#thank you op for this wonderful rhyming comic

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exposing stellar tags (mostly from op lol):

#grian is not trying to rhyme at all in this part. he is being deliberately unhelpful#he lowkey tries to fuck it up on purpose in that second to last panel but the secret keepers just switch rhyme schemes#the one time he completes an end rhyme is because he lost his temper

#like the secret keeper effortlessly switching the rhyme scheme at the end and adapting to his rebellion is absolutely a power play#as is the beginning to a lesser degree#bc from where he's standing grian has no way of knowing he's rhyming with the text in the establishing shot#basically yeah you've got it exactly right that was 100% intentional#he causes problems on purpose but ultimately he's always playing into the same rhythm#he fights it like a gravitational pull but. yknow. even a pesky bird can't fly forever :)

#the FLOWER FALLING. THE SCULK ON HER CHEST I KNOW

i say if you’re gonna have the mysterious entities speak in rhyme you might as well commit (EDIT: part 2!)

(posting an unprecedented Part 1 of At Least 3 bc i actually have the entire script and most of the storyboarding for this done already)