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triocat · 9 hours ago

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Ok so I've been holding off all of this mainly to have it all in one place

Basically think of this as the one stop shop for getting a good idea on this version of "evil Tuff"

With that said, it's time to finally talk about...

MAOTTER EX

...or just Maotter for short

First of all, a recap, with some minor changes to make more sense...

Shortly after he and Tiff meet Kirby for the first time, Vividria and Claycia show up, see the autistic children acting like autistic children, and emotionally harass them for being such, which includes taking away Kirby, making the already paranoid Tiff even more paranoid

(Honestly, your welcome to swap them out for different characters if you like, though, personally, I have it be THESE characters mainly to spite the OG creator because he despised the anime so much)

This goes on for 10 months until Tiff is so done with everything that she becomes a bit of a liability, and thus, the Warp Star™ ends up being given away to Viv

(I wanna say here that she and Claycia probably aren't aware how badly they impacted the lives of Tiff and Tuff, like they just thought that the later two were just evil all along, and practically everyone else just shrugged and went along with said belief)

Of course, when they inevitably tell her this, she is distraught and sees this as replacing her and Tuff for something they had no control over

Tuff internalizes this anguish and hatred, basically starting his porky-style path towards evil

Some time passes and something really bad happens that leads to the two running into the forest

(although, them being separated and Tuff being collected by HNME a bit earlier might make more sense)

There, Tiff and (maybe) Tuff meet up with Silica, referred to here as Sirica, who, in this timeline, never got to learn the truth about her mother's death

(She DID learn about the death of her other mom, Wolfwrath, though :] )

It's there that (either a indoctrinated Tuff or) Yamekage give them an offer to get their revenge on the world that tormented them

Tiff and Sirica deny the offer at first but ultimately, with Tuff's coercion, they accept it, ending up as demon beasts, only to be destroyed by Kirby's brand new allies, including Dedede and Escargoon, strangely enough

(Tiff becomes a shape-shifting ball of rage and Sirica became a very long wolf, in case you were wondering)

Tuff becomes even more spiteful and becomes a demon beast himself, only to be blown up alongside HNME HQ

He floats in space for a bit, like marx, before nightmare appears to make Tuff, now Maotter, his next apostle, thus completing Maotter transformation from being a bit of a brat to seemingly irredeemable villain just like porky

Now that we got that out of the way, it's time to talk about Maotter himself

Now, I'm not gonna sugarcoat it, if you know who Porky and Tuff are, then you have a pretty good idea as to who Maotter is, but here's the jist of it anyways...

Maotter has largely the same outfit and skin tone porky has, albeit with the same green shoes he wore when he was still Tuff, (though, he seems to wear shoes like that of marx soul, sometimes) and with dark blue hair to boot

He also has his own "Time distorter" which looks like it was fused with 02, which you can take as you will (it also has chainsaws because he wants to be cool and edgy, like he would be the type to smoke cigars laced with dark matter)

His demon form, however, is actually kinda unique

(shame it's OG creator is such an asshole)

From the bottom-up, we have:

Pink claws for hands and feet

Long snake-like limbs with stripes the same color as the claws

An insect-like carapace for a chest, colored a darker shade of pink, complete with a red bow-tie

Insect-like wings colored pink inside that can mimic certain attacks

A long neck flanked by dark purple shoulder plates

...and a head with a dark blue mop of hair, glowing yellow eyes with big pupils, and a purple dino-looking beak

(You are free to change the design a bit, just make sure the general vibe fits)

The powers he has in his demon form are quite simple

He has Godzilla-esce laser breath, can emit sounds that can harm machinery from his wings, and even mimic attacks like I mentioned earlier (though it seems limited to soul bosses)

Funnily enough, the original post from Gomogora's Newgrounds account (which got nuked after Birdon14 made fun of him), while also calling out the obvious pick of M A R X, also called out Drawcia, Vividria's sister (Maotter probably did so to mock Viv specifically)

It also stated that Maotter specifically felt betrayal towards Kirby for becoming Dedede's friend, (which is, honestly, pretty understandable from where he's coming from), which I wanted to include but I forgot about it and didn't feel like cramming it in, so I had him start feeling it right after Tiff tells him that they got replaced

Speaking of feeling replaced...

