#or one uncounted sentences scene sunday?
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filet-o-feelings · 1 year ago
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Sentences Sunday
Thanks for tagging me @hippolotamus @stereopticons and @jesuisici33 💕 I just wrote this scene that I forgot to write until I went to post the latest chapter of Library Boy... so it's a bit hastily written but it did what I needed it to, I guess? I love these meddling teens 😁
"Guys, you'll never guess who I met!" Jonah says as he bounces over to his friends, who are gathered around Katie's locker as they always do before first period. "Who?" Sam asks, too impatient to play guessing games this early in the morning. "Mr. Brewer's library boy! David Rose! He was here, in the school!" "Wait, what?" Katie slams her locker shut and turns toward Jonah, examining his face for any signs of the lie she suspects. "I'm serious, I had a question so I stayed after class and David Rose showed up in Mr. Brewer's classroom." "Oh my god, are they dating? What was he doing here?" Sierra chimes in with questions none of them would have the answers to. "We need to find out. If they aren't, they should be. Seriously you guys, the heart eyes Mr. Brewer was giving him were off the charts. He's got it bad." "What did he look like?" Katie asks. "Tall. Dark. Handsome. Dreamy." Jonah looks wistfully off into nowhere, until his vision clears and he snaps his head around. "There! That's him!" The rest of the group turn in the direction Jonah had been looking, instantly able to pick the man out of the crowd in the hallway, most of which were students among a few recognizable teachers. David Rose, who Sierra, Katie and Sam all agreed was very dreamy, walked past them and into a room a few doors down. The art room, specifically, that had been lacking a permanent art teacher so far this school year. "Holy shit, is David Rose the new art teacher?" Jonah asks, mouth agape. "Oh, this is good." Sierra says. "Okay, we need to find out if they're together, and if not, we need to come up with a plan to make it happen." Sam announces, and they all nod enthusiastically. "This is going to be so much fun!" Katie giggles.
Extra shout out to @lemonlyman-dotcom for the push to write the scene instead of just posting the chapter without it 💛 Open tag if anyone else has sentences to share still, since Sunday is very nearly over everywhere.
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dawningofdrag · 3 years ago
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Hello 💙
All of your wips sound so good, I need to know everything now, but can we start with "I kissed someone, it wasn't you", please? That sounds like some gorgeous angst 👀
thank you so much for asking my frey!! and yes, it is a hurt no comfort cc rosénali fic inspired by a song by dodie. the idea came to me when rosé and mik started hanging out much more often. tbh im so glad you asked about this because i dont think ill ever finish it, but i still do love the concept of it!
rosé and denali started dating on the show, and they really had a connection, but it never became anything serious despite denali really wanting it to. rosé is really bad at relationships, apparently. it leaves denali heartbroken and it really messes with him because he just grew so attached to rosé. he tries to drown it in hookups and clubs but nothing ever comes of it.
but eventually nali moves on. he gets better, he heals! but all of that progress comes crumbling down the second he flies back to la to shoot promo for the season, and he's forced to relive the relationship he built with rosé. it hurts more seeing mik and rosé act all lovey dovey (i posted about this scene in a previous six sentence sunday!), the same exact way him and rosé did when they were shooting the season.
the flow goes back and forth between scenes of denali processing the breakup, rosénali building their relationship, denali getting better, until it ends in denali back in square one. its really supposed to be angsty and painful, but you know how i love jumping between scenes and places in time in fics!!
here have some of the parts ive already worked on!! (ok i put them under read more bc its pretty long!! sorry)
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“I wish I could’ve given you that role, but I couldn’t.” Rosé’s words are soft, mirroring the gentle touch of the older’s fingers that wrap around his waist. It’s hard for Denali to focus when he feels those kind hands grip his side a little tighter.
“Oh don’t say that.” He chuckles, careful not to smudge the dark lipstick he’s reapplying. He catches a glimpse of the cameras turning to point towards them, and Denali wishes it was just them in this room.
Rosé sighs, body inching closer to his. “I just- you’re the closest person I have right now and I wanted to give it to you, but we kinda have to compete.”
“I know, I know.” Denali rolls his eyes as he finally turns to face the blonde, dismissing the attempted apology. “Please don’t feel bad, you killed it. I don’t want to take that away from you.”
Hands that were previously resting on Denali’s hips move upwards as Rosé’s gentle touch moves up to caress his bare arms. Rosé’s hands are warm, comforting. Denali feels at peace when he touches him like this.
