#posted it first on twt and somehow twt loved it?????????/ whered these guys come from aaaaaaa

[cloudofsalt]

an idea was made

(reference is down below)

[writernomore]

Two sides of the same coin.

Summary: After Harry had defeated his Professor, Professor Quirell Y/n lives through out the rest of her year before going back home to tell her family the events she had on her first year in Hogwarts.

Yall I am having major writers block, so sorry if things are really out of place, sorry. TwT

Words: 1.3k words.

Two sides of the same coin.

Chapter 3.

The recent turn of events had gotten you on edge, a part of you confused how Harry an 11 year old boy managed to defeat someone like Voldemort, and how did you exactly find out? You had your ways.

And a second part of you was relieved, but also you knew Voldemort or you-know-who would come back again and try to kill Harry Potter.

To finish what he had started.

It had also come to Draco that you lived with a Muggle family, I guess it was okay since you were adopted, it was a load of trash You didn’t need anyone’s or Draco’s opinions or thoughts about you or anything like that.

But Harry, Ron, and Hermione not listening and trusting you, thinking that your lying and joking them.

Like what would I gain from joking that Harry has a long lost twin sister?

I guess you wouldn’t blame them, they had some experiences with people coming from your house, Rotten, is what they thought.

I guess since the year is almost over you wanted to get to know them more, you didn’t have many friends- well any magical friends, so I guess it would be nice to have someone to talk to.

And since Hermione was muggle-born maybe you’d have some topics to talk about like magic and muggle stuff that goes on outside the wizarding world and the walls of Hogwarts.

You were sitting under a tree reading one muggle book novel you had brought with you along with some other muggle novels that were famous nowadays and that were quite interesting.

Then you saw The trio approaching you when you glanced up from your book before going back to reading since you had some free time on your hands.

They stopped in front of you and you put the bookmark in and close the book looking up at them “I am at your service what is it that you need?” You said in a weird accent.

They all looked at each other and saying in unison if you were lying or not and you said you didn’t, if you were casted a truth spell or potion upon you would be saying the truth.

“So it’s true then…I have a twin sister” “But” you interfered.

“They weren’t sure if she was alive or not or even what she looked like”

“Then we just have to look for a girl that looks like Harry then” Ron said.

You looked at Ron like he just grew a second head, standing  up and brushing off any dirt or grass on your uniform, You stated “Twins can also look different from each other Ron, they said she was younger so probably by a few minutes”.

“She could also look different apart from Harry, probably having different colored hair”

They were silent, you were right.

“Hey..um I know you guys have not had the best interaction with Slytherins so far but why not we start over and become friends despite from being in different houses” You said smiling.

“Is this a trick?” Ron said you gave off a laugh shaking your head “All of my intentions are nothing but good, so can we start all over and become friends?”

They looked at each other giving each other a look silently debating when they nod and your smile only had grown wider.

“Then, Hi there I’m Y/n Brighton it’s a pleasure to meet you” You said smiling.

“Harry Potter”

“Ronald Weasley”

“Hermione Granger”

“It’s a pleasure to meet the three of you” You said. The four off you laughing.

Maybe this year really wasn’t that bad after all, Somethings were worth it in the end.

*-* Interaction with the Weasley twins.

Some students from Slytherin bullied you for being too soft to be in Slytherin and that you didn’t fit in, saying the sorting hat had made a mistake.

You didn’t want to listen to what they had to say but you ended up crying because their teasing/bullying had gotten too far.

You were running to an empty hallway and sat yourself upon a wall and wrapped your arms around your knees to cry, Harry and Ron had some things to do and Hermione was studying in the library, it’s not like your allowed to enter the library in tears filled with students that were looking for books or studying without wanting to bother anyone, you went to a hallway no one hardly ever took and cried there.

You cried for a solid 15 minutes their words stinging like a bunch of bees, annoying bees, then you heard two boys walking closely from where you sat crying , lifting up your head you see two boys staring down at your tear stained face.

Both having red hair and the same hair features.

Sniffling you buried your head into your arms again out of embarrassment and not wanting to see any one at the moment right now.

The two boys looked at each other and sat next to you, each one taking up both your sides.

“What’s the matter love?” The one at the left had asked.

