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Okay, I've been thinking a lot about that whole thing with using the term "unreliable narrator" for Shen Yuan, and I want to throw in my two cents.
(looong explanation under the cut)
There are two layers to storytelling - narration and focalisation.
A narrator is the voice telling the story; it will usually be either a character inside the story (intradiegetic narrator) or a being outside of the story (extradiegetic narrator) who usually knows at least some of the things that the character/s are thinking or feeling.
Focalisation is about the being whose thoughts the narrator is conveying. A story written in the 1st person pov where a character is narrating their own life would have homodiegetic focalization. A 3rd person pov where the narrator is someone outside of the story would have heterodiegetic focalization. A story where the narrator's knowledge is unlimited has zero focalization.
What we have in SVSSS is a story narrated by a (seemingly) omniscient being, so an extradiegetic and heterodiegetic narrator. Thus, the narrator is someone outside the story, not SY, and calling him an unreliable narrator is wrong. Right?
No! SVSSS has internal focalization, meaning that the narration is focused on the thoughts and feelings of a character, in this case Shen Yuan. (As opposed to external focalization where the narration is limited to just the setting, what characters are doing, etc without delving into their thoughts).
What we read in the story are Shen Yuan's thoughts and feelings in the 3rd person. So far so good - nothing weird there. The trouble comes in the form of the fact that obviously, somewhere along the way, SY's actual thoughts/feelings get filtered/censored, so to speak, and we read a stripped down/edited version of them. This means that somewhere along the line, someone is unreliable. But we don't know who - maybe we are reading a straight up transcription of SY's thoughts and he is just that much more delusional than we thought. Maybe the narrator is leaving some things out, or isn't granted access to his "true" thoughts. It's impossible to tell.
The only thing we know for sure is that we are reading what we are meant to believe to be what SY sees happening/thinks about/feels. What we do not know is whether or not that is the objective truth.
So - even though Shen Yuan isn't the "narrator" by definition, it is still through his eyes that we see the events of SVSSS happening. There are no truly objective statements in SVSSS - it's all composed of Shen Yuan's thoughts, and who knows how much of the truth is lost to his mental gymnastics. As I said before, we don't know where exactly the unreliabilty comes from, but unless you want to have to write out this entire explanation every time and still not even have a definitive answer, let's just say that Shen Yuan is the unreliable one for simplicity's sake.
TL;DR it's fine to call Shen Yuan an "unreliable narrator" and to pull the "oh but he isn't narrating the story" is to pointlessly argue semantics. We all know what we mean by "unreliable narrator". it's not that deep. just laugh at the joke and move on. thanks for coming to my tedtalk
#this might be a bunch of rambling#i kinda have a headache and also it's 3 am#i probably could have said all this in half as many words. alas#svsss meta#svsss#my credentials are: english major#literature minor#xoxo#and yes this is very much inspired by that post where op made a joke calling all three mxtx mc's unreliable narrators#and someone threw a fit in the notes#like pls if you want to debate literary devices so bad just get off of tumblr and go to uni#miao#argument ammunition#meta yapping
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one thing about ik is that she will always reach out
#obey me#art#i had the idea for this and managed to bulldoze through drawing it all without losing motivation halfway through#but Do Not expect me to post art this frequently in future#idk how to do panels so if the middle bit with the text might be laid out weird#i added the stars and feathers and stuff because there was a bunch of empty space around the boxes#obey me satan#jtta ik#(btw the crumbling symbol next to the exploding feather is the wrath symbol from in-game)#(with the pride symbol attached upside down at the bottom)#(not so much symbolism as it is just me whacking you over the head with the point but it looks cool)#i had a lot of fun doing satan's more monstrous design so i might try my hand at some of the other demons later?#i do have some ideas for levi (deep sea creatures are just really fun)#also happy nightbringer release day!! it showed up on my homescreen like half an hour ago and i was like “wait what”#for some reason i thought it wasn't releasing til next week??#the new genshin patch is today as well so looks like i'll have plenty to do with the rest of my free time for the easter hols#(i promise i'm also working on the next chapter of jtta but i am so stuck on how to get lucifer actually Talking)#anyway. here's a gold star for making it through all my rambling in the tags for anyone who did so: ⭐
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"Chaos' Hades 2 design is better because it's hot and having the genderqueer character be less eldritch is better representation"
Well maybe some of us genderqueers like interesting and thematic designs and identify more with eldritch monstrosities over conventional attractiveness? What about the unsettling weirdo representation for freaks like me 😔
