#them changing the sequence of events as long as they don't change the essence of the story and the characters themselves

[sleepless-crows]

as far as we know, i'm assuming kaz's backstory is stretched into 4 episodes, assuming they don't edit it again tomorrow and add more. that 4th episode is named after something kaz says, “When everyone knows you're a monster, you needn't waste time doing every monstrous thing.” kaz says this to inej when he supposedly had people set that girl's apartment on fire when talking with geels. but he didn't, he was bluffing. and do you know another time kaz was bluffing? when he told pekka he buried his son alive. and guess who else we have on that episode:

the little boy whom the kaelish prince was named after. and look at this:

"while Kaz Brekker (Freddy Carter) and his crew attempt to settle an old grudge with vicious rival Pekka Rollins." does that not sound like they're using a bit of the crooked kingdom plotline already to you? with kaz bringing pekka down once and for all and putting him on his knees and asking (once again) if he remembers him and to say jordie's name. when he told pekka his son with the little dime lion toy was buried alive underground in some farm.

imagine kaz asking pekka what he did. what was the name of his brother. and this is when we finally find out after all the happy scenes of kaz and jordie throughout episodes 1 to 3, what tragedy actually had befallen them

[atlasshrugd]

Hi seeing as you seem to be the only sorta active britin blog I can find lol I wanted to ask you about some of your favourite moments for them, as I'm kinda new to the fandom whatevers around lol, and would like to hear peoples thoughts on them if you don't mind answering 😊

Hey there! Sorry I am answering so late, but WOW this is a big ask because there are SO many favorite moments.

So I have narrowed it down to my Top 5:

1. Prom (obviously)

Okay this is a no-brainer. This is literally the most romantic sequence in all of television history. I still have not found something more beautiful, moving, triumphant, loving, and groundbreaking than when Brian and Justin danced to 'Save the Last Dance for Me' at prom. Obviously barring the horrific events of what followed, this scene transcended all stereotypes and barriers and allowed us as the viewers to feel pure happiness and pride as queer people. I remember seeing it for the first time at 14 and feeling so unadulteratedly happy and validated. This was a scene of two gay people unapologetically showing the world that they did not give a shit what anyone thought of them. The only thing that mattered was this thing between them; this unspoken understanding, solace, love, and pride. I still moves me to this day whenever I watch it, no matter how many times I do.

And of course we must talk about the implications of Brian's character in this scene. Throughout season 1, he has been an emotionally stunted and cold individual who does not believe in love, relationships, or trying to make other people happy. Here, in the finale, we see Brian finally putting away all his ego bullshit ("I wouldn't be caught dead in a room full of 18 year olds"), and going out of his way to make someone he cares about happy. The fact that he even showed up at Justin's prom is a direct U-turn from the moral principles he has been reinforcing all season. And by dancing to a "ridiculously romantic" corny song, waltzing, and kissing Justin in front of everyone without giving a shit — that is pride. That is one of Brian's long-accustomed walls tumbling down.

"And don't forget whose taking you home and in whose arms you're gonna be..."

2. When they make love for the first time after the bashing

Now these scenes...how do I describe the sheer profundity? After Justin's bashing at prom, Brian is left in shambles. He blames himself for everything, and it is just further proof that Brian's love always causes further destruction. Justin has lost all memory of that night at prom, and this is one of the big tragedies. Justin had promised that he'd never forget it, and that it was the best night of his life. That proof of Brian's love that he had for so long been longing to experience — has disappeared as if it never happened. Now, Justin's confidence and surety of the world has been distorted. He is no longer sure of anything, including himself and Brian. He needs reassurance and things spelled out for him.

When Brian and Justin sleep together for the first time after the bashing, it is not like all the other times they had sex. This, in fact, is the first time they make love. Justin is telling Brian that he trusts him wholeheartedly, enough to allow him in his body again after his own agency had been ripped away from him. This is where Justin absolves Brian of his guilt. He takes the blood-stained scarf off his shoulders, lets it fall to the ground. He gives Brian the forgiveness that Brian cannot offer himself.

