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A Anon's Zoophobia
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Zoophobia memes and other stuff, potentially.
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clonebro · 4 years ago
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clonebro · 5 years ago
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clonebro · 5 years ago
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You did very good. I'm proud
Arts from today
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Sketch of Phoenix and Vlad. Btw, if you had to caption this or image the dialogue, what would it be.
Drawing of Persephone
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A sketch of Syrellis. I hate his hair so far
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And finally.... a sketch of random people who I follow. @clonebro , @briannartoonz , @stanleycole12 , and @eclecticcoyote
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I’m very tired. Happy Easter everyone
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clonebro · 5 years ago
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So am I arethere, so am I
*inhale *
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I'm lonely
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clonebro · 5 years ago
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soft asks:
cherry - what is your sexuality?
lollipop - favorite makeup products?
daydreams - if you could be anything or anyone, who would you be?
october - what month were you born in?
caress - do you like to snuggle?
ivory - describe your pajamas?
golden - favorite stationary product?
freckles - most-worn article of clothing?
twilight - best friend?
silk - do you like k-pop?
poppy - favorite pastel color?
dimples - most attractive features of a person’s face?
sunkissed - autumn or spring?
buttery - favorite snack?
whisper - how much sleep do you get?
pencil - do you own a journal?
cupcake - are you a good cook?
honey - favorite term of endearment?
clouds - describe one of your favorite dreams?
velvet - who was your first crush?
paper - favorite children’s book?
peaches - do you have a skincare routine?
mochi - favorite studio ghibli film?
backyard - did you ever have an imaginary friend?
strawberry - favorite fruit?
kiss - have you ever kissed a friend?,
nightlight - do you read before bed?
shampoo - favorite scent?
skin - what distant relative are you closest to?
aphrodite - favorite actress/actor?
cuddles - do you have any pets?
lace - if you own any dresses, which is your favorite?
sheets - sanrio or san-x characters?
cream - frozen yogurt flavor?
watermelon - do films ever make you cry?
sapphos - favorite poet?
plush - how many stuffed animals do you still own?
roses - what flower do you find most beautiful?
sweetheart - favorite mug/cup?
sunset - what are your pronouns?
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clonebro · 5 years ago
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“dis” is looking very nice! thank you.
(never use that phrase again)
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@clonebro
Owo wat be dissss??????????
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clonebro · 5 years ago
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What I imagine my followers be like:
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clonebro · 5 years ago
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You know what?, I'll take it and then some.
Good job.
Sum aarrrttzzzz
First, a wild Spooky in her natural habitat
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Second...
Hey, @clonebro ? Remember when you requested a drawing of Roger in armour? Well, the drawing started out that way, but....
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If you would like me to trash this and fulfill your original request, I completely understand.
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clonebro · 5 years ago
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Yeah, of course
Rough animation of Spooky
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Should I finish it?
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clonebro · 5 years ago
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“ME MUM WAS A TUBE! A TUBE ON MT. F*CKING EVEREST!”
Happy birthday @clonebro xD Decided to draw Tom as Kitten from TTS. This is the first time I ever drew anything from WH40K, so I’m sorry if I messed anything up. ^^’
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clonebro · 5 years ago
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It's my birthday tommorow!
Whoop whoop
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clonebro · 5 years ago
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Misconceptions?
What should I do next?
Please request!
Options
The shipping thing where you guys suggest a pairing and I give suggestions as to what you can do with said pairing
I can do something with my own characters
Review fanfiction
Do a misconceptions post thing
Artzzzzz
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clonebro · 5 years ago
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Bravo weird lady!
ZP Fanfiction Review
Hellooo internet! Welcome to GAAAAAAYYY THEORY-
I am so sorry.
Anyway, welcome to what I can only call a test run for a series I've decided to start. For more info, I'd recommend reading my previous post. To give a brief explanation, I criticize written works done by others in order to help myself and others improve, and recently I've turned my attention to ZP fanfiction (as you do). This series is in no way meant to shame anyone or anything like that. I am simply stating my opinion, and anyone reading this can take whatever they want from it.
