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[therealgoatson]

Remake Progression: A Way Better Story

Hi everyone, so I have been recently writing the remake of Prince of Thieves and have been extremely proud of the work I put into it. I just got done chapter 1 and I must say it’s some of the best fanfiction work I have ever done in my honest opinion. Chapter 1 I feel fixed lots of flaws I had with the first few chapters (Well, at least Chapter 3) The story begins where Chapter 4 in the original left off although many differences can be seen in this. 

I’m hoping you guys will have the time to read as I will try and start publishing it before the story is even done. That way, I can get better feedback so that you can talk to me about it. So thanks for the waiting. I might post the first chapter next month! Thanks!

-TheRealGoatSon

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Prince of Thieves Cancelled?

Hi.

I haven’t posted on this thing in months. 

I am just letting you know I am not going to post the final chapters of Prince of Thieves. The fanfic I felt was just too “OK” and I felt I needed to progress more.

So if you want to what happens at the end, I’ll just give you a summary.

Prince of Thieves was a fanfic about an alternate Undertale Universe called Thieftale. Asriel Dreemurr, the Prince of Thieves, goes on many adventures. The main conflict is that Asriel meets Frisk Nesmith, a thief of her own. The story focuses on the conflict of Frisk being chased by Francis Pineneedle. It eventually leads to his family and Frisk getting captured by his soldiers, and has to go into the Congo (Or at least from what I remember) with some of his partners to save his family, and kill Pineneedle.

The ending involves a fight between Asriel and Pineneedle with Frisk doing the finishing blow to him. They soon leave and a few weeks later, the story ends with them going to the grave of his dead sibling, Chara Dreemurr.

Now I didn’t entirely hate this fic. I actually thought like I said was OK. The fic had some good things about it. My personal favorite being the original character of Axion, the pot smoking partying goat monster who is Asriel’s friend. But I felt there was gratuitous sex in Chapter 3, The writing wasn’t as good as I thought and it lead me to stop when I completed it.

But is it entirely cancelled? NO.

Or at least, Not Really.

I have been taking college courses on writing and i have absolutely loved doing the courses and I felt it has made me a better writer. Now I want to try at this again. This time, I am remaking the fanfiction and I will be putting more effort into it then I did before.

It will follow a similar plot, but it will be worded way differently. I will try and do an original series like I said for this fanfic. Maybe 6 original stories and a spin off. At least for the first story arc. I don’t know if I will continue after that. That will depend on what happens.

I hope you understand that I have been avoiding this account lately because I have nothing to post. At least nothing good. If you want to see the final chapters, Message Me. Thank you.

-TheRealGoatSon

[therealgoatson]

UPDATE: Infrequent Uploads and Sequel Progression

So you might be wondering, where the hell is the next chapter of Prince of Thieves huh? Well, I kind of have to admit something.

No I’m not updating infrequently because I’m not proud of the story although there are a few chapters where I thought things could have been way better, it’s because lack of motivation. I hope you guys understand that people need to be motivated to do stuff. While I still want to upload chapters, the thing is it takes a while to just spell check everything.

What about the sequel huh? Hows that going?

The sequel (I will reveal the name of it after I uploaded all chapters) is going badly. I have only written one complete prologue and a half written first chapter. The reason being is that I have been playing Undertale again and have been wanting to get everything about these characters right as I felt that I sometimes made them feel not in character even though I tried my best to make it good.

So I’m sorry for the infrequent uploads guys. This needs to change. But I’m in the midst of writing a script for a game (Not like scripting a game, liking writing a story for a game) so I don’t know how I’m going to do this. Thank you for being patient.

-TheRealGoatSon

[therealgoatson]

Prince of Thieves Chapter 15

Well, it’s true. I infrequently update this blog. But I still care about it. Here is another chapter of Thieftale. Hope you guys enjoy it.

Chapter 15: Airfield, Greece, 11:02pm May 14th, 2022

Blood oozed out from Billy's back. He was hit in the heart from what it looks. Asgore's face was in shock, it happened so suddenly that his emotions didn't know what to do if it were to cry, be angry or something else. He kneeled down to his dead friend. “I'm sorry Billy.” he said. The unknown people got out of the jeeps with Colt CM901 weapons and they were coming toward them slowly. The helicopter landed and the first thing they saw was a red eyed man with short hair. It was him. “Lazekiel, get in and protect the others.” Asgore firmly said. He did so. Francis Pineneedle walked up to them. Stopping, he smiled at them. “How did you find us? We got away as far as we could.” Sans grimly said. “Well, Ol Billy here was the obvious person to follow. When he said he was not working with you, I knew it was a lie so we tracked you and him down.” Francis said. “But why did you have to kill him? He was just an innocent worker!” Asgore raised his voice. “Because I felt like it. He wasn't that good of a worker anyways. Now, we want your son and Ms. Nesmith.” “It's Dreemurr Now, and you're not getting her!” Toriel shouted. “Oh is that so? I said I would get my way and I am close to it. King, unless you want 50 bullets in your queen's chest, I suggest you give them to us.” They were aiming at Toriel now. “I'll give you 15 seconds to make your decision king. It's either them or both of you. 15, 14, 13, 12...” As he counted down stress rolled around Asgore, not enough time to make decisions, not enough time to get out safely. Out of all the ideas he had thought of in those 15 seconds he chose the sacrifice. “2, 1...” “WAIT!” He shouted. “Take me instead of them. Please. Just please take me. I don't want them to suffer.” “Ahh, so you want to sacrifice yourself for all of the monsters in the underground? Very good choice.” Francis laughed. “Asgore no wait! I'll go with you.” Toriel blurted out. “No. Get in. You have to do something about the underground if I'm taken.” “No no King. Let her go with you. I'll have some use for her. Take the skeleton also.” Francis ordered his men.

In the plane, Frisk was looking from the window to see what was going on. She was close to the door and could hear them talking about taking Asgore, Toriel and Sans. Asriel was beside her hearing what was happening. He was furious with not only Pineneedle, but his parents. Why would they leave them? It was him and Frisk they wanted, not his parents. His parents giving their lives to be test subjects was a horrible idea and he could barely lead this group. Well, that was not true he thought, after all, he was a Prince and a highly skilled thief. But he was so used to getting orders from his parents. He tried to think of the others and let his anger go away. Frisk saw they were walking away with them. That bastard Pineneedle had to be stopped. She was getting madder. “Give me a gun.” She said. “What?” Asriel questioned. “I need a gun! Just give me a gun! Any gun!” “Frisk, you can't just go out there. It's too dangerous. They'll capture you.” Frisk realized Asriel had daggers on him. She had a plan now. Throw the daggers at Francis. She snatched one from his side and started running towards him. “Frisk! Frisk No!” He screamed. She was so close if only if she could just hit his back. She threw the dagger at Francis but it didn't hit him. It hit one of his men and he fell to the ground dead. Francis, his man and the other monsters looked. “Shit you were right Asriel...” she said to herself. She decided to try and run back. Lazekiel saw what was going on and ran to the door. Francis' guards got their guns out and shot her in the legs. She fell to the ground and screamed. She tried crawling towards the plane. Asriel tried to run for her but Lazekiel grabbed him by the waist. “FRISK! NOO! FRISK!” Asriel screamed. “LET GO OF ME YOU PIECE OF SHIT!” “Prince you must remain calm! We have to get out of here because if they find out we have a timeless piece of art in the plane, we're fucked!” Lazekiel warned the prince. Asriel didn't want to leave, they had to go back, but Lazekiel was right. Asriel took a few deep breaths and tried to get a hold of himself.

