peachesandmilktea

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highly underrated sumeru moment imo

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Feeling DANGEROUSLY inspired by El Tango de Roxanne

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OMG THANK YOU SO MUCH???? I am going to CRY ahhhh 😭😭 I never expected this little fic to be so loved (well at least not until Geri pitched in with her amazing ideas - the angst is pretty much all hers)

bawling my eyes out from @peachesandmilktea ‘s new chapter (between the devil and deep blue sea)

please send it some love because it deserves so much <3 🥲

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Just checking in. Hope your doing well! I miss seeing you post and I hope your okay!

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Hi Anon this is SO SWEET thank you 🥹🥹🥹 sorry I disappear like this sometimes 💔

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my writing so far </3 it’s the introduction chapter and i don’t plan on writing the others likes this. i just wanted this to sum up the family dynamic so when i get into the actual story, i won’t have to worry about the confusion.

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born from flesh, warm and soft. little hand wrapped around a single finger in such a gentle yet tight embrace. welcoming smiles and tear stained cheeks of joy; a memory to forever be engraved into the hearts a family that will only ever break again and again.

a promising start, they swore. this one will be different.

slowly chipped away like stone broken by a chisel. nothing but a cold, lifeless statue built from a solid foundation until it was nothing but a beautiful viewing piece to show off. nothing but polite gestures and conversations passing by the days. days that soon turned to weeks, then months. the unfortunate amount of time that gathered up into a year of more nothingness.

empty words of affection that weren’t even spoken to you but to another. the same topics over and over. work, meetings, politics. yet they never strayed too far from one subject; you.

young, promising. an envision of the future. their future, the one they’ve mapped out from the moment you turned five.

you were a late-bloomer. four was when it should have happened. the disappointment that filled the new dull look in your fathers eyes for the first time will always be unforgettable.

new to you, at least. it was always there. the same eyes that the naive child you once were believed to hold the calming ocean in, were the same eyes that held raging tides for your family.

years of abuse and neglect had made done their damage. your sweet mother had grown distant, only ever answering in small sentences. memories of her standing on the porch in a beautiful dress soon faded into a small glimpse of the white walls of a hospital, an old blue gown draped over an empty woman. dead, yet still breathing. she’d never recover.

your eldest brother torn down into a hallow shell of rage. every which way he turned was trouble. it followed him. latched onto his back, tearing through his frayed shirt and seeping into his skin. it embedded itself into his veins, tainting his bloodstream and altering his brain chemistry for the worst.

Hi am SO SORRY for the time I took to reply to this, especially because I know how intimidating it can be to share one’s writing. You seemed nervous about it but I promise you you have nothing to be nervous about, this is very good!

I really like the way you set the scene and the mood by listing little details. It’s a great way to show don’t tell, which is always what one should do when writing ; it is subtle and yet works perfectly because each word hits harder.

The choice of the vocabulary and the details in question are very delicate, the way you craft the scenes and the short story is very skillful because your choice of words works very well.

You shit between ideas and between scenes, flashback sometimes, and the transitions are very well done. Really, I have nothing to criticize in such work (and I am trying very hard to be objective), I really really like it and would love to read your next works if you write any!

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heyyy, quick question. if i sent you part of something ive written (not much since i think the content would be out of your interest) would you be up for giving me tips? i tried being kinda poetic but i feel like it reads very incoherently 😭 i had lots of fun writing it tho which is what matters ig

Hi, of course!!

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PEACH WHAT IS SCRIVENER PLEASE I BEG OF THEE

Scrivener is a writing software!!! It looks very complicated to use but it’s actually not that bad (I did watch a few tutorials though) and now I can’t write without it hehe. I like that you can edit the whole interface in the colors and fonts you want, and also if you use a Mac (which I don’t 💔) you can add a pretty background right behind your text to help you get into the atmosphere. It has super useful functionalities but I like it the most for the word count goals and the statistics! You can try it for free for 30 days I think!

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nothing truly matters in life, i was put on this earth just to have a good time and yet why am i still SO FUCKING STRESSED

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✨ HAPPY YENNAYER TO TIGHNARI AND DEHYA ✨

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is this the day i finally edit the next chapter of Between the Devil and the Deep Blue Sea

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my current writing technique is not allowing myself to write A SINGLE WORD unless i can handle reaching a 500 words count that very same day because if i write less it'll fuck up my scrivener stats and i'd hate that

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i love being support in genshin teams oh my god, just watch my c6 crowned faruzan double your damage, boom

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i hate writing cover letters i fucking HATE it

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The year started less than a week ago and my boyfriend asked me to move in with him LITERALLY on the other side of the world, my sibling came out so now I have not one but two!! sisters!!, one of my students asked me to be her bridesmaid, I found super cheap tickets to travel abroad next week so I'll be doing that, and idk but 2023 is starting pretty well I'd say

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Cold soup? I can't decide if it's that bad or not

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I've heard Gaspacho is good but I'm not touching that

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Kazuscara | A Ghost of a Memory

Part 1/?

Also hbday to scara ♡

[peachesandmilktea]

I postponed the writing of my thesis research proposal as many times as I could and here I am, one day before the deadline, EXHAUSTED and with no motivation whatsoever 🥹