You just shook your head from your folded arms sobbing.

“Come on sweetheart you can tell us” The one seated at your right had said.

“Really? Are you sure?” You said pouting at them.

“Of course” They said in unison.

You told them about the Slytherins telling you that you didn’t belong with them in the house of Slytherin.

They listened to you not out of pity seeing you cry because You were only 11 and that you were not as bad people would sought out to think you were.

The three of you stood up, and they offered to walk you around the castle to get some fresh air and maybe do some pranks here and there.

The Weasley twins were really fun to be around with, they cheered you up.

And so did your  Three best friends.

They were like family for you, and it was okay, being in different houses but not treating each other any less in public.

Your time at Hogwarts was great, but then somethings had to end.

Your year in Hogwarts was up and that you guys were boarding the train to go to King Cross station to go back home, you being in the same compartment as your friends not ready to separate from them yet, talking about summer plans, Hermione saying she was going to study for a bit during break knowing well, her ambitious goals she would probably study than she had said.

You saying you might be spending time with your grandparents for a while or something because your parents and Big brothers and little brothers and sister were going to be somewhere, it’s not like they hated you but there was something important to attend to that you weren’t allowed to know of yet.

You guys were now at the station bidding your goodbyes.

When Hermione mentioned your necklace.

“Oh! Do you guys remember the day I told you about Harry’s sister?”

“Yeah..?”

“Well the same day is when I received a letter about something mysterious about me that’s got to have something to do about my Biological family and this necklace was in it.”

You opened it to reveal your real parents.

Shock written on their faces, but you somehow didn’t managed to see it cause glancing to your right you see your driver, who was muggle-born standing there with your luggage you said I final ‘Bye’ and went to walk with your driver with the luggage to the car going to your Grandparents place.

“Did you guys just see who was in Y/n’s locket? ”Hermione said.

“Bloody hell “Ron exclaimed.

“Guys, I think she might be my sister.”

You were in the car telling the driver on what an amazing experience you had at Hogwarts, and him smiling at you remembering what he was like when he first went to Hogwarts.

Guarantying you would do plenty of magnificent things despite what people would think of you.

You were going to be destined to do great things.

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Chapter 3 is now released!

I had fun with writing the third chapter of the series.

Anyways I hoped you guys like todays latest chapter for Two sides of the same coin.

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Writers block was difficult to over come but as I searched in google all I could possibly do now is just write the writers block away.

[thekidultlife]

idk if this is where i post drabble requests but can i have idol! cheol with a famous singer foreign! reader where she admits her ideal type is cheol on a show, then like a week later the boys expose cheol for having a big crush on you on a show. they end up meeting somehow, maybe on a show or through working on a song together w seventeen and they’re all cute and blushy around eachother but at the end cheol asks for her number ? it’s long but i think it’d be rly cute! - dimple anon

Author's Note: Hello, dimple anon! This was supposed to be posted earlier, we're so sorry! 😂 Also, this is just a snippet of the idol AU I am making through this imagine, so please wait for it to unfold! Thank you for sending your request, too!!! You can send one again, too! Just use the format "word + SVT member" (which we strictly follow haha) and we promise to deliver! ❤

I mentioned Sam Okyere here, an amazing man who doesn't deserve the hate he receives from racist people in and out of South Korea. If you do not know what'a happening to him, please read about it here.

Word Count: 830+

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“I’m coming, I’m coming!!!” Seungcheol bounded across the room and jumped onto the couch, his face all red as he kept typing furiously on his phone.

"Hyung, the show is about to begin!!! Guys, it's on now," Mingyu declared. It was their rest day at the dorms, and they were anticipating all morning for Sam Okyere's morning show to come out on TV.

They've been longtime fans of Sam Okyere, but this morning, they weren't just waiting for Sam Okyere himself to appear onscreen.

Giggling like teenagers, the boys filed into the living room and scrambled onto whatever couches or chairs they could find around the massive television set. Seungkwan and Chan bickered about who gets to sit closer to the TV. Mingyu frantically planted a leg on the place beside him. “Seungcheol-hyung! Jeez, where is that guy?”

“What are you doing? The show’s about to start!”

