#pony: bitchy comeback

[broareweabouttoviberightnow]

I'm my mind Steve and Pony have the WORST most INSUFFERABLE middle/ youngest brother energy and I will not be taking notes

[outsidersstuff16]

the outsiders preference

In which! your family body shames you in front of them.

TW: Alcohol, Smoking, Mental Abuse, and Fighting

this preference includes Ponyboy, Johnny, Dallas, Soda, and Darry. (In that order.)

I hope you enjoy!

Ponyboy-

it was a casual Tuesday in school, passing period. You were walking to Algebra with Ponyboy Curtis, a close friend and classmate. You two were talking casually when you were shoulder checked by your rude, snobby, and obnoxious older sister.

"sorry about that! I mean if you weren't so fat you wouldn't clog up the hallway and I wouldn't have run into you." your older sister said in an obnoxious tone. She was an attention whore, and everybody already knew. Pony looked at you with a hint of sorrow in his eyes. He however knew you weren't offended and knew she was saying what she said for attention.

"How can you be that much of an attention whore? You'd rather insult your little sister for your own fame? It's sad that you peaked in middle school." you said and walked away from the situation. You let out a relieved sigh and enters Mrs. B's room. Ponyboy spoke up.

"Are you ok? What she said was wrong and untrue, but I know that it can hurt you." You nodded and sat down preparing for class to start. Pony, however, knew better and hugged you and said to meet him at his locker after class since it was the end of the day.

(class is over)

You packed up your things in your bag and went to meet Ponyboy at his locker. He greeted you with a smile and hug. You two decided to go to the DX to see Soda and Steve.

Johnny-

You and Johnny were chillin out on a Saturday and you were meeting up with your dad so he could meet Johnny. Little did you know your dad was drunk. You and Johnny arrived at the dingo where you saw your dad with a beer bottle in both hands. You though oh shit. He's been double fisting. Your dad pulled you down to sit by your arm and he started the tell Johnny all about himself. Your dad started laughing.

"Now, Johnny how did you end up with my stick of a daughter? She's so small and petite and ugly. I don't see your attraction to her." Your dad said Johnny, however, had a quick comeback.

"It's good you don't see any attraction to her considering you 26 years older than her as well as her father. As for the comments on her body, I think she's the prettiest girl in the world and my opinion as well as hers are the only ones that matter. If you don't got nothin' nice to say, then don't say it. Good day, Asshole." Johnny finished and left with you, hand in hand. He turned to you and bent down to you slightly to give you a peck on the cheek. "Don't worry about him, baby. He's just a lowlife who's jealous because you found the love he's been missing. I love you." he said

"I love you too, thanks for sticking up for me back there."

Dallas-

You and Dallas were on your way to bucks house from the dingo. It was Friday night and Dallas wanted to go to Bucks house for his party, and of course you had to be there to since you were Dallas's new girlfriend. It wasn't all that exciting to you, an anti-social however Dallas couldn't wait to get there early. You had arrived to Bucks early to help set up for the party. For some reason Dallas couldn't keep his hands off of you. A couple hours flew by, and the house started to flood with people. One of those people being you Dick headed Cousin Tyler. You kept to Dallas' side and Tyler walked up to the bar, where you and Dallas was sitting. Tyler walked up to you

"Y/n? god I haven't seen your ugly twig Ish ass in a hot minute, who's this guy you got with you?" he asked in a bitchy tone. You looked down starting to feel insecure of what he said. You couldn't respond because you didn't know how to. Dallas whipped his head around and shot a glare to Tyler.

"Hey man watch how you're talkin to my girl man leave her alone. Who do you think you are?" Dallas said looking down to you and your disappointed face. "Hey honey, you'll be okay he's nothin. How'd he know you though?" You shook your head gently.

"he's my cousin Dal..." you said in a soft tone. "Excuse me." you excused yourself to go up to Dal's room. you walked upstairs and reached his room and opened the door and walked to his bed. You paused for a moment before sitting down. You looked to the floor and asked yourself why you had to be as small as you were and remembered all of the things Tyler said to you growing up; Go eat a burger, stupid stick, twig, you look like a crack addict with those thighs. It always mentally hurt you, but he did it in front of Dallas of all people. There was no way Dallas would love you after he heard your own cousin say that. Or so you thought. You stepped outside of your thoughts for more than just a moment to hear a man say "oh yeah Dallas! get 'em. It scared the shit out of you. You thought for sure the fuzz was gonna end up coming around by the end of the night tonight. A few moments later, Dallas entered the room with a bruised cheek. He let a few little laughs escape.

"Sorry, Sweetheart. I beat up your cousin for what he said... I hope you don't mind..." Dallas said, grabbing his pack of cigarettes out of his pocket along with his lighter. You pulled him closer and kissed him on the cheek.

"Thanks baby.." you say quietly

Sodapop-

It was a warm Tuesday summer morning, and you were with your boyfriend, Sodapop Curtis. It was a long night last night. You woke up next to your boyfriend in your bed. you turned to face him, admiring his features. You couldn't help but adore over his beauty. He was so beautiful. Soda then woke up.

"take a picture baby, it will last a whole lot longer." he said in a snarky tone. Your creepy Uncle walked in.

"hey Y/n. You wanna get a drink with me? I'll have lots of fun with ya hunny." he tried to pry himself between your legs.