Although holding the detached head and spine of your previous form does absolutely slap
#ramblings of a bystander#this was a longer rant before but i started getting analytical with it and i don't have energy for articulating that#I'm happy a bunch of people seem to really like the new design. alas i am disappointed and chomping at my bars about it#hades#hades 2#hades 2 spoilers#chaos hades 2#the longer rant also included analysis of chaos' old face kind of having similar facial features to [redacted]#which might have prompted or cemented supergiant doing such a redesign of chaos to avoid unintentional association? idk#i shall soon be off to block the hades 2 tag. I've seen enough of this game and want to save the rest for when i play it on full release ✌️#hades game#chaos hades
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Now make them smooch 🔫
(Yes I mean hiijack)
(please)
Thank you for giving me an excuse I was missing them 🥺
#hijack#hiccup#jack frost#frostcup#asks#anon#guess who's done with her year long comic and is now free and has a bunch more time to draw these guys again!!#(and also nearly had a meltdown because her pc wasnt turning on and she thought she might have lost a finished illustration :-))#my art#alsooo are we soft launching a new fic idea?? ye#so there you go new fic tag#out of sight#yes i will be unable to stop yapping about it if you ask#what can i say the thoughts are rambling
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this is basically how the James Cobb ARG went, right?
#skiffatronart#inscryption#p03#magnificus#scrybe of technology#scrybe of magicks#James Cobb#inscryption fanart#had to do a take on James Cobb just for this shitpost so might aswell ramble on with my design philosophy for him#you can see from what remains of him in the official displate that his outfit had a bunch of belts going on#he's not beating the weirdo allegations#i was thinking it'd be a funny parallel if since Amber's a knight then Cobb is nobility#so instead of the knight visor it's a porcelain mask which. fun fact. is based off asmodeus.exe thought it fit him#probably should do a proper drawing of this design that isn't a shitpost because i actually kinda like it a lot
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you might've seen this in an ask already, but decided to post here too; a collection of Tenmas from Yara's fics, since I love the differences that thrown into different timelines and happenings give him!
#going to have a delightful slow breakfast while reading the new update to OoS#he might be my own fav of the bunch because he's bordering being recognizable in the right way.. kinda like in the fic itself#like if you see him separately: oh who's this fella? but in context like this pic: .....that's Tenma. right?#lowkey happy I've been drawing more fanfic fanart lately bc I hate how I struggle with leaving comments and I can show my love this way#got like... at least four scenes from different fics I'd like to draw but we'll see if/when I can get to those#I'd apologize for tag rambling but you know me at this point. I am unable to not tag rant#own art#inazuma eleven go#matsukaze tenma#(this probably deserves a character tag haha)#(I should backtrack to tag cgaracters though for my own archiving purposes)
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a lesson on good karma digimon survive week 2024 day 4: supporting characters
#digimon#gomamon#digimon survive#survive week#survive week 2024#rambling ahead. you don't have to read the tags beyond bc there's nothing that important tbh... you can just look at the art...#exhausted from being out and doing housework yesterday. then got a last-minute job with very urgent deadline today#finished everything but yeah basically i did anything but art so#irl do be like that aint it#anyway it's been a long time since i played survive and my memory isn't that good#but i always remember the part where we had to protect the gomamon#and later they showed us a path via the dam allowing the team to continue exploring#it reminded me of just how important it is to be nice and do good things whenever and wherever possible#and be mindful with the not-so-good things you do and say#be it good or bad. karma is real even if you don't know when it will get back at you#and you know in visual novel settings. whatever choice you make really determines what happens later on#yeah believe it or not i end up thinking stuff like that by helping a bunch of adorable seal mons...#mmm i'm officially behind now so i might as well take my time while also rest a bit haha ;;#this week has been fun with survive week tho fr. even though i came in unprepared (when will i change)#gotta keep surviving#png
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i like vaguely wanna do that little art request thing where you say a random number from 1 to 100 and a hermit/lifer and i try to match it to one of the top 100 songs thing
but im like still very much in the middle of finals crunch-time, so it might be a bit before i decide if i wanna do it or not
#i also might only do like the first 5 or 10 im not committing to a whole bunch#if it do this that is#struda rambles#just some brain thoughts im having while i have to stay up to finish a project
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i love images from old bridal catalogs in which the maid of honor can be interpreted as looking wistful and forlorn or especially jealous and scheming...
in the same vein, another good genre of images is the best man third wheeling...
