#the introspection is on as always but the stagey stage parts are RUINING ME
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UGHHHHH *poking shadow and amy aggressively with a stick* EXCHANGE SOME DYNAMIC DIALOGUE GODDAMNIT
#bee blabs#this whole thing is so fucking flat#the speech the action- DEAD#the introspection is on as always but the stagey stage parts are RUINING ME#i'm genuinely going insane over this fic#and not in a good way#like- shadow and amy say NOTHING meaningful to each other#save for a couple one off lines that are like- woah there might be hints of a connection here#other than that it's like:#“we gotta do this”#“okay cool !”#“here's this thing woah !! ”#SHUT UP#i'm nowhere near the deep shit i wanted to play into#or more on amy's agenda and alignment at this stage#NONE OF THAT#AND YOU WANNA KNOW WHY#IT'S BC I HAVEN'T BEEN WRITING ENOOUGH AT ALL LATELY#fucken- someone save me i'm losing it
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