#the biggest thing i did is probably cut demure and nile out entirely
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outtake: kyoben flirt prompt
this is the first outtake i have which was written for the flirt prompt i did uhh more than three years ago now?? omg time flies DSLGHAGAD i was really struggling with how to enter into the scene i had in mind and wrote multiple beginnings for it. this is the longest one (and also probably the longest outtake i have rn)
âHave you ever been in love?â Demure asks, apropos of absolutely nothing at all.
Kyoya looks up from where he has been sprawled on the couch for the last hour, scrolling mindlessly through his phone. Nile, in a similar position as Kyoya but with a thick book, about gardening of all things, in his hands, slowly lowers the book in his lap and closes it. They exchange a puzzled look.
âOf course,â Benkei chimes from the kitchen.
He walks into the living room with a full tray of still steaming cookies, big oven mitts on his equally big hands. As soon as he puts the tray down on the coffee table, Nile, Demure and Kyoya simultaneously reach for a cookie but hiss and pull their hands back when they burn themselves on the treats.
âCareful, itâs hot,â Benkei says cheerfully, and evidently too late.
Demure is cradling his burnt hand against his chest but his gaze is fixed on Benkei and his expression is expectant and curious. He is obviously thinking about Benkeiâs confirmation to the question Demure just blurted out to their group.
Kyoya canât say that he isnât intrigued as well. He has known Benkei the longest out of all of them and he doesnât remember Benkei ever talking about someone he liked. Granted, during their earlier days, Kyoya wasnât exactly the most approachable person and even Benkei had a hard time getting close to him but after that? After the Face Hunters, after the Dark Nebula, after they joined Gingka and his whole friendship is magic schtick? He is surprised to feel a twinge of hurt at the thought that Benkeiâs silence on this topic might stem from a lack of trust.
Or maybe he is surprised about how not suprising his reaction is. They have come far, the two of them, from the boys they once were. The leader of the most dangerous gang in Metal City and his lackey, a bully. To partners, companions, friends.
Equals.
âI didnât know you were in love with someone,â Kyoya says.
Everyone turns to look at him, the surprise on Nile and Demureâs faces openly displayed. Benkei stares at him for a second too long to casually brush off, then grins sheepishly and looks away from Kyoya.
âOh, it was a long time ago. It doesnât matter.âÂ
Kyoya frowns. âWas it someone in the gang?â
Benkei hesitates which is as good as confirmation.
Kyoya knew there were a few boys in the Face Hunters that Benkei was close with. He just didn't know that they were close enough for those kinds of feelings to develop between them. Maybe he doesnât know Benkei as well as he thought he did. Maybe he misinterpreted how they stood to one another. Itâs not like Kyoya is an expert on friendships.Â
âWhere is this even coming from?â
Nile breaks the tension by questioning Demure. Demure shrugs and scratches his cheek absent-mindedly.Â
âI donât know. Just curious, I guess,â he explains. âI wanted to know if you guys have ever been in love and how you handled it. Itâs interesting.âÂ
Nile throws Demure a skeptical look. Demure returns that look with raised eyebrows and a meaningful glint in his eyes, obviously trying to convey something to Nile. Kyoya furrows his brows in confusion. Demure may not be the most subtle person in the world but whatever his reasoning for this nonsense is, it wonât reveal itself to Kyoya.Â
Finally, Nile breaks the tense stare-off and nods slowly. âRight,â he says although he looks like not anything is right. âOkay. So, Benkei. What did you do after you realized you were in love?âÂ
Kyoya looks at Nile in disbelief, then at Benkei, who also looks at Nile in disbelief. It feels like they just witnessed Demure do some voodoo magic on Nile to get him to pursue his line of questioning. It feels a little bit illegal. It definitely feels illegal.Â
âWell?â Nile prompts him when Benkei doesnât answer.Â
âI didnât really do anything. What do you two want from me?â Benkei complains, a bewildered expression on his face.Â
âWhat do you mean, you didnât really do anything?âÂ
âYou should have tried to flirt with the person you loved,â Demure suggests.Â
Benkei turns red. The blush fills his cheeks instantly, one moment he looks like always, then Kyoya blinks and the Benkei he knows is a stuttering mess.Â
âI could never, uh. I donât know how, uh, how to fâflirt.âÂ
It doesnât slip Kyoyaâs attention how Nileâs eyes light up with sudden understanding and how he indiscreetly throws a thumbs up at Demure.
Then something weird happens. Well. Something even weirder.Â
Demure takes his phone out of the back pocket of his jeans and stares hard at the display. Then he declares loudly:Â
âOh no. I didnât realize how late it was. Me and Nile have to go. But donât worry, Benkei, Iâm sure Kyoya can teach you about flirting.âÂ
Benkeiâs eyes are wide and his mouth half open in betrayal. Kyoya is beginning to feel like someone told a joke and Kyoya is the only one not in on the punchline because Benkei definitely realized something in the last few seconds, if the way he is staring at Nile and Demureâs quickly retreating backs is any indication.
#i still used many of the phrases and ideas from this in the final version#the biggest thing i did is probably cut demure and nile out entirely#i think both versions could have worked well but i decided to go simpler in the end and not crowd a very short ficlet w too many voices#but i understand if some people would have preferred this version to the final one#oh well#lady's outtakes#i wrote this#mfb
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