“I know! And I’m documenting that I’m about to watch it.” Seungcheol kept typing on his phone. Every now and then he would be hitting Mingyu on the shoulder or he would hug him close as he did his best to release pent-up excitement. “SHE’S ABOUT TO COME OUT!!! Wait, should I video this? Like record it? Or do I just watch? What do I do? I can’t. I’m too excited I just can’t—”

“—Ouch.” Mingyu drew back from Seungcheol, annoyed and massaging his poor shoulder. “You have a Twitter account just for stanning her?”

“She’s my ultimate crush, Mingyu.” Seungcheol looked at Mingyu with besotted eyes. “My ultimate crush. And, actually, I have two Twitter accounts for her. Then an Insta. Snappy. The works. Everything.”

“Crazy,” Mingyu muttered, suddenly scared as he thought of Seungcheol snooping around TWT and Instagram with secret fan accounts.

“I’m president of one of her fanbases, too!” Seungcheol declared with bleary eyes and a voice full of emotion as he briefly showed Mingyu his phone. “This is how much I stan her.”  

“You’re crazy,” Mingyu declared in his adorable English, shaking his head, before turning away.

“What are we doing?” Jisoo asked, laughing as he caught himself also participating in the rush to the couches. “Why are we acting like teenage boys?” Even as he slapped Jeonghan’s legs away from the spot that he wanted to squeeze himself into, he added as he shook his head, “Why are we like this?”

Even though Jisoo knew the answer and he was just voicing out his thoughts, everyone answered (and not without sassiness in their voices), “Duh.” “Did you really have to ask that, hyung?”

“The host is about to announce her!!!”

“I’m going to faint, I’m going to faint,” Seungcheol muttered to himself as he shakily zoomed the camera in on the TV.

“Hello, everyone!!!”

At the sound of your voice, everyone in the room started screaming, covering their blushing faces.

“She hasn’t even sung yet and we’re all going crazy,” Chan lamented, leaning on Hansol as he did so. “How is she that pretty onscreen? And she doesn’t look like she’s wearing too much makeup, either.”

Seungcheol dried his eyes, which were tearing up as he collected his emotions while videoing everything that was going on the screen. “She’s so beautiful,” he gushed adoringly, “so beautiful.”

. . .

“Now that we’ve finished talking about your concert, I’d just like to ask if it’s your first time coming here to South Korea, or have you visited before?” the host, a cheerful, beautiful man named Sam, asked you brightly.

You laughed self-consciously and nodded. “Yes, I’ve been here before! Actually, I come here almost every year since 2015. I wasn’t as big a singer then yet, so I had more freedom coming in and out of the country. I love this country. Feels like home to me! I stay here for about two weeks, tops, after concerts—” you stop in your tracks, your hand flying to your mouth.

Sam wiggled his eyebrows comically. “A concert? Which group? There are a lot of groups here! And we’re so glad that you go to one—or two?”

“One,” you acknowledged, blushing a crimson red and smiling. “Just one. But I do know a lot of groups, though. It’s just that I’m an avid fan of this particular group…” you debated revealing which group it was, and you kept laughing with Sam because you have been outed.

“Can you tell us which one?”

“Of course!” you answered, smiling at the camera. “SEVENTEEN, if you are watching this, I just hope you know that I’m your biggest fan and I love you guys!” You hesitated, before adding, as your face turned very red but very happy, “Especially you, Choi Seungcheol!”

. . .

As everyone watched the screen, they were dumbstruck.

Slowly, the twelve boys looked to their leader, who had dropped his phone on the floor the moment he heard you say those words. Seungcheol’s mouth hung open, his eyes so wide and so sparkly that it looked like the flecks of light on his eyes would jump out like stars.

“Especially. Me?”

“She probably doesn’t know what she’s saying,” Jeonghan commented calmly but with venomous intent, as he playfully glared at his friend. “She’s probably jet-lagged. We say crazy things when we're jet-lagged."

Soonyoung turned to Seungcheol, his adorable, tiny eyes narrowing glaringly. “I am such a hater.”

“Especially me.”

Seungcheol couldn’t breathe.

“Especially me.”

- Leanne. 🙆‍♀️

[pemfrost]

Fuuuuuuuuuuuck

10 years? It doesn't feel that long. Yet, at the same time, it feels longer?