Maotter, while full of malice, is still a child at the end of the day, one who, deep down, misses his old life quite a bit

He says that he wants Kirby dead but that's probably just because he feels like Kirby replaced him (which isn't totally inaccurate)

Most importantly, he misses Tiff

He feels like he failed her by not joining her and that her demise at the hands of Kirby's friends was the final straw that ruined everything

And so, he plans to resarrect her... while burning the very universe behind him

...

....

.....

...but you can bring back the past so easily, now can you?

I have a proper good ending in mind, but it involves a new perspective...

Someone who experienced how the story should've played out

It needs an alternate version of...

Silica

...but I won't say much outside of that

Anyways, I hope that I didn't put you off too much, I just wanted to make something good out of this

Oh, but I do have one more thing to tell you...

You see, if Maotter encountered a alternate Tiff, he might not be all that happy over it not being "his" Tiff...

Especially if they weren't really even a Tiff in the first place

Welp, that's all I have for now, so I'd best get going then... for in the words of the pig king...

"See you later, suckers. Now which one do you think is the cool one?"

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triocat · 9 hours ago

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Okay here with part 2 of Tuff becoming Porky

I suggest you read the previous post to understand this but if you don't have time, here's a recap

>be Kirby

>crash-land on Planet Popstar

>get adopted by kind family of dwarf rabbits

>the guardian of the Warp Star™ goes to a pair of twins

>one is named Tiff who is logical albeit with some anger issues

>the other is playfully rowdy and is named Tuff

>a pair of artists show up

>one is a living paintbrush named Vividria and the other uses magic clay and is referred to accordingly

>artists emotionally bash a morally uptight tweenage schoolgirl with a short fuse and a bratty 9-year-old prankster who refuses to cut his hair for being a morally uptight tweenage schoolgirl with a short fuse and a bratty 9-year-old prankster who refuses to cut his hair

>Tiff picks a fight, with the belief that they are from HNME

>Viv takes this as confirmation that she is a horrible brat who is unfit for the role of caretaker

>repeat this interaction ad nauseam for 10 months straight until Tiff becomes a flanderized mockery of herself

>her mother's bond is now seen as a potential liability

>the role of being your parent is passed down to Vividria

>she accepts the role, still thinking that all of this was a NATURAL progression of Tiff's character

>the day after, you get a robot puppy

>you and it become like brothers

>turns out, it's from HNME

>emotionally-charged hijinks ensue

>hijinks end with a scene at a cliff

>Tiff appears with Tuff following close behind

>looking more emotionally tired than ever, Tiff loudly tells the dog to leave and never come back

>suddenly, Viv appears, looking colder than ever

>Tiff demands an explanation from Viv as to what's she doing, stating how only she can protect the Warp Star™

>"...not anymore, you aren't..."

>Tiff becomes heartbroken

>before anyone can properly process what just happened, Viv throws Tiff into Tuff, knocking both of them out

>Viv leaves with you and your ro-bro in tow

"What could POSSIBLY go wrong?"

And now, back to your regularly-scecualed assassination of innocence...

Tiff&Tuff woke up with pain all across their bodies

As Tiff slowly regains her senses, the words Vividria said echo through her mind

"...the Warp Star...it is now I who guards it..."

She didn't want to believe it but... she felt off... like there was a hole in her heart

Suddenly, ✨Meta Knight✨ appeared

Tiff demands to know where he was before asking what Viv meant

MK sighs before clarifying:

In the state that she's currently in, Tiff is ill-equiped to handle the responsibilities of guarding the Warp Star, and so, Vividria is handling it

To put it lightly, Tiff doesn't take this well, which is understandable

She's been trying her hardest to take care of Kirby, despite all the suffering she's had to endure for the past 10 months, and now, Meta in the most tone deaf manner, might I add is telling her that her role is now being reassigned to the one that was ACTIVELY screwing with her

Meta Knight apologizes for the change and tells that he hopes that she can be like the girl she once was before flying off

All she could think about was that she failed

And, as Tuff tried to console her, saying that they could still try to be friends with Kirby, Tiff said this...

"They replaced us..."

"w-Wha..."

"They...REPLACED us. We tried our best and it wasn't good enough."

Tuff tried to refute it, but, being Tuff, he couldn't think of anything impactful

"If you want to try and fail to appeal to those damn painters then be my guest, but as for me, well I... I... *hic* I'm going home."

