a-hole-full-of-drafts
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hive mind tries to write shit as a hive mind (P-DID)
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a-hole-full-of-drafts · 2 months ago
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Why do we write stories? {Is this in the broader social sense of humanity, or on a personal level?} idk if I want to get into personal reasons, but on a….
[DERAILING THIS BECAUSE GETTING STUCK ON THE THOUGHT. What the fuck pronouns do we use?] {elaborate for the audience} the rest of us are very familiar with this gripe [like, technically the proper pronouns are we/our, but that gets really fucking confusing when We as a system are talking about the royal we as in people and society as a concept] have we found a good example to show yet? [Like {they wrote several examples that don’t quite capture it and deleted them} argggg no we don’t]
Alrighty so how are we (system) supposed to convey to others when we’re trying to talk about we (as in us and a group of friends we’re with) and We (system) for example “we would like the sundae” could be taken as We (the system) want a sundae or that we (us and the group of friend We’re with) want the sundae. {Technically we can use I/me, but sometimes We need to differentiate whether we’re speaking for ourself or the whole system} [it is a legitimate inconvenience that comes up often enough when talking with friends and family that it’s annoying] In text like this we could capitalize We to denote self [like you’ve been forgetting to do lol] but that’s not possible in spoken conversation
[we’ve looked into neo pronouns, but…] {We don’t like making language up, we prefer building off or pre- established language} We’ve been looking to see in anyone’s already using a version of we that stands for the system but no luck [not even as part of a fictional story which is wild] {usually it’s conversations about pronouns for specific alters, but we have yet to see any conversations about making different pronouns to mean We- the system, and we- standard english usage} [it’s MADDENING] if by chance anyone, plural or otherwise, has suggestions or knows of existing pronouns that fit please let us know {so that square brackets doesn't lose their minds}
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a-hole-full-of-drafts · 2 months ago
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Rebloging from main [we decided to make a side blog since our main is theoretically supposed to be for visual art] {Tto be for visual art] {theoretically, we haven't had the motivation for a while} [Iheoretically. we haven't had the motivation for a while} [I'm sure we'll get back to it eventually] {we won't be promoting our main blog on here though, I expect this content will be quite different}
Oh! Good topic, how DOES a plurality write that clearly denotes that different people are talking, especially with an ah, {fluid} yeah that, wait, no, would sticky be a better descriptor? [Viscous maybe] {ew no} -ANyways, how a plurality can write as a collective without [as] heavy editing, without using 'we' constantly, AND at such a large number of us, especially since it's hard to differentiate who 'self' is. [Idk if people are going to get what that means] well it's better than "viscous" ew.
{ignoring y'all, many people have suggested fonts, but that's really disruptive to change mid-typing and deciding who is what font and figuring out who is even speaking, a new person, different person or the same, what is their personality-}[and if-i mean especially since we will change mid typed thought] {all of this to say, and demonstrate, that perhaps using brackets to denote a specific 'voice'-} [as in opinion] {-and general vibes is potentially more efficient}.
Is it more clear for the external reader though? [Well, that's the tradeoff isn't it, and why different fonts could make it easier, it'd be potentially possible to go back in post and change the font buuuut] That would be a lot of work on our part and, again, picking who is what font is a Whole Thing [correct!] So that would potentially be the way to go if we're making a more polished piece but not for a shit post {or, I guess post we don't want to/don't have the energy to put a ton of work into} [plus some people would probably appreciate the rawness of it, less, uhhh, more...] More like a messy story draft, or hasty reference doodles for a more polished art piece {I was gonna add something but I forgot, also we not to sleep, out whatever for tags and then get ready for bed o}(r I'll eat y'all's faces figuratively) hi Sean (hi go to bed)
(stop editing this just post it and go to bed you're tired and so are we)
(I hope y'all know I'm having to pry their hands off with a crow bar aka writing this sentence to get them off lol)
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