#wish Simon

[peapeapeapa]

My Seven Friends redesigns c:

This is how they look in my AU/headcanons

Their clothes are inspired by what culture I think they're from based on their names.

Gabo - Spaniard (since Rosa is set somewhere in Spain, I gave him a nicer Spanish tunic. He works in the Castle Kitchens so he shouldn't be able to afford it, but Bazeema made it for him for his birthday)

Hal - North African. (Nothing against her pants, but I gave her a dress because she's look really pretty in one)

Safi - Arabian (I didn't really change his clothes to match his culture. He just wears the coziest clothes he can find as long as they don't trigger his allergies. Bazeema is his sister in my hc, and she made his clothes for him to help with his easily irritable skin)

Dahlia - Taiwanese (I didn't change her clothes much, I liked her design. I gave her a bandanna because she placed her hands on top of her head while thinking and doesn't want to get flour in her hair)

Bazeema - Arabian (Bazeema and Safi are siblings, and Bazeema likes to reflect her culture more in her clothing than Safi does. She's a seamstress and works at her mother's shop, and made Safi's clothes for him to help with his allergies and irritable skin)

Simon O'Donohue - Irish (Simon is a Hebrew name, but O'Donohue is derived from an Irish name, and because that's his last name I'm going with that one. Because this is his Knight outfit, its just the one from the movie without any Irish influences)

Dario - German (Dario is an Italian name, but his mother named him that after already arriving at Rosas and seeing others with the name, liking it)

[somecallmejohn]

Happy 1 year anniversary to this misunderstood and underappreciated movie.

[bastart13]

This is the plot of Wish, right?

[rosasstrangemelody]

Actors behind the scenes

They just started to publish behind the scenes photos after a year

[delightfully-deranged-dagur]

Saw Wish. Liked it.

Fell in love with this group.

So here's a modern AU.

They're helping Asha with her class president campaign.

[rascalentertainments]

Wish Granted 🌟👩🏾🎶 (Wish Reimagined)

Chapter 12: Bibbidi-Bobbidi-Doom 🔮✨🌟

Chapter 11

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Time for us to check on our villains! Just for a bit, I promise. 😅 (This moment is actually going around the same time as Chapter 11, and it'll lead back to our newly formed team)

We see Amaya in a black cloak standing in front of her potions cabinet as she adds a few ingredients to a drinking glass filled with colored liquid. "To make me look younger, a drop of spring water. To retain my royal attire, a peacock's feather. To strengthen my voice, a child's laughter. To restore my hair, a sundrop petal. And....a dash of nutmeg for flavor."

As she added the last ingredient, the liquid bubbled up and turned into the color of red wine. The liquid settled and we see Amaya's face in the reflection of the glass, looking much older than she did in previous chapters.

She carefully drinks the entire glass, and her appearance returns to normal. The black cloak vanished and her royal garments reappeared.

Amaya heard a growl and looked down, seeing Sabor raise an eyebrow as he questioned why she would need a simple kitchen ingredient.

"Don't give me that look, dear. These spells are powerful, but they taste dreadful. A little spice never hurt anyone." She walked over to a nearby mirror, admiring her return to her former beauty. "Besides, I may not be able to transform into different beings like the star, but I can keep my 'natural' beauty intact."

Sabor took a moment to admire his own silky fur before straightening up. He heard laughing coming from the wishing room. "Meow?"

"Oh, that's just Magnifico playing with his balls...Somedays I think he's a bit too obsessed with those wish balls. I better check up on him, he's had quite the night." Amaya stepped away from the mirror and proceeded to the wishing room, with Sabor trailing behind her.

Amaya opens the heavy door and sees the king now humming "Twinkle, Twinkle Little Star" as he exaggerated his arm movements like a conductor. The wishes are moving in several different line patterns all around him.

Magnifico pauses once he sees his wife. "Ah, darling! I'm so glad you're here!" He had a wide, almost sinister looking grin.

Amaya noticed his unusually happy tone. "You in quite the good mood this morning, mi rey." She looked and saw the massive amounts of wishes surrounding the two of them.

Sabor cautiously stepped further into the room. Seeing the wish orbs fly around the place made him nervous, since one wrong move could accidentally destroy a wish. And he did not want to make Magnifico that angry...

The lynx narrowly dodged a few orbs that whizzed by due to the man's gleeful use of magic on them. Another one came flying and he quickly batted it away. Sabor smiled in satisfaction.

Then another orb came from seemingly nowhere and knocked the feline across the room, making him yowl in pain. (He'll be fine)

"I was almost too excited to sleep!" Magnifico stopped with his make believe orchestra and grabbed Amaya's hands. "We've gotten so much closer to our goal in these last few days, then we ever have in the past few decades. Tonight we'll have the traitors, Tomás' daughter and the star all in one place! And best of all, the entire kingdom will witness our full power!"

The two of them started to dance lightly as the wish orbs surrounded them. "Believe me, I'm just as happy as you, but don't you think it's a little early to be celebrating?" Amaya questioned despite her fun.

Magnifico stopped at those words. He was so excited to finally get the traitors that alluded him all these years, he nearly forgot the most important one to capture: Asha.

"As usual, you're right. Everything could fall apart if Asha and the star get involved before the ceremony."

He looked up at the many wishes the two had collected, and with the addition of the Hamlet residents wishes, it was beginning to look a bit crowded up there. It was a lot of peoples dreams up there just doing nothing.

"Perhaps we need to prepare ourselves with a little snack?" He pulled down three wishes from above and held them in his hands. "Besides, we do need to make some room now that the traitors wishes are up here. Let's say we get rid of a few non-important ones?" He asked playfully.

Amaya shook her head. "Now, now. Don't get impatient. We can't risk anything by destroying any wishes. People might start getting suspicious of missing newcomers, and I don't want to waste more magic on wiping people's memories."

Magnifico was silent for a moment then smirked as he grabbed a familiar wish. "How about just this one?"

"For the last time, you can't take my mother's wish!" she scolded him.

The king needed a laugh. "I'm just kidding, dear! Mostly." He threw the orb back up with the others.

He took another look up and noticed something was off. "Is there a wish missing?"

"You can't be serious, there's over a thousand wishes in here. How could you possibly-"

"No....there is one missing. I can feel it." The king reaffirmed as he slowly raised his hand upwards and called down a couple wishes to him.

The problem was, only one came down; Sakina's. Her wish was the become the best seamstress in Rosas, a wish that was never intended to be granted.

"Where's the old man's wish?" Magnifico growled.

Amaya looked up and realized the man was right. Both of them keep track of their wishes everyday. It was the one job even Flazino wasn't allowed to do. "You mean her grandfather's wish?"