“God, you are so nice to me.” Rosé smiles. “I don’t think I deserve to have you sometimes.”
“Oh, so I’m yours now?” Denali giggles, placing the lipstick down to wrap his arms around the older’s shoulders. The blonde’s words catch him off guard, but he knew this conversation was inevitable. Tip-toeing around the state of their relationship was gonna get tiring eventually, and Denali is happy he’s not the only one ready to give in.
It’s playful, the stare Rosie’s giving to him. There’s a hint of a smile as the blonde leans in closer. “I mean, if you wanna be.”
Denali pecks him on the lips. “Yeah,” His words come out barely above a whisper, but the smile on his face already speaks a thousand words. “I wanna be.”
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“He never loved me-“ Denali cries, throat sore from the uncountable shots of straight liquor he’s downed in the past hour. “Not even a little bit!”
It hurts to scream, throat itching at the lack of care, but all he can think about is how he’s never felt this kind of pain before. How it’s broken him down to a pathetic version of himself that’s nothing more than broken pieces stuck together with tape that can barely cling onto anything. It’s embarrassing how he's affected him so intensely.
The music in this club is so fucking loud, but it’s not enough to stop his mind from thinking about anyone else. His heart still can't feel anything besides how it aches for someone who isn’t there. Denali is a mess as he’s dragged to the side of the dance floor by Kahmora.
“Nali, please-“ He sighs. Kahmora is usually the last person to be compelled to stop his friend’s reckless behavior, but even in his drunken haze Denali can see how frustrated Kahmora is from the way he’s acting.
“You’re making a scene.”
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dtfrogertaylor · 5 years ago
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2019 Queen/Bohrap Fanfic Awards
Tumblr Fanfics, NOT 18+ rated (if any of these are 18+ please tell me so I can move them to the correct list)
‘A Simple Favor’ by @redspecialty nominated by 3 anons
“it is the best” - @dingdongdeaky​
“It’s was simply incredible! A beautiful read by an inspiring and imaginative writer! A supreme pleasure to read!” - @littlehopelessdreamer47​
“Its written so so so well and its so real and honest and the ups and downs suck you right in. This series absolutely built me up and crushed my heart and made me cry with happiness and sadness and if you love Gwil there's no way you can't love this series. It really has everything, from fluff to angst to smut, friends to lovers, a pregnancy AU, comfort... Its just an amazing series, really my review doesn't do it justice.” - @lovehelpmewrite​
“So well-written, beautiful descriptions, and such a unique storyline!” - anon
‘Virtues Uncounted’ by @a-night-at-the-0pera 
“it’s so creative and i love how all the characters fit into the plot!” - anon
“Virtues Uncounted is so different than all other fics, and so incredibly well done. It reads like a novel, and the work put into it is so obvious. It kept me guessing until the last chapter, and I eagerly awaited each installment.” - anon
“aside from the writing and the wonderful person Tori is, I really just want to point out the sheer effort that had to go into this. the hours of research and outlining and plotting that had to go into this - that’s dedication. and it totally pays off! she built such a believable and complex world, it reads like a real novel.” - @littlespoiltthing
‘Headlong’ by @bensrhapsody (O/C)
“It’s fun and fluffy and with time travel involved it has a dash of drama” - anon
“Lena has somehow managed to capture their personalities perfectly!” - anon
“Cara is such a relatable and lovely character - especially in such a surreal situation as she finds herself” - anon
‘Meet the Family’ by @blamerogertaylor
“Frankly it made me feral for a 70 year old and I absolutely loved it!” - anon
‘Memory Lane’ by @39taylor nominated by @blamesachadhawan
‘I’m Happy At Home’ by @brianmay-be
“It’s one of the cutest fics I’ve ever read!!” - anon
‘Responsibilities’ by @daemyiel
“Because it's a really good Roger fic that I didn't expect to go the way it did.”    - anon
‘Doing All Right’ by @strangeandwonderfulconcepts nominated by anon
‘Simple Sentence’ by @cobaincreates nominated by anon
‘The Great Pretender’ by @likethewingsof-butterflies
“It deserves way more appreciation than it got. It is written absolutely amazingly with the detail and the depth of how they both react.” - anon
‘I Do Love You’ by @megalony
