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the-random-phan · 2 years ago
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An old-ish D&D character of mine, longest campaign I ever played!
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mediawhorefics · 2 years ago
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Omg you’re writing a fic about the social network?? 👀 Do you have a tag I could look through/any little drabbles you maybe have shared? (It’s okay if you don’t I’m just really excited because I didn’t know! Thank you for all you do and please don’t feel pressured/feel bad if you don’t have a tag or anything like that)
omg i .... didn't think a lot of people would be interested in that. so, no... i don't have a tag for it, but i should?? i will. i'm actually working on a playlist for it rn so i might share that soon 👀👀👀 if y'all are interested haha.
but essentially, it's a post-movie you've got mail au where mark and eduardo anonymously reconnect through a dating app and when mark realises that it's eduardo he's speaking to, he gets his redemption arc on 💪🏻💪🏻 i'm 44k into this beast and i'm having a total blast with it.
but yeah i can find a snippet for you (its still very first-drafty so apologies for typos) :
“I just think it’s been ten years, Mark,” Karen Zuckerberg insists and she never met one of her children’s issues she didn’t want to dig into like an archaeological site, until she finds the bones and can point at them. “Surely it’s time to talk to him and fix this thing between you two.” 
“I do talk to Eduardo,” Mark hisses and it’s such a filthy lie he’d almost be impressed by his own audacity if he wasn’t so used to lying about Eduardo. 
No, he doesn’t think about Eduardo at all. 
No, he doesn’t miss him. 
No, he doesn’t sometimes wish he could have done things differently. 
No, he wasn’t jealous of that bitch Christy and her perfectly manicured fingers digging deep into Eduardo’s bicep when they’d all go out for drinks, celebrating being young and successful on the back of Mark’s brilliance. 
No, he never got distracted while coding by the sliver of skin between Eduardo’s hands and the cuffs of his black shirt. 
No, he never imagined wrapping his fingers around those wrists, pressing them down against Eduardo’s twin bed, keeping him still and his. 
“Mark –”
“We had a perfectly civil conversation about the weather in Berlin last time and that’s one of Wardo’s special interests so you know it wasn’t just idle chitchat,” he argues triumphantly. 
He doesn’t add the fact that it was a group conversation and all Mark did was drink his mimosa, eyes pointedly avoiding Eduardo’s slim figure perfectly kissed by a designer suit while he felt underdressed in a slack and shirt combo that Lucy had to bribe him to wear with the promise of one full week without complaining about his diet. 
“Well, you know what I think,” his mother says. 
“Do I ever,” Mark mumbles. 
“Mark Zuckerberg, do not give me that kind of attitude. You might be worth billions of dollars but I am still your mother and just because the conversation is veering towards uncomfortable does not give you the right to be disrespectful. This might fly with your employees and your California people but I won’t have it in my house.” 
Mark rolls his eyes, relieved she can’t see him. He doesn’t point out the fact that he’s not in her house right now, doesn’t point out the fact that she started it by poking into his business. Instead, he just waits, knowing she isn’t done. 
“It wouldn’t kill you to apologise,” she insists predictably like she has many times before. 
“Trust me, mom. Eduardo doesn’t want an apology,” Mark says, heart squeezing painfully in his chest. 
There is no amount of sincere apology that Mark could give that would ever erase what he did. There is no version of this story where he gets to atone for his sins, no penance good enough. He has long made peace with that fact. 
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bakugouscentedcaramel · 5 years ago
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Ah yes, the time has come.
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It's time to get your pen and paper because class is in session!
There's plenty of things I could talk about and I pretty much covered the basics down below, but I'm more than willing to help y'all out with anything specific!
I have to preface that I'm not an English major by any means nor do I have any experience writing professionally, the things listed below are purely based on my opinions and submissions I have received.
