#sorry for the negative chunk in the beginning there I promis I’m usually not negative on this blog EHBEHB
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seawing-vibes · 3 years ago
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Othermind, dreamvisitor, and ocean?
Othermind: If you could rewrite one book/plot point, what would it be?
Oh definitely the uh. Sl*v*ry,, or at the very least re-write the way it was written because that was just. Very poorly handled,, I dont feel like I need to go into detail on it, but just know that almost immediately that should be removed or changed. It was just handled poorly and in all honestly should’ve started in Io’s perspective or something and then moved to Blue’s or SOMETHING else. In all honesty I feel that its just a topic that Tui shouldn’t try and tackle here, it doesn’t fit and its a topic that she obviously doesn’t know how to write about
I would also hav re-written The Dangeous Gift to be more plot driven than slice-of-life vibes, ya know? It also felt very.. childish the way it was written (the constant full cap’s dialog paired with far too many excitation points…), also yes I’m aware that WoF is still marketed as Children’s Books but compared to the other books it just feels so frustrating, especially once you shift to Jerboa’s scene!! There’s far better ways to convey Snowfall’s childish nature than that and it just frustrates me. I dunno!! There’s a lot I would tweak there (looking at you Animus objects and destruction of the GREAT WALL.) but I wont get into that, overall I liked the book but ohhh boy would I want to change it a bit :,]]
Dreamvisitor: Which character would you be best friends with?
Sunny and I would be besties INSTANTLY just because of how much our personality’s vibe, and Starflight acts almost exactly like a few of my friends so <333 I would also be besties with Tsunami due to the fact that we’re both cool and awesome
Ocean: Favorite part of the WoF universe?
Anon I feel like you knew what you were doing with this one,,
THE SEA KINGDOM,, Aquatic is so so cool please, why dont we talk about this more?? Its so creative and neat, I wish it got more development because its so so cool. The Seawing culture that’s been developed is also so nice? They worship sea animals and even hold many at high regard to treat them with respect and dignity. The details of how they orchestrate party’s and even down to their weapons,, its all so so fascinating and so cool!!! So cool please lets talk about it more ESPECIALLY THEIR RELATION TO ANIMUS MAGIC-
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