#two months later: claude is now aaron because enough people got him confused with clay
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funny that ppl think neo putting the plot on pause is weird
i mean, i get that it's unprecedented for neo, but negotiating with agents irl is just "the first 30 pages have been submitted for general edits," followed by "the first 30 pages have been submitted for character edits," followed by "the first 50 pages have been submitted for worldbuilding edits" and so on
to be clear: that last one is not new content that advances the plot, but rather the first 30 pages with an extra 20 pages of worldbuilding interspersed due to an immense lack of it in the initial draft
patching writing is just as time-consuming as patching a game and that worldbuilding patch took me about 2 months i.e. about what tvw will likely take
imo, seeing this type of time being taken to listen to feedback about the plot is a good sign if anything
#neopets#neotag#unless neo decides to add 20 pages of worldbuilding we didn't ask for lol#my post#writing#side note: writing patches are mostly boring things like iago is now claude bc ppl got him confused with io#two months later: claude is now aaron because enough people got him confused with clay#so far my major notes have been that the suspense is well-executed and the plot is intriguing but please work on worldbuilding#which...is pretty fair actually
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