#their dialogue tags and the rhythm of their sentences pleeease

[frecht]

i wish theyd let me copyedit everyones pieces for creative wriitng i promise i wont make eveyrthing a long comma filled sentence (one person complained abt those in my story) but the paragraph break situation (or lack thereof) in this story is sooo dire and there's some sentences that are just really awkward and i knoww i could fix it