#srry for long post but ur writing is too fabulous to not rant abt it ✨

[daydreaming-en-pointe]

MY TIME HAS COME ok so I think you write in more of an in-the-moment timeframe iykwim? Like I love how you can describe how the reader’s feeling through actions and precursors (i don’t think this is the right word…? idk) to the sentence while also diverting just the right amount of spotlight in one sentence to not have to focus on it for the rest of the paragraph (for example, in time out pt. 1 - ‘Despite his boyish, adrenaline-fuelled shout at the mic, the quiet laugh you let out was one of pride rather than embarrassment.’)

What I’m saying might not make any sense but it’s a recurring thing in your writing and I think it’s very very cool 💥💥 like you can convey the way the main characters are feeling while also not giving too much thought and focus to it - and you make it look completely effortless!! also I think you don’t use rly complex words in your writing and you somehow incorporate just enough complexity to make it unique and intriguing while also keeping it simple for readers of different levels of investment to follow along easily.

All in all I think your writing style is AWESOME and your dialogue is VERY SMOOTH 🤩🤩🤩

hey. 😁 i might as well ask since i haven't but what do you think of my writing style ‼️‼️

do you like it do you have any critiques n could you be specific about it i would appreciate any feedback really 👍