He went back into the other room where the others were when all of a sudden, guns started shooting at the plane. “Get down!” Lazekiel warned. Everyone ducked and the shooting stopped. “Alphys, you know... how to fly... one of these?” Asriel said breathing heavily. She nodded. “I had been taking lessons from the queen, but I must warn you I'm not the best pilot.” “You'll have to do. Corros, follow Alphys to the front. Get us off the ground as soon as possible.” Corros and Alphys crawled to the cockpit. “Why are they attacking us!? I thought they got what they wanted.” Lazekiel wondered. “He wants us dead because he already got what he wanted. If he can't get me, then he'll never get me. So they're gonna kill us.” Asriel explained. The plane door started to open as one of Pineneedle’s guards went in with a Colt CM901 and Asriel got up. “Any last words for our great leader?” The guard asked. “You can give him this.” Then Asriel threw the second out of what would have been three daggers on his into the guard's chest. He coughed up blood and fell to the floor dead. Asriel ran and got the dagger out of his chest and took the gun. He passed the gun to Undyne. “How much is in the clip?” He asked. She unloaded it and checked. “15.” “Use it only if anyone else tries to get on here.” The plane then started to move and eventually got into the air. But Asriel wasn't planning on going back home. Corros and Alphys came back.

“The plane is on autopilot. W-well, What now?” Alphys asked Asriel. “We can't leave them to die.” Asriel said. “We have to go after them.” “Prince did I forget to mention we have a priceless artifact on board? If anything happens to it, it will be lost for freaking ever!” Undyne yelled. “Relativity is the least of our problems.” Asriel told her, trying to not get into a fight. “So you don't care if this thing is destroyed or badly damaged?” “I didn't say that!” “It sounds like you're saying that!” Undyne shouted at Asriel. The two were getting on each others nerves. “So you don't care that my dad or my mom or my sister is being taken to this horrible place and probably being beaten to death!?” “What is your problem Asriel!? We have to tell the people about it! We'll get some soldiers to stomp into-” “No! We have to do it ourselves! This isn't a job for soldiers!” “We need to get to Ebott!” “I CAN'T LOSE ANOTHER ONE!” Asriel screamed in front of Undyne's face. Undyne was shocked by the prince. He had never been this angry with her before, she was only trying to think of the people and what was right, but for Asriel, this was personal. He was breathing heavily. “I can't lose another one Undyne... Not after what happened years ago to...” Asriel, at an emotional high, sat down in one of the seats. He thought of his older brother who they had adopted years ago. Chara. The accident that killed him, the toll it had on the whole family, especially Asriel. His scream kept running around in his mind. The horror of that day. Asriel sat down, frustrated and stressed. “Asriel... what happened to Chara wasn't your fault.” Undyne tried to comfort him. “Y-yes. It was just an accident. There was nothing you could have done to save him.” Alphys added in. “I could have saved him...” Asriel spoke softly. “I just wouldn't be able to handle what would happen if that damn french bastard killed my parents or Frisk. This is something I have to do. Either without you guys or with you.” They all went quiet. Papyrus looked at Lazekiel wondering if this was a good idea.

“I'm sorry Asriel. It was just that I was thinking of the people, what would they do without a leader? I can't help but think how they would react. I'll help.” Undyne said getting up. “Me too, I wouldn't just leave royal family members to die.” Alphys also said. “I need to get my brother back. I don't know what those horrible people will do to him, but I need to get him back also.” Papyrus added. “I'll Help.” Lazekiel offered. “Me too.” Corros said. Asriel looked at them all. It was Six against probably 100. Maybe even more. “Thanks for understanding guys. To me, you're all part of the royal family too.” Asriel told them. “First, we need to find where he is headed.”

Authors Note: The writing for the next Thieftale story has been going slowly. I’m studying the behavior of Undertale Characters to make them act more in character but still have that sense of being an important person. I’ve only written the prologue and Chapter 1 is going so slowly. I’ll update you more on it to tell you how I’m doing. 

[therealgoatson]

Prince of Thieves Chapter 14

Welp, it’s late and haven’t posted a chapter in a while so I guess I’ll post one now before the day is gone. Enjoy!

Chapter 14: Spondi, Central Athens, Greece, 10:43pm, May 14th 2022

The people were still held hostage at Spondi and Papyrus and Corros were hoping they would hear from Asgore soon. Time was running out but they used the remaining time they had to interrupt a couple's dinner and eat what was left. Greek Meatloaf was what Corros ate while Papyrus drank the red wine. The people were confused, but still scared of why they weren't doing anything. Were they really bluffing saying they weren't going to kill anyone? They have hurt some, leaving one with a bullet in the leg. One person saw the skeleton drink the red wine, but didn't leak from out of his body. People didn't know that Papyrus had a digestive system, although not seen, it was magic of course. “So how long until the cops arrive?” Papyrus asked Corros, who was taking a bite of the Greek Meatloaf. “Maybe 2 minutes or less? Don't worry. I have a plan.” They heard the sound of sirens coming. They were getting close. “Shit. Where the hell is Asgore?” Corros cursed. Suddenly, their walkies started going off. “We got it. Get out of there now and Undyne and Alphys up.” Asgore told them over the walky. “Yes Sir.” Corros said. Corros then stood up and started to shoot the ceiling again. The police vehicles stopped in front of the restaurant. “Everyone run out now! You're free to go!” He shouted. The innocent civilians ran out of the front door causing the police a hard time to get in. Corros and Papyrus ran to the kitchen and tried to find a way out. There was a steel door that was unlocked and Papyrus kicked it open. There waiting outside was the Audi A5 in pitch black color. They got in quickly and started to drive off into the streets. When they immediately got on the streets, they were spotted by a cop car and the chase began. As Papyrus drove furiously through the streets of Central Athens, Corros got out a bag on the back seat and pulled out an MP5K. He shot the back window and started shooting the cop car. Trying to get a good hit at the driver, Corros tried aiming for the head but Papyrus kept steering onto different streets.

“Can you at least go straight for like 30 seconds!?” Corros yelled annoyed. “Hey I can't help it I need to get where I'm going!” Papyrus shouted back. The gun was useless, he wouldn't be able to get a good shot. He looked for something useful in the bag but they were all small arms. He did find a grenade though and got an idea. He pulled the pin and Papyrus looked back. He was still holding it. “WHAT ARE YOU DOING!?” Papyrus screamed in panic. He thought he was trying to blow them all up. But at the right time, he threw it out the broken back window and it exploded onto the cop car causing it to swerve out of control, crash into a pole and explode. “Phew.” Corros took a breath of relief. Papyrus then put on the radio to smoothen things up. Victorious by Wolfmother was just beginning to play on the radio. They finally found Undyne, Alphys and Lazekiel who were walking away from the burning grocery store. Papyrus braked hard and put down the window. “Get In!” Corros commanded. They both got in the back seat and started to drive off. “Grab something from the bag, they might not be the best choices but we these are the only things we have. Only use the grenades if necessary.” He continued. Undyne pulled out Five Seven and a few clips and gave them to Alphys. “I- I have never used a gun before!” She started but Undyne reassured her. “Don't worry, just aim and shoot and reload. Easy as that.” Undyne then got out a Glock 17 and turned the safety off. Behind them were three Honda Transalp police vehicles that were shooting at them. The three of them started shooting. Alphys tried hard to not miss, but because she had never used a gun before, it was quite hard to get a good shot. She did manage to shoot the front wheel of the motorcycle making the other fly off though. Undyne meanwhile got the one in the center shooting a bullet straight into his helmet and making him fall off.