"no, sorry I'm staying with my boyfriend right now." You replied gently. He got mad and punched a nearby wall.

"Damnit Y/n! You whore! Ever since your stupid fat ass started to date him you uh-uh-uh started um-" he paused and sighed "you've become more distant from me, you've gotten fatter and uglier sweetheart..." he tried this trick before with you. He was trying to sweet talk his way into you and Soda's down fall, however soda was not having it.

"What the hell do you mean uglier, bitch? Have you looked into the mirror lately, ogre? I don't care if she gains weight, she still will look pretty. Unlike you, you big, backed bitch." Soda spat in a hateful tone. You uncle attempted to come over and rip him from the bed spread but Soda got up and put your uncle into a head lock. "aww are you feelin' regret? I sure as hell hope so, talkin' about my girl like that." Soda let him go and pushed him out of your room. You uncle looked back in fear. Soda held a glare towards him and your uncle ran out of the house.

"Thanks Soda... I don't know what would have happened if you didn't do anything..." Soda climbed back in bed right next to you and gave you a passionate kiss.

Darry-

You and Darry just got done at a date and he had your smaller hand n his bigger one. You smiled warmly at him and continued to walk down the street to your home.

"Alright so this is me." you said and kissed him goodbye. You walked up on to your front porch. You mother threw a beer bottle and almost hit you. "Mom! Are you drunk again?" You yelled hoping Darry heard you, he did and ran back to you.

"Y/n! You fat obese whore! I wish you fuckin death you're my biggest mistake! " Your mother yelled, tears started to come to your eyes, and you stumbled back.

"Shut up, bitch you shouldn't be a parent. Burn in hell." Darry said calmly as he walked over to you giving you a huge hug and picking you up. "See hunny, you're not fat or obese I can carry you easily, baby.

"Darry, do you think I'm a mistake?" You ask, letting your mothers' words infiltrate your thoughts.

"No baby, you're not a mistake. Even if you where it would be the only good mistake she made, sweetheart." you snuggle yourself into his shoulder and find comfort in his scent. "I love you" he said gently.

"I love you too." You say with passion.

The END

[melodiimelon]

The Outsiders Personalities Based on my opinion <3

Ponyboy:

He would probably be that one kid who would tell the teacher that there was homework and have a room full of opps.

Hates Steve with all his heart because hes jealous asf.

Would be like the made in romania kid (he prolly is)

Canonically smokes the most out of the gang, but he uses a penjamin because he thinks its “safer”

Is in orchestra and plays cello

Smoke seshes with Johnny😩

Speaks Romanian fluently, refuses to speak hebrew.

Adding on to the last one, the curtis’ just say all the prayers in english during holidays so the rest of the gang can understand, and because they don’t like hebrew in general.

Wore Adidas when he was younger. No questions.

Has atleast went to Romania ONCE.

Johnny

The quiet, but defensive hufflepuff.

If people ask him to say something in either spanish or thai, he’ll just say a bad word to embarrass them.

Has a better relationship with his dad than his mom (not canon)

Him and dally are like this🤞🏽no crosses count.

ALWAYS SINGS RANDOM THAI SONGS OUTTA NO WHERE

Theres this weird thing that he has (i have it too) where he could show his talents to a audience of people, but not in front of a small group.

So i can see him kind of spacing out while trying to sing for the gang.

Knows Muay Thai, so thats very useful to him for fighting socs.

Smokes pot just because.

Sodapop

Is constantly called “Soda-bop” from socs, and even Steve.

Takes band or orchestra

Takes Jewish cantor classes every Thursday bc he cant do it on Shabbat.

He always won first place in a cantor competition, and people even started hiring him for weddings.

Can also speak romanian, but speaks Hebrew for his classes.

People unfortunately are prejudice against him for being jewish, so he lies and says he’s atheist. He regrets it a lot.

His Bar Mitzvah was very festive, and he was lifted up on a chair😀

Girls and guys come up to him constantly for either beauty tips or falling in love with him.

He’s a gryffindor. Constantly boasts about it.

Says “what the sheol” on a daily basis.

Steve

Contrary to popular belief, he can actually cook.

He’s very bitchy when it comes to cars

He loves them more than Soda

Was the type to have car posters in his room as a kid

He wasn’t available on Fridays because of Jummah (iykyk)

Hides his relationship with Soda from his parents and sister

Not really family oriented (toxic parents)

Would be in band or orchestra in school

Hes a big back when it comes to Bastani and Ghormasabzi (IM MAKING GHORMASABZI)

His gay awakening was Soda. NO EXCEPTIONS.

Has the best comebacks for haters

Calls sunglasses Hater-Blockers😭

Almost fought Pony at school one time and Soda had to stop them

Two Bit

He’s the type to eat paint chippings and get Lead Poisoning as a kid.

People dont believe hes 🇧🇷🇨🇺

Only makes food from a air fryer because he’s not trusted with a stove

Almost burned his house down when trying to re-fry french fries from mcdonald’s(you probably know the consequences).

Plays accordion and lets his sister sing with him for funsies

But plays trombone in band so he can be with Steve

The gang was calling him Two-Bitch, but pony was on his horse period and called him No-Bitch for fun. Two Bit swore it was on sight while the rest of the gang was laughing.

Has SOME rizz, but doesnt like to use it to his potential.

