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Writing Tips

Punctuating Dialogue

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➸ “This is a sentence.”

➸ “This is a sentence with a dialogue tag at the end,” she said.

➸ “This,” he said, “is a sentence split by a dialogue tag.”

➸ “This is a sentence,” she said. “This is a new sentence. New sentences are capitalized.”

➸ “This is a sentence followed by an action.” He stood. “They are separate sentences because he did not speak by standing.”

➸ She said, “Use a comma to introduce dialogue. The quote is capitalized when the dialogue tag is at the beginning.”

➸ “Use a comma when a dialogue tag follows a quote,” he said.

“Unless there is a question mark?” she asked.

“Or an exclamation point!” he answered. “The dialogue tag still remains uncapitalized because it’s not truly the end of the sentence.”

➸ “Periods and commas should be inside closing quotations.”

➸ “Hey!” she shouted, “Sometimes exclamation points are inside quotations.”

However, if it’s not dialogue exclamation points can also be “outside”!

➸ “Does this apply to question marks too?” he asked.

If it’s not dialogue, can question marks be “outside”? (Yes, they can.)

➸ “This applies to dashes too. Inside quotations dashes typically express—“

“Interruption” — but there are situations dashes may be outside.

➸ “You’ll notice that exclamation marks, question marks, and dashes do not have a comma after them. Ellipses don’t have a comma after them either…” she said.

➸ “My teacher said, ‘Use single quotation marks when quoting within dialogue.’”

➸ “Use paragraph breaks to indicate a new speaker,” he said.

“The readers will know it’s someone else speaking.”

➸ “If it’s the same speaker but different paragraph, keep the closing quotation off.

“This shows it’s the same character continuing to speak.”

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「 𝐒𝐄𝐄𝐊 & 𝐃𝐄𝐒𝐓𝐑𝐎𝐘. 」

𝐩𝐚𝐢𝐫𝐢𝐧𝐠: jake sully x fem!reader

𝐰𝐚𝐫𝐧𝐢𝐧𝐠𝐬: nsfw content(18+), minors dni. submissive jake, dominant reader. oral sex/blowjob (male rec.), handjob, choking, praising kink, use of ‘baby’ & ‘princess’.

𝐬𝐲𝐧𝐨𝐩𝐬𝐢𝐬: “please,” he whimpered, placing his hand at the back of your head, “give me more.”

𝐚𝐮𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐫’𝐬 𝐧𝐨𝐭𝐞: you asked so you shall receive. submissive jake sully is now finally crossed off on my masterlist. i hope you all enjoy! reblogs are appreciated, but never pressured.

“this okay?” running your thumb over the tip, you licked your lips as his head was thrown back at the feeling.

faint kisses were trailed down his chest, harsher ones being left where it would be most noticed by the rest of the clan.

there was no denying the way you felt towards jake. not only was he your boyfriend, but you had desired him from the start.

tsu’tey called you stupid for falling in love with a dream walker, you considered it different.

jake was truly like no other you had, well, technically you’ve never had anyone else touch you as he did.

or should i say, he’s never had someone touch him like you did?

with a nod of reassurance, you started pumping his cock, looking up to make sure he was okay with your movements.

groans left his throat as he felt your mouth on him, the edge of your tongue swirling around his tip softly.

euphoric. that’s what he could’ve considered the feeling of you.

“please,” he whimpered, placing his hand at the back of your head, “give me more.”

listening, you took the head of his dick into your mouth, slowly taking his length down your throat inch-by-inch.

“baby, please,” the grip on your head grew tighter while his whines for you became incoherent.

only sounds of pleasure were escaping from him, those sweet moans filling your ears like no other.

your pussy quivered at the sight in front of you; your mate begging for you to make him cum, aching for you to help him release.

saliva slid down the sides of your mouth, his cock continuing to make you choke.

pulling your mouth off his member, you took a breath, smiling at him tiredly. “i like hearing you beg,” kissing his tip, “tell me how much you want to cum.”

“y/n,” he brushes your hair back, holding it into a makeshift ponytail. “f-fuck, please, i need you.”

the stutter in his words had your pussy aching to fuck him, yearning to make him cum. your arousal was soaking your panties, nearly dripping from between your thighs.

your hand started pumping again, making sure to get all the way down to the base. “you need me bad, hm?”

leaning down, you had yourself a taste of his balls, licking a long stripe from the bottom all the way back up to his tip.

