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undyingtale-the-story · 8 years ago

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The End

So I lied ;)) Its not done yet. Imma just gonna blame Backstabber128 for their review that made me realize that dur its not a good ending so I better write one more really good chapter :)

So thats what I did.

And Ive gotten another review from a guest saying that the fanfic was really great *3*! Thanks so much! Ive been working my butt off writing this thing, and I love the story so much!

Ok back to the chapter::

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When I woke up, I was back at my house, and I was laying on the couch. I shook my head, confused, and sat up. Asriel was jumping around the house with his parents, and Alphys was sitting at the table. I heard Papyrus and Sans outside throwing snowballs at the window and Tristan running around the house as if there was no end to the world. I swung my legs to the ground, and rubbed my face in tiredness.

“W...what?” I shook my head. When I spoke, the Dreemurrs looked at me happily and smiled.

“Undyne! You’re awake!” Asriel ran up and hugged me. I laughed at the little kids playful tone, and stood up.

“Yeah, Im awake,” I chuckled. Toriel and Asgore walked up behind Asriel, with Frisk in tow, and all smiled at Asriel’s happy nature.

“Uh… Undyne…” Asgore awkwardly said.

“What, Asgore?” I asked, smirking.

“Thank you… for uh… reviving our child…?” Asgore stated the sentence so awkwardly that I had to laugh. Toriel eyed Asgore awkwardly, when suddenly Asriel left my leg and ran towards Asgore’s. Asgore laughed and picked Asriel up.

“So uh… are you two going to get back toge-” I started to say when I was cut off by Toriel.

“No,” Toriel said firmly. I shrugged, and smiled.

“Well… like since Asriels back tha-” I suggested.

“NO,” Toriel repeated herself, and Asgore eyed us warily.

“Okay… okay… I understand….” I backed off, and Toriel laughed.

“Holy Carp, Undyne, are you serious?” Toriel made a horrible pun and I groaned.

“What?!” I looked at Toriel, exasperated.

“The answer to your question is... maybe…” Toriel walked away from Asgore as his face lit up. Asriel quirked a eyebrow at his father, who was still glowing.

“Could you please explain why you guys broke up again?” Asriel said to his father. Asgore looked as Asriel awkwardly while Asriel gave him back a questioning look.

“It’s a long story…” Asgore brushed to topic off and put Asriel back down on the ground. “Go and play with your friends, okay?” Asriel jumped in happiness and ran after Tristan.

“I keep forgetting that he’s older than half the people in this room…” Asgore sighed in embarrassment.

“Wait, what?” I exclaimed. Asgore looked at me, tired, and shrugged.

“He died before you were born, Undyne. And then he was brought to life as a flower…” Asgore looked over to Asriel and Tristan playing. “Which means that he’s been alive for longer than most monsters, even though he’s just 10 years old…”

“That’s so weird to think about…” I shifted uncomfortably. Asgore nodded, and then smiled.

“Ah, well, I’m going to say hi to some people, okay?” He said. I nodded, and started to walk through the house.

The whole house was filled with all my friends that I saw die on the screens during the last timeline. I frowned at the memory, but I was still glad that they were here, and they seemed to not realize the pain that they’ve gone through previously. As I walked into the next room, I made sure to stop at the table to talk to Alphys who was texting on her phone.

“Alphys?” I said to her, and she jumped, startled.

“O… Oh! Undyne!” She said as she accidently dropped her phone on the table with the fright. I laughed as she blushed, and smiled back.

“U...Uh… oh yeah. I told you I...I wanted to talk with you, r...right?” Alphys asked, and raised one of her eyebrows.

“Oh yeah. About that…” I started to say, and then hesitated. “The rest of them should hear it too. I’ve been lying for a long time…”

“I...Ive always thought that I w...would be the only one to say t...that sentence…” Alphys reflected quickly, and then eyed me again.

“I’ll go get them,” I said quickly. It didn’t take long to run around the house and grab the goat family, Grillby and the tem, and the royal guards, and I had to walk outside to grab the Skeleton brothers.

“UNDYNE! YOU’RE AWAKE!” Papyrus enthusiastically spoke. I laughed as Papyrus ran up to me and hugged me, and Sans walked through the new fallen snow with a shuffle.

“Did it snow when I was asleep?” I wondered. They both nodded, and I laughed.

“YES IT DID! I THINK IT WAS BECAUSE YOU SAVED ASRIEL THAT I CAME TO GIVE YOU A COLD HUG?” Papyrus frowned at his idea, but then continued, smiling: “OR MAYBE ITS JUST BECAUSE IM SUCH A COOL DUDE!”

“good one, bro. did the snow… chill you to the bone?” Sans made a horrible pun that actually made me laugh.

“SANS?! THAT WAS A HORRIBLE PUN! MINE WAS BETTER!” Papyrus yelled at his brother, as Sans walked right past him and into the house. I walked into the dining room where the rest of the monsters were sitting, and sat down at the front of the table.

“Hey… uh… Sans and Asriel, can I tell them about…?” I said, trying to imply that I was going to talk about the resets. They both nodded, and I smiled and looked at the group.

“... Okay, so one thing I need to clarify is there was always 13 of us in this timeline. And by us, I mean the 12 other Undynes that carried out with you in your everyday life. We switched out from time to time, and then continued our own lives just like normal…”

“But thats because I inherited the determination to do so. Determination is a special kind of power, in which the person who has the most amount of it in a timeline can control the SAVE and LOAD files in our world. Which… probably won’t make sense to you. Sans, Asriel, and Frisk if they want to can explain that later, because I still don’t understand some parts of it.

“When I gained the determination to LOAD and SAVE files, ironically after we left the underground, I didn’t know what it was meant for and how to use it. So I went through the first timeline without realizing my power until I realized during a nightmare that Chara killed my parents. Because of that realization I went on a rampage up the mountain and went to kill the child, where I found my friend, Flowey, there fighting him.

“I only realized that Flowey betrayed me when I went into the throne room and he tried to kill and poison me. He then told me about my powers, and constantly talked about how he wished Frisk was there because he needed to know how in the world I got that determination.

“And let me repeat:: I have no idea how I got it.”

I paused for a moment, and let the moment sink in. Alphys quickly raised a hand, however.

“Yes, Alphys?” I wondered.

“S… So how do you have d...determination? The Amalgamates died with t...the determination, right?” Alphys stuttered, and I nodded.

“As I said, I still don’t know how that happened. But anyways…” I continued.

“So during the first timeline, I was forced to reset, which brought me back to when we left the mountain. The only reason I was allowed to do that, however, was because I promised Flowey that I would go through a genocide path and kill everyone. And if I didn’t, the spears I used to attack Flowey would be turned on, and would kill everyone.

“But that reset, I clicked the button twice. Which meant there was actually two resets, two of me, and one of them knew what was happening while I had no idea what I promised. I went through that timeline with no idea what was happening, and ended up with the same situation, but with just me and the other Undyne I named two. I had to witness all of you all being killed, by my own spears. The mystery of the spears was just me, and I’m truly sorry about that…

“So when I had to reset again, promising Flowey the same promise as before, I clicked the button 13 times for the number of people who were killed by me. When I went back to that reset, we told all of you guys to meet me up at the castle. Which you did, and Flowey was surprised. Flowey took all of your souls and combined with them, and turned into the form you see him now: Asriel.” I gestured to Asriel.

“Wait, so we died?”Asgore questioned, and I nodded.

“Yeah, you were killed by your own son, but it wasn’t his fault… talk to him later about that,” I suggested, and Asgore nodded.

“Then when that happened, he realized he was doing the wrong thing, and returned all of your souls. But, interestingly, the other 12 Undynes that were with me refused to leave his body. This meant that he is stuck in this form.” I smiled at Asriel, and he smiled back.

“Well, thats it… any questions?” I asked.

“I would say yes, but we have to go,” Asgore looked at his watch apoligetically. I nodded, and sighed.

“Well, I guess you can ask Sans. He knows what happened in the timeline,” I offered and stood up. Asgore picked Asriel up, and started to walk towards the enterence.

“and you know where to find me,” Sans added, and started to walk towards the door.

“WAIT WAIT DAD! DONT LEAVE YET!” Asriel yelled after his father as he started to leave.

“Yeah?” Asgore said quickly, and put Asriel down to the ground. Asriel ran up to me and hugged my leg, beaming.

“Thank you, again!” Asriel smiled. “I will always be your friend, right?”

“A day ago I might have said no, but now definitely yes!” I smiled at the kids happy face. Asriel jestered to Asriel, and all of the kids ran after him with Toriel lagging behind. Grillby and the Tem left, and the two royal guards left afterwards.

“IM SO HAPPY YOU’RE OKAY, UNDYNE!” Papyrus ran up to me and hugged me. I laughed and hugged the tall skeleton back, and Sans looked up to me, actually smiling.

“it’s good that they know,” Sans told me, and I nodded.

“SO YOU KNEW THIS THE WHOLE TIME, SANS! WHY DIDNT YOU TELL ME?” Papyrus wondered, annoyed.

“because then you would have known that you had to listen to the same puns over and over again,” Sans chuckled, and Papyrus groaned and stormed out of the house. Sans laughed, and followed his brother.

“seeyah, undyne,” Sans waved, and I waved back. Alphys walked up to me, and smiled.

“I… im sorry I was ever pressuring to you, Undyne…” Alphys apologized. I smiled and shrugged, and looked down at you.

“I dont care. Im just glad now everyone’s alive,” I knelt down and hugged her. I might have started tearing up before Alphys, but I just remember us both sobbing, but also happy that we were here. Alphys then drew back from the hug, and looked at me, smiling for real for once.

“Hey… U… Undyne, do you want to watch t...that anime My neighbor totoro…? With me?” Alphys wondered.

“Heck yeah!” I said enthusiastically. Alphys smiled, and we grabbed the movie and the tv, and huddled near the tv after a long day full of feels.

“Thanks for being here, Alphys,” I told Alphys. She blushed, and smiled.

“T...Thanks for being here for me too!” She said, stuttering in the way she always does.

The video starting playing, and we sat there until the screen was all dark. Alphys was snoring, and I was half asleep already. My body refused to get up, and I was as tired as a sloth.

“Goodnight, Alphys,” I said as I resolved to sleeping on the floor.

“G… nite…” Alphys mumbled in her sleep, and before I knew it I was asleep.

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undyingtale-the-story · 8 years ago

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Im done!

I finished this story on 1/13/17 because it was Friday the 13th and also if you add all of the numbers up without the 20 in 2017 then it equals 13 ;3 Thats why I stayed up till 10 writing this just to finish this on a monumental date.

But anywho, Ive been writing this fanfiction since April (?) and Im so so so proud of it. I had a plot line put there the whole time with fancy smancy everything on it *including glitter jk* which you can see here:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ExcSVApCel_NCp8VDIvaHfrwdUsEgiCSVEFGzazr3LY/edit?usp=sharing

But anywho, if you want to ask Thirteen anything, then please stop by http://undyingtale-the-story.tumblr.com/ and send in a question, and Undyne will answer it.

Thank you so much for reading this! Please comment and submit kudos or do whatever website your reading this on does because I would love people to read my hard work *3*!

Thanks again!

~Fishy

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undyingtale-the-story · 8 years ago

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IM DONE!

I finished writing this story, so I’m going to reblog it for people to see now that its 100% DONE!

YAY!

Now imma gonna sleep *3*

Big Yellow Blobs and Old Men

Who knew that the sunrise could be so beautiful?

I stood at the edge of the cliff, with my friends who I counted as family, as we looked out into the new beyond. The sunrise was so beautiful… it was too extravagant to describe. I stood next to my friends, as we looked out into the new world that we all only heard about in long legends and stories.

“Oh my,” Toriel, the ex-queen, said while she was gaping at the view. Her huge goat hand rested on Frisk’s shoulder, and her red eyes glimmered happily by the sun. King Asgore’s huge cloak ruffled in the wind, next to my girlfriend, Alphys, as he shifted slightly.

“Isn’t it beautiful, everyone?” Asgore said to all of us. We all nodded in agreement, completely in awe.

“Wow… it’s e-even better than on TV!” Alphys stuttered besides me making me smile. I put my hand on her shoulder, and she smiled back. “WAY better! Better than I ever imagined!” I looked down at Alphys as she was looking at the sunrise. I looked over to Frisk, amazed.

“Frisk, you LIVE with this!?” I asked the human. The human smiled, and nodded, still looking out to the sun. I looked out to the horizon. “The sunlight is so nice… and the air is so fresh!” I breathed in deeply with my gills. “I really feel alive!”

“HEY SANS,” Papyrus asked, standing next to me and his brother. “WHAT’S THE GIANT BALL?” I smiled and remembered how young he was, despite this whole journey that we all made to get out of the underground.

“we call that ‘the sun’, my friend” Sans answer, his voice low with a small accent.

“THAT’S THE SUN!? WOWIE!!! I CAN’T BELIEVE I’M FINALLY MEETING THE SUN!” Papyrus’ voice echoed down the mountain. I wonder what the human’s would be thinking if they heard THAT! I thought, secretly laughing.

“I could stand here and watch this for hours,” Asgore seemed to agree with Papyrus’ goofy comment.

“Yes, it is beautiful, is it not?” Toriel replied, making Asgore smile. The fact that Toriel even acknowledged her ex’s comment was a step up from what it was a couple minutes before. “But we really should think about what comes next.”

“Oh, right,” Asgore rumbled, probably annoyed that someone could make them leave such a nice sunrise like this.

“Everyone… this is the beginning of a bright new future. An era of peace between humans and monsters,” Asgore paused, letting some more wind rustle through his fur. “Frisk… I have something to ask of you. Will you act as our ambassador to the humans?” Asgore looked expectantly at Frisk, waiting for an answer.

Frisk nodded, making everyone’s heart lift up in hope. Maybe the little punk could save our behinds against those humans, I thought, remembering the DETERMINATION that Frisk had during our fight. Asgore nodded in agreement, as Papyrus’ face lit up.

“YEAH! FRISK WILL BE THE BEST AMBASSADOR!” Papyrus exclaimed excitingly. “AND I, THE GREAT PAPYRUS… WILL BE THE BEST MASCOT! I’LL GO MAKE A GOOD FIRST IMPRESSION!” Papyrus stepped back from our once was neatly formed line, and ran down the road to the right. We all smiled at Papyrus’ enthusiasm.

“Welp,” Sans said, right next to where Papyrus was standing. “someone’s gotta keep him from getting into trouble. see you guys,” Sans started walking down the path behind him. I frowned at Sans’ awkward shortcuts, as I continued to look at the sunset.

Why would Sans go off like that? I mean, Papyrus should be fine. Knowing Papyrus as much as I do, through cooking lessons and more than made us the best of friends, Papyrus wasn’t a person who would get in trouble. I looked around, and saw that none of my friends were fazed by Sans’ quick exit. I wonder why.

Then a thought dawned on me.

If he just runs into a human village, he’s gonna be smashed to pulp!

I smiled weakly, and tried to not make my friend’s weary of my idea of Papyrus’. “Man, do I have to do EVERYTHING?” I stepped backwards and started running down the path to the right.