"Sis... WAIT..."

Tiff stormed off, tears welling up in her eyes, and, as her image disappeared from view, the words she started to rattle in Tuff's head

And, as he pondered on them, something within Tuff started to fracture and twist as he began to feel something he never felt before...

BETRAYAL

From that day forward, neither of them were the same

Whatever impulse control Tiff had from when she first met Kirby was gone, her mood now violently swinging between destructive fury and wallowing despair

...and Tuff?

Without an emotional anchor in Tiff, he started to be more mean-spirited in his pranks, now actively people away, knowing full well that things were never going to be as they were ever again...

...

....

.....

Meanwhile, at Castle Dedede, everyone is doing preparations for Kirby's birthday

Yes, I am dead serious, Viv and Claycia didn't read the room at all when it came to the Ebrums

I'm unsure if they even had a visible reaction when Tuff started planting explosives at the cappies' doorsteps

When I said that Viv was kind to everyone except for the twins, I meant it whole-heartly

When push comes to shove, they can be extremely tone deaf

I think they reformed Dedede before they pondered on whether or not they were too harsh on Tiff or Tuff

So you're probably wondering what happens next, and well..

... let's just say it gets pretty bad

So, one day, Tiff decided that it was best if she ran off into the forest and never returned, with Tuff following close behind, not wanting to leave her again

While they're in the forest, however, they run into none other than...

Silica

...who is in the same exact boat as they are of absolutely not having it

You see, since Tiff and Tuff were replaced by Viv and Claycia, things happened a bit differently

Most notably, whether one of them got to Galaxia first, or if Kirisakin just died before the event could even occur, the point is that the moment where it shows her the truth, that Garlude sacrificed herself in order to help Meta Knight in his quest to stop HNME...

...yeah it, uh... It just never gets to happen

As such, Silica never really gets to learn it, meaning that she still thinks her mom died for nothing

(...And if really wanna cruel, and make things even more horrible, considering the OG's creator made hate art of Birdon14's headcanons, Silica might have learnt that her suragette MOM got sliced. IN. HALF. So, what, is that like... TWO dead moms thanks to the Kirby Krew™?)

She's been living in the forest ever since

As she and Tiff vented their individual frustrations to each other, a familiar voice rang across the forest

"Greetings, children..."

It was Yamekage

Apparently, he never really left Popstar and was mearly in hiding to spy on the inhabitants, and now, he has an offer for them, to get back at the world that tormented them so

Tiff and Silica, albeit slightly intrigued, almost immediately shoot him down on his offer, knowing that it probably won't be all it's cracked up to be

Tuff, however, is willing to hear him out

Tiff is obviously flabbergasted but Tuff points out that they don't really have that many options outside of, as she said, "trying and failing to appeal to those damn painters," so what other choices do they have

Silica, who has no one left, agrees with Tuff and, by the power of "2-to-1", Tiff, begrudgingly, does so too

So, what is the offer, I hear you asking...

Well, it's simple, really...

Yamekage is going to bring them to HNME... then turn them into demon beasts

Hey, it's not like Tiff and Silica didn't have good reasons to not immediately take him on his offer

Speaking of which, while silica's demon form was relatively normal, (by which I mean it was basically just Birdon14's long wolf silica), Tiff's demon forms, probably to mock Kirby and friends, was probably a lot more mutated (I'm pretty sure the forms Gomogora made for her aren't really ideal so take some creative liberties with how she ended looking, just know that it would probably look a bit... "Akira-ish")

Funnily enough, though, while those two were thrown into the demon-inator pretty quickly after the reveal that the offer was "become demon beast free", they only really had Tuff go through the process after he complained incessantly about not becoming one, mostly because he wanted to look "awesome", as he put it (in case you are wondering why he's not put off by all of this, let's just say that he got indoctrinated once they realized that could potentially be useful, like Porky)

Just know that he was probably turned into one sometime after Tiff and Silica got defeated

And yes, I do mean D E F E A T

Not saved or anything like that (at least, not yet) they straight up got WWE grand slammed into oblivion (yeah, this story gets harsh, when I said that Tuff loses everything I meant it)

Tiff gets taken down by Chao after the later does a Goku turns into a big monkey (don't ask why, just go with it) and Silica gets screwed over by Asylus (you know, the edgy Godzilla OC)

Tuff became devastated

After all this time, the moment they retaliated against the ones who threw them out like garbage, his dear sister Tiff (oh, and Silica, too, he supposes) just explode into a pig ol' bile of nothingness

Even HNME became surprised because they were pretty sure that, at the very least, they would feel SOME remorse for killing Tiff, but apparently not

Sure, Kirby, Meta, and the Lola twins felt a bit bad, but practically everyone else just... SHRUGGED IT OFF

And you wanna know the cherry on top of this sundae of misery, the final insult to Tuff's injury...