Writing is forever a learning process, there really isn't a right way of writing but there are definitely some things that will hinder your readers. Here is a list that I compiled both with my own experiences as well as some user submitted issues when it comes to reading works:
•Big blocks of text
° Typos/wrong word usage
•Using the same words
°Too spaced out/not indented where needed
• Dialogue runs into normal sentences
° Speakers/POVs change without notice
• Inconsistencies, either in general or story inconsistencies
°Lack of description/Too much description
• Bland/Artificial actions/dialogue
° Misuse of punctuation/lack thereof
• Capitalization errors
° Long winded sentences
• Using italics for actions
° Confusing formating
• Changing in Tenses
° Using wrong tags/falsely advertising (ex. Reader x Blank should have Y/N, not an OC/Authors name)
• Author notes/comics/pictures in middle of fic
° "~This is a transition~"
• Forcing a character to be OOC for sake of story
° Filler characters
• Not sticking to a specific genre/jumpy moods
Now don't be intimidated by this list! Some of these are pretty self explanatory so I won't go into a few of them. There are plenty of ways to avoid these and in some cases it is perfectly fine to use any of the above. 
Let's start off with the basics!
Sentence structure is the backbone of writing, but it's a very flexible rule. Obviously you have your subject, verb, object and whatnot, but the true art lies in word choice and length.
When it comes to sentences, size does matter. If your sentences are too short they will seem choppy and unfinished, whereas if they are long they will seem winded and unnatural. The biggest tool you can use to find out if a sentence is too short/long is by reading it aloud! If you run out of breath it's too long but if you finish abruptly it's too short.
Word choice is my favorite weapon to work with, I could describe a blue jay as a normal bird or as a mythical animal just by picking the right words!
"The blue jay flew across the field while it sang it's melody."
Or
"A creature with wings made of clouds swooped across the field whilst roaring out a devilish tune."
Word choice can easily convey tone/feeling so it's definitely an important element to writing! If you ever have trouble finding that perfect word try googling for synonyms! Also this website might help you find that one word that you just can't think of!
Grammar is also a very important part of writing. Using the right words and punctuation can be difficult sometimes but there are some easy fixes!
Spelling is an easy fix, if you forgot/don't know how to spell a word consulting a dictionary or Google is a surefire way of solving your problem. You can even find synonyms if you feel like you've used a word too much. 
Punctuation on the other can be a big more difficult, however. 
Here's a couple of sentences that helped me learn basic punctuation:
A comma splice walks into a bar, it has a drink then leaves. Commas are a means of sewing two sentences together to form a compound sentence. These are mainly used to list out things and to add fluidity to your works so they don't sound as choppy.
A question mark walks into a bar? Question marks are pretty self explanatory. They either raise a question or form uncertainty.
Two quotation marks "walk" into a bar. Quotations are used for both dialogue and metaphors. I personally love using them for sarcasm!
A gerund and an infinitive walk into a bar, drinking to drink. This one is a tougher one that I personally never learned from any of my classes. A gerund is basically a word that can act as a verb or a noun which would be "drinking". An infinitive is the base of a verb, in this case it's "drink".
The bar was walked into by a passive voice. A passive voice is when you emphasize the action and object of a sentence rather than the subject. You can find that a passive voice tends to use past tense where as an active voice uses present/future tense.
Three intransitives walk into a bar. They sit. They drink. They leave. An intransitive verb is an action verb, expressing a doable activity like arrive, go, lie, sneeze, sit, die, etc.
Some other things that I commonly see are the wrong usages of words. For example:
They: a group of individuals/pronoun "Yeah, they said he'd be here thirty minutes ago."
Their: a possessive pronoun "Leave their stuff alone!'
There: location "What's that over there?"
Then: event/action "Val went to the mall then skittered to the park."
Your: possessive "Your self esteem is lower than the Mariana's Trench!"
You're: a conjunctive "you are"
Affect: caused by actions "The fallen french fry really affected Val's mood."
Effect: caused by events "Climate change has a negative effect on my Cheerios."
Peaked: a summit "Val has peaked at 10:19pm"
Piqued: stimulate interest/curiosity "You have piqued Val's interest by mentioning food."
Do time: "Val is fixin' to do time if she keeps slacking."
Due time: "Val will come with hydration in due time."
Per say: not a thing
Per se: by/in itself "She didn't write this late at night, per se…"
There are different tools you can use to spice up your writings, from metaphors to innuendos, all the way to zeugmas! Let's go over the basic definitions of these bad boys.
Metaphor: a figure of speech that is not literally applicable. "The darkness surrounded us like a shroud." Obviously the darkness can't physically shroud anyone.