“Papyrus, wait!!!”

I ran down the dirt path that might become our new home. I almost tripped on some trees and roots, which were foreign down in the underground, and I felt hopeful when I could see Papyrus’ small cape flutter in the distance. Sweat started forming at the edge of my hair, and my legs started getting tired from my long sprint. I grimaced when my boot hit a large tree root, but I kept going. Almost down the hill, feeling tired and ready to give up, I felt a burst of wind as I sprinted forward and grabbed Papyrus’ cape. I swung him backwards, and he fell to the ground.

“OW UNDYNE! WHAT WAS THAT FOR?!” Papyrus slowly got up.

“You shouldn’t be running off like that! I’m sure you’d be a great mascot and everything, but if you just run into the human village, you’re gonna be SMASHED INTO PULP!” I towered over Papyrus, making him gulp. Papyrus thought for a minute, as he sat there on the ground.

“I… I’M SORRY UNDYNE! I SHOULD HAVE KNOWN BETTER THAN TO RUN OFF. NOW YOU’RE MISSING THE SUN TOO!” Papyrus pouted. I held out a hand to get him off the ground, and he took it, and stood up.

“It’s fine, punk! Now since I’m here-” I said when I heard a rumbling noise. I looked around, until I saw a yellow thing barreling towards us like there was no stopping. Bouncing into action, I pulled Papyrus quickly to my side, and the yellow thing barreled past me. And hit Papyrus.

Uh oh.

I screamed as Papyrus, who was hit by the yellow blob of scales and whatnot, pulled me into the jumble because of the hand I was holding. The world went spinning, just as if the whole entire world was swirled paint, and I felt my head hitting the floor multiple times. Slowly this little ball of fish, skeleton, and whatever that thing was slowed to the stop, and I went flying through the air and landed face first.

“Owww,” I groaned in pain. I blinked a couple of times, and looked up to see my pursuer.

“ALPHYS WHAT THE HECK WAS THAT!” I yelled up at the yellow scientist who was adjusting her glasses. She landed standing up right in front of me, and she was still adjusting her now-broken glasses on her pointy snout.

“U… undyne?! I… I’m sorry! I… tripped and I fell,” Alphys sounded like she was angry at herself for making that mistake. She turned around to look at me, all scraped up just like I was.

“AND ROLLED DOWN A HILL?!” I stood up, legs all scraped and bruised by the amount of times I was hurt on the way through the woods. My legs was still wobbly and my lungs still tired and out of breath, but I kept going for Alphys’ sake.

“Y… Yes Undyne…” she said, and she looked down at the ground in what looked like shame. I sighed and knelt down to her height.

“Alphys, it’s okay. We’re all fine. That was only a mistake. Now, where’s Papyrus?” I smiled at Alphys’ sad face, and she smiled back. After brushing some dust accumulated from the rough ride off of one of her spikes, I stood up and looked around.

“Um… Undyne…? It’s really hard to um… see with broken glasses,” Alphys said apologetically. I would have nodded but I was gaping at something else.

“Where the HECK are we?!” I glanced around. The rock that we landed on seemed to be road that we landed on had huge buildings on either side of them. They were all wooden, but they were all clothed with random metal symbols on their side. There were human’s all around, circling around us as if we were their prey. There was a large castle like building at the end of the road, that was adorned with various symbols and flags that made it look heroic. There was one thing that I didn’t usually feel in the underground in the air.

Determination

I stumbled back, and looked around. “PAPYRUS! Where the HECK are you?!” I yelled in the air. The humans took that as a threat, and pointed random sharp objects at us, like a chair or even a butchers knife. All of them could be deadly.

“THE GREAT PAPYRUS IS ALIVE! AND WELL!” Papyrus popped up from a huge cart full of barrels. He stood up on the cart, and did a nice and square jump into the circle where the human’s cornered us. “WHAT IS GOING ON HERE, UNDYNE? THE HUMANS DON’T SEEM TO LIKE US,” Papyrus furrowed his eyes at the humans.

“Greetings monsters. Why and how are you here? We trapped you in your little cage of silence years and years ago.” A maniacal voice came out from the rows of people. A 4 feet tall kid with a green and yellow striped shirt with eyes the color of blood stepped forward into the clearing. 5 other kids followed this one kid and looked at us with the same hate.

“The barrier has been broken. Didn’t you hear it? All monsters are going out of the underground to find our freedom,” I said nobley to the creepy eyes kid. The crowd gasped, and the kid silenced them with a flick of their knife.

“You were never invited, hmm? Maybe you’re little goldfish brain should go back to where it’s supposed to be,” The creepy eyes kid laughed, and the other children followed suit. I growled at their puny little shenanigans, and glared at them.

“WHO ARE YOU CALLING A-”

“Undyne, don’t let your temper take you over,” I heard a deep voice from the woods. I swung around to be face to face with Asgore, who was glaring back. He snorted as I blinked dramatically

“Oh… um… sorry?” I rubbed the back of my neck embarrassingly, as he looked at the human.

“Chara? It’s-”

“Order the mages to shoot these miserable creature. They shouldn’t even be here, and their trespassing our territory,” the kid, supposedly named Chara, hissed to some of the closest adults to him. The jumped and quickly hurried to their job, as I frowned at Asgore.

“K… King Asgore… I was wondering… how do you know the child?” Alphys stuttered to Asgore, and he frowned. He sighed as he started talking, his eyes shined with sorrow.

“Chara was the first human to fall into the underground. Of course, you weren’t alive at the time so you all have absolutely no recollection of that, but he was the first soul that I collected… from the child that I loved. The other souls… well I believe I remember them as the other souls that I collected to open the barrier. How they’re alive… I have no idea, but they have absolutely no reason to attack us all. Just me. You guys go back to the mountain… Mount Ebott, wasn’t it? And go and tell everyone to go back,” Asgore sighed and stepped forward. We all looked at him as if he was insane.

“ASGORE! THERE’S NO WAY I’M GOING BACK!” I yelled furiously at Asgore. “I’M THE EX LEADER OF THE ROYAL GUARD AFTER ALL! I’M NOT GOING TO LET SOME SLY HUMAN KICK YOUR BUTT!” I stood up proudly to the humans, right next to my king.

“Wait, Undyne. I have something to say to all of the humans,” He said quietly to me, as I slouched, exasperated.

“HUMANS!” King Asgore yelled with all of his might to stop the commotions. All humans looked at him, in silence. “WE DO NOT WANT TO FIGHT! WE CAME HERE FOR A NEW FUTURE, AND WE WANT TO MAKE PEACE WITH THE HUMANS. THE BARRIER HAS BEEN OPEN, AND THE ANGEL HAS FALLEN!” Asgore ended his speech dramatically, and all humans stopped in their tracks.

“Peace? From who? Us? So are you guys all cowards?” Chara laughed at Asgore’s speech. He pushed back through the crowded so everyone can see us. “Maybe you’re all too weak”

Before I could blink, I was holding a energy spear to Chara’s laughing face. I looked, shocked, as Asgore lifted me away with his huge goat hands from the human.

“Undyne,” Asgore seemed like he was losing his cool. “That wasn’t needed,” he looked seriously at me.

“That… that wasn’t me,” I whimpered and tried to tell Asgore before he started bellowing again.

“I’m sorry about that, humans. I’ll tell my troops to be more behaved before they act,” Asgore glared at me, as I looked up at his looming stature droopily.

“That’s why humans and monsters should stay away from each other. If they behave like your little brat did, we’ll all die,” the child hissed at Asgore. He glared once at the goat, and looked at one of his guards. “Continue the preparation,” he growled to the man, who jumped and hurried off. As sounds of machines filled the town, two huge cannons rose from two of the tallest wood towers in the village. The pointed at us, and filled our eyes with a weird orange light.

Before I could think, I shoved Asgore, Alphys and Papyrus out of the way of orange lasers. I pulled them down a small alleyway to the right, as the lasers followed. Asgore ran as fast as he could, I carried Alphys under my arm, and Papyrus ran next to me as we dodged the lasers.

We kept running and dodging until we met a dead end. We skid to the stop (which also meant Papyrus running into a wall, don’t worry, he’s okay), as Chara and his lasers followed us.

“Goodbye”

“STOP!” We heard a loud voice yell. Chara looked around to see some humans going against him.

“You!!” he hissed. “What are you doing?” He swung his head around to the people.

“They brought Frisk! Frisk is back!” A taller women in the back said. “They really won’t harm a human!”

We all relaxed as Toriel, Frisk and Sans ran… well Sans walked but… they ran up to us.

“Are you all okay?” Toriel asked, frantic. Tori frowned at our scrapes and bruises from our tumble down the hill, as she started to heal Papyrus and Alphys.

“We’re fine, Tori,” Asgore smiled.

“Don’t Tori me, Dreemurr!” Toriel glared at Asgore, as Asgore sagged. Toriel switched do healing me, which made a sharp tingling feeling crawl up my back, making me sneeze. Toriel laughed, and turned around. Supposedly the humans walked up to us, most of them never seeing a monster before in their lives, but their curiosity took over them as they started talking and introducing themselves to us.

“Hello! I’m Undyne,” I said out to the people, but most of them were avoiding me because of my “reckless action” to that little brat that called me a goldfish. ((Note of thought:: NEVER EVER CALL A FISH A GOLDFISH IF YOU DON’T WANT TO BE DESTROYED IN A ABSOLUTE FURY OF ENERGY SPEARS AND EVIL ICE CREAM LADIES!!)) So I stood to the side and watched everyone talk to everyone else. But me. Great job at not being the celebrity again, Undyne. Great job. That ended with me leaning against a wooden house absolutely bored.

I continued to wait until the fan girls went away when I felt a hand on my shoulder. I swung around and saw a old man with a long beard with twinkling blue eyes smiling up at me. I jumped, making his hand fall to his cane.

“Don’t mind the weird eyed one, little one,” The old man rumbled.

“Did you just call me little?!” I looked menacingly at the old man. The old man laughed, and I looked at him, completely offended. Note of thought #2:: Never ever call the more menacing one in the situation ‘little’. EVER. Especially if they’re taller than you. And a fish.

“Hahaha, come with me, young one. I have something to show you,” The old man walked off while I stood there, fuming.

“HEY! YOU CALLED ME LITTLE AGAIN!!!” I yelled at the old man, and ran after him. He laughed again as I slid into another walkway. He looked down at some sort of spear that was lodged into the side of the house. Interestingly it looked a lot like my spears that I use when I am attacking.

“I found this in the side of my house… I have no idea where it came from. Do you mind helping me find out about this spear?” The old man rumbled up to me. I looked down at him, frowning.

“It could help you get your respect back!” The old man hinted. I grumbled and looked back down at him.

“Fine. I’ll do it if you never call me little again,” I slouched and looked at him. He smiled, and nodded.

“Okay! It’s a deal,” He held up his hand to shake. I reluctantly shook his hand, and he smiled under his beard.

“You young guppy,” he said as he was walking away.

“WHAT DID YOU CALL ME?!” I yelled back at him, furious. He started walking back to where everyone else was. He made small footprints in the off streets sand, and his cane made a distinct thump whenever he took a step.

“A guppy! Besides, you’re a fish after all,” He chuckled, as we kept walking. I glared at him, and gave up on making a good, superficial comeback.

“What’s your name, anyway?” I grumbled at the old man. He stroked his long beard, and looked at me curiously, since I didn’t grumble.

“My name is Revetan. I am the leader of this village. Or, well I guess I was until the little brat took over earlier today,” Revetan sighed, and looked out into the distance, where the sun was rising.

“What? How could a child take your leadership?” I asked the old man, thinking about what could happen if the little brat took over Asgore’s leadership. I shuddered at the thought.

“When everyone heard that Chara rose from the dead to kill all monsters, that heroicness… that DETERMINATION made everyone root for him. It’s incredibly weird,” Revetan sighed. “Well! I’ll have to deal with it. This thing should be done in a week,” Revetan shrugged and looked at the my friends and family, who were clustered together and beckoning me.

“You better go, guppy,” Revetan smiled. Instead of yelling, I smiled as I walked away.

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undyingtale-the-story · 8 years ago

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[ R E S E T ]

Who knew that the sunrise could be so beautiful?

“Isn’t it beautiful, everyone?” Asgore said to all of us. We all nodded in agreement, completely in awe.

“Frisk, you LIVE with this!?” I asked the human. The human smiled, and nodded, still looking out to the sun. I looked out to the horizon. “The sunlight is so nice… and the air is so fresh...” I breathed in deeply with my gills, but didn’t finish the rest of the sentence. It’s almost like I’ve felt it all of the time… I thought, confused.

“we call that ‘the sun’, my friend” Sans answer, his voice low with a small accent.

“THAT’S THE SUN!? WOWIE!!! I CAN’T BELIEVE I’M FINALLY MEETING THE SUN!” Papyrus’ voice echoed down the mountain. I hope the humans can’t hear that… that could be bad, I thought negatively.

“I could stand here and watch this for hours,” Asgore seemed to agree with Papyrus’ goofy comment.

“Oh, right,” Asgore rumbled, probably annoyed that someone could make them leave such a nice sunrise like this.

Don’t do it, My mind echoed a response, but I knew better than to keep my mouth shut.

Frisk nodded, making everyone’s heart lift up in hope, while mine fell down. The kid’s going to get hurt, I thought, remembering something that I just could barely grasp. Asgore nodded in agreement, as Papyrus’ face lit up.

Wait.

Was I forgetting something? I thought suddenly. My smile faltered, but I still tried to keep the high spirit going.

Good idea, Sans. Knowing Papyrus as much as I do… I know that he would probably get in trouble. I looked around, and saw that none of my friends were fazed by Sans’ quick exit.

I smiled weakly, and tried my best to make a normal exit. “Man, do I have to do EVERYTHING?” I stepped backwards and started running down the path to the right.

“Papyrus, wait!!!”

I started running down the path to the human village, and stopped when they couldn’t see me anymore. I looked down at my hands in confusion, and then looked back up.

What happened? What am I forgetting? I thought. I shook my head in tiredness, while frowning, and decided to run down the human village like normal.

Why would this be normal for me? I’ve never taken this path before… I slid to a stop. I ran into the trees on the sides of the path so I could think without being bothered, and jumped when I saw a figure run past.

“???” I questioned, and ran after the figure. I could barely see it, but it was something other than a human. It had the stature of a human, however, and hair like one too.

After zig-zagging through some trees, I saw the figure slow down and walk into a small field of giant ferns. I quietly followed them, and as I entered I saw someone that I know too well.

Me…???

OH, I remembered. I remember how I pressed the button 13 times, one for each of my friends killed, and that I didn’t know what would happen.

I blinked, as I saw the other 12 Undynes sitting or standing on the ground. They all looked at me, with the same expression and the same hair and the same eyes as mine, and probably thinking the same thing as me. 5 of them were sitting on the ground in annoyance, and 6 others were sitting on rocks or just laying there as tired as humanly possible.

“We were waiting for you,” The one who I was following said. I nodded, wondering the same thing.