Sometime shortly before or after the inevitable fall HNME, a portal appears and spits out an alternate version of a certain character, that being...

Silica

Except that this Silica came from a dimension where everything went exactly like the anime, meaning that she saw her mom sacrifice herself for the greater good, therefore growing as a person

(of course, if the very clear implications of Viv and Claycia not being there DID impact the crews perseptions on how the Ebrum twins were way back when, assuming it doesn't just go over their heads, it would probably be too little, too late)

So they decided, instead of just shunting him into battle as soon as the process was complete, they should keep him at HNME HQ just in case Kirby and co manage to get there without a teleporter and they need an demon beast on deck

And so, Tuff, with not much left to lose and vengeful vitriol in his belly, goes through the process he's been waiting for

He becomes...

MAOTTER

(in case anyone besides Triocat, who has the images I sent to her, wanna know what he ends up looking like, don't worry, I'll get back to you soon)

From here, the rest of the story is not that hard to figure out: Tuff (now named Maotter) is almost killed as HNME explodes

Maotter, charred to a crisp yet still just barely alive, (think marx) is given an ultimatum by Nightmare, (something, something, fear powers him), which boils down to "BECOME MY NEW APOSTLE OR DIE IN SPACE ", and Maotter, now with somehow even less to lose, accepts the role, becoming...

MAOTTER EX

...which is, more or less, just a souped-up pallette swap, like most EX forms tend to be

His first coarse of action being to get what he needs to do one specific thing, and that very thing is...

...to bring back Tiff... in his image

...

...and that's where I'll leave it for today

I'm aware that a lot of this was kinda just a rough draft, but I'm sure that we can fix up some the more nonsense stuff here and/or there

Also, you might be wondering why this clear parody of Porky from Earthbound has a tragic backstory and all I'll say is you should search up him up on YouTube because there's a essay on there that points out how Porky is actually also a tragic character (although, really, I just thought It'd be a lot more palatable if he was doing so moreso out of frustration over Viv and Claycia being oddly exclusive of them, rather than him just being evil all along)

(Also, it wasn't originally intended for Maotter/Nightmare and Vividria to have the same word color, but honestly, it is kinda funny when you think about it)

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triocat · 9 hours ago

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Hey no offense but don’t go callout other blogs for their characterization. I’m not comfortable about that /nm

Alright so I was planning on sending this to you earlier but I got distracted so I'm just going to send it to you now

(For context, this is about my retelling of Gomogora's AU where he basically just uses it to hate on the anime

Thankfully, he avoids Tumblr like the plague so we should be fine

If you want more info about him, search it on @birdon14's blog)

This is the story of a boy who lost everything and decided to retaliate with violence and despair

This is the story of...

MAOTTER

Once there was a pair of twins

A brother name Tuff and his sister named Tiff

They loved each other and we're about as close as siblings could be

Sure, they butted heads more than they would've liked but they still considered each other as family

They lived under the rule of a greedy penguin king named Dedede who thought everyone around him as below him

The townsfolk didn't really like them either seeing Tiff as the town nag and her brother as a prank loving nuisance

There were some cappies that were willing to talk with the kids, but for the most part, they were on their own...

...that is, until a miracle happened

A shooting star fell out of the sky and brought with it, a little pink puff named Kirby

Almost instantly, the Ebrums accepted the puffball into their family with Tiff being the guardian of the source of his power, theWarp Star™

Sure, she had a short temper and was a bit over-protective with her brother being the exact opposite but with the responsibilities of taking care of a baby star warrior, they can learn to be better people (or bunnies, whatever you think they are)

It looked like things were finally going right for once...

...

....

.....