This blog has traveled with me through so much -both personal and fandom wise- and I would be remiss to celebrate such a milestone without some reminiscing. 

But first: a huge heart-felt thank you to everyone who has followed/liked/reblogged /sent asks /commented /left kudos over the years. Even if we've never spoken directly, I see you and I appreciate you. I would have given up writing several times over without your support.

On September 26th 2011, I started this blog because I was obsessed with the Thundercat reboot. I was a fan of the original and fell in love with the reboot at the first episode. At that time, I was 23 and had not been involved with any fandom since highschool, and getting back into the swing of things was absolutely daunting. Even in that small fandom I was terrified to talk to anyone, so I did the only sensible thing: I wrote a fanfic. I still have a mutual from that fandom, though we're in completely different spheres now. 

And, well,  it snowballed from there when I found USM. I'm not the most outgoing person, but somehow managed to make friends in fandom for the first time. Some were even other fic writers who I looked up to!

USM was the gateway to meeting so many awesome people, and for the most part it was a very welcoming fandom as a whole. I've moved onto other fandoms, but always come back to USM (and marvel in general) because of my amazing mutuals and friends. You make fandom fun and worth staying in even when new things catch my interest. 

I'm not the most outgoing in fandom, and I'm always afraid I'll say the wrong thing. (Fuck, I lost a mutual several years ago because I said I was getting married lmao.) The rise of purity culture in fandom over the years has made me even more wary, but also infinitely more appreciative of those who make fandom a welcoming place. 

Tumblr itself may suck, but it's the best place for fandom at the moment, and I'm glad I came back to it. My break away last year made me appreciate tumblr more, twt just isn't as cozy. However, I needed that break for many reasons, both personal and fandom related. During that time, I couldn't write much due to depression and being physically and emotionally tired from where I was working. But, I'm in a better place now; new job, new home, new attitude. I came back with a new pen name and eager to dive back into writing. 

I've met new people this year; some I've become close with in such a short amount of time that I question if it's real sometimes. You guys sure I'm cool enough to hang with you? 😅 (I'm half kidding). Seriously, I am so thankful to you guys for chatting with me. It's always a little scary dipping my toe in a new fandom and posting fic for the first time. 

I used to do follower milestones every 100 or so, but so many blogs are inactive now I don't feel right using that number… and really, it's not about follower count, but perseverance and self-enjoyment. So, I think I'll do a yearly thing instead? An actual milestone. 

I realized only a few weeks ago that this blog was turning 10, and I really haven't put too much thought into doing a giveaway or something. Usually, I would do a fic giveaway for a milestone celebration, but I'm still catching up on summer requests, and I have been doing requests more often in general. All I can offer right now is my love and gratitude for putting up with my inconsistent bullshit ❤ (but if y'all have an idea please comment/ask/msg me -anon is on)

10 years and over 400k words of fic posted later, and here we are. 

Let's shoot for another 10 years 🍷🎉

[unnamed-atlas]

post the explanation itll be funny -🌱

Okay so this is probably going to be really long but like essentially what is happening in the dreams (there's been a series of them) is mojang creates this new version of minecraft that's basically like a simulation of Minecraft but in real life. Kinda like VR except like, you are actually in there. They sponsor what is essentially the next season of hermitcraft to take place in this simulation except like also mojang is inviting other people. I do not know what the criteria for this is or who all they invite but I know I'm there for some reason 👁👄👁 on the day of the series launch I obviously have no idea what I am doing and get invited to go along with Wels and Beef, which I agree to. This is somehow the worst decision I have ever made in a dream despite it seeming perfectly reasonable.