“So… what's next?” One of them said. They all shrugged, and looked at each other, as I frowned in disapproval.

“I have a idea,” I spoke up. They all looked up at me suddenly, and I smirked.

“We are all Undynes, right?” They nodded. “And we all remember two and what happened. We can, just like two did, name each other numbers to tell ourselves apart,” I mentioned.

“Didn’t Alphys get some tattoos from some anime she likes when we were in the underground? Aren’t they numbers?” The 3rd me standing asked. We all nodded in approval, and then one of the other spoke up.

“Just when one of us steals them, and we put them on, put them somewhere that only we would look at like under our hair. And we should do it via our reset number, like her,” The other me pointed at me, “Would be 13, and her,” she then pointed at another one of us sitting down, “would be 1.”

“Then we can rotate… that means I should go do the first thing in the village,” One jumped up and ran as fast as she could away.

“WAIT ONE SECOND, ONE!” I yelled. One stopped and turned around in annoyance.

“Every day we’ll switch off, okay?” I told One, and she ran off. We all sat around for a small bit as a question dawned on all of us.

“Where will we stay?” We all said at once. I all frowned at the same time, and we didn’t hear the ferns move from behind us.

“i’ve got that covered, but i have some questions,” We heard the deep voice of Sans from in the ferns. We all swung around to see the small pudgy skeleton standing there.

“Hiii Sans….” we said awkwardly since we were the only people who knew who he actually was.

“what happened with the reset, undynes,” Sans addressed us all. We all started to talk at once, but I shushed them quickly.

“Supposedly the amount of times we press the reset button equals that amount of times we get resetted, or the amount of times we clone ourselves,” I shrugged.

“thats not supposed to happen,” Sans sighed. He sat down in interest.

“How would you know?” One of the others sighed. We all nodded and stared at Sans, and he looked wearily at us.

“i know of the resets, but i’ve never been able to control them or remember the other timelines. i know most of them because of when i was younger, when i was friends with flowey,” Sans frowned and tapped his hands on the rock.

“Did you also know it because of-” The one of me laying down on the ground wondered before realizing that Sans didn’t know what happened.

“ W h a t d o y o u k n o w ? ” Sans wondered, his eyes pitch black and deadly. I jumped, terrified, as the one sprawled out on the rocks commented:

“We know who you are, Sans… if that makes sense…” She sat up and put her hand on her face. Sans’ glanced up at us weirdly, and sighed.

“how do you know…?” Sans said and then cut himself off in the middle of the sentence. “actually, dont tell me. i dont want to effect the timeline, cause if i do flowey’s going to be pissed.” We all sat there awkwardly, and then Sans spoke up.

“i can let you stay in the lab in the back of my house,” he said quietly. “do not, i repeat, do not tell papyrus. it might give him some bad memories about you know who.” We all looked at him for further direction. “i cant teleport you there very quickly… i have to get down to the village pronto.”

“You can teleport?!” We all gaped. Sans nodded awkwardly, and then turned around.

‘ In a blink of an eye, we were at Snowdin, and we were behind Sans’ house. He walked out from there, and unlocked the usually hidden door and beckoned us all to come inside.

The room clearly resembled a cleaned-up version of the true lab with just a few color changes. The tiles on the floor were purple, and the walls were blue, and there was numerous blueprints on the table on one big stack. I glanced at them and instantly noticed that it contained the blueprints for the core and some of the puzzles in hotlands, and there was drawers in the wall.

“could you not touch the machine, please?” Sans asked and gestured to the machine which was covered by a purple blanket. We all nodded, and Sans smiled.

“okay then. I’ll tell one about what happened, k?” he said, and we nodded in silent agreement. Sans then waved goodbye, and teleported away.

“I want to be able to teleport sometime!” I gaped.

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The next few months basically were us just continuing the timeline. We frequently traded off what we were doing, and around a day before the big fight happened during the last timeline, we were all sprawled out on the floor, tired.

Three, the one who suggested the idea about the tattoos, stole us them and now we had semi-permeable tattoos under our hair. Mine, 13, was smaller than the others because it was such a big number, but it worked anyway.

We all also realized that we had different personalities even though we are the same person. One had all of the determination, Two had more of the nightmares, Three was the nerdiest out of all of them, Four and Five were the fastest, Six had the most regrets and tended to fret a lot, Seven was the shyest, Eight was the most outgoing, Nine was the grumpiest, Ten was the most powerful, Eleven was the most stealthy, Twelve was all around nice and enthusiastic, and then there was me, Thirteen, the one that remembers. Which never ever goes in my favor, since some memories are worth forgetting. It’s also worth it because I can make a terrifying story to freak out Two, and when Two freaks out its hilarious.

Four, who was the Undyne who was outside today, walked into the lab tired. We all waved hi, and Four laid against the wall like she just ran a marathon.

Even though we promised Sans that we wouldn’t change the timeline, we decided to change it a little bit. Everyday one of us would go outside and tell people about this “extraordinary event” that would happen tomorrow in the throne room. We’re doing this because if all of our friends didn’t go near the spears then they wouldn’t get murdered by my own mistake. Sans is probably going to be mad, but it’s for the better.

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“Wake up, Thirteen,” I woke up to see Ten waving her hand infront of my face. I groaned in annoyance, stretched, and sat up from the hard floor of the lab. The rest of the crew was already up and ready to go, and they were already to go.

“How the heck are we going to get up there without being seen?” Six fretted as usual. Five sighed and shook her head in tiredness, and responded:

“We already got a ride with the River Person, and Eleven is going to show us the way, right?” Eleven nodded in agreement.

“We’re mostly going to go on the rooftops because people usually don’t look up there,” Eleven explained.

“WAIT that could be a bad idea! What if we fall off one of the roofs?” Three waved in panic and Six started freaking out. The rest of us just looked at them, not concerned, as they slowly calmed down.

“We’re all Undynes, and we’ll be okay. Just think about what happened the last timeline: We all got to the king’s castle and we… we didn’t make it but still! We can do it!” Twelve tried to raise our hopes, but failed. Three and Six still didn’t feel reassured about the idea of jumping off of houses.

“Do you want to be the one that walks, Six?” One asked. Six instantly nodded, and Three looked like she was left out. “We can’t have both of you walking together, you know.”

“That’s okay!” Three nodded.

“Just make sure to watch where we are, Six, and do not go into the room without us and the other people!” Three yelled to Six, as Six waved goodbye and ran outside. Eleven nodded, and snuck out of the house and bolted to the riverwomen so fast that you could barely see her. We all followed, and stood in front of the boat.

“Do you want to ride the boat?” The riverwomen asked.

“GO NOW,” Eleven commanded, shoved some money into the riverwomens boat, as we all jumped on and it sped off like a rocket. The boat wasn’t meant for more than one person, so the boat precariously had water at its rim. The riverwomen, weirdly, didn’t say anything as it went past the hotlands exit and up to the core.

“I never knew they had a stop at the core!” I commented, and Eleven nodded.

“I gave them an extra pay just for that,” Eleven said under her breath. “Don’t tell One, though.”

“DONT TELL ME WHAT?” One chimed in, concerned.

“SHADDUP” Eleven snapped and we all were quiet. We slowly arrived at Core entrance, and we all slinked into the elevator to the kings corridor. We noticed a lot of different monsters, including Alphys, Toriel, and Asgore, walking at the end of the hallway together with Six, and we quickly slammed the button several times to start going up as soon as possible. The elevator shuddered and went farther up, and we all walked out at the last corridor where Flowey was fighting Chara.

“FOR THE LOVE OF THE DELTA RUNE, UNDYNE, JUST DON’T STAND- WAIT WHY IS THERE 12 OF YOU?” Flowey yelped as he dodged Chara’s attack. One and Five summoned some spears and trapped Chara in their tracks.

“And then I heard about this and then I thought that it would be a great idea to…” I heard from down the hallway.

Shoot its Alphys, I thought quickly. The others heard my thoughts, and we glanced quickly to the doorway. We heard a lot of voices, probably even the whole underground, running down the hallway. I glanced at Flowey, and noticed that he was trying to get away.

“STOP RIGHT THERE YOU DAMNED FLOWER!” I yelled and tried to spear the Flowey, missing every time. Because of me saying that, the rest of the crew followed me down the hallway determinedly.

“U… UNDyNe?” I heard a voice.

“Alphys… um…” I heard Three said as I continued to throw spears around the room. I hit Flowey once on his stem, and he lost around a 6th of his hp.

“Wait, why is there a lot of.. Uh… you?” I heard the voice of Asgore from behind me. I quickly noticed that Flowey was closing the walls, and I threw spears at the walls constantly until it was completely closed. When I looked back, Flowey had only 1/8th of his original hp, and he was losing more quickly.

“Long story,” Three said under her breath as she summoned another spear and chucked it at the wall.

“This is halarious!” Flowey laughed.

“What?” I asked the flower. He winked and smiled.

“You did just what I wanted!”

“Wait, what?” Five frowned in confusion. We all stopped and watched the flower.

“This is better than I expected! I got everything I wanted!” Flowey said as we looked around in alarm.

“You idiot!” He laughed. Suddenly, two long tendrils of vines wrapped around everyone else except me, and I turned around to see all of my friends in pain.

“You!” I turned around to him and snarled.

“I feel its a teensy bit unfair that you get more of yourself in one team, right?” Flowey snarled, and zapped all of my other friend Undyne’s. They screeched in pain, and I shrunk in horror of what this flower could do.

“ALL OF YOUR SOULS ARE MINE!” He yelled, as a white flash went out almost blinding me. I slowly opened them, and noticed I was alone, and everything was black just like the SAVE screen. There was a small goat child standing in front of me, shrugging his arms and clenching his hands.

“Finally. I was so tired of being a flower,” He said.

“Flowey?!” I gaped. The goat chuckled, and turned around, his light blue eyes happy.

“Heh. Yeah, its me. But my real name is…”

A S R I E L D R E E M U R R

Another flash of light flew out from his body, spelling out his name. The next thing I saw was him standing there, in a ultimate form, rainbows and stars flying around as if there was hopes and dreams flying all around him.

“... Dreemurr? You’re the kings son? The one who died so many years ago?!” I asked. Asriel nodded, and laughed.

“You’re so confused. Undyne, why do you think I would try to be friends with you?” He asked, as stars formed in the middle of the air and flew at me, spraying sparks. I dodged all of them, and looked at him, refusing to fight.

“Why?” I asked, curious.

“Because you’re the hardest to friend! That's because you're so suspicious of everyone you meet! But once your friends with them then you have no care about their personal life, and what's going on with them… for sake look! You didn’t even ask your girlfriend what was going on until a idiotic human tells you about it!” Asriel laughed and summoned a sort of rainbow gun. I dodged the attacks as well, and he started to laugh hysterically.

“She didn’t give any signs of anything!” I complained.

“Are you sure? The fact that she was barely not in her lab is a little more concerning, and a good friend would visit her from time to time!” He said, and attacked me again.

“You can’t judge me for my social life! You tried to kill your own friends just then! And your mother, and your father, and all of the people who could care about you!” I raged.

“They don’t care about me! They don’t even know that I’m alive. They think I’m dead, with Chara. They should have known since Charas alive, there has to be a way-”

“- a way, what?” I wondered, interested about why Asriel stopped in the middle of his sentence. He looked to his right a little bit, seemingly thinking about something.

“No. I have to stop. This is wrong…” he said quietly under his breath. He quickly turned back to his original form, rubbed his eye, and looked at me.

“I… I’m sorry Undyne, Ive been a bad person and… and Ive done bad things and I’m sorry imsorryimsorry..” Asriel started all out crying. I smiled slightly, and knelt down and hugged him.

“It’s okay, kid,” I smiled, still sad, and the kid wrapped his arms around me, still crying.

“I… I didn’t want to harm anyone… but its hard when your soulless not to hate…” He withdrew from the hug, and I stood up.

“Soulless?” I questioned. Asriel nodded, and continued:

“When I was a flower, I was soulless. The only reason why I was alive now was because of Alphys injecting determination into a flower…” he scuffed his feet against the floor. “That’s why I wanted to harm people and wanted you to suffer. Because to me, it was a game because I could reset… but now the past two resets haven’t been as fun…”

“I knew you were a good person!” I exclaimed, but Asriel frowned and shook his head.

“I’m not. Ive done terrible terrible things. I’ve attempted to commit suicide multiple times, Undyne. I’m older than you, even,” He shrugged. “I’ll go back being a flower anyway, after I give back these souls…”

“So if you don’t have the souls, you will become evil again?” I asked, as Asriel nodded solemnly. “But there must be another way!”

“There isn’t. I needed to do this when I fought Frisk too… and I know what happens,” Asriel sighed. “Well, it’s time for everyone to go free.”

When he said this, he rose off the ground, and souls started flying out of his body in all directions. I gasped in amazement as I noticed the 6 humans souls there as well, helping him out, and as soon as I could speak he was back on the ground again, confused.

“W-what?” He gasped. I raised one eyebrow at him, and he looked at me.

“You’re friends… the Undyne’s won’t leave?!” He stood up slowly, eyes sparkling.

“Wait, what?” I questioned. He jumped around in happiness, and then realized that I was there.

“Uh… is it okay if I take your friend’s soul, Undyne?” Asriel wondered, and scratched behind his ear quickly. “There’s only supposed to be one Undyne, after all.”

“The other Undyne’s only, however,” I told him. His eyes glowed, and he ran up to me and jumped on me.

“THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!” He cheered. I chuckled as we both passed out.

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“Undyne, please wake up!”

“Stay determined, for the race of humans and monsters!”

“Undyne… w… we need you here…”

I blinked my eye open, and saw my friends standing around me in a concerned circle. Asriel was still clinging onto me, unconscious, and I felt fine.

“UNDYNE!” Alphys cheered. Toriel shushed Alphys quickly, and Alphys shrunk back, embarrassed.

“She might be confused… let her regain her senses a bit, okay?” Toriel commented, and I nodded sleepily.

“Undyne… who's that?” Asgore gestured to the goat that was attached to my side.

“Asriel Dreemurr, of course,” I laughed, and Asriel slowly opened his eyes and laughed too.

“Asriel?” Toriel and Asgore said at once. Asriel let go of me and rolled around on the floor, laughing his socks off.

“Yes Mom! Dad! It’s me!” Asriel got up and tackled them in hugs. Asgore and Toriel, stunned, hugged their child back.

“good job, kid,” Sans commented in his low voice. I gave Sans the half-hearted thumbs up, and Alphys shuffled over to me.

“Y… you have a lot to explain…” she mentioned.

“I know, Alphys,” I sighed. “But not right now… Im too tired.”

“Oh, um, y… you could fall back to sleep… if you want…”

“Yeah,” I said, as my eyes drooped and I was swept into a thankfully nightmareless dream.

Everything is going to be alright.

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The Fight

[Warnin there a lotta swearing and blood and gore this chapter so if you dont want that stuffs to reach your ears dont read this chaptah]

I woke up, and basically flipped out of bed, grabbed my clothes, pulled my armor on, and realized that it was 3:00 in the morning and nobody would be awake yet.