...but alas, this wasn't meant to be

You see, there was one thing that would ultimately doom this blossoming friendship

Or, should I say, two

A pair of painters named Vividria and Claycia

When they got to Dreamland, they noticed Kirby being kicked around by Tuff (let's be honest, Tuff would probably do that at the worst possible time) followed by Tiff angerly yelling at him for doing so

Seeing this, they did the only reasonable and natural thing they could do at the time...

...they took Kirby away, saying that the twins were horrible people, just for being naive children still learning to be people

Of course, this provoked a response from Tiff, thinking that they were demon beasts, sent here to try to persuade him to join HNME, (because, let's be honest, they look WAAAY too weird for her to not be classified as demon beasts), which only fueled their distrust against the twins, as, in their minds, this was confirmation that Tiff and Tuff were the worst possible people for the job

And so, whenever there would've been positive character development for Tiff and Tuff, one or both of the painters would appear to bash them for being "an obnoxious karen" and a "snot-nosed brat" respectively, paint buckets on the head for yelling at Kirby, pies to the face for making fun of the king, being frozen alive for explaining how bad cutting trees are for the environment, (which is especially funny when you remember that the trees here are sentient), being spanked on the behind for being mind controlled to hurt Kirby, and it went on...

...for10

WHOLE

MONTHS

10 months straight of these two painters verbally bashing the twins for having flaws and acting like children

It had gone to the point that Tiff's emotional sanity was slowly being chipped away by her ever-rising fury

Kirby and Tuff couldn't really do anything but watch in horror as Tiff slowly turned from a bossy yet kind hearted geek to a spite-filled mockery of herself

And you wanna know the worst part...

Since she was now so easily enraged by anything, her special bond with Kirby was now a serious liability

So, naturally, it was shifted around to someone who's was much more calm and collected

It was decided...

The new guardian of the Warp Star™ would be none other than Vividria

Now, this isn't to say that she isn't a good person because, let's be honest here, she was possibly the only viable pick for the job

She's talented, kind, ('less your last name was "Ebrum"), and, best of all, powerful at magic

One may even say, if they were conspiratorical enough, that Viv purposefully sabatoged Tiff's chances with it to keep Kirby all to herself (and Claycia), when, in reality...

...She was completely oblivious to how much she broke Tiff

Of course, no one really told Tiff any of this (*discusting coughing noises* @kirbybecomesastarwarrior) but don't you worry your little head just yet...

...because it doesn't take long before the beans are spilt over the grave of her innocence

(Context Warning: This takes place in that one scene on the cliff from Season 1

You know which scene I'm talking about)

Kirby and his friend ran from Dedede's castle, wanting to get away from it all

Eventually, they come across a cliff facing the ocean

They stop in their tracks, unsure where to go next

Suddenly, they hear a familiar voice

"KIRBY!!!"

They turn around to see Tiff with a expression of pure frustration and Tuff behind her, kinda just standing there

"There you are, Kirby. That 'toy' is HIGHLY DANGEROUS. It was made by HNME. It may not be trying to destroy you NOW, but when you put all your faith in it,IT'LL BLOW UP IN YOUR FACE."

Kirby tries to protect his beloved pet

"p-Poyo, inni-sent"

Tiff, tired of all she's been through, shoves Kirby aside to yell at the "problem"

"YOU'RE NOTHING BUT A DEMON IN A PLASTIC SHELL, YOU HEAR ME!!!!! NOW DO US ALL A FAVOR AND G E T L O S T -"

Suddenly, Tiff is interrupted...

The robotic canine looks up to see...

... it's Vividria!

"...decidedly, you attack the weakest... you really are in the same exact state we found you in..."

"WHAT ARE YOU DOING, VIVIDRIA!! Leave yourself OUT OF THIS!!! Don't you know that protecting Kirby is MY DUTY ALONE !!!!"

"...heh...I guess he didn't tell you yet..."

A flash of confusion washed upon Tiff's face

"...the Warp Star...it is now I who guards it..."

"I...I...w-what..."

Tiff's voice cracks as her expression of boiling rage melts into one of confused anguish

"...and now...I'm going to do what I should've done...TEN...MONTHS...AGO"

As Viv says those last 3 words, she takes Tiff and throws her towards Tuff

After doing so, Viv takes a breather before going to pet the robo-dog

"...it's going to be all right, little one...those horrible children won't hurt you anymore...you know...you kind of remind me of gooey...don't worry...I know what it's like to come from a horrible family...I swear, from the bottom of my heart, I will protect you alongside Kirby..."