Now, while I do take requests, for the first few of these posts, I put the titles of random fics that I have read, and pulled one out at random. Since I admittedly haven't asked these writers for permission, if one of them contact me and wish for me to take a review down, I will. Do not send any negative bullshit to anyone whose fics I review.
With that said, I hope you enjoy, because today we're going to look at a fanfiction posted on Wattpad by a Tumblr user known as @thiccdemonlover69-blog. Now, something I want to make clear is that this was written back in 2017. This isn't representative of this user (who I will refer to as TDL) 's current writing abilities. The fic in question is this one here,
So, originally, I was going to do a full synopsis of the story, but I ultimately decided against it. Not only did it make the post longer than it needed to be, but knowing myself, I would undoubtedly leave something out by mistake. Therefore, I encourage you to read the story before continuing this review. I will be going through it chapter by chapter, and I will give my thoughts on each one.
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Chapter 1 "A Normal Day... or so Damian thought "
Not too much to say here since this is an introductory chapter and not much really happens in it. Because of this, however, I thought that I would take the opportunity to address what I already predict will be an elephant in the room.
Like most of us fans, TDL has their Headcanons and theories about the ZP characters. You'll notice in the story that Satan and Damian have a slightly different relationship than in the comic, as Satan is more present in his son's life here. This is just an example of what I'm talking about. Now, I actually don't have a problem with this by itself. I'm all for writers including their own unique ideas in fanfiction, however, I have a problem with some of the changes made by TDL to the characters and setting. There's nothing egregious here, but as we go on, I think you'll be able to understand what I mean.
One positive for this chapter is that it serves its' purpose as an intro very well. We get an idea of the upcoming conflict without it being spelt out.
Chapter 2 "At Hell No. 2 (School)"
Ok, so overall this chapter in itself isn't terrible considering how it introduces the relationships between various characters here and further sets up the upcoming conflict. However, I have to ask some questions about the characters. First, I've noticed that throughout the story, certain characters that you'd expect to make an appearance I guess just don't exist here. Sahara and Narissa (Dame's mum), for instance, have apparently been snapped by Thanos. Meanwhile, some characters have noticeably different personalities. Jack, for instance, is much less shy and passive and has more or less taken on Zill's personality. Also, I guess he and Dame are buds now. Kayla... is a whole topic that I will touch on later. Eli wasn't introduced in the comic, and the best we have is his character sheet, so I guess he's ok here? Addi is in character, Autumn barely exists, Zill... just kind of exists? Finally, Dame has had a few weird changes to him that I'll touch on in a bit.
Ch. 3 "A Not-So-Normal School day"
Ok, so let's talk about Kayla real quick, shall we?
A common sin committed by inexperienced writers is the tendency to villanize characters in order to push the narrative forward. In this story, Kayla is practically cartoonish in how awful she is. She's physically harmful, a bitch, a homophobe, and is overpossesive of Zill. I get the idea that TDL doesn't like Kayla, because to me it seems like she was turned into a bitchy Leeson. Now, Kayla in cannon can get frustrated and angry at times, but for the most part, she's a nice person. She's the type to defend others against bullying, and would never bully someone else. Not only that, but I don't buy this version of Kayla because canonically she's scared of Dame. His appearance alone is enough to make her yeet herself across the room. If she did something such as knocking something of his off his desk, she'd probably panic.
I can only imagine two reasons why she was changed in such a way. One, to have Damian not crush on her. Now, if this is the case, I don't think villainizing Kayla is necessary. You can just say that Damian outgrew his crush on her and be done with it. Two, is to create drama. If this is the case, is Kayla really the best candidate for the drama causer here? I wouldn't think so, and you could probably replace Kayla with someone who'd be more likely to bully someone, like Rusty or Baltimore or something.