I resolved that since I got up so early, that I should train. But then I realized that I was too tired to see my two feet in front of me, and I ended up sleeping until 11:00 in the morning, which was a better time to go outside and slay children.

Now that I look back, I should've murdered the child at night when I got up the first time. You know, the usual night murder you hear about in anime and other manga horror stories, that you find out about about when your friend (Alphys) drags you over by the hair to their house late at night just to binge-watch anime. Then she kicks you out of her lab-house to run as fast as humanly possible scared of any living creature around you, and collapse on your own bed scared for your life.

Boy, that was a good time.

But the next time I woke up, I started to grab everything I would need during the day and I realized that I fell asleep in my armor.

No wonder I was uncomfortable.

I started to walk out of the house, and I thought that I forgot to cover up the burns on my arm and then I realized that had my armor on and I didn’t have to cover it up anyway.

“Un...undyne? What are you doing w...with armor on?” Alphys asked, concerned.

“N-Nothing!” I said, swinging around to face her.

“U… Undyne, stop lying,” She narrowed her eyes at me.

You have to lie, The voice persisted, and it sounded worried.

You can’t tell me what to do, I thought back to the voice, almost yelling.

“W… Wait, what?” Alphys echoed, looking at me, confused. I instantly realized that I said that whole thing out loud.

“Oh crap,” I paled.

“You mean, Oh carp,” Alphys pointed out a horrible pun, and I groaned in annoyance. “You’ve have a lot of things you have to explain, Undyne.”

“... Yeah, sorry about that…” I scratched the back of my neck, and realized that I had burns there and winced in slight pain.

“A… and the fact you were w...wearing bandages all around today, and s...said it was my idea t...to Asgore,” Alphys raised one of her eyebrows at me, curiously.

“He told you?!” I gaped at Alphys.

“Of course he did,” Alphys said without stuttering.

“Fine. Let me take my armor off and sit down,” I frowned, and sighed in inconvenience.

DON'T YOU DARE TELL HER, The voice screamed. ITS FOR YOUR OWN GOOD, UNDYNE.

I tend to do things my own way, I noted to the voice, as a headache started throbbing softly. I shook it off, and took off my armor to show my usual everyday clothes. Alphys was sitting at the table, and I walked over and sat across from her. I put my arm out on the table, and delicately peeled off the bandages to show the burns below.

“U... UNDYNE?!” Alphys shreaked in horror. I looked up at her in pain, scared of what she thought of what I was hiding.

“Yeah… that… It goes down my back and down my legs too. T… Theres a lot of it on my feet…” I sighed in both relief and pain as the voice started screaming in my head again, making a huge headache that throbbed painfully whenever I talked.

“W...what have you been doing to y...yourself?” Alphys looked up at me, very concerned.

“Nothing. It hasn’t been me. Heck no, I would never jump into a pot of acid, yet I have acid burns on my arms and I have no idea why,” I paused. “And then, the soul thing. I think it’s all the result of the soul, and… I can talk... to the soul... in my mind… and-”

“W...Why did you not t...tell this to me?”

“I… It…”” I started to say when the headache grew so bad that I had to hold my head in my hands.

“U...Undyne, what’s wrong?!” Alphys looked at me with the concerned look she always gave me whenever I ran out of the house or whenever I made her feel bad because she thought “she wasn’t good enough for me.” But, interestingly, she might be the one who has been keeping me mentally stable.

“I… It told me n… not to t...tell you anything, a...and I t...trusted it but i..it-” I stuttered in pain. I rested my head on the table, tears running down my face in grief and pain.

“U… Undyne,” Alphys stood up and walked around the table to me.

“J...ust wanted to make y...you feel a...alone and I d...dont want that-” The pain grew progressivly work.

“Undyne,” Alphys said, and put her hand on my shoulder.

“A...and the dreams t...they hurt I… I hate them… b...ut they won’t s...stop…” I said, now full out crying, and Alphys hugged me.

“U...Undyne, its fine,” Alphys smiled.

“W...why?” I stuttered.

“Because you a..actually told me w...what was going on. I knew t..that something was up from the start, and I knew you didn’t like whatever it w...was,” Alphys stuttered. “I… I was worried.”

“...” I thought quietly as the battle roared in my head.

“I’m s...sorry,” I said, hugging Alphys and resting my face on her head. We sat there, breathing in unison for a second, letting our heartbeats be as one for a little while.

You have to stop this happy stuff. It’s not going to HELP because there’s-

Be quiet. I’m enjoying being myself for once, I thought to myself, happily. Alphys withdrew from the embrace and looked up at me.

“I… I’m sorry, Alphys,” I told her sincerely. Alphys smiled for a second and then looked at me seriously.

“W… why were you in your armor, Undyne,” Alphys looked at me, very concerned. I hesitated, and then realized that I had to tell her to truth.

“I was going to kill the kid, Chara. H...He killed my parents,” Alphys looked shocked. “I...I only just realized that and-”

“Y...You’re staying in this house, from now on,” Alphys said seriously. I gaped at her serious expression, and she didn’t change her look on her face once.

UNDYNE LISTEN TO ME, The voice screamed. I quickly winced because of the pain that went through my head.

I KNEW THIS WOULD HAPPEN! I TOLD YOU!, The voice screamed in a sort of hysterical happiness. I winced again, as the screaming stopped.

Oh, sorry. Okay so this is what you have to do:, The voice told me.

You have to go the last corridor in front of the king’s castle, and like go there right now. Chara has a horrible plan and you need to stop him, right now. I started to panic, but then the voice continued: But don’t panic. There’s windows all around you, and you don’t have time to get your armor. Try doing the “going to the bathroom” trick that Papyrus always uses to get out of your lessons.

Wait is that why he does that? I thought, curious.

Maybe. I still haven't figured out. I mean, he’s a skeleton and I have no idea if- The voice stopped awkwardly as I realized what it was about to say.

...yeahhhh, I thought back, awkwardly.

“Uh… Undyne?” Alphys asked awkwardly.

“Hmm, oh yeah, sorry about that. And, uh ill stay in the house.” I suggested.

“... Okay,” Alphys said in a unconvincing way. I smiled and stood up tenderly on my feet, and went to walk upstairs to the bathroom. As I walked inside, I closed and locked the door, and checked with the voice quickly about what we were doing.

Okay so do I just go out of the window, or what? I asked, and waited a decent 3 seconds when I realized that the window was open, and I could plain just go out the window. I launched myself stealthily to the tree, and quickly and quietly stepped down branch by branch to the cold fall ground. I snuck through the forest, until I was close enough to the elevator in the middle of the road so I could run to it. I tried to cover the burns as I slid across the road to the elevator, and slammed the button.

Darn. I forgot to remind you to put the bandages on. Sorry about that. The voice said.

It’s cool. I thought, and smiled as the elevator lurched down to the underground. I leaned against the side of the elevator, letting myself breathe a little bit even though my heart was beating as fast as a drum.

What’s your name, anyway? I asked the voice.

My name? The voice echoed.

Yeah, you must have a name, right? I questioned, and the voice paused for a secound before answering:

You can just call me Two. The voice answered, quieter than usual.

That’s a interesting name… I commented, and Two seemed to cheer up a little more. I exited the elevator and ran as fast as possible to the hallway, and slid into the hallway to the throne room where I saw two unexpected guests fighting.

Chara and Flowey? What are they doing here? I wondered.

Don’t trust Flowey, Undyne, Two recommended.

But I have to kill Chara. I protested. Two sighed in annoyance.

You know what’s happened when you don’t go with my plans. Two breathed out steadily.

“FOR THE LOVE OF THE DELTA RUNE, UNDYNE, JUST DON’T STAND THERE!

HELP ME OUT!” Flowey panted, while dodging an attack from the kids knife. Flowey summoned some bullets and chucked them at the kid, while Chara ran down the hallway, and turned right into the Throne Room. I ran after Chara, as Two made a overly annoyed sound.

Are you serious? Are you defying me again?! Two seemed very annoyed.

The more you ask that, the more I will, I smirked as I launched myself at Chara. Chara ran and stumbled, and hid behind the throne as if I didn’t see them. I summoned some spears behind the throne, and Chara ran to in front of the throne, panting. I quickly noticed another spear straight through the circle in the Delta Rune, and I shivered at the thought of that being there during our fight.

Hey, Two, do you know anything about the spears? I asked, curious.

They were placed there right before the last reset, and haven’t been activated… Two tried to explain, but I was still confused.

Whats a reset? I asked.

Nevermind. You won’t understand. The voice gave up as I quickly side stepped Chara’s attack, and Flowey hit the kid with a vine making him almost slam into the wall. Out of the corner of my eye I noticed Frisk run into the room, with a worried look on their face.

“Well look who it is,” Flowey smirked. Frisks previously tense face lessened when they saw the Flower, as Chara looked at Frisk menacingly. Frisk pointed at me and then at Chara, and shook their head ferociously.

“This wouldn’t have happened if you didn’t spare the demon, you know, Frisk,” Flowey seemed to hiss at the child. I started hearing a scraping noise, as I suddenly noticed that the two doorways at either side of the room were being covered up by thorny vines just like the ones that poisoned me on Mount Ebott months before. I yelped as a figure jumped through the hole, just as the thorns closed.

“FLOWEY YOU HAVE GONE TOO FAR,” The figure yelled. I blinked my eyes, and instantly recognized the figure.

ME??? I blinked in confusion. Both Frisk and Chara looked overly confused, while Flowey looked at us both in his usual happy expression.

“Have I? I told you what you needed to do last reset,” Flowey chuckled, as this other me griminced. “Undyne, isn’t it obvious, you failed. Your little clone did not obey what you said, and therefore what I said before will happen, just as I said!” Flowey laughed evilly, and the other me summoned some spears, and attempted to hurt Flowey. I frowned and blocked the other Undyne’s spears, and she looked at me, clearly pissed off.

“I told you about the spears, Undyne. You should destroy Flowey,” The other Undyne seethed. I blinked, still shocked, as she facepalmed.

“SNAP OUT OF IT, PARTNER,” The other Undyne snapped. “I told you what you had to do, and you didn’t do it, and I know what I’m talking about.” It took me a couple seconds to realize who I was talking to.

“Two?! You were me all along?” I gaped. Two nodded, and looked back at Flowey.

“What’s your plan this time, huh?” Two said in a sort of hatred. “What’s your big-”

Suddenly, I heard a swish of a knife and the sound of scattering dust. I jumped as I saw Two die into a pile of dust and blood, with Chara behind her.

“YOU,” I growled in anger.

“Me?” The child laughed insanely. “What about ‘me’?”

“YOU KILLED TWO,” I said angrily from a sort of anger that came straight from my soul.

“Yes, and?” Chara smiled evilly.

“AND YOU KILLED MY PARENTS,” My hands shook in pain and shock. Chara laughed at my obvious anger, and I started to walk forward when I realized…

I can’t move. I glanced down at my feet, which were tangled up in vines that snuck up on me, and I frantically went to summon spears from my outstretched hand. Suddenly, thick vines wrapped around my hand, and I pulled on them but they wouldn’t budge.

“WHAT THE HECK, FLOWEY?” I growled at the Flowey. Flowey laughed in amusement, and both Frisk and I glared back.

“You’re not supposed to tear yourselves apart yet, Undyne. I have to explain something first,” Flowey chuckled, his face spreading into a horrifying wide grin.

“Undyne, I have to say I find it hilarious that you would fall right into my trap,” Flowey laughed. “I thought that you would remember me, and do what I told you to do. But nooo, that ‘double’ of you had all of your memories, and fell write into my hands! If you were to be smarter to realize that I knew you and I slipped that fact multiple times to you during when we wrote those stupid maps, then maybe you wouldn’t have failed!”

“But being as inconsistant as you are, you just went on life as if you weren’t getting burned and hurt by numerous ‘dreams’ that you have had for the past, what, year or so? You only just told Alphys, didn’t you? Kid, you have to understand that I have no soul and no compassion, so why the heck would I care if you’re hurt?”

“I don’t care. And that’s the thing you're missing.” Flowey’s vines slowly curled up tightly around my legs until it was hard for me to feel them. “You thought I was your ‘friend’. My question to you, is why in the world would I become friends with a fish?” Flowey paused for a second. Fear creeped up my shoulder, and I struggled violently to get out with no prevail. “... My vines are as strong as metal, Undyne. You can’t win,” Flowey commented.

“So if you wanted me dead, then why didn’t you let me die in the ruins?” I retorted. Flowey smirked in the way I always did in the Underground, and tightened his grip on my arms.

“Because I knew how the timeline would plan out since I’ve seen it once before! I know what to change to get to my goal, now that the resets restart when you all exit the underground. But now since you’ve been remembering resets and what happened before, I’ve needed to change my plan,” He started to swing around to Frisk, when I commented:

“I don’t remember anything, Flowey. What are resets?” I asked as politely as I could in this situation. Flowey looked at me, one of his ‘eyebrows’ raised, and slithered over to me.

“You dont remember?” Flowey laughed.

“I.. I don’t-”

………………………………………………………………………………………………

“How did you gain so much determination?” I heard a voice. I opened my eyes to see Flowey looking up at me, in the same situation as before. I struggled, refusing to answer, as Flowey’s deadly poison seeped into my veins.

“I… I don’t know,” I answered, and I truly meant it. I had no idea how in the world I was in the situation that I was in, but still he didn’t care. There was more spears littered on the floor than there was before, 13 spears to be exact, but still Flowey was uninjured and menacing.

“How about this. I’ll give you a redo. You clearly failed this timeline, and now that you have that power you can reset,” Flowey offered. I instantly nodded, my vision blurry, and the thorns came out of my skin and the fuzziness stopped.

“There is two rules, however:”

“You must kill everyone in your next timeline,” Flowey chuckled.

“No nononono,” I shook my head in pain.

“And if you don’t kill them, your own spears will activate and kill them all,” Flowey hysterically laughed. “It’s not that hard! You’re a monster and you know it! You killed many children before, and why not end all of their suffering now?” Flowey continued. I shook my head in anger.

“Because I’m not a bad person,” I seethed.

“NOT A BAD PERSON? You make me laugh, Undyne. You realize that all of humanity thinks that you’re going to kill them at any moment, right?” Flowey chuckled.

“I know that,” I answered.

“And you’re not going to follow that? I mean, there’s no reason not to,” Flowey smiled. I sighed in annoyance.

“Just show me the damned reset screen already,” I groaned in pain. I felt the vines release me and I fell into a dark void. I slowly stood up and looked around, noticing that this was just like my Sans dream from a while ago, and also from the more recent death dream. I turned around and noticed two buttons; one that said reset and one that said continue.

I pressed reset two times…

………………………………………………………………………………………………

“I remember,” I seethed in annoyance. Flowey laughed and winked.

“I knew you would,” Flowey said and slithered away. Flowey went over to Frisk, who was trembling but still amazingly calm.

“Why the hell does Undyne have the determination?” Flowey asked, his eyes soulless pits of black. Frisk trembled now in fear more than determination, and shook their head.

