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your-queen-shuri · 3 months ago
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When it comes to HMC trilogy, I take almost no criticism, as it just a wonderful written-story with alive and relatable characters. However, If I had to name a part I'd found reasonable to criticise and may critises myself, I'd say it's Lettie Hatter's arc.
Not because it was entirely bad, but because it could be so much better If it wasn't written in the 80s and had a different mindset attached to it. And because the way it starts and the way it progress has little to no connection to how it ends.
Because the whole thing of the Hatter sisters, all of them, was breaking social norms and expectations.
Sophie firmly believed that she would stay in the Hatter Shop for the rest of her life with the most boring existence possible — and yet she married the most chaotic, whiny and slither-outing wizard in all of Ingary, with whom everyday is a full-blown fantasy adventure.
Martha, as the youngest, was expected to have the above mentioned fantasy adventures, be a mighty witch, even a hero, maybe — but she decided to chose a happy, steady basic life with a husband and ten kids, and she didn't want to listen to anyone who said otherwise.
Lettie's arc, just as the whole stories of her sisters, were tied on what people wanted from her. She was the most beautiful out of all girls, If we believe Sophie's words, and people almost wished she would marry and find a life spouse, as she had one million proposals a day even before switching with Martha. But that wasn't what she wanted — I'm sure she would reject all of them as often as her sister did, because she wasn't a big fan of it, just as working in the bakery. Lettie wanted to be a witch, and she practically became one, switching with Martha, working with ms. Fairfax.
But while Sophie's arc of expecting to be plane and ordinary ended on being gifted and adventurous, Martha's arc of avoiding busy life ended on finding a person she loves and planning to build a big family, Lettie's arc of searching for greatest achievement and avoiding marriages ended on...a marriage.
A marriage that, as stated by herself — "Ben doesn't like people to know I'm a witch" — kinda disregards her initial want to show that she has intelligence outside of her beauty, the one that he can show and that she can use.
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(This line has absolutely no context whatsoever and we can only guess why Ben wants so, because it's actually so out of his character, even all the bits that were described before. But nope, no context, no explanations. It may be because she was pregnant at the time, but, again nothing like this was ever said and it's a pretty lame excuse anyway. Magical mirrors in their house also do not obey Lettie, at all)
And, as much as I absolutely love Ben and as much as I absolutely love Lettie, I don't think pairing them was a good choice. Mostly because Lettie was seventeen (one year younger than Sophie) in the end of HMC when their "pairing" started, and Ben is described to be noticeably older that Howl in CITA, which brings us to the conclusion he's at least in his thirties. And that's...a bit uncomfortable of an age gap, especially If we take into the account they canonically had a kid about a year later. And also Ben was supposed to be her mentor.
...And If he stayed her mentor and nothing more, it would be actually great. Because I believe Lettie deserves the same development her sister had, to get was she initially wanted and what she was fighting for. To be an apprentice of the Royal Wizard, to be a powerful a well-known witch, to show the world who told her that she has to marry to succeed in life that she in fact, doesn't, to show all this guys that tried to propose to her that she didn't need them, at all. But definitely not a wife, or a mother.
Not because being a mother or/and a wife is a bad character development. It worked perfectly with Sophie, because it represents her chaotic happily ever after better than anything else, it worked with Martha because she wanted to had ten kids and marry. It's just not for Lettie's character in particular precisely because everything in her concept of "beatiful middle sister" showed that was she's supposed to be.
Because Mrs. Pentstemmon said Lettie awaits a great, good fate, that she'll be as powerful as the Witch of the Waste — and I want to see it. Because I didn't.
#i came at night unininvated to throw out a few thoughts#dont take me seriosiy#any analysys just pure srceams#Bc wdum she made plan how to go to mr Fairwax to study magic and then move to another wizard for this and just quit it bc of idc mariage?#and even damn mirrors didn't obey her#Isn't she should learn how to use it?!#Girl u live here a year or two weeks??#Bc in my head she wanted to learn everything she can and prob read packs of books from Ben's little library#i see (we with Nadia see) Suliman as nerd who perceives magic as another new science#that must be studied#written down#he def sometimes compared all this with physics and chemistry of his world#JUSTIN CANONICALLY A NERD I DIE ON THIS HILL#soldier in cita randomly decided that people whom he see for the first time in his life should hear ab war strategy that he lose in#In damn details#It was part of his plan to rustle coins to passers-by but still#Abdullah half of way describe him as thundering bore#And he was even under a spell#Imagine what a nerd he is with clear mind#He was the one who was a tour guide for Ben in first time he come to ingary#That hc that lettie can have fun she never had make sense i love it#She soak all of knowledge that given to her and wants to test it immediately#As apprentice Lettie creates a little more chaos and problems than Michael for Howl#she probably burned Bens cabinet once u can't tell me she didn't#(Lettie and ben having normal besties and mentot/mentee relationship takes place in my heart sorry)#And lol her stopping wars bc she tired to hear Justin rumbling about how complicated his semipolitiycal problems... yada yada boring#And she (maybe) like there now they loyal to you bc i throw a spell at them#now u can simply solve it and spend more time with your boyfriend#And she probably messed up her own wedding bc it was boring#and encouraged howl to bring a guitar there
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