Meanwhile...

Sans and Toriel were running from the jewel stores. The sound of police sirens were coming towards them. It didn't help running as the jewels were really heavy in the bag. A police vehicle came towards them stopping. They tried to run to the left but another police vehicle stopped in front of them. The didn't know what to do. The police came out with their guns, they would shoot if they made any sudden movements. They needed to get out somehow. Then a miracle happened. The Audi R8 came rushing towards them and stopped in a diagonal line. Asgore was driving while Asriel and Frisk were in the back. They got in the car fast. Toriel in the front and Sans in the back. Asgore started to get them out of there. The cops started shooting the instant they started moving but grazed the doors. “You have Relativity?” Toriel asked. Frisk gave her the aged lithograph. She looked at it. What a beauty. She took a look just to be sure it was the real one. After 30 seconds of analyzing it she came to her conclusion. “It's the real one.” She concluded. Sans took a breath of relief. “You didn't have any troubles did you guys?” Sans questioned. Asriel sighed. “Lets just say we had a bit of trouble with-” Asriel started but Asgore cut him off. “He nearly had an attack. You're OK though right?” Asgore eyed Asriel. “Yeah I'm fine. Sorry about the scare.” “You couldn't help it Asriel. I remember what you told me about the prison. But at least we stopped it right?” Frisk said. Asriel smiled. “I guess we did sis.”

Suddenly, two police motorcycles came flying down. Asgore drifted to the left smacking the people off the motorcycles with the end of the car. “Looks like we'll have to do this the long way.” Asgore told himself. He started going down the road where there was barely any traffic. It was another way that led to Billy's Airfield. It was a straight road that had no turns, but it lead them right towards the airfield. Usually he would have to drive around the city to get there, not straight out of the city. But if more cops were coming from where they were supposed to head, he would have to get out of there some other way. “What do you plan to do with the jewels?” He asked Toriel. “This.” Toriel then opened the windows and threw the two bags of jewels out onto the open street. “Well... I would have just done a Robin Hood thing, give to some poor people, but ok.” The airfield was getting closer in sight. It was a 10 minute driver to get out of the city and into the airfield. The A5 Car was waiting for them. The airfield was about 100 acres and before you entered, black solid gates stood which were open. The gates closed when they entered and they discovered Billy owned many planes. There were about 6 Private Jets on field tonight, electric fences around so that no one could enter. It seemed like a successful business. Billy was talking with the others when Papyrus noticed Asgore and everyone else had arrived. “There you are! Did you get rid of the police?” He exclaimed. “The police know where we are. Don't think we are done just yet.” As Asgore finished what he was saying, he heard sirens coming from the distance. “Shit! You guys better get in the main offices, there is a basement where you can hide. Go!” Billy exclaimed. They started to run for the offices, which were a two floor building that was meant to get people to buy tickets for plane rides over Athens. They got in and found the place was rather tight and small, but there was a door that led to the basement. They all gathered in and locked the door.

Billy meanwhile was at his station, waiting for the police to come, he locked the gates making it looked like no one was there, about 7 police vehicles, 4 cars and 3 motor bikes were in front of the gate. They were knocking on the gate. “What do you want?!” He yelled over the speaker. The cops were a bit startled but the young guy started to talk to him. “Sorry to bother you sir, but there has been a heist. A precious piece of art has been stolen from a museum and we believe they came here. We just want to look around if that's OK with you.” “I'm closing!” “It will take just 10 minutes. Not a lot of time man.” “Fine. I'll open the gate.” Billy got up from his station and walked towards the gates. He unlocked them and they just started walking in. “Officer.” Billy said to the young police man. “Just call me Gordo.” “Well Gordo, sorry for the scare but I was getting tired and wanted to leave to my home.” “It's OK sir. We just need to know if they are here and then we're gone.” “I'm not helping them by any means, I'm just a guy who owns a touring company.” Gordo put his hand on Billy's shoulder. “They probably just snuck in the middle of the night here. Trying to steal one of your planes.” Billy looked around. “Maybe they did. Do you know what these people looked like? Monster? Human?” “Monster. Definitely. We suspect that the well known Dreemurr Family are the ones who stole the art. From what we got talking to the guards at the museum, there was also a human working with them.” “Human eh? Thieves come in many different races now. If you don't find them, I'll be sure to look for them.” After a few more minutes of searching including the buildings, the officers came back. “We found a basement, but the door was locked.” The middle aged officer told Gordo. “They're not here most likely then. We will do a search tomorrow. Thank you for your time sir.” Gordo told Billy. “Thanks. Have a safe night Gordo.”

The police left, and as Billy locked the gates, everyone came out of the offices. “Come, I'll show you the plane.” He took them to a medium sized plane that looked like it had about 25 seats on it. He got the door open which was a bit high from the ground. Asriel and Frisk got in first with Asriel holding Relativity then Undyne, Alphys, Lazekiel and Papyrus. “Billy, thanks for the free plane.” Asgore thanked. “It's funny isn't it?” Billy said. “What?” “I swear I can hear helicopters in my head.” “I hear them too.... wait...” Toriel, Asgore, Sans, Corros and Billy looked in front of them. Two Military Jeeps had busted through the gates and a helicopter was shining a light at them. There was a sniper and he shot. Asgore touched his chest to see if he was hit, he wasn't. But in front of him, Billy Chrysler, who was Asgore's friend for a long time, fell to the ground and died.

Authors Note: I’ll try to upload more frequently now. I’ve been slacking off and also writing the first Chapter to the sequel. Bye guys!

[therealgoatson]

Prince of Thieves Chapter 13

OK! Now that Prince of Thieves is completed I can upload all the chapters to this blog! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story guys! (P.S If you happen to find any errors in the story, message me the chapter and I will fix it)

Chapter 13: Sewers of Central Athens, Greece, 10:19pm, May 14th, 2022

It smelled down in the sewers. It almost made you want to puke organs. The horrendous and explicit wreak of water almost made Frisk want to just go back up to the surface and break in through maybe a window or something. But she knew they wouldn't be able to do that. Hoping to get out soon she followed Asgore and Asriel towards where the Herakleidon Art Museum was. It was pitch black in the sewers but Asgore and Asriel lit everything up with their fire magic. The water was a dark greenish yellow color that had a venomous look to it. The place was tight to navigate. There was enough space to walk and platforms could take them anywhere. It was almost easy to get lost. But there was a door in the sewers that lead up to the museum. Asriel could hear more water coming out from pipes and tried to ignore the smell. “How much longer?” Frisk asked impatiently, wanting to get out. “It should be right in front of us. Maybe a street block or so away?” Asgore answered. He could sense it in his head. He could visualize the door in front of him. After walking a bit more, they finally crossed another platform and found the door. It was metal and was unlocked. It was rusted and had a few bugs crawling around it. “OK. I'll need to get to the managers room to shut down the power and get the key to the archive. That way we can then attack the guards and knock them out. After we do that, we enter the archives, unlock the vault and take the real print of Relativity. Understood?” He told both of them. They nodded. Asgore opened the rough door and they followed him inside. There was a staircase that led them up to the museum which was four flights long. The first step at the bottom was missing which could lead to people tripping. They ran up the flight of stairs and when they got to an ocean blue door. “Stay here you two, when the lights go out, come in.” Asgore said as he went in.

