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PLEASE for the love of the universe read anti-colonial science fiction and fantasy written from marginalized perspectives. Y’all (you know who you are) are killing me. To see people praise books about empire written exclusively by white women and then turn around and say you don’t know who Octavia Butler is or that you haven’t read any NK Jemisin or that Babel was too heavy-handed just kills me! I’m not saying you HAVE to enjoy specific books but there is such an obvious pattern here
Some of y’all love marginalized stories but you don’t give a fuck about marginalized creators and characters, and it shows. Like damn
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Fanfic writers, I am begging you- even with dialogue that is clearly attributed, start a new paragraph with each new speaker. The reader shouldn't have to wait until after the dialogue is spoken to understand who is saying it.
Even if it's one word?
Yes.
But it makes things so long!
Great! Your stories will be the king of scrolling, a feast of thumbs, and a gentle stroke across a phone screen.
This convention exists for a reason! Each new paragraph should be a new idea or a new speaker. It's a shortcut for our brains to know that we have jumped across a gap and into the unknown, and you as the writer are about to explain to me where we have jumped to, but at least I know we are somewhere different.
Please practice this! I see so many good fanfic I want to read but except for this huge, glaring issue and it becomes impossible to understand what is happening.
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writing tip:
if you push buttons on a keyboard, letters will appear on the screen. and with that power you can do anything
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Writing Websites
1. a website with a list of superpowers and what they are
2. a website that generates random au ideas
3. a website that generates names, basic info and futures in a bunch of languages
4. a website that checks your grammar
5. website that lists types of execution in the states
6. a website with info on death certificates
7. a website with info on the four manners of death
8. a website with info on the black plague
9. website with information on depression
10. a website with info on the four types of suicide
11. website that lists famous quotes
12. website with different kinds of quotes
13. a website with info on food in every country
14. a website with a list of different colors
15. website with a list of medieval jobs
16. website with a list of fabrics
17. website with a list of flowers and pictures
18. website with a list of flowers and no pictures
19. website with a list of poisonous plants
20. website with a list of poisonous and non-poisonous plants
21. website with a list of things not to feed your animals
22. website with a list of poisons that can be used to kill people
23. website with info on the international date line
24. website with a list of food allergies
25. website with a list of climates
26. website with info on allergic reactions
27. website with info on fahrenheit and celsius
28. website with info on color blindness
29. website with a list of medical equipment
30. website with a list of bugs
31. website with an alphabetic list of bugs and their scientific name
32. website with a list of eye colors
33. website (wikipedia sorry) with list of drinks
34. website with a list of religions
35. website with a list of different types of doctors and what they do
36. website (wikipedia again sorry) with a list of hair colors
37. website that generates fantasy names
38. website with a list of body language
39. website with a list of disabilities
40. website with an alphabetic list of disabilities
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the suffering never ends
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Literally none of my story ideas come with a plot, ever. WITHOUT FAIL, it’s always just an Aesthetic, like two and a half characters, some very, very vivid settings, and a weird concept. Never plot. Not even an inkling of a plot. My brain tosses me this cool stuff and is like welp i’ll be back in 4-5 business months
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She-Who-Fights-And-Writes FAQ
If any of your asks can be found on this page, I probably won’t answer. (Sorry!)
I also don’t really answer asks that can’t be applied universally to everyone; I can’t tell you how to write your story! Sometimes you have to be able to work out issues in your WIP on your own; it helps you become a better writer!
There’s A LOT more than this, so if you need anything feel free to check out my answering asks tag!
Once Upon A Time (Starting)
How to Outline (For Short Stories and Longer Works!)
How to Get Into Writing Fiction
How to Overcome Writer’s Block
How to Choose Which POV to Use (Source @evans-writing)
How to Write First Person POV
How to Write Certain Tenses
Is Your Story Better as a Fanfic or an Original Work?
Stuff Happens (Plot)
How to Write A Scene (AKA get through the boring parts) (Source: Jerry Jenkins)
How to Write a Fight Scene
How to Write Gangster/Mafia Fiction
How to Make Your Story Longer
How to Make Your Story Less Sad
How to Make Your Story Scarier
How to Write About School
How to Write an Apocolypse
How to Write Magic
How to Write a Missing Person’s Report
How to Write Pain
How to Write a Sub-Plot
How to Write a Terrorist Attack
How to Write a Villain Redemption Arc
How to Write Switching POVs in Fanfiction
How to End Your Story (Source: Now Novel)
Descriptions + Dialogue
How to Expand Your Vocabulary and Utilize English Idioms/Figures of Speech
How to Write a Smooth, Rhythmic Narrative
How to Write Dialogue
How to Avoid Purple Prose
How to Balance Description and Dialogue
Prologues and Info Dumping
Master List of Speech Tags
Characters (Who you will inevitably wind up torturing)
How to Write Complex Characters
How to Write (Good) Female Characters
How to Write a Villain
Villain Motivations
Ways To Tell if Your Characters are Too Similar (How To Cut Characters)
How to Write Young Children and Babies
How to Write Siblings
Love Stuff
How to Write a Romance
How to Write Falling In Love
How to Write Healthy Relationships
How to Write Makeout Scenes
How to Write Toxic Relationships
How to Write Teasing in a Romantic Relationship
Fantastic Beasts (And How to Write Them)
How to Write Shape-shifters
How to Write Characters With Wings
How to Write Angels (A History of Angelic Lore)
How to Write Characters with Tails
How to Write Zombies
How to Write Gods, Goddesses, and Dieties
How to Write Animals in Battle
How to Write a Hive Mind
Diversity
I am a straight, white, cisgender woman and shouldn’t give you any advice but to DEFINITELY include diversity! Here are some great blogs for you to follow!
