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Odd phrases encountered while reading books, no. 1: “[Human character name] came slithering out of a bush like a toad.”
Shouldn’t that be “hopping... like a snake”?
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Finish up silly commentary on LL #16? When writing it going so fucking fabulously that I’ve started getting deep enough to get rid of the info dump that told me Chapter One was not Chapter One? When completely random pairings have managed to sneak themselves into the very beginning of the story by way of both mechs simply existing in canon? Okay, both have abilities that are highly useful to their factions in the scope of this AU thus giving them reason to interact a good deal, but still?
Sorry, commentary. Maybe over the weekend when I’m not splitting my time between omgwriting and work. :D
~14k words and barely getting started. <333
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