Aside from Kayla, another problem I want to mention is that art class scene. Addi's mum getting a minor to pose nude in front of his class is actually kind of creepy, and I don't believe that it would be aloud.
Chapter 4. "The Second, more worst bully"
First of all, that title could use a rewrite.
This chapter mainly exists so the story can show how much of a bitch Kayla is now, and I've already spoken about that. I will mention some positives, however. Something I like in this story is whenever TDL adds in little details like characters having secret handshakes or characters eating dinosaur nuggets. I know this seems small, but this random little specifics give the story a cute, quirky charm that I am here for.
Chapter 5. "The Moment Damian has Been Waiting for "
Not too much goes on in this chapter. We get some funny bit of dialogue ("Ooh, is that drama I see" made me crack up) and a wierd scene where Dame is suddenly One Punch Man, and he cracks Jack's skull open by simply bonking him on the back of the head.
Since there's not much to say, I want to take the opportunity to talk about Damian in this story. First, again, I don't have an issue with writers adding in their ideas to their fics. The whole thing with him being a cross dresser? Cool. That's it. That is my entire thought on that.
There are some other changes that confuse me, however. For instance, the ADHD is integrated really weirdly. It gets brought up at really random times, nothing is really done with it, and overall it just seems to serve as a reason for Dame acting hyper. The story could have just had one line that said "Damian has ADHD " and nothing would have changed.
Another thing, and this isn't something exclusive to TDL, but apparently Damian is homosexual. Not bi, just gay. This is a change I actually see a lot of the time with Dame, and I don't know why. Like... is it so difficult to imagine him liking more than one gender? Do you think that he needs to be gay in order to be in a homosexual relationship? Because he doesn't. Bisexuals can do the same thing as gays. It's just such a random change that it just bugs me.
There's also the fact that Damian is apparently amazing at everything. He's an A plus student, a great actor, a great artist, etc. I'm not sure what TDL is going for with this angle. It's something else that just seems random, because the only thing that this does is make teachers confused about why Dame is sad and it makes other characters freak out about how brilliant Damian is.
Chapter 6. "The Date"
Ok, let's all just admit it. Damian going "RIBS RIBS RIBS RIBS..." is in one way or another a fucking mood for everyone. Don't you fucking lie to me.
The interactions between Eli and Dame are mostly cute, and we get some funny dialogue here too. The one issue I have is something not exclusive to this chapter, and it's how Damian is kind of treated like a child. Characters talk about him like his a little kid, and even the way Eli talks to him to calm him down in this chapter is (to me) reminiscent of a babysitter dealing with a hyperactive kid. I bring this up now because I want you all to remember this. It will get creepy later on...
Chapter 7. "The crazy household of Damian "
Easily my favorite chapter.
We still get bits where Dame is kind of treated like a child, but it's barely noticeable here. TDL is actually pretty good at writing wholesome scenes and scenes where a couple characters are just hanging out. This chapter actually reminded me of events that happened in my own life, so believe it or not, I actually got a nostalgia hit reading this. This chapter just put a smile on my face. Shame that it came right before the worst chapter. Buckle in kids.
Chapter "It's Time... and Absolutely Everything goes to shit"
What a fitting title!
First, let's talk about how not a lot in this chapter makes sense. Ok, so everyone knows that Kayla doesn't like Dame and shit could go down if they ever cross paths. And yet, they bring Damian to a party at Kayla's house, and act surprised when shit hits the fan. This happens again when Damian tries to talk to Kayla, and she spits in his drink. I don't know what any of these characters were expecting. There's a weird focus on food in this chapter. Kayla ironically becomes a badass because she decks someone and immediately follows that up by heading off to pop lock and drop it on the dance floor. Zill exists, and he's drunk. He makes out with Damian because.... Kayla's a homophobe? I think that's the reason? Jack literally gets into a fucking wrestling match with Kayla. Rusty is just here. Eli disappears for a while, and I guess Addi just teleported out of the party because the only contribution that he makes is that he messes up the time.