"I always keep those two wishes together, I don't know what happened to...." The king's eyes widened in horror.

He remembered when that pest of a shapeshifter was mocking him yesterday, the star must've been a distraction in order for Asha to get to the wishes.

THOSE BRATS KEEP GETTING IN HIS WAY.

He was tempted to crush Sakina's wish in retaliation, slightly gripping the orb in his hand, but one stern look from his wife told him that it wasn't a good idea.

Magnifico forcibly threw the orb back with the others. He wasn't even trying to hide his anger anymore. If Asha managed to get one wish, how long before she and the star got the rest?

He stomped out of the wishing room, his good mood now dissipated.

Sabor slowly stumbled across the room as he followed Amaya. It was one of his rare moments when he didn't look regal. She looked down, noticed his disoriented appearance and picked him up.

The lynx purred as he relaxed in her arms.

Magnifico rubbed his forehead as he walked back to his study. "We need to find Asha immediately. Everything hinges on her trading the star in for her family and we can't even find her to make the deal. Tonight is the most crucial night of our lives and I refuse to let some peasant girl ruin it!"

"Oh, there's no need to worry about that." Amaya chirped as she stroked Sabor's soft fur. "While you were dealing with the Hamlet, I took it upon myself to ask for a little...personal help in finding Asha quickly. And in return, I told them that their entire family's wishes will be granted by you."

Magnifico was suddenly intrigued. "And who might that be? We don't exactly have colleagues here."

"Someone in Rosas whom we can make work to our advantage, and they're more than happy to help our beloved kingdom." Amaya chuckled deviously.

Aaaaaaaaand now we gotta go back to our heroes, and they're having a really hard time taking in everything. 😅

All seven of them started talking at the same time. Gabo and Simon tried to calm the others down, but it was a mixture of panic, excitement and confusion.

Star looked embarrassed as he floated down to Asha. "I freaked them out, didn't I?"

"Ya think?" Asha snapped at him.

"Sorry. I did try to lay low, but the animals were freaking out and I tried to calm them down, then that sneezy guy came in and freaked out and then I freaked out!" The star felt terrible about this. He didn't want to be the reason everything fell apart.

"...You're not angry with me, are you?" Star had the most worrisome eyes.

Asha took a deep breath. "No, I could never be mad at you. We just...need to get them to understand our problem here. It would help if we had more than just two people on our side, but I don't-."

"WHY IS THERE A COW ON THE CEILING?!" Safi screamed as he pointed up to a large cow chewing cud.

"Helllooooooooo!" she mooed.

Asha looked at Star with a stern face. "You need to fix this. Now." Her voice was low and serious.

Star didn't argue. "Got it." In a flash he flew up and tried to pull the cow back to the floor.

Dahlia frantically adjusted her glasses as she got a better look at the star. "Wait, isn't that Cosmo? You never mentioned he had magic!"

Gabo looked at Dahlia confused. "Cosmo? I thought he was just called Star."

Dario scratched his head. "Well, that's not a very creative name. A star called 'Star'?"

Asha had to cut this banter short. She was getting annoyed with most of them already. On top of that, they just insulted her indirectly.

"God, you people are loud...Valentino, shut the door before anyone hears this." Asha gestured to the opening.

Valentino nodded and trotted over to the door, closing it shut with his little hooves. Meanwhile, Star had finally gotten the animals to calm down and was attempting to take away their speaking magic spell. The chickens were protesting against this, though.

"Alright, I'll make this quick. The royals are evil, they're keeping our wishes hostage for power, and we're working together to stop them from destroying more lives." Asha's went through entire thing like ripping off a band aid. "We need your help, Dahlia-"

"And I'd like to add that I WAS RIGHT ABOUT THOSE TWO BEING EVIL THE ENTIRE TIME! You guys owe me an apology." Gabo chimed in with a smug look.

"YOU'RE WHAT NOW?!" Dahlia exclaimed at Asha's "confession".

In the background, Star had finally calmed the animals down and took away their ability to speak. That didn't stop the chickens from running around, with a few of them flying over the teen's heads thanks to the star's magic.

Dario laughed. "This is awesome! Can Star make me fly too?"

Star grabbed one of the frantic chickens in his hands. "I dunno. I never tried it on a human before. But you can be the first one!"

Safi wanted to be happy that his feathered friends could finally fly, but his allergies acting up warned him that this could be trouble. "AAAACHOO!" He sniffed and wiped his nose with his sleeve. "This is bad, like really bad. Am I the only one who realizes this is gonna end very badly?" He groaned.

Hal scoffed. "Oh come on, Saf. I mean, sure we got a giant glowing guy floating here that can make animals sing and dance."

Safi waited for her to tell the actual good news. "Yes, and?"

"That's... all I got right now, I'm just trying not to have a mental breakdown here." Hal laughed nervously. For the first time her constant upbeat personality was beginning to strain.

"Join the club, I thought I was going insane too." Simon grumbled.

Star noticed that the teens were feeling a bit uncomfortable. His smile started to falter a bit hearing they were freaked out by his presence. He didn't know he'd have that effect on humans too...

"Will you all stop and listen to me? The fate of everyone's lives is at stake and like it or not, I need your help keeping him a secret."

"Th-This is objectively impossible." Dahlia stuttered trying to keep her grip on her crutch. "First you're getting these crazy conspiracy stories from Gabo,"

"Which are all true." Gabo added smugly. Dahlia shot him a look, but it didn't last.

"And now you brought another guy with magic powers–which I remind you is forbidden for anyone else to use magic other than our rulers–to come here here to steal from the King and Queen? How did you even get him here in the first place?"

"She wished for a magical boyfriend to help her take down the monarchy." Gabo once again cut in.

"Would you stop telling people that!" Asha snapped while Star started to glow very brightly.

"That's the one thing that makes sense, actually." Simon chuckled lightly.

"How romantic!" Bazeema's eyes lit up at the mention of a romance. "It's like a fairy tale!"

Gabo scoffed at the shy girl. "Oh, so now you can speak? At least say something important!"

"Don't talk to her like that!" Safi stepped in front of Gabo, ready to defend the girl. It was a rare sight to see the teen actually raise his voice.

"Hey, I got a song that could clear things up!" Star chimed in as he started to float in the air!

Dahlia waved her hand. "Please don't, I can't stand singing."

"Wait a minute. You wished on a star, and the star came down....looking like this, right?" Hal gestured to the star's human appearance.

"Yes, finally you're getting it. I know it sounds strange, but its all true. I couldn't have gotten this far without him."

"A follow up question...So if I wish on a star-"

"No." Asha immediately shot that question down in flames.