Pranks all of Tulsa by becoming a elf and running around scaring kids.

Drinks and smuggles Cuban cigars and Brazilian beers in the curtis house. Darry banned him from the house for a week.

Dallas

The original super senior

WHERE MY HUG AT???

Lemme take you to ur class😭

He has a cat name Mau Mau Winston the First and he wont let the gang touch her.

Thats his daughter dont fw her😡

He would let that cat do anything😭

FRAGILE MASCULINITY.

He’s actually a good dancer, HE GOT LIQUID HIPS.

Actually hates his dad with a burning passion (besides P-philes) and loves his mom. Hes a mamas boy.

Since hes also arab, I can see him cussing out the gang in arabic.

Watches Kai Cenat on the daily

🟧⬛️⭐️ obsessed

Was called Buster Cherry in New York

Tries to get people into fights for fun.

Darry

Literal husband material

Would literally be the best dad in the world.

Also speaks both Romanian and Hebrew fluently.

He planned Soda’s Bar Mitzvah and they have pictures of EVERYTHING.

Is first generation American when he moved from Romania in the 40’s due to the holocaust

Touches up his language skills when he has the time.

LOVES FRANK SINATRA

Him and his siblings have Hebrew names from their Bat Mitzvahs

Visits Romania with Soda and Pony in summer when they have the money.

when their parents were alive, they would speak Romanian when they were together.

Hanukkah is a very INTERESTING TIME for him- (ill make a headcanon on that)

Wanted to be a lawyer when he was younger

Dealt with racism in elementary/junior high because he was an emigrant.

A/N: This took A WEEK TO MAKE. DONT LET ME DOWN; I NEED COMMENTS, LIKES, REPOSTS,

A N Y T H I N G.

[ask-princess-slaughter-shy]

Princess “Slaughter” Shy (OC Version Edits)

/////As many of you know there is also an OC version of this, which will also be the version that carries on in part 2./////

OC VERSION EDITS HERE: Pages 31-36

Princess Luna, who was busy writing a second eulogy for Twilight Sparkle, was spooked when a puff of light blinked in her room and a scroll flopped to the ground in front of her. Curious, she levitated and unrolled it carefully, her squinted eyes grew larger with each line she read in her head;     Hello, Princess Luna. You don’t know me but I definitely know you. I also knew your sister, Princess Celestia and that newly crowned Princess Twilight Sparkle. Such a joyous kill they were, watching the life drain from them made my ponyhood tremble with pleasure. You won’t ever catch me, not even if I accidentally give you my current position in the Everfree Forest. Oops! ~Your worst nightmare