“c'mon, tell me how bad you need to cum, baby.” you whispered, looking up at him from beneath.

his moans could be heard throughout the forest, those very cries bouncing off the trees, into a beautiful symphony.

“need you so bad,” he whined.

he altered between whimpering your name and whispering profanities to himself, feeling his release coming fast.

watching his expressions, you go along with the strokes, praising him into his release. “go on, baby,” you reassured him, “make me proud and cum.”

“please, please.” his eyelids started to close, thighs beginning to shake violently under your arms.

licking your lips, you stuck your tongue out flat, jerking him faster.

it was one last pump that pushed him over the edge, the sight of you on your knees was a close second.

“fuck, y/n! shit,” a long list of curses came while you continue to stroke him through his high, his cum landing all over your face, mostly inside your mouth.

the sweet taste of his semen coated your tastebuds, the smallest drop leaking down your lips.

a giggle erupted from you, the glimpse of such a big man falling under the power of you and your words making you feel, well, a little more powerful than you thought.

“mm, you're a lot more tolerable when you're moaning my name,” you mumbled, wiping the little bit off your lip.

he was too out of breath to answer, not agreeing or denying. his legs were numb from trembling, you assumed his voice gave out after all that moaning.

you sent him a cheeky wink, putting a hand on his thigh. “you up for some more, jake?” biting your lip, “or are you too tired?”

he grunted as he sat forward, grabbing you by the back of your neck tightly. “you're going to start begging for me next, princess.”

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Jake Sully x Reader One Shot

A/N: This is just a little one shot fic for my new pal @anchoeritic​. It’s her birthday today! Happy birthday! This is probably nonsense. I’m very tired and I haven’t written anything like this in a long time, but I hope you enjoy it! - Raz

CW: super light NSFW, hair pulling, tooth rotting fluff lmao this shit weak asf

As soon as Jake was accepted as a Na’vi. An Omatikya- he became the next available bachelor on the market. Almost everyone who was interested in taking a mate before Eywa started looking at him. He was exotic, after all. An alien in Na’vi form. Subtle physical differences, a different mindset. A different way of thinking. Not to mention… he was absolutely gorgeous to boot.

At first Jake didn’t seem overly interested in taking a mate. He spent his time with Neytiri, Grace and Norm. Other Dreamwalkers that were allowed into the village probationally. For a while, most interested parties thought that Jake was interested in Neytiri. The way they bonded during the time Neytiri spent teaching him our ways. But he wasn’t. 

He wanted you. He started spending more time with you as the days turned to weeks. Coming fishing, joining you for patrols. And you fell for him. He was caring, compassionate, and a total skxwang. But you cared for him anyway. He was hot-headed, yes, and stubborn to a fault. But by Ewya’s grace if you couldn’t keep your eyes off him. It just so happened that he couldn’t keep his eyes off you, either. 

Finding this out, however, was a complete surprise. 

It was a soggy morning. Cold, foggy. Perfect for hunting. You and Jake had been out for a few hours already. You’d left before the sun had risen to get a good start. He’d seemed distracted since the day before and you weren’t sure why, but something was clearly on his mind. 

“I need to talk to you,” he’d said right after picking up a trail. It had almost startled you, it had been so quiet for so long. Just the two of you and the trees. 

“About?” You’d replied, standing back up straight and turning to face him. He looked almost tortured, the way his eyes bored holes into yours. 

“I’ve been thinking… back on Earth, where I come from. Mating for life isn’t something I ever thought about. And here, with the people. I feel them staring,” his blue hand came up to rub his face, “waiting for me to choose a woman.” Hearing this, you weren’t sure what to think. Where was this going? Eywa help you…

“Spending this time with you, I’ve- I see you. I see /you/. God, you’re gorgeous.” He paused, chewing on the inside of his cheek before admitting, “ I want you.”

The two of you fell into silence. Jake, becoming more and more visibly uncomfortable, and you, processing the words you’ve just heard coming out of Jake’s mouth. Jake wanted you. 

“I-” You started to say but before you knew it, you were interrupting your own thoughts and pressing your lips to his with such fervour you must have come across like a dying man, desperate for air. Jake seemed surprised for all of a second before he was tangling his fingers through your braided hair and kissing back with force. 

His other hand trailed from your neck down to your waist where he held on for dear life. Tongue swept across your lips, trying to tempt you into letting him in. He smirked at the way you whimpered, pulling away to take in the sight of your flushed cheeks, and swollen lips. 