Ok, my favorite scene here is when Dame is like "oh I don't wanna dance bc I sad" and Rusty just shows up for some reason and remarks very loudly that Damian is good at ballet. This info is so shocking, the DJ, who somehow heard this over the music, turns off the tunes, there's awkward silence, and then everyone laughs at Damian. No. I don't get it either. Like... how did anyone hear Rusty, how fucking loud was Rusty talking, how did people know who Rusty was referring to, why is the concept that a dude does ballet so shocking, especially when you'd think that the fact that he's the antichrist is more shocking? Like... am I just having a fucking stroke right now?
Oh, and remember how I mentioned how Damian is treated like a child in this story? Remember how Damian is a teenager, and in other words, a minor? So, apparently, not only do we learn that Damian once got a boner but his father spanking him, but apparently Styx, an adult, has had sex with Damian on multiple occasions. And yes, this info is revealed in throwaway lines. If you listen closely, you can faintly make out the sound of someone screaming "FBI, OPEN UP!"
Granted, TDL was a teen at the time of writing this, so no big whoop on their part. Still doesn't make this any less creepy.
Oh yeah, and Damian fucking dies at the end except he doesn't because plot twist, bitch! We were reading a Steven Universe fanfiction the entire time! Ok, no, this is actually another Headcanon by TDL, but st this rate, between the Headcanons which anyone who doesn't know TDL would be confused by and the characters acting weirdly, I am honestly having trouble saying for sure if this fic takes place in the comic's setting, or in some type of AU.
For brevity's sake, I'll just go over the last two chapters. Tldr, Damian is fine, Lucifer gets Kayla expelled, Kayla get tortured, Lucifer is super happy with himself, and everyone lives happily ever after.
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If I had to sum up my feelings on this story, the first half for me is a mixed bag. It has its' glaring problems, but the humor and writing style make the fic endearing and enjoyable. If the story ended at "the Date ", I would have thoroughly enjoyed it. But then everything just kind of falls off the rails. Stuff happens because... well I guess just because. We get an unintentionally creepy ending to an otherwise wholesome trip, and the Headcanons included here are put in so randomly with no explanation that I can only imagine what someone who didn't have any context to them would say.
The thing is, I think that this fic actually gives a good example of a lot of problems beginners have. I'm certain that TDL nowadays could write a better story, and they certainly have potential. Hell, if one were to fix a few things in here, this fic would be a lot better.
Still, I hope that this review gives you at least a couple ideas of what to look for in some of your own stories. Also, feel free to tell me what you think.
I apologize for wasting your time.
- ATOUN
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clonebro · 5 years ago
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Ya did good coyote!
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Decided to draw a ZP themed artwork in hopes of raising donations for bushfire relief. There are still numerous out of control fires, with enormous animal casualties. People have also been killed (including a friend of my friend), and displaced. If you have any spare money, please donate it to the charities I listed below! Link to a government website showing recognised charities:
https://www.pmc.gov.au/registered-bushfire-charities Charities I personally donated to, if anyone wants to donate to the same ones as I did:
https://www.rspcansw.org.au/bushfire-donate/
https://www.wires.org.au/donate/emergency-fund
https://fundraise.redcross.org.au/drr
https://www.rfs.nsw.gov.au/volunteer/support-your-local-brigade Thanks so much in advance for your help! Kayla belongs to Vivziepop
Drawn by me.
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clonebro · 5 years ago
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10 blogs I think are wonderful and deserve some love:
@eclecticcoyote
@arethereanyoriginalusernames
@scarecrowinc93
@twilightna
@clonebro
@zikkafriday
@carol1826
@thefreakyfader
@zerosenpie
@minigmaenigma
Reblog and share 10 blogs you think are wonderful too! 💖
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