Luna and the guards blasted through the sky in a hot pursuit to the Everfree Forest. Luna’s wings couldn’t flap fast enough for her own liking. She shook her head frustrated with herself. She knew this was going to be a foolish mistake but she had to confront this sick bastard now! Ignoring the guard’s plea for her to stay with them she teleported into the tick foggy forest and screamed out, “where are you!? Show yourself coward!”       “Come little children I’ll take thee away into a land of enchantment.” A horrific chill shot through Luna like a shard of dry ice when the song began. She perked up her ears and looked back and forth, her horn glowing with neon blue electricity. When the lyrics were played out she narrowed her eyes at the voice’s familiarity. “Wait a second… I know that voice…” then it dawned on her. “Fluttershy!” “Come little children the time’s come to play here in my garden of shadows.” “Fluttrshy, where are you?” Luna asked spinning around in circles looking in every direction. “Follow sweet children I’ll show thee the way through all the pain and the sorrows.” “This isn’t funny, show yourself!” Luna demanded in her hold time Canterlot voice. She didn’t want to admit it nor even show it but she was beyond frightened at this point. “Weep not poor children for life is this way, murdering, beauty and passions…” the song trailed off. During the last verse sung by the lulling disembodied voice of Fluttershy she slowly came into view when the word ‘murdering’ was sung out. She stopped about twenty feet away with a crazed smile on her face. “Why Luna, what are you doing out here all alone?” She chuckled. Luna glared at the pony unamused with everything about her. “It was you who sent the letter?” “Yes. I was beginning to think you weren’t going to show in person, that you’d send your guards after me instead. Where are they anyway? I’d think you’d be wise not to track down the princess killer all by your lonesome.” “Don’t be so incautious. They’re on their way as we speak to arrest you.” Luna growled when she looked at the purple horn. “That horn belongs to Twilight and is plenty proof you are the murderer so don’t even think of pleading innocent.” “Oh, I’m not going to deny my actions.” Fluttershy began walking in a large circle around Luna. Luna being the wise mare she is began to walk in the same direction, not once taking her eyes off her. “But Luna, your misjudgment of me has cost you your sisters life, Twilight’s life, and soon your life. What do you have to say for yourself?” “Such confidence in a wretched outnumbered mare, in a matter of minutes this place will be swarmed with guards.” “I don’t think so.” Fluttershy sneered. “What makes you think so poorly?” “You think I’m dumb?” She laughed. “I’m not alone in this game.” “Right, Sunset Shimmer. Sad to tell you she’s been locked up in the castle prison awaiting her death sentence.” Fluttershy stopped and began to laugh hysterically. “Oh why Luna! Who’s the fool now? Did no pony mention to you she escaped? Right now while you’re here toying with me she’s gone ahead and put up a magical barrier to keep your guards out and keep you and I locked in.” “What?!” Luna looked towards the orange sky and saw a dome-like force field covering them. She yelled at the top of her lungs, her eyes going bloodshot, and she lunged at the yellow Pegasus. Fluttershy jumped into the air and shot down a magenta laser beam that just barely grazed Luna’s hair. Luna shot back a much larger and more powerful beam of light that clipped Fluttershy’s back hoof. She squeaked in pain but didn’t stop dodging the extra five beams coming at her from every angle. She shot back a beam that collided with the last one thrown at her and that formed an orb of blue and magenta magic and soon imploded on itself, creating a shockwave that caused the two ponies to fly back a few yards. Luna looked around with unease unknowing where Sunset was lurking, but she couldn’t get enough time to scan the place as Fluttershy was already up and charging at her with maximum speed. Luna shot into the air split seconds before Fluttershy impacted her. Fluttershy, quick with her maneuvering, shot up in a 90-degree angle and slammed Luna into the ground with a powerful kick from all four legs combined. Dirt and grass flew into the surrounding area when Luna hit the ground. She looked up at Fluttershy hovering above her, sword in mouth with pure black eyes. Luna’s horn lit up and sent another powerful beam of light at her but it was quickly deflected by the sword and sent back down piercing a large 6-inch hole in Luna’s right back leg. “Gah!” Luna hissed in pain as a hot sensation overwhelmed her lower half. No matter, she did not need her legs in this fight she still has her wings. She used those wings to thrust herself up and bolt into the air, charging at Fluttershy. Fluttershy flew about 50-feet out and stopped she then turned around to face Luna. Luna charged at her faster but a fait white light caught her attention out of the corner of her eye. She turned her head to get a better view of it then was blasted with a powerful solar beam that flung her into the trunk of a tree. The light was blinding for several seconds before anyone could see again. The Everfree Forest grew very still that evening, the only thing that could be heard was the gurgling and coughing sounds coming from Luna. Fluttershy floated to the ground and was joined by Sunset Shimmer and together they walked towards the steaming ground and looked in at the nearly lifeless Moon Princess who was moving her exposed bone legs slowly in pain. The sight was horrific, her legs were nothing but bones and ligaments, her torso was completely skinned except for a patch of blue and black fur of her cutie mark remaining on her hip, her wings were blown off and laid a few feet away unscathed, the left side of her face was gone even her eye, all that remained was exposed skull. Adding some salt to the wound Fluttershy walked up to the dying mare, reared up her hind hooves, and stomped down on the base of the horn causing it to snap off and roll across the dirt. Fluttershy picked it up saddened by its horrific condition; the blast had removed 75% of the fur around it and left the rest scorched and black. She kept it though and gathered the wings as well. IT was kind of weird the wings didn’t sustain any damage but who gives a hoof about logic? She walked back to Luna and stood above her. Luna’s fading blue eyes looked at Fluttershy before rolling into the back of her head. The movement stopped and she ceased to live. “What do we do now?” Sunset asked not taking her green eyes off the corpse. Fluttershy looked up towards the sky that lay motionless across the land. “We have endless time now. The sun will never lower and the moon shall never rise.” She began to laugh in a crazed manner. “There’s still one princess left.” She licked her lips. “Quick, leave the body here and tare down the force field.” Sunset nodded and broke the magical barrier, Fluttershy teleported the both of them out of there and into her shed. “Do you still have that cloak of yours?” “Yeah?” “Good, here’s what I want you to do. Go down to Sugar Cube Corner and ask for an order of one dozen cupcakes, use my bits to buy them. Bring them back here and lace them with rat poison. Then write on the box ‘have some sweet treats to ease your pain in these most troubling of times. Love Pinkie Pie.’ Then have them delivered to the Crystal Empire Castle.” Fluttershy rubbed her front hooves together. “Well, what are you going to do then?” “Me? I’m going to discuss with Rarity how blue feathers look against yellow fur.” She smiled and exited the shed. Sunset shrugged and went on into the house and slipped on the cloak. But a problem soon occurred when the hood did not conceal the large horn at all. She was about to walk down into the cellar to discuss the situation with Fluttershy but quickly changed her mind when witnessing the Pegasus amputate her own wings with her blade and had Rarity sewing on the elegant blue ones. She slowly went back upstairs and wrapped the cloak around her head like a makeshift hat and went on down the road. An hour had passed before Sunset returned home to the cottage, an anxious Fluttershy who was pacing back and forth sighed loudly with relief. “Thank God! What took you so long?” “Sorry, there was a long line of ponies waiting to get their orders filled, too.” Sunset replied. “No one noticed you, right?” “If they did then I wouldn’t have ever come back here.” She replied and took the box of cupcakes over to the kitchen and placed them on the counter. “Where’s the rat poison?” “Under the sink.” She flapped her new long wings and smiled brightly at Sunset, but the smile turned into a frown when Sunset refused to look up at her. She rolled her eyes and walked over to help her. “I don’t need your help.” Sunset snapped. Fluttershy’s eyes widened. She wanted to make a bitchy comeback but she instead just ran out of the house feeling hurt and betrayed. She collapsed to the ground in her flowerbed and began to weep for a while. She then got up and took a stroll down the isolated path through the forest just beyond her property. “Hey you!” Shouted a familiar screechy voice. She turned around and saw Rainbow Dash grinding her hoof against the ground. Rainbow’s eyes were wide with shock then morphed into rage and hatred. “I knew it was you, you little cunt!” She began to charge at her. She skid to a halt when the yellow Pegasus teleported behind her and flew towards her home. “Oh no you don’t!” She opened her wings and dashed after her. Fluttershy looked behind her to see Rainbow catching up to her at breakneck speeds. She turned her head back around and flew through her open bedroom window. Rainbow, only seconds behind, shattered the window with her body. Fluttershy flew down the stairs, her new wings flapping as hard and as fast as they could go. She stretched out her arms when she saw she was approaching her sword on the table and scooped it up and busted through her front door heading back towards the forest. Rainbow had a hot trail of rainbow leading behind her the faster she flew, soon becoming at arms reach behind the other pony. She extended her arms out until they locked around her legs, stopping just as quickly as she could fly she caused all the air to get knocked out of Fluttershy. Rainbow then threw her up in the air before using all her strength to slam her into the ground. She then slammed down on the yellow Pegasus with her whole body and pinned her down. “I win! Anything you have to say before I kill you?” “Just this.” She levitated the sword that was concealed in her tail and stuck it deep into the cyan pony’s chest. Rainbow gasped and choked on the blood pooling in her throat. She stepped off of Fluttershy and pulled the sword out of her chest where blood immediately began to spurt out like a waterfall. Fluttershy walked up to her and picked up the sword, she was about ready to finish her off with a quick stab to the head but the sound of a male pony approaching stalled her. “Nooo!” Shouted a very angry stallion who was speeding out of the forest and over to Fluttershy. His golden brown eyes filled with fire. In his mouth was a black and yellow crystal shaped sword, in the center near the top of the hilt where the blade connects bore the symbol of a yellow lightning bolt. He pulled it out of his mouth and held it in his right hoof, drawing it back ready to decapitate the psycho killer mare. Fluttershy drew up her bald just in time to block his from swiping at her neck. Now she was able to get a good look at the stallion, he was a pure yellow Pegasus, much deeper yellow than she, with a shorter rainbow tail identical to Dash’s. His cutie mark was a double pointed lightning bolt colored in all the colors of the rainbow. “I’m going to rip you apart, piece by little piece, for touching my wife!” He snarled through clenched teeth He pushed her back and glared at her. ‘Wife?’ Fluttershy wondered to herself, ‘I didn’t know she was married. Why wasn’t I invited to the wedding?’ She lunged at the stallion that quickly evaded her attack; his lightning fast reflexes were just as good as Dash’s. When she was turning around to reface him she saw his blade he had thrown at her when her back was turned. Too late to react the blade tore from her fading cutie mark to the base of her rib cage. She hissed in pain and nearly collapsed to the ground. The stallion, which was named Rainbow Lightning, sped up to catch his flying sword. When he turned back to attack the injured pony once more she was already speeding away in the distance. He was about to chase after her but something stopped him, he looked over at his wife who was barely hanging on to life in a pool of her own blood. He raced down to her and carefully lifted her up in his arms and tears immediately began to stream down his face. Rainbow Dash’s body twitched as she tried to move her head to look up at her dear husband. “Rainbow… Lightning…” She managed to utter. “Shh… save your strength… You’re going to be alright.” He assured her stroking her beautiful glistening mane. “You…are a terrible liar…” Rainbow chuckled softly and ended it with a cough. “I… I love you…” She smiled, her violet-red eyes beginning to fade. “No… Rainbow Dash… Don’t leave. You’re the strongest damn mare I’ve ever met! You can fight! You have to fight!” His words were frantic and full of despair. His heart sank to the bottom of his stomach when the feeling of her heartbeat was no longer there. He slowly placed his head down on her soft fuzzy stomach, his heart felt like a porcelain glass doll that had just been put into a wood chipper. A light fog began forming around the nearby area and from that formed a silhouette that soon turned into a visible figure. The figure was very tall and very slim, about the body type as princess Celestia. She had a horn that reached 13-inches long, her body a dark ashy-grey color. Her hair made up of three different colors; red, black, and green. Her cutie mark was a golden cross with a red spirit orb with a pause/play