’re screaming they weren’t good educators.

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Broke: I need to take my medications in order to function normally

Woke: My medications give me superpowers, such as the ability to concentrate and walk around

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Sorry if you have answered this a thousand time : But what kind of advice do you have for stilted scenes? You know the ones, where it feels like dry cardboard and tastes like wood chips.

Rescuing a Dull Scene

When a scene feels stiff and dull, it’s usually because it doesn’t serve a purpose. Remember that every scene in your story needs to matter. If you could remove a scene and not affect the plot or the reader’s understanding of a character or the setting, the scene needs to go.

So, the first step in rescuing a cardboard scene is to figure out whether or not the scene has a purpose. If not, you can just ditch it, but make sure to save anything you might be able to incorporate into another scene, such as a nice bit of dialogue, a cute moment, or a particularly nice description or bit of wordplay. 

If the scene does serve a purpose, ask yourself whether there might not be a better way to accomplish this purpose. Could you move the scene to a different place or situation? For example, a conversation between two characters about a recent breakup might be more interesting in a cute coffee shop than in the living room of one of the characters. Would adding or subtracting characters make things more interesting? And finally, is there something unexpected–some emergency or bit of drama–you can insert into the scene to jazz it up a bit? For example, the two friends sitting at a cafe talking about the bad breakup one of them just went through… what if the ex walks in? What if the ex walks in with a new girlfriend? Not only might that energize the scene a bit, but it provides an opportunity to further explore the situation, how your character’s coping with everything, and potentially plant some seeds for what happens next. This is the “what’s the worst thing that could happen right now” method of spicing up a scene. :)

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pour one out for my boy, the Wordless Wonder™, Trevor Stines

what a G, he keeps coming back doing fuck all with no lines and still has plot and fandom relevancy

we stan a true king