“Her stories have vivid descriptions which make it enjoyable and captivating for the reader, also her stories are creative!” - @bluutac
‘About Last Night’ by @mothermercuryy nominated by anon
‘Ten Things Series’ by @taylorroger-s
“it is so immersive and you get very attached to the characters. i love how they portray the band and readers relationship with them :))) this author in general is excellent and i always look forward to her projects, even if they are not terribly often” - anon
‘Soft Disco’ by @laedymoon
“where do i even begin? this fic is so gorgeously written and has ripped my heart out on more than one occasion.” - @illfoandillfie
‘Funny How Love Is’ by @funkytalia
“It’s just so fuckin’ good. Usually I can’t stand slowburns, but this one is just *chef’s kiss*.” by @benders-diamond-earring 
‘It's A Hard Life’ by @brian-maybe-not
“heartbreaking and never fails to get the waterworks going but also its *chefs kiss* delicious” - @illfoandillfie 
‘A Night At The Library’ by @veriloquently
“the absolute loveliest fandom exchange gift i could ever have hoped to receive. made me smile for like a week straight and still makes me go all soft and giggly when i think about it.” - @illfoandillfie
‘Killer Queen’ by @softlyhardy
“Beautiful story, well written, and I'm looking forward to more chapters!!” - anon
‘j.d. | b.m.’ by @daddydeakydeacon (ship)
“I like it because it's a cute little piece about two people who love each other very much, and I like how the author (Kevin?) didn't feel the need to add smut into it so that he could feel that other people would accept it.” - anon
‘Detox’ by @megalony
“So sad and heartbreaking but so so good” - @jennygggrrr
‘That Silly Wig’ by @queensdivas
“The way she captured the whole scene was absolutely gorgeous! Completely underrated” - anon
‘Save Me’ by @deakyspuff nominated by anon
‘Angels’ by @bohemian-napsodyy
“It’s a work of art and made me cry so hard, but they put so much effort into it and it shows” - anon
‘Funny How Love Is’ by @funkytalia 
“such a lovely story; friends to lovers is <333″ - anon
‘An Average Friday Night’ by @acdeaky
“It’s very sad and angst and I love it!” - @leatherjacketmazzello 
‘Just Go With It’ by @sohoneyspreadyourwings
“The writing was just super great! I loved the whole story idea, and it made me fall even more in love with Joe.” - anon
‘Just Say It’ by @briansclogss
“I actually cried reading it and felt my heart rip out of my chest :((” - anon
‘Love, Miss Nurse’ + ‘Love, Genie’ by @acdeaky
“The description is absolutely incredible and the letter plot is amazing. The mere word auburn for Joe/Genie's hair gave me sparkles in the eyes I can't even explain why. I love it !!” - @warriorteam1924
‘Lazing on a Sunday Morning’ by @painandpleasure86
“This is Lily's very first fic and also continuing one of my story. It is just beautiful, I love it !!!” - @warriorteam1924
‘See What a Fool I’ve Been’ by @doubledeaky
“Even if it is with Brian May and I'm more into John Deacon, the plot is very good, the protagonists are very well described. A kind of mini series, with four parts, simply elegant and beautiful.” - @warriorteam1924
‘Wipe My Nightmares Away’ by @eileen-crys
“The idea of nightmare is just so great. The husband/wife plot works perfectly. The writing is excellent.” - @warriorteam1924
‘Weep Not For The Memories’ by @thosequeenboys (platonic)
“It made me cry, but because it was absolutely and amazingly beautiful. The description is perfect, the feelings expressed are so real, the protagonists perfectly fit. The writing is just superbe. An amazing author, really. Brilliant.” - @warriorteam1924
‘Not Just You and I’ by @rhapso-kei
“a very soft, very hilarious pregnancy reveal/announcement fic. legitimately, I laughed almost the entire time I read it. everyone, from reader to john, are Top Tier Dumbasses and I love them for it.” - @littlespoiltthing
‘Morning Glow’ by @ohmyrog
“a short but tooth-achingly sweet thing. it's like a little morning pick-me-up! you're almost immediately immersed in this soft little world. and i believe it was written on the fly, which is pretty awesome!” - @littlespoiltthing
‘Present!Roger Universe’ by @blamerogertaylor 
“The best present!Roger fic series I've read, the others are almost always smutty, this one is 100% fluff/angst and I love it!” - anon
‘Pillow Talk’ by @bensmazzello nominated by anon
‘Right in the Middle’ by @brianmay-be
“I love all their fics but this one is so fluffy and pure, it warms me” - @tv-saved-the-teenage-girl
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