button etched into it, it had snow-white wings protruding out the back and a soft neon yellow halo hovering above it. She had a golden necklace similar to Celestia’s with a large white cross on the front with a ruby in the center. She wore a three-point crown with two small points on either end and one tall one in the middle topped with a tiny cross, the small points had little rubies on the ends and a large emerald rested in the center. Her wings were similar to Princess Cadence’s with the multicolored feathers, the smaller of her feathers were the same ashy-grey color but the longer feathers were a deep red. She wore bright red shoes that matched the color of her left eye. She had two different eye colors, one green and one red. The earrings she wore checkered this. The left eye had the green earring and a ruby for the green eye ear. She was as old as time itself. Being alive even longer than the Sun and Moon Princesses, or so that’s how her tale is told by ponies who are unfamiliar with her true history. She was neither living or is she dead, she’s known as the Grim Reaper of ponies, her current name is Princess Entity, though that hasn’t always been her name in the beginning of her time. You only see her when you witness death first hoof, other than that most ponies call her folklore because it’s very rare when somepony sees her. Princess Entity walked up to the weeping stallion. “Excuse me, sir. I am Princess Entity, I’m terribly sorry for your loss but I need to take her soul with me so I can bring her closure.” Rainbow Lighting held on to his wife’s body tighter as though it were his last thread of hope. “No! You can’t have her! I won’t let her go!” He broke out into sobs. “Please sir… She wouldn’t want you to mourn over her death. She would want you to be happy and remember all the good memories.” She said trying to reassure him. A pure white pony with a snake tattoo over his left eye and snakebite piercings on his bottom lip stopped and watched the commotion from afar, he perked up his ears to try and listen in on their conversation. “No, your highness… You don’t understand.” He sniffed, “she has three kids at home who need their nurturing mother… Her life is more important than my own…” He placed her cold body down gently and slowly rose to his hooves. “Take me instead.” The pure white Pegasus with the black and blue mane heard all this and went running towards them like a bat out of hell. “Whoa wait!” He shouted out of breath when he reached them. He looked at the whole horrific scenery with dismay. “What happened here?” “My wife was brutally murdered by a multicolored Alicorn, that’s what!” Rainbow Lightning shouted at him. The white stallion looked at the lifeless mare with sorrow. “I couldn’t help but overhear the situation… You said you were parents of three kids?” “Yes… We were even planning on having a fourth…” “I also heard you say that you’d trade your life for hers?” He inhaled deeply, “you can’t do that…” Rainbow Lightning cut him off abruptly. “Why the hell not!? Who asked you?!” “Please hear me out…” He pleaded. “Children need both of their parent, not just one.” He bit down on his bottom lip and closed his eyes then turned to face the Paranormal Princess. “I’ll give up my life for the mare’s.” Both ponies looked at him in shock, Princess Entity gave him a soft smile and placed her hoof on his back. “Are you sure? If you sacrifice yourself there’s no going back. No pony can give up their life for a volunteer.” “I’m sure, your majesty.” He gave her a confident smile. She nodded at him. Green smoke began to expel from her hooves and swirl around his body, the green trail then found its way over to Rainbow Dash and swirled around her body as well, the open gash on her chest began to close up and look as if nothing had happened. The stallion’s body began to shake before finally collapsing on the ground and became motionless. From the body rose a bright transparent ghost that had beautiful white wings attached to his back. He made his way over to the princess and turned around to watch the now alive again Rainbow Dash open up her eyes once more. Rainbow Lightning’s tears went from mournful rage to overjoyed weeps as he held on to his wife in fear he’d lose her again. “Oh… Thank God you’re alive…” Still too weak to talk Rainbow Dash just placed her shaky hoof on his cheek and smiled. When Princess Entity and the stallion turned to leave Rainbow Lightning stopped them for a second. “Wait! You, white pony! What is your name so I can tell your story to everypony?” “You can call me Spirit Shifter.” And with that last statement the two vanished into the thick fog. “Thank you, Spirit Shifter.” Rainbow Lightning muttered with a thankful tear rolling down his cheek. He looked down at his slowly recovering wife and scooped her up in his arms where he proceeded to open up his wings, pick up his sword with his teeth, and zoom off. The weakened Fluttershy who was flying through the air lost control of her wings and began to fall back down to Earth where she skid across the dirt and slammed into a rock. She lay there twitching and weeping softly, she held on to her wounded side trying to keep the large incision closed so her innards would not spill out. A mare that was strolling along a path in the park noticed the out-of-control Pegasus zoom through the air. She stopped and kept her purple eyes locked on to her until she watched her crash several yards away. Her black and white mane flapped in the wind as her white hooves swiftly carried her along the path to go find the poor Pegasus. She slowed down when approaching the mare and screwed up her face when looking at the different colored parts of her body. She slowly made her way over to her and noticed the blood seeping out of her side and clotting around the yellow fur. “Oh goodness… What happened to you, dear?” Fluttershy opened her eyes and looked at the black and white Earth pony that had come to her aide. She was nervous that this mare was going to recognize the stolen body parts attached to her and turn her in, but as a few brief moments passed the mare still stood there waiting for Fluttershy’s response. “No… ow… I mean, I was attacked by a crazed stallion… But I’ll be okay…” The shite mare shook her head, “no no no!” You’re not okay nor are you going to be without medical attention… I’ll help you get to the hospital.” She pushed up her black glasses and held out her hoof. “No!” Fluttershy shouted in a panic. “I don’t need a hospital, I just need to get home.” She tried to get up but the amount of pain she was in had made every muscle in her body weak. She whined and fell back over. “Please let me help you…” she kept her hoof extended. “I won’t take you to a hospital, just let me escort you back home at least.” Fluttershy, still a bit hesitant, nodded and placed her hoof on the other’s. With the help of the Earth pony she managed to get to her feet. She wrapped her blue wings around her body to hold the wound closed until they reached the cottage about a mile away. Upon entering the home Sunset Shimmer