You see, it turns out Wels was a part of the early test players for an early version of this simulation, which was, at the time, compatible with normal servers, meaning that his season seven, unbeknownst to his audience, was filmed in this simulation. And at some point during this testing, he fucked up majorly by way of actually cloning himself for what was supposed to be a bit with Beef's cloning machine. No one quite knows what Hels is but he behaves like some sort of sentient AI, one that is not particularly happy to have been brought into existence at that. Obviously this would be bad pr for Mojang, Wels, and maybe hermitcraft as a whole, considering the questionable at best ethics of the whole thing, and so Wels, Mojang, and X basically come to an agreement to keep the whole thing quiet, play it off as some lore Wels made for his series. This is overall a good move for their publicity, considering the fan base loves Hels and they managed to stay out of trouble, but it is certainly not a move Hels is a fan of, and he is further not a fan of the fact that at the end of season seven he is abandoned in the season seven server 💀

So uh, to say the least, he fucks around and finds his way into the new server, pissed, and with an unknown amount of access to Mojang's servers. This is bad news, obviously, and it is worse news that no one knows he did that. He is in there undetected and quickly going to follow after Wels. At which point he realizes a) there are new people around b) I am one of them and I am just an entire teenager and c) I am following Wels around. So, uh, he decides okay time to start causing problems on purpose.

We go into a cave. Hels follows. We split off into seperate caverns at some point and this is an overall bad decision for me considering I quickly find myself in a dead end cave with mr evil ai clone helsknight, who is considerably scarier when he looks like a real person rather than a little pixel minecraft man. I do not remember what he said but I know he decided to be an intimidating asshole and then disappear back into the cave. So I'm like 👁👄👁' and Wels walks in a second later like hey did you run into someone I thought I heard voices and I lie bc like WTF and I make up an excuse to leave the cave and instantly get as far away as possible from that fucking cave.

Fun fact about this series though, the whole thing is being live streamed, basically 24/7, like you can turn your camera off whenever you want cause like. Privacy. Obviously. but essentially you're streaming almost the entire time you're in there. Fancy cameras and shit. And like you still have access to twt and shit while you're in the simulation cause like why not gotta interact with the fan base and all. So obviously Wels fans are like 👁👁 Hels Content. Lore 👁👁. They're loving it. So obviously Wels starts to notice the sudden influx of Hels fanart with the new kid who disappeared halfway through the first day and eventually he sees the fucking clip and is like Oh Shit. That's really fucking bad and it gets worse when I have to start answering questions about that interaction and I'm like yeah, no, that was not planned in advance. My permission was never asked to be a part of that interaction 👁👄👁. So now there are some questions and Wels and X and Mojang are all like how the fuck do we make sure this doesn't become a problem. And essentially things just get worse from there <3

I talk to Wels thinking that that was some kind of prank after the fandoms reaction and he was like fully prepared to have to come clean about Hels being real so as soon as I say that he's like Yep! Definitely A Prank. Sorry about that! Will not do it again! But obviously that does not stop Hels from continuing to be an asshole. There are some arguments. Wels comes clean thinking everyone's cameras are off. They are not. The fandom is split between people who are like so hyped for this meta helsnknight lore and people who are like uh I'm not sure if this is lore anymore guys 👁👄👁. I try to leave the server. Hels locks everyone in the fucking server. Hels cuts off communication between the people in the server and the outside world other than the streams. Mojang is trying to play it off as role-play shit on twt while they desperately try to figure out WTF is happening and how to fix it. The fandom is growing increasingly concerned and there's discourse about if making fan content of what's happening in the server is ethical considering the ambiguity of the realism of the situation. Hels is trying to egg me into helping him destroy the server with everyone in it bc we're both mad at Wels and he's gonna fuck shit up either way so I might as well help him and get out at the end instead of going down with the ship. I am not yet convinced but I am getting fucking tired of all this shit <3

And yeah that's about where it's at. Uh. I probably would not do any serious writing or anything based off these dreams since the concept kind of blurs the line between CCs and their roleplay characters and also uh I feel like mojang might not appreciate the slander there but like it's been a fun series of dreams and I also just enjoy the concept of Hels going from being like a silly asshole to a serious threat and the kinda metaness of it all so-

[msucallie]

heyo! it’s nice to meet you guys! my name is adri (21+, she/her pronouns, pst tz) and i’m so excited to be here with you all!! i’m sorry that callie’s blog is a mess right now and that i am in no way prepared with a plot page or an official bio whoops-- but! i’ll be sure to write those up soon and reblog this post with the corresponding links when that happens! 

until then, feel free to learn a little bit about callie in her welcome post here and her profile page here. also if you are interested in plotting, feel free to dm me, like this post, and/or hmu on my twt @/ jihyosmom or on discord @/ it's jihyo hours#0293 !! just let me know who you are and we can get to plotting easy!