"Poyo!"

"...you're right, Kirby...let's go warm up at the castle..."

Vividria takes Kirby and his brother away from the cliff and towards the castle

Little would anyone know how bad everything would get thanks to what Viv said to Tiff...

...aaaand that's gonna be part 1 of (hopefully) 3

I realized midway through writing this that I wasn't gonna finish this today so I decided to finish this during the next 2

In the meantime, here are some extra things to explain certain aspects of this

Why are you using ideas from Gomogora of all people?

I am a pretty firm believer in the idea that a lot of bad media are mainly products of bad execution rather than necessarily bad ideas so I decided to give said ideas a home aside from the hard drive of someone who's pretty toxic, all things considered

Why did Tuff becoming Porky interest you?

Honestly, it's mostly because there's barely any focus on Tuff in general and "Tuff joining nightmare" does sound moderately interesting, at least

Why'd you @ KBASW?

Honestly, it's because his treatment of the Anime (outside of the GSA) kinda left a sour taste in my mouth. No disrespect to them, ofc, everyone has different ideals and headcanons about the characters they like, as well preferences towards different bits of Kirby media and I get that "Metadad" is pretty interesting but personally...

...Meta Knight doesn't really feel like himself and Tiff seriously needs checked on

I'll probably vent to you about KBASW some other time but all I'll say now is that MK kinda acts like how Viv does here in the sense that both seem a bit dismissive of Tiff and her misery

Did Viv take care of the bomb within the puppy?

Hm...oh. Right. Yeah, pretty much. Claycia actually learnt some tech know-how from Escargoon. They are actually pretty chill with each other.

Now, if they actually did so with the twins as well, this would've turned out better than the anime, but hey, you work with what you get, right?

What's with the retcon?

Funny story, actually...

I misremembered something and didn't wanna bother fixing so there's some disanence between the OG comic and the retelling

Although, honestly, I think it fits better for the story I wanna tell so I guess it was a blessing in disguise

Is the next part going to actually be about Maotter?

I won't lie, he's mainly in the final part, which is gonna mostly be a checklist, anyways

Honestly, though, well...

I T H I N K T H A T ' S T H E P O I N T

#trio answers

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triocat · 9 hours ago

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Alright so I was planning on sending this to you earlier but I got distracted so I'm just going to send it to you now

(For context, this is about my retelling of Gomogora's AU where he basically just uses it to hate on the anime

Thankfully, he avoids Tumblr like the plague so we should be fine

If you want more info about him, search it on @birdon14's blog)

This is the story of a boy who lost everything and decided to retaliate with violence and despair

This is the story of...

MAOTTER

Once there was a pair of twins

A brother name Tuff and his sister named Tiff

They loved each other and we're about as close as siblings could be

Sure, they butted heads more than they would've liked but they still considered each other as family

They lived under the rule of a greedy penguin king named Dedede who thought everyone around him as below him

The townsfolk didn't really like them either seeing Tiff as the town nag and her brother as a prank loving nuisance

There were some cappies that were willing to talk with the kids, but for the most part, they were on their own...

...that is, until a miracle happened

A shooting star fell out of the sky and brought with it, a little pink puff named Kirby

Almost instantly, the Ebrums accepted the puffball into their family with Tiff being the guardian of the source of his power, theWarp Star™

It looked like things were finally going right for once...

...

....

.....

...but alas, this wasn't meant to be

You see, there was one thing that would ultimately doom this blossoming friendship

Or, should I say, two

A pair of painters named Vividria and Claycia

Seeing this, they did the only reasonable and natural thing they could do at the time...

...they took Kirby away, saying that the twins were horrible people, just for being naive children still learning to be people

...for10

WHOLE

MONTHS

10 months straight of these two painters verbally bashing the twins for having flaws and acting like children

It had gone to the point that Tiff's emotional sanity was slowly being chipped away by her ever-rising fury

Kirby and Tuff couldn't really do anything but watch in horror as Tiff slowly turned from a bossy yet kind hearted geek to a spite-filled mockery of herself

And you wanna know the worst part...