Innuendo: a sentence with a hidden meaning "Is that a gator in your pants or are you just happy to see me~" 
Zeugma: a sentence containing words that can be used literally and figuratively, like a love child of the two above. "Val and her coupon expired last week." This implies that not only did my Colgate coupon expire, but I died as well.
Paragraphs are a necessity when it comes to writing. Big blocks of text are an eyestrain to readers and it's easy to lose your place, even if it's only 150 words. It's always best to use Tab or at least 5 spaces when indenting. A paragraph should only be 5-7 sentences long, this is so it's not just multiple blocks of text
When to add a new paragraph:
° A new person comes in
• New idea/context
° Setting changes
• New person is speaking
° Time changes
• The "camera" moves
° Tone shifts
• 5-7 sentences has been reached
Paragraphs help you organize your work in a way and they make it easier for your readers' eyes!
POVs are also very important. First person and third person are by far the most common ones so I'll only touch on these two. It's very important to write a story in one strict POV as to not confuse the readers. You can however jump perspectives like Heroes of Olmpyus by Rick Rodian, as long as the ready can easily tell who is telling the story.
First person is a story that is told from first-hand experience. It's the same as if I told y'all the story on how I almost chopped off my thumb in woodshop class back in middle school. First person tends to use a lot of I's and my's
Third person is a story that is told from a narrators' point of view. Such as "Once upon a time" type of stories. I's and my's should only be used in dialogue
Dialogue is probably one of the most important features of any fic/story. Dialogue can push plots forward as well as add life to a character. Here's a simple exchanged:
"Hiya 'Splodey," Val chirped.
Katuski smirked, "M'dumbass."
Dialogue should always come with a pair of quotation marks. Commas and periods generally go inside the quotation marks whereas dashes, colons, and semicolons almost always go outside the quotation marks. Question marks and exclamation marks however can go either inside or outside, it goes by a case by case basis. Always indent whenever a different speaker is talking, running quotes into each other is a no-go because it causes confusion and eyestrain.
You have to be wary of using simple dialogue exchanges though, if they seem off try saying them out loud! Dialogue is one of my favorite things to write because you can weave personality into them, not to mention you can always hear people talking to get a better idea on how to write dialogue.
For example, I have a southern dialect, meaning I sound different than someone from the north! I use words like "y'all", "fixin'", "finna", "ain't" and have a different vocabulary than that of my northern friends. This means that the characters you're portraying should have their own way of speaking! This will not only add flavor to your dialogue but it also adds to their personalities/backgrounds.
Describing things can be just as valuable as dialogue, but it is a bit more complex. Sure we've all heard of the "show, don't tell" rule. Which is a good rule to follow, however too much showing is just as bad as telling. Again, reading out your work is a great way to tell if you're focusing too much on one thing. Another thing to keep in mind is importance, such as do we really need to know that the grass outside was bluegrass? Which in certain situations it would be! For example:
The grass around the disheveled house was brown and straw-like, with the exception of a ring of grass. Bluegrass. Which wasn't even native to this location.
This paints a pretty good spooky picture in the readers' mind and even adds the element suspense by the implied uncertainty.
I've only covered a small portion of writing so if y'all have any questions or need any help feel free to slide into my DMs or send in an ask! I love getting questions about writing and I'm always willing to help a fellow writer!
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rogue-barnes-16 · 6 years ago
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THE DISAPPEARANCE OF NATASHA ROMANOFF (part I/?)
Summary: after the too convenient disappearance of Natasha Romanoff, the Avengers —a local biker gang— search for help in the most unexpected place in order to get their friend back.
Pairing: biker!Bucky Barnes x reader
Genre: unclassified (biker gang au)
Tags:
The mysterious disappearance of Natasha Romanoff: @shirukitsune
Permanent taglist: @notexactlythatgirl @thisismysecrethappyplace @sofreakinmanyfandoms @pizzarollpatrol @bubblycypress87 @1a-girl-has-no-name1 @loislp @lovenaturefirst @dyanna-corona @2ptonpt @goodnightmode @disneyprincessbuffyannesummers @mannls @cutie1365 @catch22inareddress @mybooradley @sebastianisasnack @butifulsoul125 @unlikelygalaxygiver
Warnings: language
A/N: consider this a sneak peek of a series I'm planning on writing when I finish one of the ongoing ones. The title is long af so I might change it. Also, sorry for the typos but y'all probably know that I'm a mess
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BUCKY'S P. O. V.