"Like the first time?" Brian asks, because it is the anniversary of their first meeting, but at the same time—it is nothing like the first time. Now, they are not strangers. They are more acquainted with each other than they have ever sought to be; know each other in such profound depths. They are forever linked by this thing they have both experienced, but it is not just that shared trauma. It is based off deep understanding and love. They have, somehow along the way, become more each other than themselves. They know that they have become irreplaceable and inseparable parts of each other. And Brian has been holding onto that guilt for so long that it has become rooted deeply within him. SO when Justin absolves him of it, Brian allows himself to truly feel for the first time since the bashing. He gives himself to Justin, in that moment, as Justin gives himself to Brian. It is a brilliant and tender scene of trust, devotion, acceptance, and absolution. Something they both needed to soothe their troubled souls, and a new basis for their relationship.

3. When Brian helps Justin walk down the street after the bashing

Again, this is Brian showing nurturing, care, patience, compassion, and selflessness to another person. Justin trusts him enough to rely on him, and Brian doesn't take this trust lightly. These are some of the sweetest scenes of the whole show, because this is when Brian is completely focused and devoted to Justin. He wants to help him, more than anything, to get better. And he accepts and takes up this role of carer, not because he has to, or because he is obligated or forced to. But because he will do anything to ensure that Justin will be okay, and that he gets the life he deserves.

Specifically, my favorite scene is when the song 'Grand pianos crash together, when my boy walks down the street...' is playing. Justin is walking through a crowd and Brian has his arms outstretched. When they come together, they hug deeply and easily. This scene is so simple and pure, so chaste, but it shows the true essence of their relationship, beyond all the facades and bells and whistles. At the heart of it, Brian and Justin care about each other more than they care about themselves. They have established a stable foundation of trust that they can rely on. And it also perfectly encapsulates just how far Brian has come once again. He is showing such selfless care and devotion to a boy in public daylight, kissing and hugging him and not wanting to let go of his hand. Season 1 Brian would have never even considered that. This just shows how much the events of the prom changed him, and shows how his desire for responsibility of another person has matured him. He had been forced to face his inner feelings, fears, and truths. Now, they are out in the open for the first time and Brian accepts this. This alone is a huge development.

Brian is also afraid to let go of Justin. When Justin says he can walk back himself and says 'Later,' Brian repeats it apprehensively as he holds Justin's hand until he can't anymore. Then, he watches Justin go, walking through the crowds. The look on his face is wistful, a little troubled. He hasn't wanted to face just how much he enjoys Justin's presence and how much happier and content he is when Justin is with him. He hasn't wanted to face just how afraid he is to lose Justin again. Their words of 'Later' are a direct mirror of their last words on prom night, just before Justin got bashed. Brian had watched Justin walk away, too. And a second later, he was gone.

4. Pride

This is probably one of my all-time favorite scenes in television ever. I have cried each time I've seen it. There is something so pure, essential, liberating, triumphant and tender about this scene, and the song that plays (Chiquitita by ABBA) certainly shows it. Firstly, Justin accepts Brian in his entirety and doesn't expect him to change. He knows how much Brian has been devoting to Justin in his recovery, and how strange that role is for Brian. Here, he tells Brian to 'go find a stud, ask him to dance,' — because he knows how much Brian has been sacrificing for him. This alone shows Justin's maturity and inner strength. He loves Brian, so he will not try to change him or shackle him. He wants Brian to be free to choose and live the way he wants, and that is what he fell in love with.

But when Justin shows this sacrifical and detached love for him, Brian realises that there is nothing he wants to do; no one he wants to be with more — than Justin. He is aware of the myriads of choices he has. But he chooses Justin. (Technically, for the first time, perhaps aside from prom. But even at prom, he had been running from something [turning 30]. Here, he chooses Justin without pressure for the first time.)

So, he follows him outside. He ask him "Hey, stud. Wanna dance?" Justin doesn't believe him at first, because he is not used to Brian choosing him by his own volition. He cannot imaging Brian passing up getting laid, especially after being celibate for the whole day. He also feels like a burden; like Justin's recovery has been inflicted on Brian, stopping him from living his life normally. Justin loves Brian enough to let him be free, but the biggest part? Brian loves Justin enough to choose him in that freedom.

So this marks another checkpoint in their relationship. Not only is there trust, understanding, and love — there is also desire. Sure, they have always desired each other. But this desire is not the physical kind or one born out of loneliness. This is desire for the other person as a whole. This is desiring another person's company because theirs is the only company you want. This is desiring to be with someone when there are so many other options. This is real desire — the kind that originates from the heart and not the flesh.