*I only realized that Undyne gained my powers when she reset, Frisk said quietly. Flowey narrowed his eyes at them, and then turned to me.

“So if you really remember, you know what will happen?” Flowey chuckled. I growled and pulled on the vines so I could look at Flowey right in the face.

“You better not,” I hissed under my voice. Flowey turned around and laughed, and slowly made his way to the throne.

“Golly, you look so mad,” Flowey smiled with his happy face again. “But as I always say, in this world…”

“It’s kill or be killed.”

As soon as he said that, small gaping holes appeared in the wall, showing 11 of the 13 different spears. I quickly noticed that it showed each of my friends doing their usual everyday tasks near the spears, just as Flowey predicted.

“No! NO YOU CANT!” I yelled, tears slowly running down your face.

*I’ll see you next reset, Frisk was crying too, across the room. It was clear that the spear in the king's garden which was right near my feet would hit them. I stretched to try and move it so it didn’t hit them, but my leg was around a inch away from the stick.

Suddenly, the spears blazed with energy. I suddenly realized that there was nothing I could do. I was stuck. I was hurt.

I was not determined.

Before the spears reached their max power, I looked at the holes that showed my friends that I thought as family, and watched them do what they usually did everyday one last time.

Grillby was cleaning his cups that the people drank out of with a slightly burnt cloth. Napstablook was floating near some rocks in the forest, crying. Asgore and Toriel were eating butterscotch pie. The dragon dude that I trained was also in the forest, and talking to his best friend. Mettaton was in one of the human's house, and giving them a hug.

Tears started flowing out of my eyes faster.

The kid, Tristan, was wandering on the top of Mount Ebott. Tem was wandering around his village. Sans was in the fun room, looking at a wall and sleeping while standing up.

Papyrus was in the hospital, gazing at the ceiling. He seems to be the only one actually ready to die, being all solitude like he is.

And Alphys…

Alphys

Alphys was helping the Greater Dog with a thorn it its paw. She poked out the thorn and The Greater Dog whimpered, but she pat his head nonetheless. The Greater Dog quickly sighed and-

The spear went straight through its chest and speared Alphys. I gasped in horror as they all turned to dust, and I glanced to either side of me to see both Chara and Frisk do the same. I suddenly felt sick to my stomach, and seeing all of the blood and the dust didn’t help.

“So how was that?” Flowey laughed.

“You’re fucking sick” I growled.

“Language, Undyne,” Flowey winked and tightened his vines even more to the point that I felt that I would explode.

“Fuck you,” I yelled. Flowey completely ignored what I said, and turned around to look at the ashes of what was left.

“You understand that if you continue, everyone is going to blame it on you?” Flowey chuckled again, and I clenched my hands.

“I understand,” I said through my clenched teeth.

“So you can reset, and then do what I want, right?” Flowey stuck his tongue out. “Kill everyone, and then you get to be happy with who you really are.”

“Fine,” I growled. “Just let me reset already, okay?”

“You have to do it yourself, remember? I can’t reset anymore,” Flowey shrugged. “Have fun passing the time there.”

“#!&$!@*#&$!*@#&$ ARE YOU SERIOUS?” I yelled in both annoyance and pure hatred.

“Golly, you look mad,” Flowey said as he popped into the ground and went away.

“ARE YOU SERIOUS COME BACK HERE YOU LITTLE PAIN THE THE F’N ASS,” I yelled, but nothing came out of the ground. I screamed and struggled but nothing happened. I just stayed there, but nothing happened. I focused all of my thoughts to this reset thing but nothing happened.

I blinked quickly, and something changed. I was in a black room that I remembered before, and there was two buttons just like before: Reset and Continue. I quickly faced the reset button, and reached out to click it.

I clicked it 1...2...3….4……..5

6...7

9….10

My hand then disappeared into darkness.

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Chara

I lay on the ground, as panic rose in my chest without any explanation. What was happening? Why am I freaking out?

I looked around the room, and slowly got up. I then realized there was a person standing right beside me, looking around the room. I jumped and stepped backwards when I saw that the person held a both bloody and dusty knife in their hand.

I looked back to where I came, and noticed that I was there. But it wasn’t me…

Was that a younger me? I thought in disbelief. I racked my brain, and I could barely remember this.

But then I noticed that my usually eye-patched eye was bloody and was the source of all of the blood on the floor.

Was that when I lost my eye? I thought, terrified. I remembered that when that happened, I got a concussion and lost all of my memory of the event. I walked up to the person to see who it was. Their brown hair hung over their face like a veil, as I realized who it was.

Chara?!

Chara murdered my parents? That child murdered my parents, My mind slowly processed, and I realized that this was the same exact dream that I went through the day after we left the underground… but I couldn’t move. Was that on purpose?

Then realization struck. This was the same Chara tha ruined my popularity. Anger rose up in me as I realized They did this all on purpose.

I had a plan.

I was going to murder that sick bastard.

As soon as I wake up.

They better watch out.

Cause Undynes going to kick their butt.

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undyingtale-the-story · 8 years ago

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Tem

I finally walked out of the house with utmost confidence with the bandages that I wore on my arms so much since even Alphys didn’t even notice it. Or if she did, she pretended not to.

Looking good~ The voice said in a awkward flirty tone.

Shaddup, I told the voice, while I was secretly happy with the praise.

Your welcome! The voice said, when I realized that it could read my mind. I grumbled in annoyance again and continued with my quiet attitude.

Okay, time to talk with Asgore… I made my way through the town to the elevator as fast as possible.

I know, the voice was starting to get irritating.

You know everything that I think doesn’t need a response from you, I through, my lip twitching.

Fine. The voice said, exasperated.

I started to walk slowly down the path to the elevator, and noticed that it was a Tuesday which meant that I didn’t have to work with the kid. I then walked quickly, in fear that people would notice the bandages and would get more concerned than they already were, and slid into the empty-as-normal elevator and pressed the button.

As soon as I knew it, the elevator opened and I walked briskly to the king's corridor and almost ran face first into Asgore right as I was about to turn the corridor. I stopped quickly and stepped back, as Asgore laughed.

“Oh, howdy Undyne!” Asgore smiled, turned around, and walked back into the doorway he came from, with me following. “About the spears…”

“Yes?” I inquired.

“Uh… I assure you that I’m not just trying to make you mad or anything, but…” Asgore started, awkwardly, as I smirked in annoyance.

“WHAT” I looked at Asgore, deadly serious.

“... we’ve gotten reports of a spear in the Temmie village… and I would send someone else out to do it… but you’re the one that’s dealing with the case…” Asgore hesitated.

“IS THAT A DARE, ASGORE?” I asked, smirking.

“Uh… sure?” Asgore shrugged.

“HECK YEAH I’M GONNA DO IT!” I jumped up, and went to leave the room, and then paused and looked back at Asgore.

“Is there anything that you need me to do when I’m there?” I asked, curious.

“Uh… I’m wondering, Undyne…” Asgore started.

“Yes?” I wondered.

“Um… are you okay? I mean… those bandages are really new, and there’s a lot of them…” Asgore commented, and looked slightly concerned.

“Oh! Yeah, there only for style,” I wiped the actually important problem away. Asgore raised one of his eyebrows in disbelief. “Alphys said it looked good on me!”

“... okay…” Asgore watched me as I walked away briskly, trying to sound enthusiastic and all.

Oh gosh I have to go to the nerd village… I thought painfully, as I semi enthusiastically walked towards the waterfall.

Yep. That must suck. The voice commented.

When you’re here it sucks, you mean, I said back in a annoyed tone.

Man, you’re cruel, The voice seemed defeated, and I smirked competently. I entered the Temmie Village with a competent smile on my face, and walked past the screaming temmies as if they were ants and completely insignificant, which they really are. I walked to the shop as fast as possible, and looked at the ruler of the Temmies, who was named Tem, who I felt always looked like she was going to blow up her head was so huge.

“hOI! welcom to… da TEM SHOP!!!” Tem said enthusiastically as I realized how annoying this cat thing was. I sighed in annoyance, and looked at Tem with as strict of a look as possible.

“Look, I’m here about the spear…” I sighed.

“spear in STATU!!!” Tem said enthusiastically, face vibrating.

“Uh… I’ll go check it out, okay?” I blinked quickly, and walked out of the shop. I started walking to the statue and almost bumped into a Temmie that was intensely watching an egg.

“You know, that the egg’s hard boiled,” I gave the Temmie some advice.

“LIeS! ALL LIeS! Tem… PROUD PARENT! ALWAYS!” The Temmie basically screamed.

“If that’s what you want…” I shrugged and walked to the statue, and I jumped when I saw a Temmie in the darkness. Holy cow this place is creepy, I thought to myself and noticed that the spear was right in the Temmie statues face. Oh gosh that's even more creepy, I thought to myself again, now slightly terrified.

“hOI!” I heard from behind me. I jumped and twirled around, and noticed that Tem had managed to sneak up behind me when I wasn’t looking.

“H… Hey! So this is the spear that you were talking about?” I pointed to the spear in the statue.

“yayA!” Tem smiled, and jumped around excitedly.

“Uh… okay! I’ll remember that!” I gave Tem a thumbs up.

“Oh, yeah, I got to talk to you about something,” The Tem said in a normal voice.

“You can speak normally… what?!” I jumped in surprize, as the Tem came up to me, and looked me straight in the eyes.

“Yes, of course,” The Tem smiled. “Asgore told me that he wanted you to deliver this to him… supposedly it’s really rare and he doesn’t want it to get wet through hotlands so you must take the riverwomen,” Tem said, and handed me a heavy piece of armor.

“They’re bisexual, you know,” I said to the Tem, slightly offended.

“yayA!” the Tem said their normal tone. I looked at the Tem weirdly, and bolted out of the creep house as fast as humanly possible. I clutched the armor, and almost ran into Frisk who was entering the Temmie village.

“Oh, hey kiddo,” I smiled at the kid. The kid then pointed at themself, to the armor, and then to the direction of Asgore’s castle.

“Did Asgore change his mind and want you to bring the armor?” I asked, trying to guess what the kid was trying to say to me. The kid nodded, and I gratefully handed the armor to the kid. The kid nodded, and then walked away. I laughed as they turned around and waved before they walked into the thick mist of the waterfall, and I made my way to the king's castle. On the way there, one of the bandages started to fall off, and I quickly fixed it before anyone could ask about it. I walked up to the throne room, where I found Frisk handing Asgore the armor.

“Whoa, how did you get back so quickly…?” I gaped at the kid, as the kid just gave me a thumbs up which made it seem like that they were just too skilled to tell anyone else about it. I snorted in laughter as Asgore turned around and laughed.

“How was the trip, Undyne,” Asgore asked, and I snorted in annoyance.

“TEM IS SO CREEPY,” I shivered, and laughed unenthusiastically.

“HAHAHAHHA,” Asgore laughed heartily, and Frisk smiled.

“THEY ARE THOUGH! THEY LOOK LIKE THEY’RE GOING TO EXPLODE AT ANY SECOND!!!” I protested to Asgore’s laughter and Frisk’s smile.

“Okay, okay, fine. I give you that one,” Asgore smiled. “Okay, Undyne, that’s all I’ve got for news,” Asgore said. I nodded and bolted out the door as soon as he could say anything else.

“BYE!” I yelled as I was already out of the door. I ran to the elevator and slammed the button, and the elevator went slowly up despite my quick adrenaline rush I had at the moment.

Before I knew it I was back at my house, tired and my eyes were drooping.

I was home.

And I slept.

#Undyingtale #Undertale Fanfiction #Fanfiction #Ye

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undyingtale-the-story · 8 years ago

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Death is Terrifying

I opened my eyes to another dream. It was dark and unnerving, and the floors were sticky and goopy. I started to walk to find that the goop stuck to your legs when you started to walk, and thank goodness the dream let me wear my boots so I didn’t have to feel any of… that. I slowly walked forward, expecting something very bad to happen, while nothing did.

I waited a long time. I almost decided to sit down, but I didn’t want my pants covered in the goop. I stood for such a long time that my knees were trembling and my legs felt weak underneath my body, and I jumped when I felt something on my leg.

Wait... actually I didn’t jump. I’m too cool to jump. Jumping is for nerds. I totally knew this was coming.

But, I looked down and saw that both my feet were almost, 100% stuck in the ground. I tried to pull it out, with no luck. I tried to take my foot out of the boot and pull the boot out. Again, no victory prevailed. I grunted in annoyance, as I took the risk and put my feet out of my boots and on the ground.

As soon as my skin touched the ground, it was engulfed by the black goo. I gasped in shock and tried time and time again to get it out but nothing prevailed. I screamed in annoyance until my lungs started hurting as the black goo slowly started pulling me into the abyss.

Slowly but steadily the black goo crawled up my legs and when it got to my knees I started internally freaking out. It seemed that the more I moved the more it engulfed me, and when I started feeling a fizziness in my legs then I was really concerned. I yelped and caught myself suddenly when I started to fall backwards, but managed to put my hands into the goop.

Now I was really freaking out. I didn’t know what the heck this thing was and it was slowly dissolving my legs and it hurt like hell. I yelled in pain until all I could see was black.

I guess its possible to pass out in the middle of a dream.

I woke up, my legs still hurting and feeling like little stubs on my body. I sighed in annoyance as I slowly reached my arm down to touch my legs. When I touched it, it sent a wave of pain up to my head and gave me another headache.

Wait how do my legs still hurt if im awake…?! I realized suddenly. As quickly as my body would let me, I pulled off the covers to reveal my legs.

Oh, my god. I thought to myself frantically.

My legs had dotted scabs all over the, and they looked like they just went through a warzone. They weren’t stubs, at least, but they might as well have been them.

Oh look at this. Remember about Alphys, Undyne. The voice said cheerily in my head.

“!#$*!@#*$)!*@#($!@*#$(!*(@#” I swore under my breath multiple times as I remembered about the lizard who cared so much about my health. I swung out of bed, gingerly putting my feet on the ground, and tenderly walked to the mirror.

OH MY GOD WHAT HAPPENED TO ME I thought in my mind frantically.

Dreams, of course, The voice laughed.

The rest of my body looked like a warzone, too. To be more specific, my arms were covered in scabs from my fingers to my elbow, and I was bruised from my elbow to my back, as if I was beaten up.

How in the world of the Delta Rune am I going to be able to cover this?! I started freaking out even more than I was.

You have your armor, The voice suggested.

YEAH BUT THAT TOTALLY HELPS MY POPULARITY, I angrily retorted.

Good point… The voice seemed to be thinking deeply. I grumbled as I sat down, and yelped as my legs protested.

You could do the bandages thing like in the animes, the voice suggested.

I didn’t know you were such a nerd, I thought grimly.

And you aren’t? I think Alphys is wearing off on you. The voice chuckled.

WHAT ME A NERD?! NO WAY, I thought in annoyance. OKAY FINE I’ll do the bandages thing for you. Just for your entertainment and my popularity. It’s going to be insanely weird, though.

Okay, The voice chuckled as I went to find some sort of bandage in my room.