now under the read more will be some quick facts about callie just so you guys can become a little bit familiar with her muse! again, thank you so much for having me and i hope we can all plot soon!!

callie was born and raised in london, england, coming from a short line of wizards as her parents were both muggle borns making her a second generation witch herself.

she started attending hogwarts at the age of 11 and was sorted into gryffindor. throughout her years there, she was part of gryffindor’s quidditch team as a chaser and was discovered to have a natural tallent for defense against the dark arts and charms which later become both her major and minor respectively when she began attending mokseong.

she is now a junior residing in the suseong house and of course, is one of their chasers for their quidditch team.

callie is an active member in both the dada and dueling clubs though she always politely declines taking up a leadership position.

she’s honestly your typical jock girl -- the only things going through her mind being quidditch and anything to do with martial magic. but she’s naturally fun-loving and a little bit reckless, always somehow inserting herself into situations that make eyes draw towards her without meaning to.

she honestly doesn’t have a mean bone in her body though she does become distressed whenever she sees someone breaking the rules intentionally ( she’s called a hypocrite tbh but she always emphasizes that her situations were accidents! ).

she’s sometimes called a fool because of how much she goes out her way for others. she’s self-sacrificing to a fault and it gets her into trouble most times than not.

she’s really protective when it comes to her friends and loved ones so even though she’s not exactly the most responsible of a group, she can easily be the mom friend if you let her.

a BIG EATER, especially when it comes to sweets. because she’s always moving about and doesn’t have a pause button, she tends to eat whenever she’s able to in order to keep her strength up for the next quidditch match.

wants to become a professional dueler or auror after she graduates, which ever career comes first tbh

callie really has rocks for brains when it comes to romance??? if anybody wants to romance her and teach her what love is, that would be great.

she took a gap year after graduating from hogwarts before applying for mokseong. she used this time to travel europe though she never really said what for.

some connection/plot ideas

some hogwarts friends from back in the days (fellow gryffindors are a plus)

maybe a quidditch rival or two. they play the same position for opposite teams so they always interact on and off the field.

mb an ex from hogwarts??? it was a brief relationship tbh because of how bad callie is at them. it was her first one though so can you blame her?

suseong quidditch team -- where you at thoooo

dada majors -- come thruuuuuu

maybe a potential ship??? probably slow burn if you’re into that kind of thing maybe :’)

a younger dada student or someone from dueling club that callie sort of mentors??? if you can call it that. she can be the bokuto to your hinata for you haikyuu fans out there!!

more ideas to come !! and don’t forget to come and plot with me!!

[1358456]

Review Response, July 14-27

I didn’t do one last week because... ... well, just because.

DE #031

1) I'm so happy you write sun and moon story's and I can never find any these too don't get enough love by the fandom

And I’d like to write more, if enough people gave a damn about those two.

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And now, this is what DE looks like. Nothing really has changed. The only Sun & Moon chapter still remains as the absolute minimum.

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Destiny #001

1) Just finished this and took a look at your other are the best pokemon adventures writer i have ever seen.

Thank you very much.

2) Wow one of the best stories i have read on this site

Thank you very much too.

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Destiny #014

1) Omg that cliffhanger at the end. Hmmm Green has a lot coming for him right now hm. I mean he kinda deserves it ngl, after all he did to Blue. Some friend he was, didn't even talk to her. Blue really has no reason to call him his friend. And I found Crystal's behaviour rather odd. Surely she should have realized how she treated Blue when Bleu told her no? True, Crystal didn't do anything outright to harm Blue, but still. Crystal should have been mature enough to realizer her mistake, but then I don't blame her for not as she was under a stressful situation. And being in a stressful situation makes you lose some of yourself. Speaking of stressful situations, the whole battle strategy that Platinum came up with was really good. There were some flaws, like how she thought that Peter would just allow them to back-off and heal, when he could very well just send out more pokemon and interrupt that process. But using the dexholder's powers to their advantage was very nice indeed. It helps make them perform at their best and in turn help churn out the best possible outcome.