When Asgore went in, he saw many paintings, lithographs, and beautiful age old sculptures in cases and on the walls. The room was white and beige and the lights were much more brighter than they should be. He didn't see anyone so far, but he had to find the managers room. He assumed it would be upstairs. He went to the left and walked towards where he thought it would be. The art was stunning, he saw more bizarre art of Victor Vasarely. He almost even stopped to look at one but kept focus. Stopping in his tracks in a red room, he saw a guard looking at the thing they were going to steal, Relativity. A lithograph that had staircases left and right, upside down or downside up and people walking on these stairs in black in white. The copied print mesmerized the guard. The king thought quickly, he didn't want to deal with an unconscious body in the light if he knocked him out so he had to think of something else. He then got an idea. He had some marbles he kept for distraction, he decided to get by him, he was going to use them. He took out a light red tiny bag filled with 10 marbles and opened it. He got one jade marble out and flicked it. The clinking noise of the rolling marble caught the guard's attention and looked to the left.  He walked towards it as Asgore slowly moved to the next room. The room was darker then the last few rooms with a door labeled Manager. This was it. He got out one of Alphys' metal pocky stick lock-picks that would fit in any door and put it in. He waited for a few seconds, it clicked and he turned it. When he got into the room, it was dead empty.  The room had a desk, monitors with security footage in black and white, a certificate to run the business and paperwork all over the desk made the place a mess. He looked for the electrical control box that would be in the room. He looked to the left and found it. He opened it and found various small red, blue and green wires everywhere. He slid a pocket knife from his pocket and cut three red wires. After he cut the last wire, the whole building went dark.

Asriel and Frisk who were waiting by the ocean blue door noticed everything went dark. This was their time. “OK, lets go.” He said leading Frisk inside. The two of them when they got in heard footsteps of two men coming towards the room. Asriel and Frisk hid behind the wall as they saw two guards come in with flashlights. They were talking to each other. “When I was on my break, I saw that some monsters were holding everyone in this restaurant hostage. I think it's not actually that far from here.” The one guard who was scrawny said. “Lots of weird shit is going down here all of a sudden for some reason.” The other, who was much older was suspicious about what was going on outside. Asriel then tapped Frisk on the shoulder and they moved towards the two guards grabbing them and throwing them both to the wall. The older guard tried to get his gun out but Frisk punched him hard in the face and he was knocked out. Asriel struggled a bit with the scrawny one to the point of strangling him but didn't want to kill him. When he got the chance, he headbutt him with force and the guard went out cold. Footsteps were coming again this time from the stairs. Frisk grabbed the old guard's gun and aimed it in front of her. It was just Asgore. She took a breath of relief and put the gun down. “Good job. I got rid of the last one. The archives should be at the back beside the exit. Follow me.” Asgore told the two. They followed him towards the end of the museum. More beige colored rooms followed as the artwork quietly slept. They were getting closer to the archives, maybe a few more steps. Asgore realized he had made a mistake. When he cut the three red wires, he forgot to cut some of the green ones to stop the emergency lighting from coming back on. This wasn't a big deal for some reasons. First, it was optional to cut the green wires. That would just give you more time, but more time was what they needed. The archive door was right in front of them. It was locked. Asgore used the metal lock-pick and opened the door. “I'm afraid I may have made a mistake. The emergency lighting and alarm system will go off in about 7 minutes. But I think it will be enough time to get Relativity. Lets go.” The three went into the room. Asgore lighted the room with his fire magic as they looked for a vault. They didn't know how big this vault was, maybe it was small maybe it was big who knew. Asgore looked quickly for the vault. He saw something that was metal the was covered up by boxes. It was about medium sized.

“I think I found it.. Quick. Get these boxes out of the way.” Asgore told the two. They threw the boxes away and found what was behind them. A Vault, that was the size of a borderless widescreen TV, stood before them. They didn't have a decoder on them, Asriel predicted what the code was. Asriel kneeled down beside the vault and started to unlock it. The code he thought was 32-21-05-54. He turned it to those and tried opening it. Nothing happened. Asriel tried it again. Nothing. “Asriel hurry!” Frisk said in a hurry. “I don't know the code...” He said softly. He was beginning to panic. He didn't want to fail like last time. He couldn't fail like last time. He didn't want to go to prison again. This was a big deal. “Son are you OK?” Asgore asked hoping his son wasn't having a problem. “It's... happening... Frisk...” Frisk didn't know what Asriel meant by those words, but then she realized his post traumatic stress disorder was kicking in. “He's having an attack!” She exclaimed. “What?!” Asgore and Frisk ran to Asriel. “Please Asriel this is the worst time to have one!” Frisk yelled. Asriel's vision started to blur, the darkness was catching him and drowning him. His breathing become faint and was about to collapse. Without thinking, Frisk did the only thing she could think of. She hugged him tightly with care. Asriel gasped as his vision started to come back, breathing becoming better. Asriel realized what was happening. He looked down in shame. “I'm so sorry. I was going to ruin the entire thing.” Asriel apologized. “I don't know the code.” “But I do.” Frisk stated. Asriel moved back so Frisk could figure it out. “Alphys taught me about decoding manually.” “One even, two odd and another even? I tried that.” Asriel frowned. “But don't you remember the other way around?” She questioned. Asriel thought about it for a moment. Of course. The other way of doing it passed over his head. “Even, Odd, Even, Odd. Shit I thought something was fishy about this lock.” Frisk put in 12-01-55-29 and the lock opened revealing an age old lithograph print that would be one of the most pricey things if sold. There Relativity stood, one of the greatest pieces of art ever created by man. When Frisk held it, it was very rocky and the achievement of this heist filled her with determination. “We'll have to hurry. The guards might wake and find out what happened. Lets move.” Asriel said and they ran out of the archives through a door they found coming down.

[therealgoatson]

Prince of Thieves is Completed!

That’s Right! The full story to the first chapter in the Thieftale Saga is complete! I am so happy that I have completed it. This means I will be uploading more often and be giving you two chapters a week now! Nice eh? Anyways, when all chapters are up, I will reveal to you the Title of the Next Chapter in the Thieftale Saga. I hope you enjoyed the whole story so far and I cannot wait for you to see the ending. Thanks!

-TheRealGoatSon

P.S I re edited the time The Grand City was built. It’s now 1898 to make the story seem more comprehensible.

[therealgoatson]

The Higher Potential: Why I Wrote Prince of Thieves

This is just a thing I wanted to talk about of how I began the Thieftale Saga starting from the first part. But first, lets go back to how I heard of Undertale in the first place.

I first found Undertale by stumbling upon an episode of it on Game Grumps, the thumbnail had Papyrus with hearts all around. I thought it was just some skeleton dating simulator. But boy when I found out what Undertale was, I was in awe. 

I watched some of Vinesauce Joel’s videos of it before I decided to buy it. Unfortunately, I also bought the god awful Black Ops 3 while getting a steam card with it so I wish I just saved the money to just get the steam card only. Me and my sister started recording some now deleted game footage of it but we are recording it again for fun. 