Hal sensed she hit a nerve. "All right, all right, just curious..." she avoided eye contact with her for a while.

"Look, I need you guys to focus here. The fate of Rosas-"

"Hey, can Star turn into a platypus?" Dario was too excited to even listen about the danger. "I mean, I get if its too hard. I got friends who can do some pretty impressive tricks that would blow your mind." He waa clearly baiting the star to transform for fun.

"Oooooh, is that so?" Star teased, raising an eyebrow.

Asha knew what was coming. "Star, don't-"

"Can your friends do this?" In a flash, he turned into a small yellow platypus on its hind legs. He looked down himself, a bit underwhelmed. "Yeah, I don't know how to work with this one. I mean, its a platypus. They don't do much."

(Thanks to an anonymous ask for suggesting this transformation bit!)

"However!" Star changed into a series of animals both large and small each with a bright flash. once he finished, he turned back to his humanoid form. "Can your friends do that? Bet you ain't never had a friend like me!" He said with a wink.

It suddenly clicked in Dahlia's mind. "That giant elephant was you?!"

"That's so neat! You're like a Fairy Godmother!" Dario exclaimed in genuine joy.

Gabo looked at Dario with the most confused expression imaginable. "....what fairytales are you reading, man?"

The good time was interrupted by a hard knock on the door, getting everyone's attention.

"What's going on in there?" A deep voice boomed on the other side.

Valentino panicked and hid underneath a large pile of hay.

Asha and the star looked at each other. Asha didn't even have to tell Star what to do this time. He turned back into a mouse and hid with Valentino.

"Look, I...we're begging you. You can't tell anyone about us. If that guard finds us, all this will be for nothing." Asha pleaded with them, looking desperate.

Gabo's usual grumpy expression slightly soften seeing their worried faces. He sighed, "Fine. I'll take care of this." the teen pulled out his dagger and marched towards the door.

"GABO NO—" Asha whispered in a panic.

Simon grabbed Gabo by the collar and pulled him away from the door. "Don't even try it, buddy." Simon muttered.

Gabo scowled and folded his arms.

On the other side of the door, the guard was getting more impatient. "That's it, I'm coming in right now!" He put his hand on the door, only to be stopped by Dahlia with a nervous smile on her face as she poked her head outside the doorway.

"No need for that! Sorry about all that noise in there. The animals got spooked a mouse that sneaked in, but everything's settled down now." She did her best to sound calm as she pushed the guard away from the door.

The guard wasn't fully convinced. "Why did it sound like there was someone else in there?"

"AAAACHOO!!" a loud, sort of forced sneeze erupted from behind the door.

"Oh, that's just Safi getting the eggs I needed for the feast tonight!" Dahlia blurted out, then she knocked on the door. "You got those eggs, right Safi?" she raised her voice in a manner to signal the sneezing teen.

On cue, Safi came out with a basket of eggs. "Yep! Nothing out of the ordinary here! Definitely no need to look in there cause all the animals are totally normal! Hehehe..." He wasn't really a good actor. 😅

After a few tense moments the guard finally bought it. "Fine. Just keep your eyes peeled. We can't have anything or anyone disrupting the ceremony tonight."

And with that he walked away and left the two nervous teens alone.

Dahlia breathed a sigh of relief once he was out of sight. "He's gone, guys." she called to the others.

Valentino was the first to peak out, until Simon forcibly pushed the door open. "That was too close." He muttered. "I'll go check to see if there are any more guards."

"So you really think that the royals are using us? Cause I've never actually seen them hurt anyone." Dario asked Asha as the teens left the chicken coop.

"I know it. Star and I faced each of them once and we barely made it out alive. I did manage to get my saba's wish, but I want to restore everyone's."

"Then why do you need Flazino?"

"Cause he's the only one who can get us there safely at this point. All of these guards roaming around, we can't even zip by with Star's speed. Only problem is that he's in the dungeon and I have no idea where it is or how to get there."

"Since when did we get a dungeon? There's no crime here!" Hal questioned.

Dahlia still wasn't convinced, but she tried to rationalize this. "You're really here to steal from them? And you can't just ask Magnifico for them back? I think either of them would understand..."

"Dahlia, what would you do if you found out...the wishes of those you love with all your heart...will never be granted?" Asha asked seriously.

None of the teens had an answer. Most of them haven't even turned 18 yet in order to give the royals their wishes. (Except Gabo, he's never doing it.)

Safi finally spoke up. "I better not regret this. Or I'll turn you in myself for animal endangerment!" He sniffed.

Asha actually felt relief. At least she had more people on her side for a while. Star gave her an encouraging thumbs up.

"Star can free the wishes, but we need to get him to the top without being seen. If it works, we can free the wishes tonight."

"TONIGHT?!" Dahlia exclaimed. She had no idea this was going to happen at the same time as the ceremony.

"Of course, before the royals can take 100 wishes tonight. I just don't know where he's going to get them all. Not to mention he's after Star's magic too."

Dahlia wanted to argue or try to convince Asha to change her mind, but she held back. She never thought reuniting with her childhood friend would turn into a plot to overthrow a kingdom.

Simon came back from checking outside. "All right, the coast is clear. Let's get going."

"I can't believe what I'm getting into..." Dahlia grumbled as she followed Simon. If it wasn't for searching for Flazino and proving he was okay, this wouldn't be joining in this.

The dopey teen wanted to lighten things up with some introductions. "By the way, I'm Dario!"

Star greeted him with a hug. "Nice to meet a new friend!" He exclaimed.

"Ah-hyuck, love this guy!" Dario cheered as he hugged the star back.

"'Friend' is kind of pushing it..." Asha muttered.

"Hey, I want some that!" Hal laughed. "I'm Hal!" She spread her arms wide.

"Bazeema...and that's Safi." the shy girl whispered as she pointed to the boy behind her.

Star scooped up both girls in his arms as he hugged them. Hal was glad to have someone else be the cheerful one other than herself, while Bazeema slowly warmed up to his embrace.

Safi looked nervous even looking at Star. He slowly raised his hand for a handshake, but the star went for his usual friendly hug greeting.

"AAAACHOOO!" Safi sneezed right into the star's face. Luckily his eyes were closed.

"Don't tell me you're allergic to stardust..." Asha lightly joked.

"I'm so sorry..." Safi replied sheepishly.

It didn't seem to bother the star as he wiped his face with his sleeve. "No worries! Stars don't get sick, I think. Although I did go through a 'new moon' phase for a month once. I freaked my mom out with how emotional I got all the time."

"If you get this guy sick, I swear you'll be the first one to get thrown in the dungeon!" Gabo pointed his dagger at Safi's big nose.

