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Activity #7

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Mini Critique

True Narrative

A true narrative essay us a true story with plot, action, suspense characters and setting which delivers a theme (a lesson observed).

Example of True Narrative 

Newspaper narrative 

Documentaries 

Testimonies 

A first-person account by the person (narrator) who has faced instances of social and political inequality, oppression, or any specific form of marginalization.

Example of Testimonies 

A witness standing on a trial

Reviews of food critique and accommodations

Introduction 

1. David Jacobson 

2. "Dahmer"

3. The documentary's narrative od famous serial killer Jeffrey Dahmer is given  in the introduction. It gives an overview of the topic and provides the reasons for the review. It could still be improved with more background knowledge on Dahmer's crimes and the events of the documentary, especially whether it focuses on his personality, the investigation, or the effects that result from his actions.

Summary 

Dahmer was a controlled, organized serial killer who manifested all of the phase of a serial killer. He selected his victims by coming to a bar searching for a prey. He retained souvenirs of his victims body parts and photographs. 

Evaluation 

1. The main argument of this documentary about the famous serial murderer Jeffrey Dahmer could be on his psychology, the historical events behind his crimes, and the impacts of his actions on society and his victims. It can also look into issues like mental illness, how it affects of human society and the weaknesses of law enforcement and mental health systems in preventing his crimes.

2.  There's a serial killer too in the Philippines; he's Juan Severino Mallari. He is the first documented serial killer in the Philippines. During the Spanish colonial period, He was a priest in Magalang, Pampanga.

3.The evaluation presents an honest evaluation of the documentary, emphasising its positive and negative aspects. Though it admits that a few viewers could find the video disturbing it also supports the film's plot and use of people and old footage. This creative approach offers readers an understanding of what they can expect from the documentary.

Conclusion 

The film's positives and negatives are repeated in the conclusion, which simply summarises the critique's main ideas. It might be improved, though, if it provided a more firm review or suggestion regarding the documentary. A more focused ending might make it easier for viewers to fully understand the overall meaning and worth of the movie.

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About You

Eunicia loves music as much as she enjoys the sound of the trees swaying in the breeze from the cold wind in her little school,  surrounded by stunning mountains. Shawn loves capturing photographs of the magnificent Antipolo mountain scenery. Despite their differences, these two have the same heart and affection for one another.

After reading a book, Eunicia noticed something next to the table that she had never seen before in her life. She searched for it to see what this thing was about. She discovered that this is casette tape from the old year. She took it and listened to the song until she fell asleep.

While Shawn was taking pictures of the library, he saw that his cassette tape was being used by the girl beside her. He observed the girl. "She's cute," he whispered. Meanwhile, Eunicia is finally awake, and she's shocked because she saw a handsome man in his school uniform. "I've never seen you before at this school were you a transfery?" shawn answered "I'm not, and I've never seen you before too." Eunicia noticed that the library had changed, so she panicked, Shawn told her that the year was 1989, not 2023. After she discovered that she's in the 1989 year, she didn't know what to do, so she asked for help for Shawn. 

Every day after class, Shawn and Eunice go to the amusement park to take pictures and talk about their different lives. They developed feelings for each other, but they also knew that it was impossible. Shawn put the cassette tape on his pants, and they listened to the song. not until Eunicia goes back to her year. After many years, Eunicia and Shawn meet while slowly playing the song that they listened to each other when they were teens "Do you think I have forgotten about you?"

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6 Words

Crying silently, makes me hurt badly.

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BOOK SPINE

Dream Catcher

Dream Lover

Reaching You

Every Game

Maybe Forever

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5 NAMES

A- Allusion - In a grassland, flowers bloom so bright, their colors bring pure delight.

N- Anastrophe - I envision you in a dress of bride, we're soul tide.

J- Juxtaposition - Luxurious mansion standing over shabby, disipated houses.

H- Antithesis - War in Peace

E- Anastrophe - My soul soothed by your voice.

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Greetings and blessings to all. This speech addresses the Philippine government's corruption.

Government corruption, a barbaric and deeply troubling issue, is often associated with the rise of kleptocracy, where those in power use their positions for personal gain. This epidemic of graft and stealing has far-reaching ramifications that ripple through society, making many citizens feel queasy as they witness their hard-earned tax dollars waste for the benefit of a few unprincipled jackleg individuals. These corrupt practices not only destroy trust in the government but also divert resources meant for essential public services, leading to social inequality, a weakened rule of law, and an overall failure of the nation's well-being. The fight against government corruption remains an essential task for ensuring a fair and just society. That is my speech thank you for listening.

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Zack wants to invite his buddies over to their home for a party that is going on at his place.

Zack: Everyone would you be available to join us later for a gathering at my residence?

Aimee: Hey Zack, I'm gonna have to bail on your party, got some 'real-life stuff' to handle. Catch you next time!

Ace: Yep, I'll be there, but honestly, I'm swamped with school stuff. It's like a never-ending pile of work, you know?

Yuri: Oh yeah bud, I'm coming to your party Zack, let's have some fun.

Kimberly: I'm sorry Zack, it is with the utmost regret that I must politely decline your gracious invitation for today's gathering, as it regrettably coincides with the commemoration of my dear mother's natal anniversary.

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VISUAL IMAGERY

As I wandered around the campus, I spotted a graceful feline leisurely sitting in the midst of the bustling surroundings.

AUDITORY IMAGERY

A moment of solemnity, amidst a crowd, it's us. Hearing your angelic voice as you say, "I love you so much"

GUSTATORY IMAGERY

As she delicately picked up the warm Belgian waffle, the enticing aroma of freshly baked dough and sweet syrup filled the air, tempting her taste buds.

TACTILE IMAGERY

An eternity moment, as I first hold his arms like we're soultied.

OLFACTORY IMAGERY

Watching the sunset by the seashore, surrounded by the fragrance of the sand and the soothing salty water, sounds incredibly serene and peaceful.