Undertale amazed me. Not because of it’s bullet hell gameplay, it’s multiple endings, cute graphics or areas. It was the characters and story that made me love this game so much. I became total Undertale Trash even making a Tumblr Account to reblog Undertale stuff. 

Then there was Asriel...

I still have an obsession with this character. (His beast form to be exact)  I really want him to be real so I can care for him, to love him. It was the first time I really had feelings for a video game character. I started reblogging lots of Asriel Dreemurr stuff on my greatpapyrus2nd account and loved him to death.

Now how did this blend into Thieftale and Prince of Thieves?

Well, it all started after Christmas. In fact, it was nearing the end of the year. It was about 10:15 at night and I had this weird thought. Asriel and his family as thieves. As a aspiring screenwriter and fanfic writer, I decided to make a history of this thief Asriel and his family. I started writing a chapter to a story I’d never thought I would complete, without any knowing of how I would develop the characters, not knowing where the story would go, nor knowing how long it would be. 

I just kept writing.

That is how Thieftale became. A simple thought turning into something more then a thought. A creation. I made this blog to publish my work.

Thieftale was me challenging myself to write a great and coherent story. But my weaknesses started to show in the writing. I could have explained why Asgore in Chapter 1 left the museum so abruptly, but my main intention now was to make him get into a cab and be driven to the sight of the extraction zone. My biggest weakness was describing things as I really suck at that. In Chapter 3 while describing all the monsters at the party, I really didn’t have any other ideas at the time about monsters so I just made them animal monsters with the exception of Selena, an ice monster Asriel has a one night stand with.

Axion was a character I thought would be fun to write. At first I wanted to write him as some sort of flirty partying asshole, but as time went by, I wanted to actually give him character and make him more likable although he still maintains being an asshole sometimes.

The villain was a bit hard for me to write, but I thought of Jean Dujardin, you know? That Oscar winning actor from The Artist? The style, the slickness, I knew in my mind the villain had to be a french man. So Francis Pineneedle was born and I won’t spoil what happens with him since the story isn’t completed yet, but Francis plays a somewhat important part in later parts.

I knew that Papyrus could have made brilliant traps to attract enemies but it didn’t come to mind until much later. Hopefully I can incorporate the traps more in the second story.

Now what does this have to do with why I wrote it or this “Higher Potential”? 

The Higher Potential is me trying to take my hand at writing a complete series. The Potential to make Thieftale more of a quality product. I wrote it because I love Undertale. I wrote it because I love Asriel. I hope you have enjoyed the story so far and I cannot wait to show you the next story when I’m done this. 

-TheRealGoatSon

[therealgoatson]

Prince of Thieves Chapter 12

Hey there everyone! I only have to write a few more chapters and that’s it! On to the next story. At the end of the story, I will be doing a little article about the bigger potential of the first story and how I got the idea to write it. But that won’t be until the end of the story. In fact, I could probably write something about it after I post this chapter. Anyways enjoy.

Chapter 12: Central Athens, Greece, 9:59pm, May 14th 2022

The empty streets of Greece at night were scary, it had the feeling that you would get mugged or assaulted. There were only few who walked these streets at this time. There was wind blowing away a newspaper. Sans picked it up to see on the cover, Pineneedle Industries were wanting to recruit people in bring a better future. “My ass a better future.” At exactly 10:00pm, everyone would start the heist. 30 seconds to ten, Sans and Toriel were standing outside two jewel stores, one on each side of the street. The shops were closed at this time with valuable diamond rings and precious Moonstone, Ametrine and other types in there all alone. “Remember Sans, we have at least 2 minutes before the alarm goes off, don't break the windows, just lock-pick the door, smash the glass, take as much as you can.” “Right Tori.” Sans felt the pressure on him. He didn't know if two minutes would be enough. They both started to lock-pick the doors to each store. Sans had a bit of trouble getting to to unlock but managed to get it picked. “My King, are you set up? Can we do this now?” Sans said to Asgore in his ear piece. “Yeah. Go ahead. It's Ten right now.” Sans nodded to Toriel. They both entered the stores and Sans smashed the glass. He grabbed his bag and started throwing all the jewels and rings into it. Toriel did the same. Her hand was strong smashing the glass and poured them into the bag. “Tori, what are we going to do with these jewels?” Sans said on his ear piece. “We're not keeping them. We are just using these as a distraction.” “Really? I thought we were also going to cash these out.” “Remember Sans, we are here for Relativity, not jewels.” “Right.” As Soon as Sans and Toriel emptied half the small stores, the alarm went off. The two of them ran for it and tried to avoid being seen.

Papyrus and Corros stood in front of the Restaurant Spondi. The restaurant had no windows in the front, although there were some on the side. Corros looked at Papyrus. “Well? See if we're all ready.” Papyrus started to talk through his ear piece. “King, is everything set and ready? Can we go?” He asked. “Yes. You may go now.” Asgore said over the ear piece. The two walked into the restaurant with assault rifles around their shoulders. When they got in, the place was filled with innocent civilians. They weren't planning on killing anyone, but if anyone got in their way they might have to. The dishes were exquisite. Papyrus was almost distracted by how good everything looked. But now it was time. They got their assault rifles out and started shooting the roof. “Everyone get down!” Corros shouted and everyone obeyed. Papyrus shot a person in the leg who he thought was going to find a phone and call the police. Corros looked at him frustrated. “What!?” Papyrus asked wondering why Corros looked at him like that. “You're not suppose to shoot anyone unless necessary!” “Well he was going to call the police! Human! Were you going to call the police?!” “N-no! I wasn't! I was just going to hide in the bathroom!” Papyrus went over to him. Blood seeped out of his leg. “But you have a cell phone on you don't you human!?” “OK Yes I do I was going to call the cops! I'll do anything just don't shoot me in the head!” As Corros looked around, he found something suspicious about one of the innocents. One didn't look like one and he was pulling something out from his coat. Corros slowly walked over to him. The innocent pulled out a gun and started shooting at his chest. “Die you piece of shit!” He yelled. But then he realized, the bullets didn't go through him. The just got stuck in him not scratching him one bit. Corros took the gun from him and broke it and smacked him to the ground. “Alright everybody listen up! We won't harm you unless you play by our rules!” Papyrus shouted. “We aren't looking for money, we aren't looking to kill, we are just having a bit of fun on this Saturday night! I want you to all give me your cell phones! I know you have them!” The people started giving their cell phones to the two and they put it in a pile. What Papyrus and Corros would do they didn't know, but they had an idea. It wasn't a good idea, but it was something that would pass time.

“Ok King? Can we just go now?” Undyne said impatiently over the ear piece. “Yes. You may proceed.” Asgore told them. Undyne nodded to Alphys. They were carrying a jar with Lazekiel in it. Whenever someone looked at them, they thought they were just carrying a jar of dirt with no purpose in life. The grocery store was relatively big. It was almost like a Safeway but when they went in, the lights were white and the place wreaked of the color grey. Some of the lights were even flickering. There was barely anyone around, aside from a few bored cashiers and maybe five customers, there was nothing special. “So...” Alphys started. “Where are we starting this fire?” “There is an entrance to the storage room. This place looks shitty so we could probably enter it easily but...” Undyne pointed at the cameras. “Right.” Alphys realized. “But I have a plan. Follow me.” Alphys followed Undyne to the back of the store. It was the more grimmer part, they could smell something bad. It was a familiar smell, it was just Atlantic cod. There were flies trying to bite into the plastic and eat the fish. There was the doors to the storage room in front of them. The doors flopped about. Someone had just went in. They waited on the right for the guy to come out. The person came out with a cart of boxes. Undyne opened the jar. “Alright, remember, I have matches in the jar. Set some stuff on fire and exit out the back.” She told Lazekiel.