Safi got a bit scared and hid behind Bazeema.

Hal stepped in and gently pushed the two towards the entrance. "Come on, you two. Let's get going before Gabo stabs somebody. Guy's got bite to him, I'll give him that!" She joked.

Just as Gabo put his dagger away, he could feel something rubbing against his leg. He looked down and saw Valentino looking up at him with big eyes.

"You really want to come with me, little guy?" Gabo asked.

"Maaah!" Valentino nodded happily.

Gabo picked up the goat in his arms, making Valentino gently purr. The grumpy teen would never admit it out loud, but it was nice that an animal was happy with him for once.

Bazeema was slightly jealous he got to carry Valentino, but the little goat was happy and that's what mattered more to her.

"So, you sure you two can save everyone's wishes tonight? I mean, this is all starting to get pretty crowded." Gabo couldn't believe he was saying this. And he's been dreaming of overthrowing the monarchy for years!

"We can and we will." Asha replied. "Tonight, everything changes. I promise that."

Gabo couldn't help but think of Asha's words sounding like something from a storybook. "Whatever you say, princess."

"Hey, I'm not a princess!" She kind of assumed he was teasing her again.

"If you wear a dress and have an animal sidekick, you're a princess, sister!" He snickered as he walked off.

Asha sighed. He could really be annoying sometimes.

Star noticed her stressing a bit and gently put his arm around her shoulder. This caught her by surprise as she turned and saw the star was very close to her face.

"Hey, if it makes you feel any better, you've always been a princess to me." He gave her a wink before turning into his mouse form and climbing back under her hood.

For a moment, Asha could feel her chest tighten when he said that. She's been focused on almost nothing but freeing the wishes and helping her family be free. Recently though, half her thoughts had been on Star without even trying.

She had never really been interested in romance for herself (unlike her saba), but now part of her thought what would happen to him after this whole adventure was over. Asha had originally wanted to write him off as a weird dream back in the forest, and now it was getting harder to see herself without him.

Asha's heart picked the worst possible time to start developing feelings...

Once they were outside and into the heart of the city, Dario turned and faced the group.

"Hey, we need a secret code to signal each other. You know, in case we get lost or something." He rubbed his hand on his chin for a moment, then his eyes brightened. "How about, 🎶Heigh Ho!🎶

All the teens looked at him as if he had two heads.

Gabo rolled his eyes. "That will never catch on, mark my words." He replied in a dry tone as a passed the tall teen.

"Is it that bad?" Dario questioned as he followed the rest of the group.

Asha just shook her head. These guys were a handful, especially when you put them all together. But strangely, she didn't mind being a part of a group for once. At least she had more people to talk to.

Hal grabbed Asha's arm and pulled her more towards outside. "Come on, while we look for a way to this 'dungeon' we apparently have, allow me to show you the good parts of Rosas!" she winked.

"...There are good parts?" Asha questioned. She seriously doubted that.

The group finally headed outside, but first they had to make their way through this sea of people that were out and about.

Dahlia looked up at the king and queen's statues, which now had a large purple purple banner hanging over it. The words "100 Wish Celebration" were embroidered in gold.

The whole city was looking forward to this ceremony, and Magnifico and Amaya had worked hard to provide the people a safe and prosperous kingdom for everyone. This event is supposed to bring ease, but the young baker was more nervous than ever. Were the things Asha said about the royals true? Or was she being tricked?

"Dahlia!" Hal's voice brought her out of her thoughts. "You coming with us, right?" The others were already ahead of them, making sure Asha was surrounded enough to not be seen easily.

The girl hesitated, then nervously answered. "Sure...I'm coming."

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FINAL THOUGHTS

Happy New Year, everyone! As you can see, I'm still going strong writing this! I wanted to take a break to be with family, but I still loved seeing the "Wishmas" content!

So now that the whole team is together, the next step is to find Flazino and get his help for a spell to free the wishes. However, its not going to be easy now that the royals are practically breathing down their necks. And in the next couple chapters, the traitor will finally be revealed, and I'm really excited to show it soon. I've been holding this secret for nearly the entire time of writing this! As long as you don't hate me for the reveal. 😅 Until then, I hope you enjoy seeing the teens banter in here, I wanted it to still be comedic and mostly important. And now Asha can actually get to know the teens and develop a bond with them.

As for the royals themselves, I wanted them to be really on the heels of our heroes, but not ahead all the time. Most villains (if they have them) from Disney are usually these ridiculously omnipotent people that's always ahead of the heroes. They can't be tricked, they know all the secrets, they find the heroes easily, ect, ect. So for this rewrite, I wanted the king and queen to have some flaws despite all their power and cunning. Sometimes Magnifico is outsmarted (which he hates) and sometimes Amaya's tricks don't work. (which will come up in the next chapters) Even Sabor isn't perfect!

Also we're seeing more of Asha and Star getting closer. Mainly Asha's crush on Star is beginning to turn into something deeper, which is why she's getting a little flustered around him. Star does feel the same, he's just not fully aware of his own feelings yet. (That comes soon though!) I always see Starboys get a crush on Asha pretty quickly in other rewrites, but I rarely see it in reverse. So I thought it would be fun to see WG!Asha start having the crush first, and for such a simple but important reason to her.

There's going to be at least one more break from writing the story, I really want to get more extra stuff out (redesigns, Lore part 2, the teaser poster) and because I have no idea what to name the rest of the chapters. 😂 The only one I have is the final chapter, "A Wish Worth Making" for obvious reasons. But I promise I'll keep up with everyone else's rewrites too!

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[wish-incorrect-quotes]

I found this cute video of an animation test from Wish. I love how much personality you can show just in the way characters move.

[gracebethartacc]

EXTREMELY extremely rushed doodles but I’ve been thinking abt rewrite au Ashas friends and by that I mean I killed all of them off and only kept Dahlia and Simon bc they are the only ones I remembered that advance the plot and also because I like them so yayyy :3👍

[thatavatarchick]

A detail I noticed in Disney's Wish...

THE TEENS HAVE LITTLE LABELED CUPS THAT'S SO CUTE

[sparkling-nov]

I’m majorly side-eyeing the fact that what we see of Magnifico’s castle staff is almost entirely made up of underage teenagers. I guess there could be more people we don’t see onscreen, but there’s definitely no indication that Asha or the 7 teens have any adult help or supervision regularly on hand. I get the strong sense this guy is taking people’s wishes and then opting for child labor so his personal staff still has their drive and talents.