Not that that happened of course, she didn't anticipate Blue (which who could've) but one things she should have anticipated was a battle where anything could go wrong. Again, not that you could blame her. Stressful situation, not much time... It all adds up. But kudos to her for coming up with a plan that did (at first) work better than the last. At this point it all seems like trial and error. Which again you can't rely on, because at any point it could turn into the "final battle" and then you wouldn't have a chance to correct your mistake. But then that's all they have to go on now. That and type advantages will work, you touched on that this chapter (which I thought was really nice 'cause I had been thinking about it!).

I also very much liked how you wrapped up any loose ends. Like how Peter was healing his pokemon. I hadn't even thought of that. He could spend money at the poke mart and buy a bunch of potions and whatnot but that would cost soooo much money. And that's not really the effective way to go out as there is free healing lmao. But Green also should have thought not only to close the poke centers (which is an iffy idea because what about all the other people that need to heal their pokemon, but necessary because what else can ya do) but also the poke marts because this dude somehow got all this shiny pokemon. He has his connections and resources, he might have the money to buy the potions and whatnot for his pokemon. But that's only my humble opinion as closing the poke centers itself will be very problematic.

On another topic, I was thinking about something somebody said in a previous chapter (I think it was Peter) about legendary pokemon. And how he needed them to defeat the dexholders. Which I believe was also a reason he chose Blue as an ally (I say ally hesitantly because he forced her into it) because she had previously caught three legendary pokemon. And I do think it would be a great help to the dexholders if they got some legendary pokemon as well to fight Peter. That would certainly help no? Simply training their own pokemon I don't think will be enough against this guy. But that was just a thought.

Now I had something else to say but it has slipped my mind. Ah yes, it was something quick on how Sapphire was overcoming her fear over Salamance and I just thought that her asking Crystal about her Salamence was a great idea. I mean it was inevitable, Sapphire overcoming her fear that is, but I didn't even think about Crystal and her insane poked entries lmao.

Anyways that's all for now, I would write more but I wanna read the next chapter. Thank you.

This is pretty much the only reason why I’m making this post now instead of next week or whenever I’m doing better.

I don’t think Crystal was being particularly odd in this chapter. I mean, she had no way of knowing how Blue would react. All Crystal knew was that Blue and Green were in a fight that he forgot about, and thus ended up inadvertently neglecting her. So at this point, all Crystal would assume was that Blue had just got up and left, just wandering around the world on her own. Not show up during a struggle against an overwhelming opponent, and certainly not attacking her former friends.

Platinum’s strategy is a very good one, but this battle happened before the Dex Holders were properly prepared, and before she even saw all of the opponent’s Pokemon. In short, she didn’t know all about her opponent, and she was not fully familiar with everyone on her side. So... a loss.

Closing Pokemon Centers might be problematic, but... martial law? Hm. Also, there are other ways of healing without using items or Pokemon Centers, such as Softboiled (which is usable in the field). And since the Mega Hunter was based on a real life person and I know he has at least 3 Pokemon with Softboiled...

Blue’s importance to the Mega Hunter isn’t really for the Legendary Pokemon, but... you’ll see. And while Legendaries may be useful for the Dex Holders... Destiny does use a mix of game mechanics. Some Legendaries will not be able to do sh*t.

Since Destiny is WAY before Dex Holder team overhauls, no one has a Salamence, So the only reasonable solution was to ask Crystal, who has canonically completed the Pokedex, at least to first 3 Generations. ... Makes you wonder why Crystal is still using the sh*tsack team in Destiny...

I look forward to seeing more reviews.

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Destiny #017

1) I made it this far into the story, however I find it to be very cringy...dropping it here

To each their own.

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And now Destiny looks like this.

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Legacy #007

1) TBH This story (no actually ALL your stories) deserve more attention. I really love the way you manage to bring out the character's actual personalities instead of using some random-ass character traits as I see in most fanfiction. Can't wait for the next part!

Thank you. And... well, I probably will be updating Legacy “soon”.

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Still a downhill trend, but ignoring the outlier... it’s not too bad, I guess.

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Heart #004

1) Filler chapters are good. I'm a sucker for it so yeah sjdjndn it's good TwT

Fillers are often necessary. Especially if it’s not in a discontinued time from the plot.

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And Heart now looks like this.