She rolled the jar into the storage room where the Lazekiel broke out of it. He looked around, what could be highly flammable and set the place on fire? He searched around the room. Boxes upon boxes were scattered by the walls. While searching, Lazekiel found security cameras. Someone might be watching him if the staff here wasn't so shitty. He then looked at one of the boxes. It had a propane tank on it. He snapped his fingers. Perfect idea. He got out the pair of matches that were in the jar and lit one up. He threw it onto the box and it started to burn. He started to walk out when a manager came in the room. The manager stopped in his tracks when he realized there was a person who was unauthorized to be in there and a box was on fire. He got out his walky. “Somebody call the police. Someone is trying to burn the store down.” He said collective and calm. “I didn't want to do this to you.” Lazekiel said. He picked him up and threw him against the wall. The propane tank inside the box exploded causing more of them to explode. The place was set on fire and the manager saw the dirt monster was gone. He got up and ran out back into the store. “FIRE! THERE IS A FIRE!” He screamed. Undyne and Alphys found the guy looking at them. “Don't just stand there! Run!” He shouted running away. “He didn't even know it was us.” Alphys said in relief. They ran out of the grocery store as the manager was calling the fire department. They went to the back where they would meet Lazekiel. He was looking at the fire he had created. “So now what?” He questioned Undyne. “The heist can really begin.”

[therealgoatson]

Prince of Thieves Chapter 11 (AKA I’M BACK BABY!)

So as I’m writing the last few chapters of this story, I decided to get back to uploading chapters on this blog again. If you want a recap, I’ll make it brief.

Some Of The Important things that have happened in Act 1 (Chapters 1-8) and the beginning of Act 2 (Chapters 9-15) are this:

Frisk Nesmith becomes part of the Dreemurr family and is now a Thief, Alphys confesses her feelings to Undyne, Frisk talks about Francis Pineneedle, the man who tortured her, the thieves plan to steal Relativity by M.C Escher, Asriel is revealed to have PTSD and the reveal of Francis Pineneedle. 

Enough wasting time! Lets get back into the swing of things!

Chapter 11: Central Athens, Greece, 1:40pm, May 14th 2022

After leaving the plane in a mostly closed forest area, they got onto the streets of Central Athens and walked to a car rental store which to get at least two cars to drive to where Asgore was headed. Toriel had told everyone with the exception of Papyrus and Asgore to split up and take different paths to the rental store. This was because if they went all together, they would be spotted to easily by police and they would be arrested. Frisk, Asriel, Lazekiel and Corros were split into one group while Sans, Alphys and Undyne were split into another.

Asriel could feel the heat getting to him. It was damn hot. It's like his brain was melting. Frisk was the same, she was sweating but at least had a bottle of ice water on her which she shared with Asriel. Lazekiel and Corros were put in jars to make them look like anything other than monsters. Of course monsters did walk around Athens, they saw a few businesses that were owned by monsters, such as some retail clothes stores exclusive to Greece. Greek people looked at them oddly. To them, they looked like a couple, which was normal. Frisk looked at Asriel worried. “Isn't this a bit strange?” She questioned. “What is?” He said. “Everyone looking at you, a well known criminal on the streets of Greece?” “Not really. People are sometimes think they are hallucinating seeing me out on the streets. Even if they did call the cops, they would have no idea where I am going. I would probably just stay in a store to keep away from them.” Asriel told Frisk. “I guess you have a point, I mean, when cops are driving around they won't be able to look in every store they see, so that idea is kind of smart. But then there is security footage.” She started but Asriel started to explain about the security cameras. “Sometimes when I go out in the real world and buy stuff, I have a jammer in my ear that I can use as an earplug. This jammer causes security cameras to go static and it's hard for them to notice me. You can thank Alphys for that one.” “Huh... Anyways I think the car dealership is up ahead.” Frisk said pointing to a car rental store. The cars were modern, they looked almost new. They saw Papyrus, Toriel and Asgore talking with a hooded monster. When they got closer, the hood covered his face and all they could see was blackness. He had bear claws and a few flies went around him. “This is the fastest car we have, but if you want a fast one with drift, the 2020 Audi R8 is the one to go with.” Papyrus looked at Audi R8, It had much more room for more people to fit in unlike earlier models. He looked at the A5 and the R8. Which one to choose? “I'll take both!” Papyrus exclaimed. “How much would these be? I have about five grand on me.” “879 dollars. These are really expensive cars you know?” Papyrus got out his wallet, counting the money and put 900 in the monster's hand. “You have one week to return them OK?” The rental monster said as he walked away.

“So who is this person we are looking for?” Frisk asked Asgore. “He is a well known pilot, he has a collection of jets and small planes. His name is Billy Chrysler.” “How do you know this guy?” Frisk questioned. Toriel began to explain. “When I was pregnant with Asriel, Asgore and I went to Athens, not for heists or anything, but we were just getting some quiet time to ourselves. That was when we met Billy. He is a pilot who owns a tour business. He has helped us in some cases, but he mostly likes to be left alone and out of crime.” “Billy is a really cool guy Frisk, he'll be glad to know someone new has joined our family.” Asriel said happily. “By the way, where are the other three?” “I think I see them coming.” Asgore pointed out. Sans, Undyne and Alphys walked up to them. “Sorry if we were late, I guess you got the cars Papyrus?” Sans questioned. “You're looking at them.” Papyrus said pointing to the A5 and R8 Audis. “Jesus christ those must have cost a freaking fortune.” Undyne said, looking at the A5. They had no time to waste. Frisk, Asriel, Toriel, Asgore and Lazekiel and Corros took the R8 while Papyrus, Sans, Undyne and Alphys took the A5. It was a 20 minute drive to where Billy lived.

His house was made from white stone and had a blue roof, the steel gate entrance was open. Asgore and Asriel got out of the car and headed towards the entrance. The outside tiles were a bit wobbly but ever since they last seen him, they still were. “Billy?” Asgore called out. No answer. “Hey Billy It's Asgore! You home?” He called again. The door opened to find a redneck guy with a long beard, brown cap, ripped brown jeans and holding a Winchester 1887. Asriel stepped a few steps back from the gun. He put his gun down. “God Dammit It's Asgore Dreemurr! Ha! How are you doing?” The redneck man greeted. “I'm doing fine Billy.” “Asriel! I haven't seen you since you were 17! How is it going? You've grown!” “Yeah Billy, that's what happens when you age. I'm doing swell.” Asriel rhetorically answered. “You have guests I see?” Billy said looking at the fancy Audis. “Yeah. We also have a new member. Hold on. You can come out now!” Asgore hollered at the others. The others came out of the cars. Frisk was the first to meet Billy. “So this is Billy? I thought he would be more Greek, you know since he... lives in Athens?” “Girl, I moved from Mississippi just to live here. Who are you anyways?” “Billy this is Frisk, she is my sister.” Asriel introduced. “But you don't have a sister! Even if you did it wouldn't be human.” Billy said confused. “She is our adopted daughter. It's a long story. Look, can we come in?” Asgore said. “Yeah yeah, come in. Tell me what you need.”