🤯 o my god.....o my god..you are so right..NO CUZ LIKE THINK ABOUT IT, dahlia is 16 working as the Castle Chef she hasn't give her wish away yet (her wish is to be the greatest chef) Simon however is 18 he has given his wish away and it has Change him, According to one of the wish books simon use to be very Active Before he Turned 18 and give his wish to magnifico, He use to Horseback rida and Train Himself to be a knight but when simon Gave his wish to magnifico All of that stop, he doesn't horseback anymore, he doesn't train to be a knight anymore, he isn't active and he doesn't work for king magnifico either, and the movie supports all of too, BROOOOO YOU JUST OPEN MY THIRD EYE O MY GOD!!

[peapeapeapa]

Star and Simon 💫⭐️

Starboy not being adapted made it so we didn't get AshaxStar, but I also mourn the idea of a Star and Simon friendship. And Dahlia, of course, but a super sunshine ADHD friend and burnt out depression friend friendship dynamic would have been cute to see

[somecallmejohn]

#6fanarts is complete at last!

Had so much fun drawing all these big boys suggested by my BlueSky followers.

[sillylilneurodivergent]

My friend guesses ‘Wish’ characters😍✌️

[fantasygerard2000]

"The Seven Teens in Wish don't have much to do in the movie other than being a reference". A criticism that I both agree and disagree with. Like any other Wish criticism, this is one of the few that gets rebuffed if you watch the movie again and payed attention. While i do agree with the issue of a movie having way too many characters, of all the teens, Dahlia, Simon and Gabo are the ones who have the most prominent roles and are tied to movie's themes.

Let's start off with Gabo. While many others dislike him because he's a jerk, there's some merit as to why he's so pessimistic. While I don't like including info from supplementary material like tie-in books, they do have that extra detail that was lacking in the final movie. In A Recipe for Adventure (which will be used a lot in this post), the author speculates that Gabo is a disappointed optimist. Even though we don't have much to work with other from that piece of trivia, when can always think of something to tie him with the film's theme.

Gabo represents the disappointment in a system where few are given benefits over the majority. He always talks about Simon and Sabino's unfulfilling lives because they gave their wishes away and hoping they will be granted, suggesting that he has seen or what it's like to have an unhappy unfulfilling life. He assumes Asha applying for the role of Magnifico's apprentice so that she can have the benefits of having her and her family's wishes; "cheating" her way to get what she wants while the others are left waiting. Him being a "disappointment optimist" suggests that he had high hopes upon moving to Rosas but has seen how long the waited that his hopes are snuffed and has doubts about the system in general.

At the third act of the film, he decides to help Asha and Star free the wishes because Star reignites his hope for a positive future, one where people can live their lives happy and fulfilled.

Dahlia has the most screen time and lines of the teens, so obviously she has more character than the rest of them.

She's noticeably uses a crutch to walk. While Disney could've easily made her story about wanting to walk without her crutch, they chose not to. In Recipe for Adventure, her wish is to become the best baker in the kingdom, to which she has already achieved. She works as a kitchen staff in the castle, home of Rosas' founder and king.

This shows that she doesn't need magic to become the best baker, all she has is the effort to work for her dreams despite having a disability. This ties with the film's moral as well as a positive lesson for people with disabilities to overcome the struggles and achieve their dreams.

Also in the book, she has a grandmother who passed away and was the one who taught her about her passion for baking. Her and Asha meeting as kids and becoming close friends ties back to my previous post about Asha, mainly about her suffering from loss and that she and Dahlia supported each other going through their darkest moment.

Like Dahlia, Simon also has more character than the rest.

Simon was once an active person, loves going outdoors and horseback riding. I suggest the idea that since his wish is to become a knight for the kingdom, he had trained for the position.

After he gave away his wish once he became 18, all that passion was taken away as the once lively and active aspiring knight loses that drive and becomes a husk of what he once was.

There's a saying that Simon's sleepiness resulted from his wish taken away is reminiscent of depression, which I agree. Simon's joy and dream was to become a knight and help defend his people. When that joy was taken away and his dream unfulfilled, he feels he has no purpose.

Him ratting Asha out of his selfish desire to have his wish be finally granted may be stemmed from his desperation to get rid of the emptiness he has felt. Like how people with depression use "means" to feel that joy they craved which resulted in paying the price out of their own health; ie his mind being controlled by Magnifico and their friends and family's concerns; betraying his friends.

After Magnifico's defeat and Simon is out of his spell, he apologizes for betraying Asha, with his reasons that he "wanted to believe in Magnifico." This brings out a dark aspect of Magnifico's wish system, he takes away people's joy, making them feel desperate to beg to him that they'll do anything for him to feel that joy again.

Simon's story may be applicable to people who have achieve their dream job out of their selfish desire to achieve it, like leaving their friends and family behind in order to get it. But once said dreams have strings attached, like working for a corrupted system that only hired you until you're "replaceable", you take it all back and feel disappointed for trusting all your hopes and dreams to an unfair system.

While the rest of the teens don't have the same character put in like Dahlia, Simon and Gabo, I feel like giving them their own arcs would have cluttered an already cluttered movie.

Wish has problems, but those problems aren't fixable by adding in things like an alien love interest and an influencer couple. Wish's issues is that the creators didn't put in the extra push it needed, hence why it feels "not enough".

[slayjensen]

A new photo of Asha and her friends!

These character designs are growing on me more and more each day tbh 💫 Snow White comparisons down below because why not!

[rascalentertainments]

Wish Granted 🌟👩🏾🎶 (Wish Reimagined)

Chapter 11: (Not So) Jolly Holiday 🐮🐎🐔

Chapter 10

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We cut to the next morning, where Rosas seems to be returning to mostly normal. The center of the city looks to be back in its former state before Star had charged through the place. The town looks more crowded than usual.

Going to Gabo's hidden shelter, we see Asha had fallen asleep on the mattress, with Valentino snoozing by her feet. The little goat yawned as he stretched his little legs so he could start the new day. Val looked around and noticed the room was unusually quiet.

Valentino leaped onto the other side of the mattress and nudged Asha's arm, but she remained asleep, still holding the newly fixed pencil in her hand. He then walked over to her head and nuzzled her ear, hoping that would do the trick.

Asha's began to shift slightly, but her eyes were still closed. Still half asleep, she tried to shoo the feeling away. "Stop that, we can do that later..." she answered in a groggy voice.

Valentino didn't want to hear anymore of her sleep talking, so he made a rather childish move and licked her ear.

That did the trick. Asha bolted right up and grabbed her left ear. "I don't remember asking for a gross wake up call, Val." she grumbled as she rolled her eyes at the goat.

Valentino snickered and hopped down from the mattress.