was walking back and forth throughout the house cleaning it up. The place looked as if a freak tornado had hit it. Broken dishes, cushions, book, and plants were strewn about, Fluttershy looked around her home with disbelieving eyes. “What in the hay happened here?” Sunset turned to face her, opening her mouth to reply but quickly shut it when noticing the stranger next to her. “Who’s that?” The mare smiled, “oh, I’m Amy.” Fluttershy grunted and wrapped her wings tighter around her body. “Tell me what happened later… can you get the needle and thread?” Sunset nodded and went to the basement. Amy led Fluttershy to the couch and laid her down. “Can you please unwrap your wings so I can get a better look at your wound?” Fluttershy nodded and lifted her wings up, as soon as she did blood began trickling down almost instantaneously. “This look real bad… Are you sure you don’t want to go to the hospital?” Seeing the glare she was given assured her that she was dead set on not going. “Well okay, can you hold your skin together while I go get a washrag to clean the area?” Both ponies returned with the appropriate supplies and got to work on stitching her up. Amy wrapped bandage wrap around Fluttershy’s waist to secure the stitches. Fluttershy got up and thanks Amy for her help after it was all over. “Do you have time to stay for dinner?” She asked. She shook her head an apologized. “No… I have to go to work. But thank you for your offer.” She smiled and waved goodbye as she left. Fluttershy quickly looked back at Sunset with anger in her eyes. “Tell my what happened to my home.” “The Canterlot guards, that’s what happened!” She replied frantically. “I saw them coming after you left and I hid down in the basement and used the invisibility spell to hide the cellar door.” Fluttershy raised a brow impressed with her quick and wise thinking. “And the cupcakes?” “They’re in the fridge safe and sound, sorry I haven’t found time to take them to the post office.” Fluttershy ran towards the fridge and opened it to grab out the pastries. “You have time now, find any postage stamps and ship it to the Crystal Empire Castle and hurry before they come back!” She grabbed Sunset’s cloak and put it on and shrouded her head with the hood before heading towards the door. “Where are you going?” Sunset asked while using a marker to write on the fluorescent pink box. “For a stroll. That bitch Rainbow Dash’s damn husband will pay for my injuries.” She slammed the door and ran as fast as she could down the road. She looked up towards the sky and growled. She tried to use her magic to teleport to Cloudsdale but she was far too weak to even make a spark. She screamed in frustration and continued to gallop through the streets of Ponyville. She found herself galloping to Sweet Apple Acres where Apple Jack was busy bucking away at the apple trees making the delicious red fruit fall in a pile in the baskets down below. Fluttershy’s eyes grew smaller and her brows narrowed as far as they could go, her hooves pounding against the ground like a speeding locomotive. AJ could feel the hoof pounding against the ground. She screwed up her face in confusion and looked around. Her ears folded back and her eyes grew wide when seeing the enraged Fluttershy charging at her with her horn glowing red and the sword appearing in her mouth. “Ah..!” She screamed as she struggled to break free from her apple bucking gear. She bucked and sent it flying off her back and began running away. “Granny! Big Mac! A-Anypony! Help..!” She cried running as hard and as fast as her body allowed. The cries for help from her next victim only furthered her rage. The adrenaline pumping through her veins carried her hooves ten times faster than normal, she found herself running over 80 miles an hour, catching up with AJ in no time. With how fast she was going the cape unraveled and flew off her body. She opened her wings and laid them out horizontally and began flapping them to gain even more ground speed. Apple Jack looked back in terror when seeing the crazed pony only a couple feet behind her. Tears full of demise burned her eyes. She turned her head back around, her heart beating so fast she feared it might stop. She couldn’t stop though it was either die from cardiac arrest or be brutally murdered by her former best friend. She took her chances and kept running and desperately tried once again to cry for help. Unfortunately her cries were never heard and they went from cries for help to cries of agony when Fluttershy’s blade pierced her flank and tore straight through the three red apples that made up her cutie mark and clear down to the bone. Blood spurted out of the gash and soon she lost all function of that leg. Fluttershy backed up and made her way over to the other side of her and did the same thing to that side. AJ crashed to the ground after losing all control of the other leg and began a desperate attempt of crawling away. Flutteshy placed the sword in her right hoof and walked up to her face where she then shoved her hoof in her mouth and sliced off her tongue. “That’s what happens when you try to call for help.” She tucked the sword under her wing and used her front hooves to lift up her head and stared deep into her green eyes. “Apple Jack, why did you run from me? Do you not like me anymore?” AJ tried to reply but her lack of tongue and the blood filling up her mouth only had the words coming out as incomprehensible gibberish. “You know, Rarity is awful hungry down in my cellar. With your chunky figure you’d make quite the meal for her.” She giggled and licked her lips. She shook her head and cried. She placed her hooves on Fluttershy’s arms when she felt her put her into a chokehold. The last thing AJ ever saw was the beautiful apple orchards surrounding them and the last thing she ever heard was the sound of her own neck breaking. Fluttershy panted and growled letting go of the dead pony’s head. The body flopped to the ground like a fish and remained still. She looked at her as tears began to form in her eyes filled with both regret and satisfaction. She then began to laugh until she bit down on the yellow tail and dragged her body away. She stopped for a second to put the cloak back on and then continued to drag her body throughout Ponyville. Noticing ponies began to stare she stopped, looked at them, and then started to pretend like this was a game. “Come on Apple Jack, stop being stubborn and come see the surprise.” The ponies looked at one another and shrugged. Fluttershy rolled her eyes at the orange and yellow body and continued on her way. Rarity jumped as a loud thud rang through her ears. She shot up and illuminated her horn to see where it came from. She was horrified to see Apple Jack’s corpse sitting in front of her. She looked up at Fluttershy with disbelief. “How could you..?” “There’s your dinner.” She cut her off and slammed the door. Tears rolled down her cheeks as she looked at her dear deceased friend. She nuzzled into her cheek and pulled her close, hugging her tightly until she fell asleep.