#Undyingtale #Undertale fanfiction #Fanfiction

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undyingtale-the-story · 8 years ago

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Popularity and Other Problems

After I got to the house, I ran upstairs to get my knapsack that I left by my bed. I grabbed the sack, my head pounding faintly, and layed down on the bed, secretly exhausted.

Please try not to talk while i’m training the kid, okay? I mentioned to the voice.

Sure, It said.

Thanks, I told the voice.

I quickly checked my watch. It was around 5 minutes until the kid would come running down the street to where I would be standing, happy, and ready to teach him. I sighed in relief as I felt the pounding stop, and I looked up at the ceiling blankly.

So you’re a soul, right? I thought to the voice. It didn’t respond as I grumbled in annoyance.

Mister, you can talk, you know. The kids not here yet. I thought.

Duh I’m a soul. The voice replied. My heart quickened as I realized that I was talking to the thing Alphys was talking about, and that it can understand everything that I thought.

Who are you the soul of, then? I really want to know who stole all of my personal privacy and controls what I do. And what about all of that ordering around?

If you do something wrong, then you fail. My goal is to make it so you cannot fail. It said.

Who ARE you? I asked.

I cannot say, Undyne. But I want your success :) It said obnoxiously. I snorted in disbelief.

So, what do you want me to be successful in? I asked. It paused for a second before continuing.

Well. Lets just say, 13. It said, as I just got more and more confused.

13? The number? I asked.

Just that. It laughed.

“UUUUUUNDYYYYYNE! I’M HERE FOR TRAINING!” I heard a loud voice right when I was about to reply to the punks comment. I laughed at the kid’s tone, as I stood up, put my knapsack on, and ran downstairs.

Now be quiet. I ordered the voice.

I’ll try, It responded.

“I’M HERE!” I yelled as I swung down the steps and jumped out of the doorway enthusiastically, with the kid googling up at me as if I was the best person in the world.

“WHOA THAT WAS SO COOL UNDYNE!” Tristan yelled up to me.

“Thanks, kid!” I smirked happily as I looked around. “So today I was thinking about going into the waterfall and talking to their inhabitants, since you tend to stay mostly in Snowdin. Is that cool?” The kid jumped up and down as I mentioned it.

“Yes yes! Lets go!!!” The kid started running down the street. I paused for a second, smiling at the kids enthusiastic nature, and followed him down the main road to the elevator that went down to the underground.

When we arrived at the elevator the kid was already waiting for me there, jumping up and down as I stepped up to the machine. The kid followed me, and the surface was suddenly not there.

After the long and exhausting ride to the underground, the doors opened with a thump. The kid ran out into the core, and looked around, amazed.

“WHOA! I’ve never been to the core before!” The kid gaped in amazement. I smiled as he ran up to the lab and looked at the sign.

“Is this Alphys’ lab?” The kid asked. I was about to say “yes” in my usual enthusiastic tone around children, but then I realized how I left Alphys out in the dust at the hospital. I paused for a moment, thinking about that, and then replied:

“Yes, this is… however, we don’t have time to go into that right now, we have to get to the Waterfall, right?” Tristan frowned for a second, as I smiled. “I’ll show you around the Core someday! It’s just the Core’s a little too dangerous, and I want to teach you a few more things before going in there.” The kid jumped enthusiastically again, and ran to the other side of the intersection.

“Okay. Where do we go?” He asked.

“We’re going to take the River person to the middle of the waterfall, and we can go from there!” I told the kid as I took the central path. He ran behind me, as I saw the River Women nod to me.

“Tra la la la la, care for a ride?” The River Person asked.

“YES PLEASE! Can we go to the…” Tristan didn’t seem to know if there was a specific location that he had to say or not.

“The waterfall, please,” I smiled to the River Person. The river person nodded, and both the kid and I stepped on the boat. The ground lurched as we quickly went down the river, and he got to the part where he would say one of his nonsense rhymes.

“Tra la la la la… Beware of the powers inside of you…” they said in a mysterious tone. I looked at them, shocked that they could figure out the weird soul thing inside my own soul.

“You’re very funny!” The monster kid laughed, and looked at me. I smiled, reassuringly at Tristan, while secretly curious about what they knew about the subject. The River Person didn’t respond to what Tristan told him, but you could see that the person enjoyed the kids company.

The boat slowed down, as the waterfall loomed into view.

Gosh. That dudes so weird. The voice said as soon as we stepped off the boat. I cringed in annoyance slightly when it talked.

Shush. I ordered the voice as the kid ran up to the middle lake in front of us.

Fine, gosh. You don’t have to be so bossy. It said in a disapproving voice.

Says the voice that was bossing me around earlier, I thought back. It became quiet, as the kid ran around the pond, and looked back up to me.

“Undyne! Where should we go?” Tristan said as I walked up to him.

“We should go to where my house was. Maybe we can scavenge some things there!” I told the kid.

“OKAY! Is it over here?” Tristan ran to the path to the right.

“Nope. It’s the other way,” I chuckled as he jumped up and ran to the other path. I ran after him slowly, as I heard a song coming from the ghost cousins little yard. I peeked around the corner, and noticed two familiar faces.

Mettaton and another robot.

I was going to try to stealthily walk across the way to my house, but the music suddenly stopped.

“WHOA THAT WAS SO COOL!” The kid ran into their yard and yelled to them when they were singing. The other robot, who was beat boxing, stopped and paled in embarrassment, as I was practically dragged into their yard by the kid.

“HELLO, UNDYNE,” Mettaton said in slight disgust. The other robot with him slinked back into a corner, seemingly scared.

“Hello, Mettaton,” I said back with the same tone. The kid looked up to me, and then back at Mettaton.

“OH! HELLO,” Mettaton smiled and looked down at the kid. “WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE? YOU’RE USUALLY IN SNOWDIN, RIGHT?” He asked curiously.

“YOU RECOGNIZED ME?!” The kid jumped up and down.

“DEFINITELY!” Mettaton laughed. “I NEVER FORGET A FAN!”

Suddenly, we heard a loud crash. Mettaton looked towards the noise, and we all saw the other robot tip over a pot accidently and it fell to the floor and broke.

“BLOOKY”

“im… im sorry mettaton! that was on accident!” the other robot said.

“Blooky? As in Napstablook?!” I looked at Blooky curiously.

“YES,” Mettaton answered for Napstablook, who was still trying to go into the house, and he figured out that the door was locked.

“NO WAY! Wait… how did you know him?” I asked, deeply curious.

“HE’S MY COUSIN…” Mettaton said in a annoyed tone. “HE’S PART OF THE RED HOT CHILLY PEPPERS WITH ME AND SHYREN AND ONION-SAN, AND I CONVINCED ALPHYS TO CREATE HIM A BETTER BODY LIKE MINE SO WE CAN LOOK MORE PROFESSIONAL AND STUFF,” Mettaton shrugged as Napstablook fell over on the ground after turning around. “IF YOU BREAK THOSE DRUMS I’M GOING TO BE VERY MAD AT YOU,” He added to his cousin loudly.

“sorry…” Napstablook said droopily.

“Wait, so if you’re cousins, then you must be a ghost too,” I said to Mettaton.

“WELL DUH WE’RE BOTH GHOSTS. ALPHYS ISN’T SMART ENOUGH TO MAKE A AI. SHE’S SMART ENOUGH TO WATCH ANIME AND FANGIRL 24/7,” Mettaton scoffed.

“Excuse me, but Alphys is a million time smart and more intelligent than you, and WHY did you leave? I remember when you used to live in the house next to me and then one day you just left leaving him alone!” I defended my girlfriend and Napstablook.

“HA. IS THAT A JOKE? I MEAN-” Mettaton started to say until she looked past me and waved. “OH HELLO TORIEL!” I turned around to see the ex-queen and the human standing in front of the entrance.

“Hello, Mettaton and Undyne!” Toriel said and walked up to us, and Frisk waved to us, and we waved back.

“What are you two doing in the waterfall?” I asked. Mettaton nodded, as Napstablook finally got the lock picked and he walked (actually, he kind of stumbled) into the house.

“Frisk said that they were going to show me around waterfall! It’s a little bit different than what I remember…” She said in a positive attitude. Suddenly, Frisk let go of Toriel's hand and ran over and opened the door to Napstablooks house. We followed them inside of the house and noticed that he was laying down with Frisk next to him, and staring at the ceiling, his robot body piled in the corner.

“BLOOKY ARE YOU KIDDING ME,” Mettaton protested in annoyance. Blooky just looked at Mettaton, and faded a little bit more. “IF YOU WANT TO BE IN A BAND YOU HAVE TO STOP BEING SO SCARED OF MESSING UP!!!”

“talking to people is scarey, mettaton…” Blooky commented. “im not good… at anything at all…”

“Whoa whoa whoa there. Why would you say that?” I said in a serious tone. “If it wasn’t for you I probably would have bled to death in the Ruins!” I looked at him dumbfoundedly.

“that was just since i’m your neighbor and… and its a nice thing to do…” Napstablook said quietly.

“HE DID THAT?!” Mettaton looked at me dumbfoundedly. I nodded, and smiled at the ghost.

“That's not just a nice thing to do, it might have just saved my life. I’m truly in your debt,” I smiled at Blooky, as he slowly got up.

“Oh… okay…” Blooky smiled slightly. He floated over to me, as I realized the most famous tv show host that was in the underground was standing right next to me.

“Feel free to post this all over the web, Mettaton, since I know that’s what you do best,” I told Mettaton in a annoyed tone.

“UM, EXCUSE ME? I’M FAR MORE POPULAR THAN YOU, UNDYNE,” Mettaton looked at me with an annoyed look.

“Yeah, well if I were to tell everyone that you were a ghost that might change that,” I looked, smiling at Mettaton while trying to give him the same exact same look he gave everyone during one of his tv shows. He growled under his breath and gave me a pissed off look.

“FINE. I WON'T,” he said in a robotic tone.

“Good! Also, could you tell Ciel not to make such a big deal for celebrities arriving at the resort?” I asked Mettaton as the kid looked up at me weirdly.

“What is this training me for?” The kid asked.

“Negotiating.” I told the kid, still smiling.

“WAIT HOLD ON A SECOND. CIEL IS SUPPOSED TO DO THAT. IT GETS THE CROWD EXCITED, JUST BECAUSE THEY GET TO SEE ME!” Mettaton flashed his eyelashes.

“I swear you’re the most gay person that ever was,” I said quietly under my breath.

“WHAT?” Mettaton couldn’t hear what I said, thank goodness.

“Nothing!” I pushed the matter away just like he does anytime people say his show is bad. “But don’t you think its quite annoying? I mean, early in the day you praised a mouse as a famous celebrity. Like, that’s not even close to a celebrity, and its very clear that you do that just so the crowd could get more pictures of your face,” I told Mettaton happily.

“WAIT, HOW DO YOU KNOW ABOUT THAT?” Mettaton asked, slightly paling.

“It was all over UnderNet before you could say cheese. Also, Alphys was passing through, and of course she posts everything she sees!” I smiled.

“Whoa, whoa, whoa,” Toriel, who I completely forgot was there, pushed through the crowd to stand between us. “There’s no reason to be arguing about things like this, children,” Toriel noted.

“I AM NOT A CHILD,” Both Mettaton and I said at the same time.

“Well, you’re acting like one,” Toriel retorted. “Number 1, You should be happy with who you are, Mettaton. It doesn’t matter if you are a ghost or a amalgamate, the Underground always accepts everyone.”

“WELL THAT DOESN’T INCLUDE THE SURFACE, DOES IT?” Mettaton scoffed. I gave Mettaton the evil eye, and he became quiet.

“And Number 2, Undyne, I expect you to at least be sensible enough to know that peer pressuring people into doing things isn’t what we want in the Underground,” Toriel shifted her gaze to me, as I looked down at the ground.

“NOT TO MENTION THAT SHE SWORE AT ME A COUPLE DAYS AGO. DO YOU WANT ME TO PUT THAT ON THE NEWS?” Mettaton took advantage of Toriel’s comment.

“My reputation was ruined a long time ago, Mettaton. The people on the surface think I’m a beast,” I shrugged. “So, no, I don’t mind.”

“Why…?” Toriel looked at me, shocked.

“Ehh… Chara of course,” I chuckled. “Chara is always spreading rumors about the monsters, you know that. They even said that you were a abusive parent a couple days ago. Ain't that great,” I frowned. “But I don’t really care! I’ll be fine in the long run,” I hesitated, but smiled. Frisk ran up to me and hugged my leg, and I laughed.

“DO YOU WANT ME TO PUT THAT ON THE NEWS, TOO? UH, ABOUT CHARAS LIES?” Mettaton said apologetically.

“Yeah, that would be nice. Just don’t make Chara too mad, though. You’ve heard of what that beast is capable of,” I gave Mettaton a word of warning.

“UH, ACTUALLY I DONT… BUT OKAY,” Mettaton looked at me thoughtfully.

“Oh and it would ruin your reputation entirely,” I noted.

“ITS FINE. I HAVE TOO BIG OF A FANBASE TO CARE…” Mettaton shrugged. “I’M NOT POPULAR WITH THE HUMANS ANYWAY,” He noted.

“Oh! I just remembered! Asgore told me to tell you about the two spears I found in the New Home,” Toriel said.

“SHOULD I PUT THIS ON TV TOO?” Mettaton seemed like he was intensely interested in the topic.

“Heh, not this one. This one might make my own reputation go down, cause you know Humans and their theories…” I frowned.

“But what about the spears?” I asked Toriel.

“Uh, I dont know… I just happened to find them there and he told me that you should know…?” Toriel shrugged.

“Oh, okay,” I sighed. “That’s good to hear.”

“Uh, what is this all about?” The kid asked.

“The old dude from the surface… I’m pretty sure his name is Revetan… said that if I figured this weird thing going on on the surface out then I can gain my reputation?” I shrugged. “I don't think it’ll do much but hey that’s at least something.”

“Could I help?” The kid asked.

“Yeah, sure! If you see a lot of spears around that are grey and stone like tell me, and i’ll take note of it,” I said, and then looked at the other four monsters watching me. “You too, if you don’t mind.”

“Of course not,” Frisk and Toriel said enthusiastically.

“Sure,” Mettaton said to me, smiling like he always does.

“ill do it for you… undyne…” Napstablook said droopily as always.

“Sweet!” I said as I went to check my watch. It was already 4:37 and it was past the time I had to get the kid home.

“Um, we have to run. We are around a decent 37 minutes late,” I rubbed the back of my neck embarrassingly.

“Don’t worry, Undyne! My parents would be cool with it!” The kid said. Nonetheless, I proceeded to grabbing the kid and running off and giving them a quick goodbye wave before disappearing from view. Before I knew it, the scent of the damp walls of the waterfall faded into the searing hot warmth of the hotlands, and I raced into the elevator and slammed the button and put the kid down.

“WHOA THAT WAS SO COOL-” he started.

“It was nothing,” I smiled at the kid. Slowly but steadily the elevator went up to the surface, and the kid was bouncing the whole way. As soon as the door opened, the kid ran away, and stopped and turned around.