Asha yawned and took a stretch. She had been so busy drawing up the next plan to get the wishes, she must've fallen asleep. Before then, the new little team had decided to work together (at least temporarily) to quietly return the wishes. Simon would look for Flazino and gain extra help while Gabo kept an eye out for the king and queen and let Asha and Star know when it was safe to leave.

She figured Simon and Gabo had gone back home until the next day, but didn't know where Star was when she looked around the room. Asha had offered to share her space with Star for the night, but he nervously insisted he'd be more comfortable on the wooden floor. She did wonder why he was shinning so brightly when she offered...

Valentino bleated as he gestured over to the far corner of the other side of the room.

Asha looked over and saw a large glowing dog lying down in the corner with his eyes closed. Now she remembered; When Gabo and Simon had left in the evening, Star stayed with her since he would draw too much attention now. Not to mention that anyone could notify the guards the minute they saw something unusual.

Star's ear perked up as he heard Asha approaching. He opened his eyes and tail started to wag. "Oh good, you're awake! I guess you got a great new plan for us to save those wishes?" he asked, stretching his legs.

"You'd guess right. Once Gabo comes back, we can..." Asha's voice trailed off when she noticed a small area on his shoulder was a dark green. She remembered Magnifico stabbed him there yesterday, but she assumed that it had healed by now.

Asha was going to ask about it until he instantly turned back into his human form.

"You sure sleep a while. I ended up talking to Val here for a few hours until he got tired too." He kneeled down and affectionately rubbed the top of Valentino head. The goat bleated happily.

"Well, I'm glad that— Wait, stars sleep?" Asha asked curiously.

"Oh yeah! Just not as long as humans, though. Yesterday took a lot out of me, I had to sleep an entire hour!"

Asha had to put her several questions about how did that even work like that, but their conversation was cut short when they heard a knock at the door. Gabo's voice immediately followed.

"You guys awake? If you are, please me tell you're not-"

"No, Gabo. Just get in here." Asha sighed in frustration. For some reason this guy thought something weird was happening every time he left them alone.

Gabo quickly entered the room, looked around to make sure he wasn't followed and shut the door behind him. "All right, I got some good news and I got some bad news." His face looked nervous.

Asha braced herself. "What news?"

Gabo straightened up. "Good news is that Simon found where Flazino is!"

"Where'd he find him?"

Gabo winced a little bit as he twisted his hat in his hands. "Wellll....that's the bad news. The thing is, we gotta leave here, like right now. There's tons of guards spread across Rosas. They're looking for you and they're knocking on people's doors to find out if anyone is hiding you and starboy here. They could check this place at any time and I really don't want to be thrown in the dungeon!"

"You know, I wish those two had better things to do than come after us..." Star chuckled, trying to ease the tension.

Asha could feel herself tensing up. It felt like just when she thought she was getting ahead of the royals, they turn out to be two steps ahead of her. She turned to Star and grabbed his shoulders.

"Listen to me, Star. The minute I give you the word, you have to change yourself into something small so they don't see you. Do you understand? I can't let them get you." Her voice was strict, but Star could feel the fear that she attempted to hide in it.

Star gave her a nod. "You got it."

The four of them quickly left Gabo's hideout and saw Simon outside waiting for them. The sleepy teen instructed them to stay close together and avoid looking suspicious. Star and Ashamed had put back on their cloaks, only this time they hoods needed to cover their faces more so than before. More eyes would be looking for them now.

Once they were a safe distance from the hideout, Asha pulled on Simon's baggy sleeve. "Okay, tell me what happened with Flazino."

"When I realized that he never woke me up early for my knight training-had to get an earful from dad-I checked the middle of the town in case he was on tour guide duty. He wasn't there either."

"Might want to speed this up, pal. Guards on duty, remember?" Gabo reminded him as he looked around and gripped the dagger on his belt.

"I went to see if he was home, and his parents acted like I was crazy. They said they didn't even have a son. Its like they forgot he existed. I overheard from one of the guards that Flazino was sent to a dungeon." Simon finished. The group turned a corner and could see way more guards were present in the town than usual.

"I knew there was a dungeon here!" Gabo quietly whispered gleefully. He waa having quite a good time being right lately.

Asha's heart sank. Magnifico had the power to change memories? Even ones of people they've known their whole lives? This was getting more and more dangerous by the hour. She started to believe that even the four of them wouldn't be enough against two powerful sorcerers.

Her thoughts were interrupted when she noticed out of the corner of her eye, she saw Star waved to a couple of girls who were passing by. The girls giggled and waved back at him.

Asha grabbed the back of his hood. "Star, change now."

Star was startled. "Already? We just got out here!"

"Now, Star." she insisted, with more force.

The star didn't argue, he made sure he wasn't seen, and with a small flash, he turned into a little yellow mouse. He was still buried under the cloak and finally poked his head out. "A little help here?" he squeaked.

(Finally got to use this cute concept! Look at him!)

Asha gently picked him up and placed him in the inside of her own cloak. The now rodent star made himself comfortable. "Actually, this isn't so bad. I've never been carried before!" he squeaked.

Asha looked around, and felt something else was off. "If all these guards are here, then where's the king and queen?" Not that she wasn't relieved they weren't around, but it seemed suspicious considering they want the attention of the people every other hour.

"Probably up in their big fancy tower making sure the king's hair doesn't look out of place." Gabo joked.

"Its more because of tonight's wish ceremony. This is the first time they haven't announced themselves in the morning. Or maybe they did, I...haven't gotten much sleep lately." Simon guessed as he rubbed his tired eyes.

"Don't know you know sarcasm when you hear it?" Gabo rolled his eyes.

"I still don't!" Star chimed in.

Carefully walking through the town, the group avoided the sight of the guards. There were even more citizens out this time, all abuzz about the big ceremony tonight. Asha noticed a lot of the adults looked as tired as Simon. Much older ones looked sad or slightly sick like her grandfather, she started to question if they had a connection after their wishes were taken. Still, they didn't stop bustling around in preparation.

Simon led them down a hall near the kitchen. "I know someone who can help us since Flazino's gone. She personally delivers the food to the king."

Asha raised an eyebrow. "How could someone like....wait, don't tell me its-"

"Dahlia! Over here, I need to talk to you!" Simon waved over to a girl dressed in red.

"Be there in just a sec!" she called as she was carefully putting in a tray of spinach puffs oven.

Oh no, there's was no way Asha was going through this. At least at this moment. She had to find a quick excuse to get away and think...

"Can you guys wait here? I don't think Dahlia is ready to meet 'you-know-who' just yet. I'll find somewhere safe to hide him." she hurried herself away before either of the boys could say anything.

When she left, Mouse!Star poked his head out from the hood. "Hey, where are we going?"