Since she was now so easily enraged by anything, her special bond with Kirby was now a serious liability

So, naturally, it was shifted around to someone who's was much more calm and collected

It was decided...

The new guardian of the Warp Star™ would be none other than Vividria

Now, this isn't to say that she isn't a good person because, let's be honest here, she was possibly the only viable pick for the job

She's talented, kind, ('less your last name was "Ebrum"), and, best of all, powerful at magic

One may even say, if they were conspiratorical enough, that Viv purposefully sabatoged Tiff's chances with it to keep Kirby all to herself (and Claycia), when, in reality...

...She was completely oblivious to how much she broke Tiff

Of course, no one really told Tiff any of this (*discusting coughing noises* @kirbybecomesastarwarrior) but don't you worry your little head just yet...

...because it doesn't take long before the beans are spilt over the grave of her innocence

(Context Warning: This takes place in that one scene on the cliff from Season 1

You know which scene I'm talking about)

Kirby and his friend ran from Dedede's castle, wanting to get away from it all

Eventually, they come across a cliff facing the ocean

They stop in their tracks, unsure where to go next

Suddenly, they hear a familiar voice

"KIRBY!!!"

They turn around to see Tiff with a expression of pure frustration and Tuff behind her, kinda just standing there

"There you are, Kirby. That 'toy' is HIGHLY DANGEROUS. It was made by HNME. It may not be trying to destroy you NOW, but when you put all your faith in it,IT'LL BLOW UP IN YOUR FACE."

Kirby tries to protect his beloved pet

"p-Poyo, inni-sent"

Tiff, tired of all she's been through, shoves Kirby aside to yell at the "problem"

"YOU'RE NOTHING BUT A DEMON IN A PLASTIC SHELL, YOU HEAR ME!!!!! NOW DO US ALL A FAVOR AND G E T L O S T -"

Suddenly, Tiff is interrupted...

The robotic canine looks up to see...

... it's Vividria!

"...decidedly, you attack the weakest... you really are in the same exact state we found you in..."

"WHAT ARE YOU DOING, VIVIDRIA!! Leave yourself OUT OF THIS!!! Don't you know that protecting Kirby is MY DUTY ALONE !!!!"

"...heh...I guess he didn't tell you yet..."

A flash of confusion washed upon Tiff's face

"...the Warp Star...it is now I who guards it..."

"I...I...w-what..."

Tiff's voice cracks as her expression of boiling rage melts into one of confused anguish

"...and now...I'm going to do what I should've done...TEN...MONTHS...AGO"

As Viv says those last 3 words, she takes Tiff and throws her towards Tuff

After doing so, Viv takes a breather before going to pet the robo-dog

"Poyo!"

"...you're right, Kirby...let's go warm up at the castle..."

Vividria takes Kirby and his brother away from the cliff and towards the castle

Little would anyone know how bad everything would get thanks to what Viv said to Tiff...

...aaaand that's gonna be part 1 of (hopefully) 3

I realized midway through writing this that I wasn't gonna finish this today so I decided to finish this during the next 2

In the meantime, here are some extra things to explain certain aspects of this

Why are you using ideas from Gomogora of all people?

Why did Tuff becoming Porky interest you?

Honestly, it's mostly because there's barely any focus on Tuff in general and "Tuff joining nightmare" does sound moderately interesting, at least

Why'd you @ KBASW?

...Meta Knight doesn't really feel like himself and Tiff seriously needs checked on

I'll probably vent to you about KBASW some other time but all I'll say now is that MK kinda acts like how Viv does here in the sense that both seem a bit dismissive of Tiff and her misery

Did Viv take care of the bomb within the puppy?

Hm...oh. Right. Yeah, pretty much. Claycia actually learnt some tech know-how from Escargoon. They are actually pretty chill with each other.

Now, if they actually did so with the twins as well, this would've turned out better than the anime, but hey, you work with what you get, right?

What's with the retcon?

Funny story, actually...

I misremembered something and didn't wanna bother fixing so there's some disanence between the OG comic and the retelling

Although, honestly, I think it fits better for the story I wanna tell so I guess it was a blessing in disguise

Is the next part going to actually be about Maotter?

I won't lie, he's mainly in the final part, which is gonna mostly be a checklist, anyways

Honestly, though, well...

I T H I N K T H A T ' S T H E P O I N T

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