#something else I want to accomplish with part 1 is reinforcing the reality that Thala is in fact a lesbian
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Finished chapter 2 earlier! So far, haven’t made too many significant changes beyond rewording passages that needed it, but I think the next chapter will be when I start making some big(ish) changes
#wip: seafoam#book: tss#sf 2nd draft#i can’t remember if i have a tag for the 2nd draft yet but i’m gonna make one#the biggest change so far is reestablishing or redefinining her relationship with Zeno#instead of being her best friend he’s now her best friend’s older brother which establishes not only their inherent closeness#but also a necessary distance if that makes sense alsdfjas#the change i’m referring to for ch3 is Sosta’s introduction and the way he is perceived (beore shit hits the fan at least)#something else I want to accomplish with part 1 is reinforcing the reality that Thala is in fact a lesbian#i don’t think i failed in the first draft however I want to make sure that it’s like very clear lol#anyways feeling good about it so far and i’m looking forward to making some real progress here soon
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