"I need to get you somewhere where the guard's won't think to look. At least until we can get away from Dahlia." Asha whispered to Mouse!Star as she looked for a temporary hiding spot.

"Isn't she your friend? Don't you want to talk to her a little bit?" He asked concerned.

"At one point, yes. But that was when we were kids. Now she's been wooed by Magnifico. How do I know if I can even trust her?"

"Well, I know if we got separated for a long time. I would want to talk to you the first chance I got. And I trust you more than anyone."

(*coughcough*)

The girl paused. She hadn't thought about it like that. Asha had very faint memories of Dahlia because of Magnifico practically destroying any good parts of her childhood. Maybe Dahlia did want to reconnect and she was being harsh? Asha felt selfish for thinking of her as a bad guy off the bat. After all, she trusted Star after one musical number.

Asha went to the first door she saw and carefully opened the door. Inside, some of the kingdom's livestock sleeping soundly inside. Perfect. She gently put Valentino and Star down inside.

"Okay, stay right here and don't make a lot of noise. I'll come back when its safe. Valentino, you're in charge for now.'" Asha instructed.

The goat bleated in confirmation, happy to be in charge.

"How long are you gonna be gone?" Star hesitated.

"Not long. Just stay quiet....It should be easy, now that you're in the right form for it." Asha slyly smirked before closing the door.

"Thank you!" Star beamed, then realized what she said. "Oh...she's getting good at doing that. Hehehe." He chuckled to himself.

Asha sighed in relief. Both of them should be safe in there for time being. As she made her way back to Gabo and Simon, she realized that it was a lot quieter without Star being with her. Normally, Asha preferred when she was by herself (or at the very least, Valentino accompanied her) when she was in the Hamlet. Why did it feel strange without him now?

The girl braced herself as she finally joined the others again in the kitchen. Dahlia looked surprised to see her. "Asha! Where have you been? You had me worried after the royals said you were a criminal!"

"Yeah, I've been called that a lot lately..." Asha sighed. "Look, whatever they told you isn't true."

Dahlia placed a hand on Asha's shoulder. "Of course I know you aren't a criminal. I mean what harm could you possibly do?"

Asha, Gabo and Simon exchanged a nervous glance.

"Heck, Flazino even told me this crazy story that the royals are evil and their basically stealing our souls through the wishes!" She let out a laugh as she adjusted her glasses. "Which reminds me, have any of you seen Flazi today? Its been all morning and he hasn't stopped by once. Poor guy looks he needs some sleep."

"Ha! Like Simon here! Guess you guys are more alike than you thought!" Gabo teased as he lightly jabbed Simon with his elbow.

Simon looked half asleep, so he probably didn't even hear him.

"Yeaaaah...that's something we need to talk to you about." Asha tried to get the conversation back on track. She decided to take a chance and tell her the truth. "That's not a story he was telling."

Dahlia's smile faded away as she took a step back. "....What?"

Back in the coop, Valentino made himself comfortable in a pile of hay nearby.

Mouse!Star however was growing a little restless. It wasn't natural for him to just stay in one place for so long, but he could only scurry for so long in there before boredom hit him. He needed to do something keep himself from worrying about Asha.

"Maybe a mouse wasn't such a good idea. What if that lynx comes in eats us?" Star looked around, now slightly panicked.

The goat bleated in reassurance that they would be fine. He suggested the star turn into something else that doesn't stand out.

Valentino gestured to a nearby rooster preening its feathers. Star took a good look and nodded.

In a bright flash, Star had turned himself into a golden phoenix rooster. It was a lot more flashy than he was supposed to be, but he at least got the animal right.

(Yes, I did pick a golden rooster on purpose)

"See? I can blend in easily! We'll just sit here and wait for Asha and other the others." Star assured the goat with a feathered boop on his snout.

"Baaaah....?" Valentino questioned as he took in a mouth full of hay.

"How could I possibly get in trouble here? I don't even know what chickens do." Star responded as he strutted over to a nice pile of straw and made his own nest.

Valentino rolled his eyes. "Baah, Baaaah!"

"THE EGGS COME FROM WHERE??" Star squawked in horror, rattling the other chickens in the room.

The noise unintentionally startled the once asleep animals, causing a minor commotion amongst the poultry and started to awaken the cows. The chickens noticed these new animals were in their home. Valentino was fine, even though he was a little spooked himself.

But Rooster!Star seemed to attract the most attention, as their fear turned into intrigue.

"Hey, hey. Calm down, I'm just your average glowing rooster." He chuckled nervously as he realized he attracted an audience.

One of the chickens inspected Star for a few seconds, then made a happy cooing noise and nuzzled his feather wings with her head.

"See? Told you it wouldn't be a problem." He suddenly noticed that more of them were beginning to gather near him. "Um, should they all be doing this?"

Valentino began to laugh. "Baaaaahh!!" He could barely hold in his laughter.

"WHAT?! Nonononono!!" Rooster!Star started to flap away from the lovestruck birds. "I'm sorry ladies, but I'm not what you think I am!"

Outside, we see Safi carrying an egg basket, preparing to get his daily egg count. He stops just short of opening the door when he's startled by a loud noise. Safi felt a sneeze coming on, and when he felt a sneeze coming, it meant something bad was about to happen.

The other side of the door sounded like something was upsetting the animals, and whatever it is was very loud.

Safi opened the door and saw Rooster!Star getting pecked in the head mercilessly by another rooster taking residence there. It seemed that it felt threatened by another bird taking his territory and attacked him. Star however, had no idea and kept running around trying to escape.

"What's going on here? Why are two you fighting? AAAACHOO!" Safi questioned as he stopped the rooster from assaulting the star further. He picked up both of them in each hand. "I thought you all were getting-"

"He started it!" Rooster!Star exclaimed as he pointed at the angry bird. "I was trying to get away from the others and....he...attacked..." Star's voice faded once he saw Safi's eyes grow wide as he stared back at him.

"Uh....I mean....Cluck?" Star shrugged and shined his teeth that shouldn't exist in his beak.

"AAAAAAAAHHHHH!!" Safi screamed as he fell backwards, causing the two roosters clumsily fly out of his hands. "DEMON ROOSTER!" he shouted, scrambling backwards in fear.

"Demon rooster?! Where?" Star exclaimed as he looked at the bird that attacked him earlier. Unfortunately, he believed this was why he went after him.

The two roosters looked atone another sqwaked in horror and flew away from each other.

Poor Safi couldn't run out of there fast enough as he grabbed the egg basket and slammed the door behind him.

All of the noise spooked the animals once again, with Valentino trying his best to calm everyone down, but it was futile. He gave Rooster!Star a sour look. "BAAAAHH!!" he shouted at him.