Billy's house almost looked ancient. The walls were aged like old cheese, the inside had a small TV that had a PVR box. There were a few beer cans, but Billy didn't heavily drink. The room was air conditioned, much more cooler inside. Frisk and Asriel let Corros and Lazekiel out of their jars which startled Billy for a moment, but then remembered that they were with them. “Nothing has changed much but, make yourself at home for now.” Billy said as he went on the balcony. The view from outside showed more Greek houses. More blue, more white stone, it was like a trend. Asgore and Toriel went outside with Billy, Asriel and Frisk and the others stayed inside, it was a bit crowded but they could mostly manage to get where they needed. “A redneck living in Greece... Those are two things I would never thought I would see.” Frisk said in wonder. “So he is a pilot?” “Yeah.” Asriel said. “He gives plane tours around Greece. Mostly the Athens area. Mount Lycabettus is where all the people want to go. I remember once we went on a plane to see that area.” “So hes not a criminal?” Frisk questioned. “Yes and No. He has never been convicted of helping us get away or working with us. But he does help us with getaway planes and stuff whenever we are in a tight situation.” Asriel tried to explain. As Frisk asked questions about Billy to Asriel, in the meanwhile, Asgore and Toriel were talking to Billy about their heist. “So you are being followed by some freak with a dumb last name? That seems strange.” Billy said. “We had to leave the plane, it was too dangerous to go back on it. Look Billy, we're gonna need a getaway plane for this heist.” Asgore told him. “We need a plane to fit about 10-12 people in it.” “You're in luck. The smallest one I have can fit up to 20. I'll fuel it today.” Billy said, flapping his cap to get wind on his face. “So what did Pineneedle want that he is after you?” “He wants to capture our son and daughter. He has a history with us.” Toriel explained. “Frisk's real parents were killed by him, she escaped his facility a long time ago. We want to be as far away from him.”

Billy had a look of secrets on his face as Asgore noticed. Asgore sensed something about Billy that he was uncertain of. He remembered when Billy had worked for a facility, but he never told him which one. Asgore thought of something he didn't. “You seem a bit quiet Asgore. What is it?” Billy asked. “Billy, you said you worked for a corporation years ago. You never told me about it.” Billy was silent. “Uhm... what about it?” “I just want to know a few things. Like the name of the corporation, your manager, what they did. The works.” Billy took a second to get that all in. Then he realized. “Now wait a second, if you think I was working for Pineneedle-” “That's exactly what I'm thinking. Did you?” Billy was sweating, not from the sun, but the truth. “Asgore what are you doing?” Toriel questioned. “You don't want to admit it Billy, but it's true isn't it? You worked for Pineneedle Industries.” Billy grabbed his Winchester and pointed at them. Undyne looked at what was going on and rushed and got her knife out. “Hey hey! What are you doing!?” She hollered. “Don't come near me! Any of you!” Billy shouted. “We are not going to hurt you Billy, I just want to know the answer. If Pineneedle knows you worked from him, we might be in more trouble than we think.” Asgore said in a calming voice. Billy had realized that everyone was looking at him. He had made a fool of himself and he was angry at that. If Asgore won't hurt him, they wouldn't either. “Ok! I did work for Pineneedle Industries! So what?! Does that make me the bad guy?!” “It depends.” Asriel budged in. “Do you plan hurting us or taking me and Frisk back to Pineneedle?” “No! I wouldn't! I quit because he went psycho! Look, if he is trying to get you then I am not safe as well already, helping you.” He put his gun down and sat back down. Stress was on Billy's face. This heist would get even harder. “Billy. Because Francis knows you, you need to hide somewhere for now. Get us that plane that can fit 20 people. We must leave to plan out our heist.” “Fine.” Billy's phone than rang from inside the house. He got up and answered it. “Yes?” There was a bit of shock on his face. “Francis? How did you get this number?... Oh yeah I forgot about that... The Dreemurrs? No they aren't here why would they be? So they plan on stealing something? I'll keep an eye out for them. No I'm not helping them! Ok Francis. Goodbye.” He hung up the phone. “They're on to you. You better get going. All of you.” As everyone left Billy's place and drove off, Billy himself felt like he was going to be in a lot of trouble too.

Authors Note: It’s good to upload chapters again.

[therealgoatson]

Updating Again

Before I get on to the next chapter, I’m writing the whole synopsis and making sure I get the plot and ending down very good. Thank you for being patient. I might evens start uploading chapters again if I can. Thanks!

-TheRealGoatSon

[therealgoatson]

Another Update (I’m Actually Writing!)

So yeah, I’m actually finishing the story! I got motivated to write again! I’m so glad I am going to finish and continue this series because I feel like it has potential to have some kind of cult following. Anyways, I’m done writing the latest chapter and I’ll give you another update soon.

-TheRealGoatSon

UPDATE UPDATE: (AKA Updateception)

I decided to go back to Chapter 5 and edit a part of the story to make more sense to how I’m writing it now. You probably won’t notice if you haven’t read the story before and if you’re new but for those who have I suggest you go back and check it out. I edited the part where they were describing the Dreemurr Mansion.

-TheRealGoatSon (Again...)

[therealgoatson]

An Update on Thieftale

Hey, My hiatus has been long but soon after I’m done writing Prince of Thieves, I will upload every chapter afterwards. I have started recently writing the story again and this time I’m planning to write it every day. For now, I’ll keep quiet, but when I come back, Oh Boy, I’ll come back big time! See you later guys!

-TheRealGoatSon

[therealgoatson]

Blog Break Time

So I’m sorry I haven’t released Chapter 11 yesterday but I’m taking a break from this blog to work on the ending to Prince of Thieves and to Write the first few chapters of the second Thieftale story. I know I have been mostly unproductive with the writing but like I said, I will never stop writing this series. Hope you understand. I just need to be motivated more.

-TheRealGoatSon

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Thieftale Update: 04/07/16 (AKA I really need to start writing this again)

So I haven’t written any Thieftale this week. Why? I’m actually reading Terry Goodkind’s Wizard’s First Rule and it left me spellbind when he says “People are stupid, they want to believe, so they do.” That really changed me. But still I feel I need to write more. I need to get myself motivated. Don’t worry, I have written plenty of chapters to keep you occupied while I finish it. Thanks.

-TheRealGoatSon

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Prince of Thieves Chapter 10

No This is not an April Fools Joke, this is another stunning chapter I wrote for Prince of Thieves. Chapter 10 introduces a very important character so here we go!

Chapter 10: Above The Ocean, Hijacked Plane (AKA Dream Aboard), 8:28pm, May 13th, 2022

Nearly an hour and a half ago, the thieves got on the hijacked plane started to head for Greece. The plane was stolen about 11 months ago. The story was that the thieves had gotten into two other smaller planes. They latched themselves onto the bigger one and they took over it. The answer to why they would take this plane is simple. They didn't want to cause a whole ruckus of them stealing an actual passenger airliner, so they took one that was full of terrorists. There had been news that a plane carrying a bomb was coming to the States and the terrorists were gonna drop it. The thieves foiled their plans by killing the terrorists and throwing them off the plane with the bomb they were carrying. Many people have tried to find the plane, but it was nowhere in sight. Even when they did find it, it would be gone before they got back. They called it Dream Aboard as in the dreams of a thief. Riches, many riches were dreamed about there. The plane had gotten a makeover after they had stolen it and looked much cleaner now.