"I promise you won't forget this one." Brian is promising Justin that this dance will be theirs, just theirs. Not to stick it to anyone, to show anyone anything, to make some kind of point, or to make somebody happy. This dance is theirs, for the reason that Brian wants Justin to have this: this moment where Brian only wants Justin, where he dances with him simply because he wants to. And he wants Justin to have this memory, to overcome all the vague blurriness of their past. He wants this dance to be the one he remembers when he questions himself. And so they dance, and they sway, and they kiss, and they press their heads together, and the lights are bright and colored on Liberty Avenue, and everywhere people are free and joyful, and there is nothing to prove, no one to run from, nothing to hide. Their arms are wrapped around each other and the sound of 'You'll be dancing once again...and the pain will end...you will have no time for grieving...' tumbles through the air and all around them. 'But the sun is still in the sky and shining above you.' Now: there is nothing to be afraid of, and everyday life is full of reasons to be alive. To be proud.

5. Their reunification

This is one of their main checkpoints. This scene is the moment they finally become equals. Justin had left Brian for the reason that Brian could not give him what he needed to be happy, which was: reassurance. After the bashing, Justin lost all sense of who he was. There was a huge gap in his memory, therefore a huge part of himself he could not claim. He had lost partial use of his dominant hand which took away the only thing that gave him solace; his drawing ability. He was no longer sure of anything and needed things spelled out for him. He needed to talk about it. 

But Brian was not willing to do that, because he himself was struggling with trauma from the incident that he did not want to face. Where his love language is in acts of service (letting Justin live with him, paying for his tuition, helping him recover) — Justin needed to hear the words. He needed verbal affirmation to prove that he wasn't crazy and just projecting his feelings onto Brian. He could no longer trust his own perception and interpretation of things whereas in the past he could read Brian's mixed signals easily without needing confirmation. This is the part Brian failed to understand. He was not willing to concede his identified notions of 'relationships' and 'love' — no matter how far he came. He had not accepted that his feelings for Justin were love, and that scared him. So he refused to compromise with Justin, believing that his actions were enough when they weren't. But all Justin needed was to be heard, and for someone to love him enough to give hime what he needed sometimes (which was, verbal and emotional affirmation).

So their relationship ended, and Justin thought he could get what he needed from Ethan, which proved to be another big lie. So at the end, Justin still cannot trust his own perception, but — he finally knows what he wants.

He comes to the realization that while Brian could not give him the words, he gave him honesty. He learned from Ethan that words without action had no meaning. So he prioritized what mattered more to him: hearing that Brian loved him? Or, knowing that Brian loved him. So he chose honesty.

And this is when they could get back together without that imbalance and insecurity.

"And you are never to play violin music in my presence again." This single line is the only thing Brian needed to say to indicate to Justin that he was hurt by Justin leaving. Brian has been putting up a front of indifference for their entire break up, only indulging in pain management in private. Justin leaving him irrefutably hurt him more than he could have ever anticipated. But he did not show it.

So, Justin smiles — a little nod of awareness — because that is all Brian needed to say. And he says, "I promise."

"And it's time...that we...grow old and so some shit..." plays in the background (Lover's Spit) as they start to undress each other, because they are now on the same playing field. They have no illusions, misunderstandings, and misinterpretations anymore. They are starting anew; a little older and a little wiser than before. Brian knows how painful it is to lose Justin. Justin knows how skewed his perception had been, because he had been so caught up in his isolation that he could not see the truth of Brian's actions.

But they both know at least one thing: that life is better together than apart.

Tbh I could go ON and write a dissertation about each of these individual scenes, but I hope this made sense and gave a little more insight on these scenes and characters. Thank you for the great question!

[akshitaspeaking]

The Namesake - A lot more where that came from (1 /2)

I won't hide my obviously heavy bias towards the slice of life genre in films but this one definitely takes an easy win in anyone's dictionary for beautiful movies. From the moment it starts, throughout the whole duration it plays up till the end of it, there was something about this piece of art that made it so soothing and peaceful to watch all the while equally as emotionally wrecking that i simply could not put my finger on it. It was excruciating for me - continuously dodging the point of intersection that connected all the dots.

It's like everything made sense yet you just know there's a lot more where it's coming from.

