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[rintoorou]

hii okay so first off i really love your works AND ESP ALOHA, HAWAII LIKE THE PLOT 🙌 except i do get confused sometimes... I HOPE YOU DON’T TAKE OFFENSE (and i don’t mean this as an attack or an unprompted criticism either) but i don’t really get the timeline and the transition between the chapters. i get the gist in the first few chapters but the flashbacks gets me confused because some of those fb chapters barely have any transition from the present setting so it’s easy for me to get lost until i catch some words indicating the flashback.

AGAIN I DON’T MEAN THIS AS AN ATTACK AND MAYBE TO SOME EXTENT IT’S JUST ME??? ofc you don’t have to post this if you’re uncomfy but i hope you know i still appreciate your works anyway 🫶

HI NONNIE BAEEE! omg dw that HAS been worrying me for a while like i’ve been thinking of ways how to indicate right away that it’s a flashback chapter so u guys don’t get confused but… no one has said anything yet so i was kinda putting it off LOL so thank you so so much for saying this and saying it so nicely !!! and dw constructive criticism is welcome and very much appreciated here 🫡

i’m thinking of putting like an emoji (?) on the titles .. like a lil sun or smth for the flashback chapters but mmm idk if you guys have any ideas pleek lmk : D