#rambled a bunch of stuff abt love triangles and things in the tags initially but on second thought: i won’t extrapolate. for once#everyone draw their own conclusions#wedding#bridal#original#fave#fave pics#love triangle#polyamory#chancing this tag bc i think there’s a lack of vtg content that people might appreciate? might be projection though.#bc i always think everything needs more vtg content#polyamourous
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First LOTF anniversary thingy (idk what to call it)
Wooo lets go mini essay time—
Ok so! First thing! I did NOT want to read this book because I HATE forced reading in English class! However! We had an audiobook and it was cool so I said “Hey, maybe there’s other people that like this the way I do.” And Tumblr is, just that!
Also I joined in the dead middle of LOTFtober so uh there’s that. I was like “Wait there’s people DRAWING shit from this book? THEY’RE SO GOOD????”
Uhhh shoutout to Simorys and those people that made LOTF animatics on YouTube, gotta be my favorite way of getting into a fandom (I remember watching Simorys tiktoks like “hehe funny kids- oh shit Simon :(“)
GIGANTIC SHOUTOUT TO SNOW (@lord-of-the-bundle-of-sticks) MY ART FRIEND AND FELLOW LOTF ENJOYER EVEN THOUGH NEITHER OF US HAS REALLY INTERACTED WITH THE BOOK TO MY KNOWLEDGE FOR A WHILE. GREAT FRIEND. WOULD 100% THROW HIM INTO THE SUN. /pos also technically a reference to like our first interaction (RIP Simon and his broken limbs)
Would say a bunch of LOTF artists names on here but there’s too many- However! Yall are cool! I like the different ways you draw the characters and like the little headcanons yall bring to the table. Such silly guys.
Vic.
Shoutout to Teddy and Ana for carrying the LOTF fandom your backs must be hurting 🫡 you guys are awesome!
Let us not forget this goober @the-heart-anon1, please for the love of everything do NOT leave we need you in this fandom it’s a mess 😭 We love heart anon 🔥🔥🔥🔥
All in all, despite the occasional fights and ship wars (which is…What a fandom does), we all get along somehow for the most part and I enjoy that quite a lot. Go lotfers!
I’m NEVER saying that again.
Oh yeah I forgot about my silly ocs- Thank you guys for indulging in Ryder, Mary, John, etc’s stories, it’s really nice to see people like them????? Will return to that one day, I miss Altair Sterling :( Post Ryder Altair my beloved <3
Alrighty, I think that’s all, thanks for reading this very jumbled mess of a post! ^_^
First Ryder drawing just because I wanted to put a picture—
#lotf#Stanley RAMBLES#the reason why I just put Vic with no context#is because Vic did a bunch of cool stuff for the LOTF community so yeah#also because it’s Vic come on now#DID NOT FORGET CHILLBEAN YOU ARE SUCH A PLEASANT SUPRISE EVERYTIME YOU SHOW UP ON MY SCROLLS PLUS YOUR OCCASIONAL LOTF STUFF#I might be obsessed with undertale and my own au thing of it but LOTF is still somewhere in my brain#one day it’ll come back at full speed 👍#Teddy do NOT repost this on the LOTF archives it’s old art and you’ve probably reposted it before 😭
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medic tf2 doodles?!?!?? in this economy!???!?!? (art from yesterday)
most gentle and sweet middle aged german man in the whole entire world smile vs planning to swap all of your organs with a series of interconnected frogs smile
a doodle i did of Medic and Archimedes.... he looks too round in this drawing, not smug and evil enough..... also Mitzi from the RAE appearance :D
i LOVE the voicelines Medic has with Haunted Archimedes, he's not disturbed or even slightly put off by the fact that his zombified dove is 1. talking and 2. has a violent and constant craving for brains. he's just like. being a slightly irritated pet owner about it. he's just like "ugh yes archimedes vants all zhe brains doesn't he. now shut up". also i think this is the most on-model medic drawing i've ever done wtf
#tf2#team fortress 2#tf2 medic#medic tf2#archimedes tf2#mitzi mozzarella#doodles#sketches#sketch#also um. please no thirst comments in the tags. /srs#i feel incredibly uncomfortable with comments like that and i don't want those things being said about my art#and i feel like it might happen here so like. please don't do that thanks 👍#man i love drawing medic. he's actually so fun to draw and i love giving him the most insane expressions ever#he has so many sharp angles it's so fun!!!#i also really like the second opinion voice lines. he's not even frightened. he just has an annoying roommate sewn to his face#aahh this is why i love medic#i have a cold right now so i can't think of any other tags to put on this post........