With the hand still wrapped into your hair, he tugged, not enough to hurt, but enough to pull your head back and grant him access to your neck. He pulled you in close to him and nuzzled his face into the exposed area. His lips grazed your skin, hot breath sending shivers down your spine. 

All of a sudden, Jake must have decided he’d found what he was looking for, and started sucking on a spot that made heat pool in your stomach. He only let up when there was a deep purple mark showing proud against your skin. 

“We should get back to hunting-” Jake said breathily, appreciating the way your blush had grown and flushed down your neck. His eyes were dark with lust, and he seemed conflicted.  “We can… finish this later. I- fuck, I just want to kiss you.” 

Your face split into a grin, right hand coming up to cup his cheek. Jake’s face leant into your palm, and he cheekily bit at your thumb, just barely enough to hurt. The lust-stricken cocky look on his face made your cunt swirl with arousal.

“There will be plenty of time for that,” you responded, pulling your hand away to rest against his chest. “The Village is waiting on us.” 

Jake leaned in closer, pulling you in for another deep kiss, hands pushing you up against the tree behind you, pinning you in under his weight.  

“They can wait a little longer..”

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Omg i don't know why i only found your blog just now. Your writing is INCREDIBLE and you're so talented

oh gosh thank you so much 

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Nope the link to the masterlist doesnt work. The url is still to your old url maybe thats why it says nothing here?

Thank you so much for letting Me know. I'm working on fixing it all up tbh.

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Daryl Dixon

Imagines

Negan uses Daryl to get to you

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Kol Mikaelson

Imagines

Bringing Kol back to life and refusing to undo the spell

Kol’s ex curses you so Kol can’t touch you

You like Kol but he likes your sister

You become a Zombie after Kol brings you back

You become a Zombie after Kol brings you back - Part Two

You become a Zombie after Kol brings you back - Part Three

One Shots

Your boyfriend cheats on you and Kol is there for you

Kol is there for you when he finds out you are unhappy

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Klaus Mikaelson

Imagines

Aurora turns you and Klaus helps you

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Elijah Mikaelson

Imagines

Being cursed to drink Vampire blood and Elijah offering you his

Working with Elijah to catch a serial killer

Being pregnant and turning to Elijah for help

One Shots

Reader is child and follows Elijah

Elijah turns you

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Lydia Martin

Imagine

Lydia tries to make it up to you

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Proinsias Cassidy

Imagines

Convincing Cassidy you’re there for him

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Sam Winchester

Imagines

Getting stuck in The Cage to get Sam to say yes to Lucifer

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Simon Bellamy

Imagines

Simon saves you

One Shots

Sticking up for Simon

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Arthur Pendragon

Imagines

Arthur chooses Gwen over you

Arthur chooses Gwen over you - Part Two

One Shots

Being jealous of his arranged marriage after refusing his advances

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Lucifer Morningstar

Imagines

Being a Vessel and Lucifer saves you from the Angels and Demons

One Shots

Lucifer finds you after a drug bust drugged and confused

You have a vision and Lucifer comforts you

Lucifer saves you from a serial killer

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Hey guys, I want to apologise for being so inactive. I plan to change that. 

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Apocalypse Prompts #1

A1. “I’ll shoot you.”

A2. “Who are you?” 

A3. “Before you, there was nothing really I wanted to live for.” 

A4. “Whats the point now?”

A5. “The Dead walk the Earth and you want me to what?”

A6. “You’ve changed.”

A7. “I’ll teach you.” 

A8. “Everything is different now. Including you.”

A9. “We could be the last people on Earth right now.”

A10. “You can’t die! I love you!”

A11. “This new world is corrupt and you’re the last innocent thing left.”

A12. “We could die today.”

A13. “Without you, there’s nothing for me to live for.”

A14. “You’re the only one that keeps me going now.”

A15. “If you die, I die.”

A16. “Stay with me!”

A17. “Do you know what the most underrated perk of the apocalypse is?” 

A18. “There’s no one to tell us no now.”

A19. “I need your help.”

A20. “What do you miss most?”

A21. “God, I need a shower.” 

A22. “Please don’t die out there.” 

A23. “I could kill for a movie right now.”

A24. “I miss technology.”

A25. “At least everything is free now.”

A26. “I’ll protect you.”

A27. “Stay there, I’ll be right back.” 

A28. “The Dead make better company than you.”

A29. “Maybe I’ll just go out there now and get bitten. It’s not like you care anyway.”

A30. “I love you, please, come back.”