A sigh escaped my lips as my leg furiously bounced against the pavement of the parking lot "she ain't gonna help"
"we gotta give it a try" Steve whispered, ogling at the tall skyscraper's entrance, which was illuminated with fancy lanterns that matched the aesthetic of the building itself. "you never know. Plus-"
"I shouldn't have come." I mumbled with a light distress showing up in my voice "the moment she sees me she'll turn around and leave"
"she won't" my bestfriend answered, determined.
"Steve-"
"If we tell her it's not for you-"
"Still-"
The sound of the not so far building's gate opening, was enough to cut me midsentence. And... there she went.
"can't you just cancel it? Tomorrow I-- no Wanda- gosh, he's tiring. Just tell him... yeah" she made her way to her car, unaware of our presence besides it yet, probably due to the poor lighting.
So much money, and yet the wealthy company couldn't improve the goddamn streetlights of its own parking lot.
"Friday? Geez no-- No. Period. Just-" her walking slowed down the moment she saw us. "you know what? Friday it's okay. Goodnight Wan." even before hanging up, she was already glaring at me. "James."
"Y/n" I replied, just because I didn't know what else I could say.
She inhaled before speaking again. "you got some balls." her eyes flashed briefly to Steve. "what the fuck are you two doing here?"
"we need help" I stated, quieter that I would have liked.
She huffed " 'course you do." relocating her bag. "look for help somewhere else." her eyes digged into mines, throwing daggers at me.
And, God, did it hurt. "told you" I grunted in low voice to Steve, already turning around to leave. "She's not helping."
I felt a grip on my arm, stopping me from stalking away. "Y/n, this is not about him"
"I don't give a single fuck." she hissed, walking to her car to open it. "you promised to stay away from me, and you're not doing a good job"
"it's Natasha" Steve blurted out before she could get in the vehicle.
Y/n froze at the mention of her.
"what 'bout her?" she tried to sound careless and cool, but I noticed the switch in her body language.
"she... Disappeared" the blond man spoke, putting emphasis on the last word.
Y/n frowned, her eyes going from me, to Steve, and back to me. "Go to the police"
"you know we can't" this time it was my turn to answer. "You're the only one who can help us, you know that. If you weren't, I wouldn't be here." I stated solemnly. "I keep my promises, you know that."
There was a moment of silence, in which she glared at me with hate in her eyes that masked the pain, I knew, was there. "actually, no, James. I can't recall a single time when you kept your promise, so I don't." and I knew she meant every word. "you got plenty of friends, go look for their help and leave me the fuck alone."
SHUT!
We stood there while she drove away, and I would have been lying if I said I was shocked she left.
I spared a glance at Steve, who was running his fingers through his hair, visibly distressed. "what te fuck do we do now?"
It was only after Steve spoke, that it dawned on me we had no other option to have a chance of getting Natasha back.
"we gotta look for someone else"
~~~~~~~~~~~~
Old folders displayed everywhere, empty boxes of Chinese food that Sam bought covered the coffee table, and we all needed a shower.
"we should call Tony" Clint spoke distractedly.
"No we shouldn't" Steve rushed to reply while he tidied up some of the papers. "he's retired"
"Natasha dissappeared, Stevie" Clint's reminder didn't exactly help the moral of the group.
Steve sighed, pinching his nose before shaking his head. "Pepper would kill me." after looking at us for a second, he kept speaking in a hesitant tone "I'll call him if plan A fails"
"plan A?" I questioned, raising and eyebrow. "Plan A failed when Natasha dissappeared" I stated.
"well, then when plan B-"
"Y/n was plan B" Sam yawned, slowly sitting up in the tiny couch where he had fallen asleep "which would have worked if you had listened to Bucky" Sam yawned again, right before stirring "taking him with you, when we needed Y/n, was like- the stupidest idea you had in a while."
Steve took a deep breath before letting out a comeback that would probably cause a fight. "who else we got?"