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Fluttershy laughed and turned the solid ice floor into boiling hot water that singed the guards. When they tried to get up she turned the water back into ice so their bodies would get stuck there. “Give it up you pathetic ponies. You won’t win, you see I killed Celestia, and with the help of Sunset Shimmer here we killed the remaining three princesses. Don’t you see yet? We want to be the new princesses of this land. No… We WILL be the new princesses of this land! And if you have a problem with it you can take it up with me personally. Princess Slaughter Shy!” She began to laugh. “Yes, your highness.” Replied a scared stallion whose face was partially stuck in ice. She grinned and melted the ice and evaporated the water away. “Go tell everypony there’s two new princesses in control of these lands now.” The living guards scurried out the door. The three ponies then became confused when fog formed around the room. Princess Entity, along with her personal Royal Guard Spirit Shifter, entered the room from within the fog. 10 souls were lifted from the 10 carcasses. Fluttershy was completely bewildered seeing there was a fifth Alicorn in Equestria. Before Fluttershy could say anything Princess Entity opened her mouth. “Don’t even bother trying to kill me. I’m the Grim Reaper I cannot die. I only take your soul to where it belongs.” “Is that so?” Fluttershy commented flatly. “Yes. And I look forward to the day I drag you sorry soul down to Hell, Miss Shy.” She said before leaving the room. “Whatever.” Fluttershy said with a roll of her eyes. She opened up the balcony door and started dropping the carcasses down into the moat surround the castle below. “I get Celestia’s tower, you can have Luna’s.” She told Sunset when reentering the room. “But… It would make more sense for me to have Celestia’s, I was one of her students after all, plus my cutie mark is a sun.” Sunset started to protest. She shook her head and pointed to her flank, her once golden and red sun cutie mark was replaced with a blood red crescent moon. “Not anymore.” Sunset looked at Fluttershy’s cutie mark confused. “The hell..? When did they change?” Fluttershy narrowed her eyes and looked at her own flank, her pink and turquois butterflies were no longer there, instead they were replaced by an image of her weapon of choice, her glass shard sword. “Weird.” She jumped up on her new bed and cuddled the soft pillows. “Can you chain Rarity up in here?” Sunset nodded and dragged Rarity over to one of the blue walls and bolted her to it. “Anything else, ‘your highness’?” She growled silently. “Nope. You can scurry off to your own tower now.” Sunset nodded and teleported to Luna’s room and got situated in bed. Fluttershy looked at the shoes on her hooves and kicked them off she also tore the crown and necklace off her body and threw them aside. “Guard!” She shouted. A terrified guard stepped into her chambers. “Yes?” “Retrieve the Kindness Element of Harmony for me. They should be in some book back in the Ponyville Library Twilight Sparkle used to live in.” She ordered. He nodded and left the room quickly. She smiled and looked at Rarity who was lying down facing away from her. “Hey Rarity, if I got you a sewing machine could you make something for me?” No response. “Hey, Rarity!” She chucked one of her shoes at her. The shoe bounced off the body with no response once again from the skin and bone pony. Fluttershy looked at her confused and got up off her bed and walked over to her. “Rarity?” She placed a hoof on the dry brittle hair and pushed it out of her face. Rarity’s eyes were halfway open and lifeless, her mouth was ajar but no air came out of it. She had died from malnutrition. She refused to eat the only food she was given, Apple Jack’s body. She couldn’t have possibly ate her best friend, true they have had their off moments but they were still best of friends after the fact. She sighed and nuzzled the deceased Unicorn and removed the collar from her neck and weight from her hoof. She then took her out into the balcony and tossed her into the moat. She exited her room afterwards and strolled through the castle, searching for any sewing supplies for herself, but sadly she could not find any. When she had her head turned looking down a hallway she didn’t notice somepony in the way until she crashed into them. “Oh, I’m sorry,” her kind nature showing through her apology a bit. “No, it’s alright.” Replied a pure black stallion with brown eyes. His hair was blue with a red stripe down the middle, same as his long tail, a black horn protruding from the red part. His cutie mark with a silhouette of a gaming controller, he helped her back up with the same kind smile he was still wearing. “I am Flame Saber. You must by the new princess, correct?” She nodded while blushing keeping her gaze away from his. She noticed an engagement bangle around his left hoof and sighed. “Who’s the lucky mare?” “Color Spectrum.” He beamed. “Hey, I heard the castle is looking for more guards to hire, where can I sign up for that?” “You’re hired. Just ask one of the guards to take your measurements for a suit of armor.” “Oh thanks!” He replied excitedly. “One more thing, for your first duty of being my Royal Guard, fetch me grass green fabric, pink fabric, and magenta diamonds of different sizes.” She let him go on his way and continued to stroll down the hall humming a lovely tune until she was stopped by a half-burnt guard who gave her the Element of Harmony, she thanked him and placed it on her head like a crown and beamed with delight. She eagerly awaited the arrival of Flame Saber with the supplies she asked for. When he finally showed up with two shopping bags she took them to her room and locked herself in there for several hours.