“THANKS, UNDYNE!” He said.

“Are you sure you know where you’re going?” I asked him.

“DUH! OF COURSE I DO!” The kid laughed and ran away. I stood there until I couldn’t make out his figure in the bustle of the streets. I smiled and sighed, and started to walk back to my own house.

So wait, can I talk now? The voice said.

Fine. but don’t give me a headache. Alphys might be worried. I thought, and hesitated. What would she say to me when I get back to the house?

She’d probably be really annoyed. The voice said persistently.

For the love of the Delta Rune would you please stop that, I started to get very pissed off.

Maaaayyyybe It said as a headache started to rise up in my head. I growled in annoyance as finally I stepped up on the doorstep.

Well, now is the time to be quiet. I told the voice as I went to open the door. It didn’t respond, so I figured it knew better. I opened the door and walked in and put my backpack down. I started to walk to the refrigerator to get some food as I noticed Alphys sitting on the couch eating a bowl of instant noodles and watching some anime.

“Alphys, you know that stuff is bad for you…” I told Alphys. She shrugged awkwardly.

“W...well storming off when you know s...something is wrong with you is too,” Alphys said a hard core comeback. I paused and looked at the ground.

“I'm fine, Alphys,” I attempted to reassure her again. She then looked at me, wearing a pissed off expression.

“Fine. Be that way,” She returned to contently eating her instant noodles as I sighed under my breath.

Why can’t I tell her? I asked the voice.

You’ll find out soon, dummy. The voice said in a annoyed tone.

Fine, be that way, I scowled back to the voice, and sat near Alphys and watched anime with her. I smiled at her fascination and her nerdiness towards the subject, even though it felt like there was a river between us because of what I did earlier. I frowned, as suddenly I felt a small weight on my shoulder.

“Here, have a blanket,” she suggested. I smiled at her, and wrapped it around my shoulders in comfort.

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undyingtale-the-story · 8 years ago

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Battles

I stood up, and looked around. This dream was eventful, not like the usual nightmares I’d get when I’m sleeping. I twirled around to see enemies running about, as I saw the others I’d usually fight with. The dogs, the bunny, the dragon, and sometimes some others decided to join and help me fight against whatever we were fighting. I quickly summoned a shield of spears as someone threw a dagger at me, as I panted, skewered whatever it was in the head, and looked around wildly to see my comrades.

The little small dog and Doggo were fighting together against this large black blob and they seemed to be getting along fine. Dogi and Dogaressa, however, seemed to be having a hard time against a fast, snake-like blob that they could not stab with their giant axes. I ran over, and tangled the snake up in my spears, and bashed its skull against the ground.

I turned around suddenly, and saw a human like black blob run at me. I ducked and punched the blob in the chest, but instead of falling, it just stood there, unmoving.

It was too hard to punch. It was so attached to the ground, that I couldn’t even lift it up if I tried. It leaned into my fist that I still had on its chest, and I slowly stumbled backwards, as the earth went slow motion as I fell to the ground like a rock.

“UNDYNE” I heard a voice yell at me.

“Hmmmm?” I said in a low voice. I slowly opened my eyes in annoyance, and when I opened them my eyes hurt so bad that it felt they were gouged out of my head (both of them, I mean. Not just the already gouged out one. That already feels like crap.) I winced and closed them again, as a raging headache entered my head once more. I slowly opened them again, despite my brains desperate attempt to shut down and go to sleep. I sat up, and blinked as the image of Alphys formed.

“Undyne, thank goodness,” Alphys hugged me, even though she seemed to be crying. I looked around, my vision still blurry, as I noticed that the room was a hospital and I was in a hospital bed.

“Why am I-” I started to say as my head thumped once more. I winced quickly in a sort of pain and looked at Alphys as she looked up at me from the side of the bed.

“I… I went upstairs to your room to… to wake you up and something… looked wrong. Y… you wouldn’t wake up and I… I was concerned… so I called the hospital and… and they didn’t know what it was… b… but… they said something was up… and…” Alphys stuttered.

“WHAT,” I said, very annoyed. I looked at her despite my head throbbing, and she jumped with my sudden outburst.

“I… it was weird that you wouldn’t wake up. Y… you’re not like that, Undyne,” Alphys said sincerely.

Don’t tell her anything I heard the voice in my head again. I shook my head, the headache still raging like fire.

“I’m fine, Alphys,” I told her in a soothed voice. She looked up at me, disbelievingly, and raised one of her eyebrows.

“I… I know you’re not, Undyne. I… um… we… studied the composition of your soul… and…”

“... and it’s darker than usual. W...which is impossible,” Alphys looked concerned as my head screamed like it was a war cry.

Don’t tell her, The voice said again, sending a shocking pain through my skull once more. I put my hand on my head, my eyes dimming slightly, as Alphys put her hand on my leg.

“Okay,” I told her.

“T… that could mean a v...various of things. I could mean that you… you…” Alphys started to say but then stopped.

“What?” I asked her.

“Y...you could have a soul that ‘buddied up’ with… with yours in your body… I mean like… someone or something could have merged your soul with another…” Alphys said, stuttering.

“Wait, what?!” I started feeling a dark hole in my chest open up in despair. Was that the voice in my head?

Yes, that is me :)

I shook my head in pain as my nerves crackled again.

“I… It’s what happened to Sans. W… we found out that w… when one of the brothers killed Gaster… his last move was to seal his soul i… inside Sans. T… that’s all Sans remembers, and Papyrus… he doesn’t remember anything,” Alphys explained. A large wave of pain hit my head again, and I looked to the ground and held my head in my hands.

“A...are you okay, Undyne?” Alphys wondered.

“I’m fine, Alphys,” I said in as cool a tone as possible. Good, good, The voice said, the pain slowly fading.

Now get the heck out of here.

“When can I leave? I have to get to the house before 10 o’clock so I can work with the kid,” I looked at Alphys, as she took her hand off of my leg.

“...You need to get some rest, Undyne,” Alphys said, concerned.

“I feel fine, Alphys.”

“S… Says the person who was just clutching her head… and wincing,” Alphys looked at me with a stern look.

“I’m fine,” I looked back at her.

“...” Alphys paused. “Stop lying. I… I know you’re lying. A… And you should care about y… your well being.”

“... I’m not lying Alphys. I’m fine,” I insisted to Alphys.

“I… I know you're lying b… because you facial f...fins always twitch when you lie,” Alphys looked up at me seriously, as I raised my eyebrow at her.

“Really?” I asked her.

“Everytime,” she looked annoyed.

Get out of there. Now. It said in a more annoyed fashion.

“I have to go back, Alphys. I will not take a day off,” I stood up from out of my hospital bed, and exited the room.

“Undyne!” Alphys ran, almost tripping on her very long science jacket. She grabbed my hand, and I turned around halfway down the hallway and looked at her.

“Alphys, I have to go,” I protested.

“U… undyne, just let the…”

“I’m fine, Alphys,” I looked at Alphys, making sure that my facial fins didn’t twitch. I let go from her and walked away.

Good job, The voice said.

I hate you. I replied.

Well you’ll have to live with it :D

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undyingtale-the-story · 8 years ago

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Training.

“UNDYNE!!!” I heard from outside of the house. I groaned as I got up, stretched, and looked around. Everything was okay. There was nothing bad in the house. I relaxed in relief as I looked out of the window to see the hyper little former fan of mine standing outside the window on the ground. I looked down from the window and waved.

“I’LL BE RIGHT DOWN!” I yelled down to the kid. I quickly combed my hair, put my tank top and jeans on, and slide right outside in a solid 2 minutes.

“WHOA that was SO COOL Undyne! You’re so great!” The Monster Kid smiled happily.

“Thanks,” I pat his head and sat down. “So, what do you want to tell me,” I smiled the biggest smile I could at the small kid. He smiled and jumped excitedly.

“I… I want you to train me Undyne! I want to be a great warrior like you!!!” He smiled really happily as I looked down. “My parents even gave me permission!”

“Real permission?” I looked down at the kid, knowing his usual mischief. He looked right at me, and laughed.

“Yup! They said that since I’m now 10 I could be anyone's apprentice!!!” I smiled at the kids really energetic tone and I couldn’t say no.

“Fine, I’ll train you.” I stood up. The kid looked up at me with fascination since I was around twice the height of him.

“REALLY?”

“Yes really!” I smiled. The kid jumped up and down happily for a little bit and then looked at me at attention.

“What should I do now? When will our training start?” the kid questioned. I frowned, and checked my watch. It was 8:30 in the morning and we had time to start.

“Right now will be good. I’ll just have to check on… Papyrus again before we start,” I told the kid. He smiled and nodded, and I started to walk towards the center of town.

“Come on!” I beckoned as he ran, tripped, and fell flat on his face. He got up, and smiled.

“Yeah! I’m coming!!!” He ran after me. I took long strides so he would have to run fast and get some exercise the whole way there, and I slowed down every time he fell. Before I knew it, we were standing in front of the hospital. We entered as I walked slowly (or what the human call “slow”. It's around the speed of a slug. No wonder they’re having health issues.) with the kid to the front desk as the usual pudgy lady was waiting for me.

“RON-” she started to say as Ronald opened the door.

“I know, Patricia,” Ronald said to the lady. She sighed as I walked over to Ron and entered the long hallway that led to their rooms. We started to walk down, as Ron noticed the kid walking near his feet.

“Who are you?” Ron asked the kid politely.

“My name is Tristan!” the kid replied. “I… Im Undynes new apprentice!” Tristan said happily. I frowned as I realized that I actually never knew his real name, as Ronald looked at me.

“Really? For what?” Ronald asked the kid. I felt a cold chill up my back because if the kid told Ron he might not like us monsters even more.

“I'm going to be in the royal guard!!!” the kid smiled. Ron laughed and looked at me, as I calmed down because what the kid said was way nicer than what I thought he would say.

“That sounds great. I never knew Undyne was in the royal guard though. Didn’t they remake the royal guard when the incident happen?” Ron frowned and asked me.

“Yeah. They did,” I told him.

“That’s good. It like having a ‘police-esc’ group protecting the monsters. That was definatly a good idea,” Ron frowned and started walking.

“What’s a-” I started to say as I heard a loud noise from a couple rooms ahead. I ran forward and slide slightly down the hallway to get to Papyrus’ room, and I saw someone attacking Papyrus.

“SANS STOP,” I yelled at the attacker. Papyrus was defending with all of his might but even some of Sans attacks got to him. I slid between the two, and looked at Sans.

“Sans please stop. We don’t need to fight,” I said in a normal voice at Sans. He laughed, but refused to stop. One of his attacks skimmed my arm, and I grimaced in annoyance.

“SANS NO FIGHTING,” The little monster kid slide into the room and bumped into me. He fell down flat on his face and looked at the two. The two stopped fighting, as Sans looked at the kid.

“... you’re lucky. i would never hurt a child,” Sans said, quite annoyed.

“SANS WHAT WAS THAT FOR.” Papyrus looked hurt. “I WAS JUST TRYING TO GIVE YOU A HUG…”

“... i want to get out of here, papyrus. i told undyne i was too dangerous but she didn’t listen,” Sans said in a crueler tone at me.

“Sans! For the love of the Delta Rune think about who you left here. We were scared that you might have died and Papyrus was as worried as ever. You are not helping anyone by leaving. Besides, now we know your hiding place.” I told Sans. He grunted in a response.

“SANS DON'T YOU EVER LEAVE LIKE THAT AGAIN,” Papyrus said with a brotherly sounding attitude. “WE DIDN’T KNOW WHAT HAPPENED TO YOU.”

Sans paused for a moment. He seemed to regain his past self for a moment, before his new ideas plagued his head again.

“i didn't want to worry you, paps,” he said quietly.

“WELL YOU DID,” Papyrus said, frowning. He sighed and shook his head. “I JUST WANT IT TO BACK AS IT WAS AGAIN,” he paused. “YOU SITTING LAZILY AT THE COUCH MAKING BAD PUNS AND ME MAKING DINNER AND HAVING UNDYNE AND ALPHYS AND TORIEL OVER AT THE HOUSE HAVING A GREAT TIME. NOT THIS RUN AWAY CAUSE PEOPLE MIGHT GET A TEENSY BIT HURT BY MY OWN PERSONALITY.”

“Yeah, Sans. That would be better for everyone,” I said to Sans. Sans stopped looking down and looked up for a moment.

“fine. i’ll stay. but don’t say i didn’t warn you,” Sans said. We nodded in unison, and Sans walked up to Papyrus. Sans hugged Papyrus, and Papyrus hugged back, still slightly hurt from Sans attacks.

“i’m sorry papyrus,” Sans said. Papyrus smiled.

“IT'S FINE, BROTHER,” Papyrus hugged Sans.

“Thank goodness that was dealt with,” Ronald said quietly by the entrance of the room. I smiled at the two, and walked out of the room, practically dragging Tristan to come with me.

“Wait… you didn’t tell me Sans was in the hospital, Undyne!” the kid said, now willingly walking with me and Ron. I frowned as I realized I didn’t mention Sans earlier, and looked at him.

“It’s new news,” I told him. “Barely anyone knows that Sans back. I really should get the word around…”

“I could help you! We could go to Toriels house and tell them, and then they could tell other people!” Tristan sounded really excited with the idea, and I had to smile.

“Ah, okay, we could do that,” I said, and then had another idea. “Only if you could beat me to the elevator first!” The kid started running quickly, and I called, “BUT ONLY WHEN WE’RE OUT OF THE HOSPITAL OKAY? WAIT FOR ME AT THE ENTRANCE.” The kid kept running until he was through the door at the other end of the hallway.

“Heh, I’m sorry about that,” I told Ron. He laughed.

“It’s fine. I know kids,” Ron smiled. “They’re always running around all over the place,” We continued walking at a brisk pace, and before I knew it we were standing at the door Tristan ran through earlier. I opened the door and looked back.

“Bye Ron!” I waved back as I walked through the lobby and out the door to see the kid standing right there. He was jumping up and down really excitingly as if he had no end of his energy, and he looked at me, determined.

“I’m gonna beat yah!” He said as I stretched my arms. I smirked and laughed.

“Try your best,” I looked at him with the same determined look he gave me. “Ready… set... GO!”

We both started running at a fast pace through the crowds of people around the square. Across the town was the elevator we were running to, and I knew a shorter route to get there than the one the kid was taking. I smirked as I jumped up onto a small rooftop, and started briskly running on the roofs of the village. I quickly lost sight of the kid as I continued spinning over rooftops and running as fast as my body would let me. I skidded to a stop with the elevator facing behind me, confident that I beat the kid

“HAH I beat you Undyne!” I heard a voice behind me. I turned around, now facing the elevator, and saw the kid behind me, leaning against the elevator. I jumped, since I didn’t see him there, and then realized that a kid beat me. At my own game.

“Man that was a great run, Tristan,” I told the kid. He smiled happily and I pat his head. “Okay, let’s go.” We entered the elevator and waited patiently for the really long elevator ride to end.