#might post some more barry stuff later. i drew a pretty cursed one yesterday heehoo#i want to post some of my really old tf2 art from like 2018#and maybe some SUPER old tf2 stuff from a decade ago if i can find the notebook i drew it in#back when i used to draw everything with a pen and no guidelines 💀#i'm pretty sure i still have it! it's not something i would throw away at all#it's probably hidden deep in my closet with my other old art stuff#i'd like to share my super old unhinged comics with a bunch of characters from various properties some day#i remember making a comic where all my favourite tf2 and mlp characters teamed up to stop peg from peg + cat from taking over the world#because i really didn't like the show as a kid. i thought peg's voice was annoying and it was a show about math. and i hate math#it's not even a bad show... it's really cute actually..... why did i hate it so much#i was peg + cat's biggest hater. if p+c had a million haters i was one of them. if it had 1 hater that was me. if it had 0 then i grew up#anyway. ignore all those tags i went on a ramble loolll#i forgot this post is about my medic drawings... yeah i really like these drawings and i love drawing medic <3
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There is a distressing amount of Achilles content on my dashboard this morning. Universe, tumblr gods, friends of the state and those abandoned by it, please explain this to me.
#ginger rambles#I'm not going to block the tag because then I'd miss like discussions and stuff with him#and that's annoying because I might hate Achilles but he's a very important figure#and I like hearing what people have to say about him#but my god I do not want to see blorbo art of him I'm not particularly interested in Patrochilles art either#that one person doing a bunch of designing of Patrochilles from Paris the Musical#you can stay I like you and your rockin' designs they spark much joy#everyone else take your blond-red menace and leave 😭😭😭
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So I’m going to try my darndest to finish an actual movie scene for the Incredibles au next month for its birthday (ough). But there’s so many scenes I’m excited for that I am... having trouble deciding which one to do.
So! What are y’all’s favorite scenes from the Incredibles? Or which ones are you looking forward to seeing in this au the most?
#I might make a poll once I have a good amount of responses too#but idk yet we’ll see#and yes you’ll be seeing this post a bunch sorry#rambles from the floor#Incredibles au
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i hate him
#spooky month#spooky month fanart#spookymonth#spooky month streber#i want this guy DEAD#not really i love him a lot but his hair is a nightmare to draw#this is like. a bunch of my headcanons plasted over him#gonna ramble a bit bout him.. as a treat#i think he always smells like oil#like#i dont know shit bout engeneering so im prob wrong but they must use oil right to make their scientific stuff#either smells like oil or like metal#NOT SURE IF I HC HIM AS TRANS i mean maybe... perhaps...#i do hc him as bigender tho idk i feel like it fits#probably has tatoos somwehre.. might draw...#SUPER TIDY like will see a sock in the floor AND GRAB ALL THE SCARE ACTORS AND ASK ONE BY ONE WHOS SOCK IS THAT#mm yeah#anyways#i cant think properly byeee#bats cant draw!
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Oh the most random thought. I know Wally is "the guy" of the fandom. Like there's no denying. And I am also a victim of Wally's "the guy" syndrome.
But because of that, there's Wally x Y/N content. But where's the Julie x Y/N? Barnaby??? Sally? Poppy???? *proceeds to list the whole cast at that point*
Howdy has his fans, I've seen them they're so very real but he also deserves more Y/N content.
Idk idk. Random stupid thoughts. From someone who's literally also a stupid little Wally enjoyer. Fjdjjfjdjfjs
#text post#just rambling#you know on the realest of reals#i almost wanna make some y/n content with the other WH sillies.#wholesome y/n sweet baking with poppy#some silly y/n kisses from Barn#Idk idk!!!!!!! might be fun. i say as if I dont have a bunch of other shit i wanna draw in the backburner#my brain has a little wally dancing in it and I need to put on blinders to force myself to draw the other neighbors anyway
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Wait. I have a top tier take
Rebecca x Valencia
#i might have to draw them in. that hmm#crazy ex girlfriend#relencia#rebecca x valencia#rebecca bunch#valencia perez#image#undescribed#ramble
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