#she wont forgive you if it was bad 🤣

[chibi-chaninks]

One last thing.... 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Just imagine her wiggling her eyebrows at u all fast.

@viviook

[not-too-many-eyes]

Ruo thing: ktkmappi 🤣🤣

Maq your so cruel lol (joke) but I see hm......well I like the idea of the dynamic in concept with what we know about them. Dangerous right wing vigilante x Girl who wants you to go into this forest with her cause she wont do anything bad to you trust. It's fun to imagine codependency cause Kotoko is like "I need to become someones' fangs" and then Mahiru is:

This can’t go on, something’s got to give, I even love saying the words, “I love you” My emotions are out of control, that’s inconvenient? I don’t care!

Giving you love to the point of pulling you down It's just because I still get worried, please forgive me Even when I test you, even the times we do the breakup ritual, Is because I love you

Like it's fun to imagine Kotoko trying to actually succeed in whatever tests of love is being presented here. I wonder what circumstances would cause Mahiru to initiate yuri when she's so heterosuxality pilled, and I wonder what makes Kotoko go "Hm, maybe human companionship IS actually something I want" lol. I think this can be better achieved by uh...other dynamics but I can appreciate it for its components.

[childotkw]

ALRIGHT BABY lets go.

i read chapters 1-5 (half way into 6) last night and here are my initial thoughts:

i loved !! the writing…the way u write hadrian is so fun and i like the contrast to harry bc,, harry is an absolute slob compared to hadrian and he's so fun to read!1!! i love the choice of having him go to beauxbatons and i'm just imagining him in the uniform bc its so pretty.

IDK what you meant by "forgive the first lot of chapters and their quality" because its really good !! the only qualm i have is that the setting is a lot to take in for the first two chapters. i've actually had a hand @ it before and i was a little overwhelmed with the world (i wasn't truly ready at that time for its sheer magnitude of magnificence) and i wasn't dedicated to starting it off so !! i'm glad i gave it another try.

i really like the characters & ur ocs ! jacob and hadrians fwb relationship is really fun and so is his banter w raina.. i like claire so far and i do hope to see more of her !!1!!! which im guessing is the case for all of them. . hopefully. (am i attempting at foreshawdowing my predictions in ur own fanfic?) it physically. hurts me. to read hadrian not open up to jacob because of lily and his situation in general….. which slides me into the next topic i'm talking about.

lily gives me. extreme iffy vibes like,, not 'i want to punch her in the face' but its still wrong. her parenting gives off a lot of 'raising a soldier' vibes imo and its bad,, hadrian shows it by not opening up at all like i said earlier. i've seen a few responses & asks about it on your blog so i assume it'll be something that'll be addressed later on in the fic. i do think that she's a good step forward from the dursleys, however, still not perfect. + i think harry would have had a lot more passion for studying /learning (like hadrian) and learning knowledge if he hadn't lived in a household where they shut him down whenever he asked questions/had curiosity about something

there's a lot of plot questions with voldemort and the triwizard tournament etc that i have and i hope to see being answered later on!! like the year the tournament is set in (was the year harry turning 17 intentional?) etc etc. i have bets that hadrian's 'blank paper' trick is going to backfire. hard. and he's going to be the champion for beauxbatons etc etc last id like to say (chapter 6): i like how you had harry & hermione meet each other !! they are full on interrogating istg and its so fun.. i wonder if ron will appear ?? i have guesses he probably wont because ron is extremely average from an objective standpoint. anyway !! im very hooked into the fic and hope u have a great day :>>> i probably wont say something as huge as this next time i check in because this was just.. first impression thoughts and ALOT !!

Oooh this was so fun to read! Though I will admit I was struggling to remember what happened in chapters 1 - 6. That was so long ago in my memory! 🤣

I'm very eager to see how your thoughts on characters or events change as you go - it's making me really nostalgic in a way. And some of the things you've picked up on are making me clap my hands in excitement because ~foreshadowing~ and I'm insanely proud that I managed to keep the plot on track enough that even elements from those first chapters end up paying off down the track!

Have fun, darling! CS is a wild ride in some parts hahaha

Thank you for sharing! 🥰🥰🥰

[lunaflvms]

girl- this is why i take back my apology. i didnt mean it. well, at least not to you.... and maybe i will take off anon, its not like i post anything anyways lmao. ur friends r so much better then you!!! at least they're not much of a bitch as u are. i feel bad for hating on liv, as i realized her heart is so pure to forgive and forget. but now, im realizing, maybe its not liv i should've went after. maybe it was you. your attitude and everything is hideous. so idgaf if u forgive me or not. i was apologzing to liv anyways, not you. ur so nasty and trash like who would even like you. people like u make me want to burn my head off. i hope when u go to bed a monster under ur bed tickles ur feet and drags u under forcing u to eat live cockroaches🤣 and ik u and liv r like "bffs" so after i send this, probably just gonna be more drama w her too. but idc anymore, i tried to be a better person and accept what i did was wrong, but if ur gonna keep being a bitch then i didnt mean shit i said. wash ur filthy mouth out with soap why dont you.

- anon😍💢

hello anon 😋👆 mann u said u realised ur mistake but still send hate on anon 🥺🥺 wow do i piss u off that much do i have that effect on you 🥺🥺 dont worry my parents are the same 🤣🤣🤣 maybe thats why they treat me so bad 😱😱 ik liv is so sweet honestly i dont get how shes so sweet sometimes like all the things youve said to her and her moots, not everyone can forgive and forget you said some really disgusting things like in my previous ask you spelt chohees name wrong like chohehe? which is so easy to get right? seems racially motivated to me 🤨 like are u mocking her name or what, and magic dont even get me started you literally called her disgusting for having he/they pronouns and being a lesbian, that’s homophobic, you expect someone to just forgive you with just one apology? after all you’ve said wow, if only it was that easy, words hurt you know, what if these hate asks actually got to someone and they did k1ll themselves im talking about people like you sending hate on anon, you may not be so bad but other people like you sending hate can effect someone and one simple apology can change all of that? wow u must be so pathetic thinking ur actions wont get consequences im so sorry for being a bitch to you because u sent nasty asks to my moots 🥺 im sorry that i cant put u in ur place cuz people like you are the reason people get hurt on the internet 🥺 just because u can say something rude doesnt mean i cant say something back? you didnt even try to be a better person i didnt even see ur apology until after i posted a response to you, if ur upset about that think about how u sent hate asks to all of us, if u let my response to ur hate ask upset you think about how ur hate asks effected us 🤨 besides i only defended myself and my moots and called u pathetic which you are 🙁 you cant expect everyone to accept ur apology and forgive and forget like liv did, shes just so kind and sweet and you decided to send hate to her for no reason, why dont u wash ur nasty mouth cuz all i remember is you started this and i just responded back the same way you did 😒 if u wanna be the better person why dont u stop sending hate and leave me alone idc anymore