After a couple minutes, we exited the elevator, and ran as fast as possible through the underground (with the kid tripping a couple of times, of course, but he always got back onto his feet), and we eventually made it to the ruins where Frisk, Toriel, and Flowey lives. We ran through the small entrance room, and went outside of her house where we found her and Frisk watering the flowers.

“Oh, hello Undyne!” Toriel said enthusiastically. I smiled and waved.

“Hi Toriel!” Tristan ran up to the goat and looked up at her, smiling. She laughed, as Frisk ran up to Tristan and gave him a big hug.

“What’s with all of the ruckus?” She asked me politely.

“Just came to tell you that Sans is back. We found him,” I told her.

“Where?!” She looked amazed that we were able to find him. I paused for a second wondering if I should tell her precisely.

“In a room in the waterfall,” I told her. “It was tucked away in a corner… it was quite a good hiding spot.”

“Well, that’s great! I’ll go and see him right now. Do you want to come, Frisk?” she asked the kid. Frisk nodded, and held her hand. “Okay! We’ll be going.”

“Can I go with them, Undyne?” Tristan asked. I nodded, and he jumped excitingly and ran over to the two. Frisk laughed, and they exited into the house. I checked my watch and looked at the time.

It was almost the time when I would meet Flowey!

I, as fast as I could, went to the closest way to the surface, and realized that climbing up that really tall hole might be the most efficient way to deal with this. I ran to that room, and started climbing up the big heavy rocks that lined the holes edge. I continued climbing up until I reached the top, and flopped, sweating, over the edge. I laid there for a moment, but forced myself to get up, and carefully walked through the thorny garden making sure not to trip on one of the thorny branches.

I started running down from the mountain to the village, dodging trees easily with a step or two to each side. I skidded into the forest where I usually met Flowey, and stopped precisely one second before 5:00, the time we were supposed to meet. Flowey popped out of the ground, and smiled.

“Howdy Undyne!” He said even though I was still panting tiredly. I looked at him, slightly exhausted.

“Hey, Flowey,” I said to the flower.

“Did you bring your map?” Flowey asked, frowning. I looked down at my hands and remembered that I didn't have time to stop by the house and get it before coming. I groaned and annoyance, as I started to turn around to get back to the house, as Flowey interrupted me.

“It’s fine. How about I’ll show you the new place I discovered for your map, and you map it later?” Flowey said, happily. I sighed, and walked up to him.

“Okay…” I said, uncertainly. I followed Flowey through a grove of bushes directly across the area where we were mapping last time, and I found a large field filled with only one tree with, ironically, a spear sticking out of it. I ran up the hill, still very tired, and leaned against the tree.

“Boy, you look tired,” Flowey commented. I laughed and looked at them.

“Yeah. I just ran from the ruins, climbed up that hole in the mountain, and ran as fast as my legs could take me down here just to get here on time,” I said to them. “I wouldn’t have been able to get the map and get here on time anyway…”

“When did you leave the ruins? I left around 20 minutes ago,” Flowey asked.

“I left around 10 minutes ago…” I told him. “I was only in the ruins for a short bit though. You might have just missed me.”

“That’s really fast!” Flowey commented. I laughed and nodded.

“Yeah. That’s why I'm really really tired,” I sat down. He ‘sat’ besides me, and pointed with one of his leaves to the sunset.

“I found out that this was one of the best places to watch the stars,” Flowey said as the sun disappeared from the sky. I sat there, letting the cold wind of the coming fall cool me down from the run I had before, and I watched as the stars slowly appeared. They showed up like snowflakes which rarely came down in Snowdin, but then they never reached the ground.

“I heard from my parents that those dots are giant balls of gas,” Flowey said contently, while looking up at the stars. “And that they are separated by dark matter… which is basically nothing. And… And then we’re just a small dot in the millions of stars there…”

“Really?” I echoed. “I didn’t know that.”

“Yeah… and then, like, there might be other planets out there! Who knows! Maybe there’s a place where there’s humans and monsters living together in complete harmony with everyone happy!” Flowey sounded really excited about the topic.

“So you must like Astronomy,” I commented on what he said. Flowey looked down at the ground.

“I.. I mean I don't really like Astronomy… I just happen to know a lot about it,” Flowey said unenthusiastically.

“And then you wouldn’t have learned that in any normal school, cause they don’t teach Astronomy, like, ever. They don’t seem to think it's important, sadly,” I looked interestingly down at the flower.

“Yeah… my parents made me go to a top notch school. My mom was always interested in education,” Flowey said. “It’s not a big deal, really. I didn’t need any of that knowledge anyway…”

Flowey and I sat there awkwardly for a little bit, until you could see the stars clearly. I jumped as my watch made a beeping sound, as I looked and realized that I’ve been out here for a hour and I needed to get back to the house to make Alphys an actually decent meal!

“Hey, Flowey, I got to go…” I got up quickly. They looked over to me, and smiled.

“Alright, Undyne! I’ll see you next Monday,” the flower smiled as I waved goodbye and ran quickly down to the human village. As soon as I knew it, I was on the mainstreet of the town, and I slid over to the house before you could say “Determination.” I entered the house, and Alphys was in there waiting. I shut the door behind me, and left the cold streets behind.

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Thank you @draconic-hydra for suggesting Monster Kids name!

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undyingtale-the-story · 8 years ago

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Turn Around

I was laying on the ground. It was dark, as usual, and the now familiar creeping feeling went up my spine as it always does for the past several nightmares. I shrugged in annoyance, since I had absolutely no want to have a nightmare tonight because of what happened the day before, but what happens will have to do.

I sat there for a decent half hour. Nothing was happening. Which was terrifying. Usually something terrifying would show up immediately. I sat up and hugged my legs, and continuously looked around just waiting for something bad to happen.

Suddenly, I saw something. In the distance there was a black figure. I stood up, stumbling, and started running towards it, just wanting this whole torture to be done. But as I kept running, it didn’t come closer. It was still just as far away as it was when I started, and as time flew by and sweat piled up on my scales I had to stop.

Then, I felt something on my shoulder. I jumped, terrified, and forced myself to turn around.

It was Sans.

“Sans?” I questioned. He had a distanced feel to him making it seem that he couldn’t see me at all. He held a hand out to me, and I eyed it awkwardly.

“Shake my hand.” He said. Supposedly he could see me… but the whole feel of this in a nightmare seemed unique and unusual. I shrugged and went to shake his hand.

As soon as I touched Sans hand, he started morphing into something different… the terrible creature that he transformed into before. He held onto my hand firmly so I could not run, and I felt a distinct pain across my chest and a burning feeling arched across my body. I screeched and tried to run away, but I still couldn’t move. I couldn’t breathe. I was alone.

I jolted up, gasping and gulping for air. Alphys stood at the doorway and was frowning.

“U… Undyne! A… Are you okay?” Alphys seemed quite worried. I was about to tell her the whole story about the dreams, when I heard something in my head.

Don’t tell her about the dreams. It’ll scare them more. I heard. I kept my cool about this new weird thing that ended up talking in my head, and decided to do what they said.

“I’m fine, Alphys. It was just a bad dream. I’ll be fine,” I shrugged it off and smiled, while secretly being as scared as heck.

Good. It said. I sighed quietly in relief as it went quite again.

“Y… your sure?” She asked. I nodded as she smiled. “O...Okay then. I’ll see you tomorrow.”

Alphys walked away.

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undyingtale-the-story · 8 years ago

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Fun.

“FOR THE LOVE OF THE DELTA RUNE WOULD YOU PLEASE LISTEN TO ME,” I yelled at the dogs. Before I spoke, they were accusing that everyone was lying about the evidence they brought to the table, and that did no good to the mysteries that were at hand. The looked at me in silence, as I talked.

“The rules of the royal guard say that you must tell the truth about all of the evidence you get, yes?” I say in a calm voice. The dogs and Asgore nodded.

“So then there should be no dispute about lying. We should just keep looking…. besides, who knows if he is on the surface?” The dogs groaned in annoyance as I said this, and I looked at them, annoyed.

“He’s not on the surface, Undyne!” Dogamy said, clearly done with the whole investigation.

(He’s clearly not on the surface)” Dogaressa added to what Dogamy said.

“Yeah Undyne, why don’t we just stop the investigation? It’s been… STOP MOVING” Doggo barked at the dog who we now know is named Toby, “It’s been a whole month of searching for someone who might even be dead.”

“... Doggo is right.” Asgore sighed. “We don’t even know what we’re looking for, and I feel this has gone on too long.”

“Asgore!” I looked at Asgore annoyingly. “I promised that I would get Sans back for Papyrus. And you KNOW I never go back on my word,” I growled under my breath at Asgore.

“It’s gone too far. If you want to look for Sans, then do it on your own time,” Asgore stood up. “Meeting Adjourned,” he added as he solemnly walked away. I stood there, beside myself, and growled.

“ASGORE” I yelled over to the goat who was still halfway across the throne room where we were meeting. He sighed and walked through the door, not even acknowledging that I yelled his name.

“Seeya Undyne,” Doggo growled and exited with the rest of the dogs while I stood there.

“DAMMIT” I yelled. I stood up, feeling the need to destroy something, and cracked my knuckles to resist the urge. I stood there for a second and calmed down, but the calmness of the air didn’t help my attitude. I walked briskly out of the room, and continued to walk down all the way back to MTT resort.

I walked through the MTT resort ignoring Ciel the starfish monster, and before he could make a loud announcement that there was a once-was celebrity in the house I had already walked out.

“UNDYNE I FEEL ITS DISRESPECTFUL TO WALK THROUGH MY RESORT WITHOUT EVEN SAYING HI” I heard a robotic voice come closer to me, and I saw the pink and black robot right behind me. I turned around and looked at him with the most steely look that I could manage.

“Fuck off.” I growled at Mettaton before leaving him in the dust.

“BOY SOMEONE’S HAVING A BAD DAY” The robotic voice muttered and came up behind me again.

This time, instead of talking my way out of it, I turned around and punched Mettaton in his little glass container of his keeping his arms and legs attached. He flew backwards and looked at me surprisingly, his container cracked.

“I. Said. Leave. Me. Alone,” I growled in a darkened voice as he slowly got up, terrified. I left him and quickly got to the elevator and before I knew it I was right in front of Alphys’ lab. But before I took the usual path and found Alphys in her lab, I turned right and walked the long way through the waterfall.

After a while walking quietly, and saw my burning house and sniffed when I saw that it was still burning. I stopped, sighed, and continued on.

After walking forever, I stumbled on a part of the waterfall I’ve never seen before. And the weird thing is, I’ve never seen it even though I lived here most of my life. It was between the crystallized cheese and another one of those chests, and it was a long hallway with the usual waterfall bling except it had a large grey door right smack dab in the middle. I frowned in surprise and stopped and looked at it.

“What the heck…?” I muttered under my breath and glanced to my sides and noticed that the rooms that were usually there were still there. It was as if a hallway were to grow here magically. I frowned, stepped forward, and opened the door.

The room that I stepped into was a grey room with no windows or other doors and there was nothing in it except a familiar face.

“Sans?!” I said, exasperated. He was sitting there, his face right in front of a wall, fingering a piece of chalk rock and adding another dash to his paragraph full of dashes that one would see in a anime when a person was trying to keep track of their days of confinement. He muttered something under his breath, and slowly stood up.

“undyne.” he said in a low voice. “why are you here,” he asked, looking like a zombie that was just awakened from a happy dream. He looked messed up and done with the world but still holding on in this hellish room full of nothing.

“Papyrus wanted me to find you…” I said as he glared at me.

“if papyrus finds me, he could die. you don't understand, undyne,” he took a deep breath before continuing. “im not safe to be around anymore.”

“Sans! Don't you realize that you left your brother and made him depressed as hell because he’s so worried about if you’re safe or not?” I growled in annoyance at his depressing attitude. He then glared at me even more and his eyes narrowed in disgust.

“he’s going to have to live with it. im not going back.” Sans seemed to snarl when I suggested his brothers grief, and I was mortified that he felt that it didn't pertain to him.

“I’m not leaving without you,” I stood up, determined to finish the mystery at hand.

“dammit,” Sans growled as the little dots in his eyes vanished. “then go to hell.”

Suddenly, I saw Sans summon white and blue bones around his body, and a whisp of blue surrounded his eye. I stepped back, not wanting to provoke a fight just like Papyrus warned me not to, and braced for impact. Unfortunately I was not wearing my usual armor I wear for fighting.. I was only wearing my tank top and my jeans. The attack ripped through my skin, but only gave me 6 damage.

Wierd. I thought he could fight better… I thought awkwardly and then realized that I actually never saw him fight before. He fights the same as his brother, but with more strategy. I stopped musing about the past, and summoned a spear to protect me from his attacks.

Suddenly, I heard a surprised yelp as I noticed Flowey pop up in front of me and quickly tangled Sans up in thorns. I shuddered as I was reminded of the dream I had a long time before, but before I knew it Sans was electrocuted and lying on the ground.

“Man,” I looked at Flowey incredulously.

“What?” Flowey said.

“I didn’t know you could fight like that,” I said in awe.

“What… oh yeah, that was nothing,” Flowey untangled himself from Sans and then looked at me.

“Aren’t you going to bring him to the hospital?” Flowey eyed me as I stood there.

“Um… yeah I will,” I picked Sans up and then looked back down at Flowey. “Thanks a bunch!”

“Don’t mention it,” Flowey smiled, and popped back into the ground. I looked around the room one last time and noticed another one of those spears. I frowned, and walked out of the room.

After realizing I had to walk the long way back to the human hospital, I started running, fearing that Sans would wake up as I was carrying him. I ran all the way to hot lands and stopped at the water jug, and groaned annoyingly when I realized I had no hands to get a drink. I sighed and ran over to the the intersection that I was at around a hour before, and ran into Alphys’ lab.

“ALPHYS” I yelled in the lab loudly and I heard the pattering of some feet coming down from the top floor.

“S… sorry I… I was watching s… some anime…” Alphys stuttered awkwardly. She finally got to the first floor and noticed Sans.

“S...SANS? I... is he okay?” Alphys looked worried.

“He… he’s fine,” I panted. Sweat poured from my hair because of the increased climate. “I found him… in a weird room in the waterfall…” I had to stop because I was so tired. I put Sans down slowly and then looked back up to Alphys.

“...” Alphys stood there awkwardly. I started walking over to the refrigerator but she stopped me.

“Y… You stay here! Y… You need to cool down,” Alphys ran outside of the lab and I walked over to a fan that was stationed at the edge of the lab. I smiled in relief as Alphys came back with a glass of water, and I chugged half of it and poured the rest of it on my burning hot skin.

“Thanks Alphys,” I said to Alphys. She shook her head suddenly and smiled awkwardly.

“N… no problem, Undyne!” She smiled, and quickly looked over to Sans. “D.. do you want me to c… call the Royal Guards to bring him back?” Alphys wondered. I started to proceed to shake my head but I was too tired to do so. Alphys sighed, took out her phone from her pocket, and dialed a number even though I didn't answer the question.

I sat there quietly, as the Royal Guards came down and brought Sans back to the surface.

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