Undyne sat down in one of the plane chairs. She had just met some of the new extra monsters who would help them with their heist. One sat across from her, a monster made from dirt that could disable his body functions act like a piece of dirt on the ground, then when danger strikes, he sneak attacks the enemy. His name was Lazekiel, she didn't know where he came from, but she knew that he would be of some use to the team. The next monster was not in this area of the plane, he would help Papyrus taking hostage of everyone. The monster was named Corros, and was a material monster. His skin was gravel and had the same power as Lazekiel, to disable body functions and act like just any normal gravel. She looked at Lazekiel, who was just reading a book. It was a hardcover book but there was no sleeve on it, the color of the copy was dark green. It was weird seeing him, she thought he would get dirt all over the place, but he was solidified right now, so he couldn't.

Alphys appeared right then and decided to sit with Undyne. She had something in her hands that she was fixing. It was metal and was circular. It was probably one of those explosive decoders that she had. Wires were popping out as she tried to get them back in. “Ugh. The wheel doesn't want to lock.” Alphys said irritated. Undyne noticed a wire was trapped inside the gear which would not make it lock. “Hey can I see that?” She asked. Alphys gave her the decoder. She tried not to use brute force to get the blue wire out, she pulled out the wire from the gear and gave it back to Alphys. She tried locking it again and it worked. “Thanks Undyne, I don't know what I would do without you.” Alphys thanked. “Alphys. We need to talk.” Undyne said. She looked at her. There was no getting away from what happened this time. “Look, Alphys, what you said to me at Grillby's changed me. I didn't know it at first, but I understand. I never thought about my feelings for you before but after that day... Look, you mean a lot to me Alphys. I want to give this thing a go. See how it works. Could you guide me through this?” Alphys' eyes glowed. Her crush, wanted to try a romantic relationship with her. Her heart raced, excitement all around her, she wanted this to work and she would be determined to try everything to make it work. “Y-Yes!” Alphys smiled. “Of course I will Undyne. I really think this can work out.” Undyne started to ask questions about what people do in relationships like this. Alphys explained to her that it's like being friends, only you have a serious interest in each other. While she was discussing this, Asriel looked from behind and smiled, they finally were getting somewhere.

A finger tapped his back, he turned to see it was Papyrus. “What's up Pap?” “Prince! You need to get to VIP class now! There is a video transmission, we do not know who it is but he says he needs to talk to you and Frisk.” Papyrus told him. Asriel was stumped on who would know where this plane was to get a video signal from it but didn't bother to think about it at the moment. As he went to the VIP section of  the plane, he noticed he had an uneasy feeling about this video message. It's almost like he knew who he was going to talk to. As he entered the VIP section of the plane, he took a door into a room where Toriel, Asgore, Frisk, Sans and Corros sat down. “Corros.” Asriel greeted. “Prince.” He greeted back. “What is this? How did they find us?” Asriel asked his mom. “We don't know. We are trying to figure it out. But the person on the other side said they wouldn't tell the police where we are.” “Will he keep that promise?” “Not sure.” Asgore said. “This guy could be lying. Just take a seat and we'll get started. OK, We are ready. Now can you please show us your face?” The video showed a french hummingbird that was just a still image. “Yes. I shall. Hold on.” The voice was robotic, he must have been using a voice modifier to hide his real voice for now. Asriel looked at Frisk worried, something was definitely not right about this stream. The still image faded and to Frisk and Asriel's shock, a french man with red eyes, a thin mustache, short hair and wearing a grey suit with blue tie was looking at them all. In the background, was a facility that was dark and had many people working. Frisk stood up immediately and shouted “It's Him Asriel!” “By the damnedest of things it is.” He replied. He took off some tape that was attached to his neck. “Voice Modifier, anyways, I need all of you except the Prince and the girl out of the room now.” He said, his accent between the middle of thick and thin. “You better leave it to us.” Asriel said, motioning all of them to the door. They all went out and shut the door. “What the hell do you want?” Asriel growled. “My sister told me everything you did to her. Who the fuck are you anyways?” “Ha! You don't know who Francis Pineneedle is?” The french man laughed. “You both must live sad pathetic lives if you do not know who the great Francis Pineneedle is. I am one of France's biggest millionaires who moved to America to have a dream. A world with no war! No Fighting! Nothing! A World with a perfect justice system! That is why I, founder of Pineneedle Industries am creating super soldiers that will make the world a perfect utopia!”

“Those aren't super soldiers they are slaves! Asriel, he plans on making himself the most powerful man in the world by creating slaves that will answer to him!” Frisk exclaimed. “Now now, these are not slaves. They will be taken care of very well, we just need to give them discipline. We are planning on making lots of monsters and humans super soldiers. Now, to the point. I am wanting to offer you the chance to redeem yourselves. Both of you. I want you two to become one of us. You will be doing great justice for the world.” Francis was very serious about crime. He wanted all crime gone, all war gone. But Asriel didn't think he cared about war or crime. He just wanted to rule the entire damn world. “What if we don't?” Asriel said suspiciously. “Oh I have plans for you all if you don't join. You will be killed, you will be mutilated. We will find you wherever you are. In fact, we are tracking you right now. It's useless though. You don't want to join, so we'll come after you anyways. Your mother and father will make nice fur coats to be honest.” Francis was pure evil and Asriel knew it. He was furious now. He slammed his fists on the table. “YOU BASTARD! I'LL KILL YOU IF YOU TOUCH MY PARENTS!” Francis just laughed at Asriel's threat. “You think you can kill me? I have guards everywhere. You can't kill me! I'm Francis Fucking Pineneedle!” Francis shouted. He came in closer. “Look Asriel Dreemurr, Prince of Thieves, and you too Frisk Nesmith. I will have you and I will get my way. You'll see.” The video stream cut to black and Asriel and Frisk ran out to see everyone waiting outside for them. “What happened? I heard you screaming.” Asgore said concerned. “Francis Pineneedle wants to make me and Frisk his slaves. He is building an army of monsters and humans to rule the bloody world. He's tracking us!” Everyone gasped and talked among themselves about the tracking. “What do we do my king?” Sans asked. Asgore didn't know what to do. They were in deep shit if they found them. “We will have to go on with the mission. But we must be more cautious. We'll need to leave the plane and get everything we need that is necessary. When they find the plane, they will wonder where we went. We'll get a new jet from a guy I know. Understood?” Everyone nodded. “Get some sleep everyone. We will be there in about 11 hours.” Asgore and Toriel left. Frisk looked at Asriel frowning, this was going to be a hard first mission for her.

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Thieftale Update: 03/31/16

Hi everyone! So I have some news and it’s not particularly great and it’s not particularly bad. I am kind of slow on writing the last few chapters of Prince of Thieves. Not that I have given up, I will never give up writing this universe. But I have been writing different things you see, scripts, other fanfics, it has been a big week for me returning to write some episodes of a series I am working on, but Chapter 10 will be released tomorrow like usual. I’ll give you another update next week and tell you how I’m doing with writing Thieftale. Thanks for tuning in guys! -TheRealGoatSon