@writingwithcolor
@yourbookcouldbegayer
@scriptautistic
@actuallyblind
@cripplecharacters
Writing Deaf of Hard of Hearing Characters
Miscellaneous
My Writing Playlist
How to Become a Writing Advice Blog
How to Write Constructive Criticism
Books You Should Get As a Writer
Writing Memes
Worried About Your Search History?
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i’ve been doing my homework on how to break into a writing career and honestly. there’s a Lot that i didn’t know about thats critical to a writing career in this day and age, and on the one hand, its understandable because we’re experiencing a massive cultural shift, but on the other hand, writers who do not have formal training in school or don’t have the connections to learn more via social osmosis end up extremely out of loop and working at a disadvantage.
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a handful of (probably) unpopular opinions on writing:
a kiss scene doesn’t have to lead to sex. it can, ofc, but it doesn’t have to. your characters can kiss for the sake of kissing and nothing more. kissing is hella enjoyable in and of itself, so it doesn’t always have to be a means to an end
a story doesn’t have to be steeped, marinated, and executed with tragedy to be a Real Story. obviously you can and should put your characters through the wringer, but if you don’t tell a story with hope and happiness it’s not really a story worth telling. be brutal but don’t be 100% dismal and bleak
a fantasy doesn’t have to be centered on a war, especially if you don’t feel fully capable of writing about war. they’re tricky and unruly beasts, and if you aren’t willing to give them the proper treatment (read: not romanticizing them), you’re better off not writing about war in the first place
your royal character can be fine with arranged marriages. they don’t always have to run away to escape them only to fall in love with the betrothed they were running from in the first place
on the note of romances, your story A. doesn’t need a romance if it doesn’t fit and B. doesn’t necessitate every character getting into a relationship by the end. for some people, romance isn’t their idea of a happily ever after, so you don’t have to force that into your book
perhaps the most unpopular, but it needs to be said: your female character should not slap your male character. ofc there are times when a slap is warranted, but if he’s just being a dick he doesn’t need to be slapped. that’s physical assault and abuse, which should never be acceptable, even if it makes some people laugh (it shouldn’t and yet it always does 🙄)
your female character A. doesn’t have to be thin, B. doesn’t have to be a Strong Female Character, and C. doesn’t have to go through nauseating hardships (read: sexual assault or physical abuse) for her story to be worth telling
these are all i can think of off the top of my head. feel free to add on if you think of any!
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Forever indebted to @mostlysignssomeportents for this one.
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Writing Asexuality in Fiction - Masterpost
I’ve finally built up a nice series of essays on writing asexuality and asexual characters in fiction. Here they are, all together in one place. They’re intended to be useful for asexual and non-asexual writers alike. They are also meant to be inclusive of gray-asexual and demisexual characters, although my knowledge is limited there.
These essays assume you already have a basic knowledge of what asexuality means: a general lack of sexual attraction to other people. This is not Asexuality 101; for that, check out the links on my resources page.
Character Development Questions
Demisexual Characters and Relationships
Glossary of Words and Concepts Used in Asexual Communities
Fetishization of Asexuality
How to Show That a Character is Asexual
Negative Responses Asexual Characters May Get When Coming Out
Plot Ideas
Potential Sources of Conflict For Asexual Characters
Sex Scenes with Asexual Characters
Stereotypes to Avoid
Other potentially relevant topics
Aromanticism 101
Aromantic Representation, or Lack Thereof
Lithromantic Story Prompts
Relationships That I Want to See More of in Fiction
Sherlock Holmes as an Asexual Character - May be useful if you need an example or inspiration for how asexuality can influence a character and their relationships.
This post may be updated in the future as I write more stuff on this subject; I’ll link to it from my blog’s homepage so it’s easy to find.
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fun studying tip: if you’re a procrastinator, play tom jones’s “what’s new pussycat” on repeat while writing your papers and do not turn it off until you are finished, it will motivate you to finish that essay as quickly as possible
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reasons to not quit writing:
your writing is a skill, not an inborn talent (unless, yeah, maybe it is). not everyone can do what you do and love
everyone says they want to write a book. everyone has what it takes to write a book. not everyone does it anyway. you be the small percentage of success you read about
your writing will always seem brickshit horrible because you wrote and read it a million times
you love this writing thingy. quitting it will be like cutting off your fingers one by one.
someone out there will want to read what you wrote.
someone out there wants to know what is on your mind.
someone out there appreciates your art. they will share it with their friends. they will share it with their loved ones. they will share it with their future self because maybe what you wrote saved them.
if you give up now, you know you will just come back to it again, whether it’s years from now, months, or next week. you love writing, that’s why you planted the seed of thought that you are going to write this book, and whether you come back to it or not, your unwritten stories will come back to you.
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Literally none of my story ideas come with a plot, ever. WITHOUT FAIL, it’s always just an Aesthetic, like two and a half characters, some very, very vivid settings, and a weird concept. Never plot. Not even an inkling of a plot. My brain tosses me this cool stuff and is like welp i’ll be back in 4-5 business months
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Trying to find the perfect name for a character, but you only have a vague idea of what you want, like “he feels like a 2-syllable kind of guy” or “It need a hard consonant at the end.”
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“Nope,” I whisper as I exit out of a fic with no paragraph breaks.
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