"Yeah, yeah, I know!" Star crowed and turned back to his human form. "I'm normally good with animals, well except for that lynx. But I don't know how to calm them down!"

"BAAAAAAAHHHH!!!" Valentino head butted Star's leg in anger.

"All right, all right!" Star started to rub his knuckle into forehead. "Think! Think! Think!" His eyes popped open. "Oh, I know!"

We cut to Hal walking past the group, carrying a few sacks of oats and whistling when she's stopped by a screaming Safi. "Is everything alright, man?"

Safi grabbed Hal by the shirt, "THERE'S SOMETHING EVIL POSSESSING MY CHICKENS! WE NEED TO EXPEL IT! AAACHOO!"

Hal looked at her friend with concern. "Safi, you really need stop visiting those chickens so much. You need a new hobby."

Safi tutted. "That's not important! Its yellow, its glowing and it talks! Its scaring the other animals and I'm pretty sure it put a curse on me!" he was on verge of crying.

Asha heard the frantic teen's cries and her eyes widened. He found Star.

"Look, Dahlia, I'd really love to tell you more, but we really need to go!" She pushed Gabo and Simon away as she tried to leave the conversation.

Unfortunately, Dahlia wasn't taking no for an answer. She stubbornly followed the three of them. "Look, I haven't seen you in years and I now you're running away again? I feel like you're avoiding me. Can you just tell me what's going on here?"

"Nope! Sorry! Need to go right now!" Asha was beginning get irritated. The three of them ran forward to the barn door, only to see Safi, Hal and Dario there.

Asha leaped in front of the door. "WAIT, YOU CAN'T GO IN THERE!"

"Where did you guys even come from?" Simon asked scratching his head.

"Safi's freaking out over some evil glowing chicken that's in there. I don't really get it, but I at least want to help a friend out." Hal explained.

"What about the tall guy?"

"I just wanna to see it up close. It sounds to cool to be evil!" Dario answered with a genuinely friendly smile.

Gabo pointed behind them. "Aaaaand.... what about her?"

Everyone turned and saw Bazeema suddenly behind Dario. Needless to say, a few of them were spooked. Safi ended up blushing now that she was there.

"I...um...just didn't...want to...see the poor thing-"

"Girl, would you please speak up?" Gabo sneered.

Asha took the opportunity to try and quickly see Star, but Dahlia finally caught up and grabbed her shoulder.

"What are you hiding, Asha? No more running away." Dahlia pressed on.

Asha groaned. This was getting more ridiculous by the minute.

"You better just tell them about 'you-know-who', Asha. This ain't gonna end well." Gabo replied, looking impatient.

"Well, the more people I tell, the less of a secret it is, Gabo..." Asha hissed. "Look, if I tell you, you all have to keep quiet, got it? A friend of mine is in there, and-"

"Is that what's scaring the animals and making all that noise? It better not be trying to take my chickens from me!" Safi said, raising the egg basket like was he about to bludgeon someone.

"What noises-"

THUMP! THUMP! THUMP! THUMP! 🐄

"Like that! AAACHOO!" Safi sneezed. "And it's making my allergies act up!"

"What is he doing in there?!" Gabo exclaimed, looking horribly confused.

🎶This might sink in in the morning🎶 🐮

🎶It's like your own origin story!🎶🐔

"There ya go! Move those hooves! Shake those feathers!" 🌟

"Its sounds like a party in there!" Dario said excitedly.

BAAAAAAAAA!!!! BAAAAAA!!! 🐐

"There shouldn't be any party!" Asha exclaimed.

"Move aside, Asha!" Gabo marched over to the barn door and kicked it with all his might.

When the door flung open, a cloud of yellow dust and feathers flew out, making Safi sneeze like crazy.

Asha's eyes widened with horror as she finally got a look inside.

The room was bathed in yellow and purple light as Star conducted the animals with his hands. "Now you're getting the hang of it! Altogether now!" He cheered as he floated in the air.

Safi's chicken's were line dancing on both sides of the room.

The cows were line stepping and bopping their heads in tune to the music of "I'm a Star".

A few of the pigs were gliding around the ceiling oinking away.

And Valentino was practically losing his mind as was jumping up and down trying to pull Star down by his cape, but he was out of reach.

🎶Ooh, you're a star!🎶

🎶Watch out, world, here you are (hey, hey)🎶

🎶You know who's lookin' sharp? (Who?)🎶

🎶You! You're a star!🎶

"Oh, sweet cheese and crackers..." Asha shuddered as she covered her eyes in embarrassment.

Star spread his arms wide and yellow sparkles and fireworks shot from his hands as he greeted them with a big grin. He didn't mean to make a big spectacle as Asha asked, but he couldn't help himself.

And it didn't help that the rest of the animals were posed behind him as if they were on a Broadway show with him.

It took a moment to realize what he had done as he looked at Asha with her face buried in her hands. He looked at the unexpected guests and simply said, "Uh....Hi!" 😁

The Teens stared at the star dumbfounded.

(I know this is from the storyboard, BUT THIS WAS WAY FUNNIER AND MORE EXPRESSIVE. I HAD TO USE IT!! 😂)

Hal finally spoke, "Yeeeeaaaahhhh....that's a big secret."

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FINAL THOUGHTS

I'M BAAAAAACK! 😃 Its still the holiday season, but I'm still working hard on this story, and I gotta say its fun going back to these guys again! Now that we're slightly over the halfway point, things are gonna start coming together leading to the finale. Like now, we have all teens together as a group! I wanted to lead up to them all meeting each other, but in the most ridiculous way possible. And I confess that the original chicken dance scene was a little funny, just until they started shooting eggs out their asses and it went wrong. So I decided to revamp the scene and turn it into a joke with a purpose. I also wanted to show that Star isn't exactly perfect when it comes to his transformations, and his magical ways with animals has been slightly affected by losing a little bit of his magic. That will come back later, I promise.

AND SAFI SPEAKS! HE ACTUALLY SPEAKS! And it only took 11 chapters for him to have some lines! 😂 Now the tricky part here is to give EVERYONE lines and importance to the story, since everyone is needed for the final battle. As a bonus, I'll be including a lot of "Snow White and the Seven Dwarves" references now. I genuinely liked the concept itself, I just think the movie missed the chance to have 7-8 characters bounce off each other with banter. They pulled it off 101 years ago, and recently in the 7D, so there's no reason they couldn't have given them better dialogue and purpose besides existing. 😅

It'll be a while before the next chapter, but I hope you enjoy this one! Soon Star and Asha are gonna go through hell soon. (Sorry, guys)

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