So let's go find out~~

A very long movie analysis ahead >>

Also its not spoiler free

In all sense, the movie seems to revolve around this name, Gogol, and even though it is way more than that, it all comes back to this name regardless - just in a wider perspective this time - which makes the title so much more of a perfection, and this movie a work of genius as well.

Mira Nair did such a great job at encapsulating the essence of every sequence that bricked up to create this movie, that we start to believe we know these characters, when in reality once you pay close attention, we actually just hold the illusion of knowing who they are.

She managed to do that with relationships as well where we get trapped in the delusion of believing that we probably understood the three relationships showcased in the film. Maybe what it was, what went wrong, what made it good or bad, all that jazz.

How does she do it then?

It's only the moments.

The little moments that seem so normal / passable but might become the cause behind taking a big life decision.

The moments that get embedded at the back of your brain because they confuse you and make you question things you don't receive the answer to until you reach a moment where only the first hand experience helps solve that emotional crossword.

The moments you could never forget or let go; that could completely change your life in one second and give it new meaning.

And then there are moments who have a long time coming yet you are never prepared for when they really arrive and can turn your life's path in either direction.

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Sooni Tarapirevala does such a beautiful job at blatantly distinguishing the mood of a certain moment since the start with showing evident change in the color palette and atmosphere of the film.

The sepia tinted, noisy appearance of the frame signifies the big moments in life that thrusts major personality development in character and helps form traits in them.

These color palettes capture how some memories feel like they happened a lifetime ago even when they were an ongoing event in the present. While there are some moments which feel like they are happening in the present even though they exist only in the past. The moments that leave an impression.

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to be continued...

Link to Part 2

[thuskindlyshescatters]

Hello! I’ve written a few pieces of fanfic for rwby, but there was one I’ve been wanting to write for a while. But then finally I sat down and started writing out a draft for the first chapter wen I realized I had no idea what I was doing. I’ve planned out a few chapters, but that’s all. I honestly think you’re one of the best fanfic writers out there, so I figured you’d be the best person to ask about how to create a good fanfic. Thanks in advance!

Wow, that's high praise, thanks! I'll do my best to be helpful by listing my basic story-building phases:

Daydream. Depending on how important writing this story is to you/how excited you are to do it, you'll find that you want to spend idle time thinking about it -- getting dressed in the morning, sitting in transportation, going to sleep at night. For me, I don't write a single word until my mental vision of the story has gotten refined enough to differentiate scenes by location; often we come up with the emotional or plot developments in a scene, and it's only when we know where it is physically situated in a story that we can start building its actual execution.

Take notes. In fanfiction writing, it's especially important to preserve elements of canon, so if something occurs to you mid-daydream that you don't think is immediately relevant but still might be important for consistency's sake, write it down and save it for later. For me, this includes main characters' handedness, uncommon but useful words, future snippets of dialogue -- anything that I might find useful.

Make an outline. In this chapter, X development must occur. Therefore, there must be scene Y; that must be preceded by scene A and followed by scene B, but now that I think about it scene A would be a good stopping point for the previous chapter, and characters 1 and 2 should be in scene Y so maybe only character 2 should be in scene B, et cetera, et cetera. If you've been doing your daydreaming, you've been excited enough to have a pretty good idea of all of those factors, but if you don't, the outline is the crucial moment to fill in the details, right down to certain lines/moments.

Write it! I'm serious, pick any moment and write it out. Write the end before the beginning, I don't care (the last scene of Chapter 20 of Volume Two is written and has been since Chapter 10 or so), so long as it gets written. A maxim I've found useful is that the first draft is to make it exist, the second is to make it functional, and if you can, don't stop writing until you can make it effective. To make it exist, start a scene as late as possible and end it as early as you can. To make it functional, cut out anything else you can. To make it effective, here's my perspective on the essence of storytelling in a couple sentences:

Characters change as a consequence of the story, but characters' decisions drive the PLOT. Story (your thematic and character-driven argument) and plot (your events in sequence) are not the same. You are allowed one coincidence per scene/story, and it can only be at the beginning; everything else is motivated by the main character making choices that reflect a response to previous change, and in doing so indicate a further change. The story (the scene, chapter, or work) ends the moment the character's journey of growth reaches where you were trying to get them.

I hope this was helpful, and I wish you the best of luck! If you need more help, feel free to send another ask :)