"No one." Clint almost growled more than spoke.
Out of everyone, he was the most affected by far. Natasha and Clint had grown up together, and the fact that we barely could trust our close friends to get her back was exhausting as well as frustrating.
"think I'm just gonna take a shower" Barton informed us in a mumble before leaving his seat to walk out of the room.
"there's someone" Rhodey's voice made all of us redirect our eyes to the door connecting my kitchen to my living room. "Danvers"
Sam shook his head no "We have no way of contacting her"
Rhodey sighed, exhausted, throwing himself in the chair Clint had just left. "I can contact Rambeau. She'll know where Danvers is"
"She ain't gonna help" It was my turn to contribute with some bad news, not that new, of which none of them were aware. "she knows 'bout what happened with Y/n."
Silence was the answer I got.
Rhodes scoffed "Good to know, James." I kept my eyes trained in my hands, not wanting to face anyone in the room. "Really good to know about this tiny detail after- what? A year?"
Another scoff and more silence.
"let me go through it again" Sam rubbed his temples with closed eyes. "Nat dissappeared, we probably have a mole, and the two people we could use help for" I felt his eyes on me "they won't help." no one spoke. "we're fucked."
We all drowned in our thoughts for a while.
Clint, at some point, had come back. Someone told him we had run out of options, which made him leave. He didn't come back, and I figured he probably fell asleep in my room.
Sun was rising, and, in need of a break, I got up. I really could use some air.
In no time I was standing on my ramshackle balcony, leaned over the railing with both my forearms supporting me.
Sam, who had probably came after me, exited and, after installing himself besides me, he spoke "it's not your fault"
"cut the bullshit"
"okay, it is"
"No shit Sherlock"
He sighed "but not entirely, so don't beat--"
"If she dies" I whispered, my gaze lost on the horizon "it's on me. Like- it's actually on me"
"she's not gonna die" Sam dismissed me quicker than he would have liked. "She's smart, and she's only been missing for around a day and a half "
"Listen, no one said it out loud but we gotta consider it." I blurted out, turning around to face my friend. "if they took her, they'll interrogate her. Do you really think she'll give in?"
"I didn't say that"
"then you know she can end up in a ditch"
He closed his eyes and took a deep breath. "don't say any of this shit in front of Clint"
"I'm not stupid"
He let out a sarcastic chuckle, shaking his head. "yeah, of course you're not." Sam tilted his head slightly towards me without looking. "remind me again why Y/n ditched you."
"Fuck off Wilson." my voice was low, full of anger and frustration and sadness; bottled up emotions that I carried with me since Y/n left.
Bottled up emotions that came to torture me for what I did whenever I heard her name.
We saw a car.
Sam was the first one to point it out.
Not the fact that a car was driving towards a single property in the middle nowhere, hidden with the help of the trees in the woods.
No, Sam was pointing out what car it was.
"it's... Her car?" He sounded incredulous, hesitant, and even suspicious, but I couldn't blame him.
"it is." I confirmed.
And, even though I was sure it was her car, I couldn't believe it until, after parking in front of the house, she climbed off.
She made her way to the porch's stairs. "I'll... Go and tell the others." Sam informed me. "Open the door"
I sighed and slowly made my way downstairs and to the front door just in time to hear the knocks.
I grabbed the knob, but before spinning it, I froze.
I froze because I shouldn't be me opening the door, it shouldn't be me the first person she sees, the first person she made contact with. I shouldn't be me welcoming her, even if it was my home, because I didn't deserve-
"Open the fucking door, James."
And I did, though the movement was way too eager for my liking.
But it was too eager because it was Y/n requesting me to do it, as if she wanted to see me.
I had complied and now we were standing in front of one another. My first thought was to step aside, since I thought she would try to walk past me as soon as possible, but she didn't.
She stood there, looking at me.
"Thought you said no" even though it was quiet, almost a mumble, it was definitely not a great sentence to begin a conversation in such a delicate situation.
Surprisingly, her voice sounded way warmer than I was expecting when she replied to my unfortunate comment. "I made up my mind" thankfully, she kept talking, because I had no idea what to answer. "Nat's my friend too. I'll help."
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