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Doctor, I can’t tell if I’m not me. (@cupsofjade.bsky.social)

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Punky running in the fields

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Berry pickin

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all of my ocs are inherently neurodivergent in someway because i dont know how neurotypical people work

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SHATTERED. 🪞 for @/teuslow.bsky.social

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[TR] LevaeEN

Twitch Reward for LevaeEN on twitter Twitter | Twitch | Deviantart | FurAffinity | Patreon | Website

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she found a flower for you!

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how do you draw angry/snarling faces so well???

whenever I try, they just look like they're crumpled paper 💀

I hope this helps :D

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if it's good enough for you, then it deserves to be made. don't let anyone else decide if your story is worth it or not.

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Circle of dreams gnoll druid design for @bootydragon8 // Thank you so much again//

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「 EUILLCYS 」 🌿

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Raffle winners from my bluesky Januarry raffle//

First is for @velkyr and the second is for koretalksshit on bsky/

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Subtext Through Sentence Structure in Writing

Ever noticed how a character’s true feelings can be hinted at without them saying a word? That’s the magic of sentence structure—a subtle tool to convey emotions, tension, and subtext in a way that feels natural. It’s all about how you arrange your words. Here’s how you can use it to give your writing extra depth:

1. Anaphora (Repetition for Emphasis)

Anaphora is the repetition of the same word or phrase at the beginning of successive clauses. It can create a rhythm, emphasize a point, or show a character’s emotional state. It's like a mantra or a sense of growing obsession in thought.

Example: "I can’t do this anymore. I can’t keep pretending. I can’t keep lying to myself."

Here, the repetition of “I can’t” highlights the character’s frustration, their internal conflict, and emotional breakdown. The more it repeats, the more you feel their emotional weight.

2. Asyndeton (Omitting Conjunctions for Speed or Chaos)

Asyndeton is when you deliberately leave out conjunctions (like and, or, but) to create a fast-paced, almost frantic effect. This can be great for moments of tension, confusion, or a character’s overwhelmed state.

Example: "She ran through the streets—pushing past crowds, dodging vendors, barely noticing the rain."

By skipping “and” and breaking up the flow, the reader feels the character’s urgency, the rush of the moment. It mimics the quickness of their thoughts and actions.

3. Choppy, Fractured Sentences for Internal Chaos

When a character is dealing with inner turmoil, sometimes their thoughts don’t flow smoothly. Fractured sentences—choppy, disjointed—can show their disarray or emotional breakdown.

Example: "Why did I do that? What was I thinking? No. No, I—I can’t—I can’t fix this."

This kind of sentence structure mimics the chaotic, fragmented thoughts of someone who’s in distress. The disconnection reflects their internal turmoil.

4. Polysyndeton (Overuse of Conjunctions for Overwhelming Effect)

Polysyndeton is when you overuse conjunctions like “and” or “but,” giving a sentence a heavier, more drawn-out feeling. It can show a character’s exhaustion, hesitation, or even their growing tension as they try to process a situation.

Example: "He wanted to scream, and cry, and punch something, and tear everything apart until it made sense."

The repeated use of “and��� here conveys the overwhelming nature of the character’s feelings, as if everything is piling on top of each other, adding to the emotional overload.

5. Ellipsis for Unspoken Thoughts or Tension

Ellipses (the ...) can be used to indicate something unsaid—unfinished thoughts, unspoken tension, or the sense that something is being withheld. This subtle tool adds layers to your writing, letting the reader feel the weight of what’s not said.

Example: "She looked at him... but said nothing."

The silence here speaks volumes. It’s not just that she’s not speaking—it’s the unspoken tension between them that gives this line its emotional weight.

TL;DR:

Anaphora = Repeating for emphasis, building emotional weight.

Asyndeton = Omitting conjunctions to show speed, urgency, or chaos.

Choppy sentences = Fractured thoughts or emotional breakdowns.

Polysyndeton = Overwhelming feelings through too many conjunctions.

Ellipses = Showing subtext through what’s unsaid or withheld.

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a moment of clarity

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it never ends