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Once again I am rereading Corrupted by Design. This time I went on a twenty minute rant to my bestie over the phone how much I loved it because???? Anyway not to thirst too hard but your writing is like HONEY and I am essentially an obese bear pawing at your hive. Etc etc LOVE your work and just had to gush because UGH.
Also, a little question for funsies: were there any scenes you were most inspired or excited to write?? What were/are they are why were they your favorite?
OMG not an icon calling MY words honey!!! you are literally the pillar of the feyd brain rot community and to hear that from you made me shout @ my phone LMAO. love love love your fic, and i am so in awe of your work. it is seriously a delight to read. just the perfect blend of horror and romance, with some of the best writing i have ever read.
one particular scene that i enjoyed writing was absolutely the balcony scene with feyd. up until this point, he was only a dark politic figure, then a looming presence in the background, then a real danger when he scarred the reader. he was intrigued by her already, but focused on other things. that balcony scene was the first time they were alone, and he wanted to find out more about her and sought her out of his own free will. i wanted it to be as full of tension and intrigue as possible. with the death sentence/short-term Imperial Immunity, it sort of gave him permission to speak so freely with her. the scene isn't perfect but i'm really happy with how i transferred what i was thinking onto the page!
i was also really inspired to write that first scene with the reader and the Baron in the dining hall. that was the first scene that came to me when i was daydreaming in the shower (lmao), and i knew i had to write it down and continue on w the story!!! i keep my notes app open on my phone to write down scenes or lines of dialogue that come to me.
& of course i am the most excited writing the chapter(s) i'm currently writing!!!
ty for the question love and i'm so so happy you're enjoying it aaaaa
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galrakythel · 6 years
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voltron s7 liveblogging
episode 1:
so?????? keith wasn’t raised by shiro? of course
keith is so adorable
did he say the emo kid’s doing it???!?!?
dalterion belt? so the older paladins were in the same area of space?
krolia knows keith loves shiro alsjdalksdja
coran is so ridiculous i love him
oh my god honey i shrunk the kids
and then altean linguistics omg
ooooooo so keith and shiro didn’t know each other OOOO so he didn’t raise him i see
holy shit keith and shiro are wonderful omg
but he made that jump to save shiro
but what’s kieth’s dad’s name???
omggggg shiro’s chronically ill this show is something else
yooooooooo adam you in the wrong man
keith never left you shiro, he loves you
romelle is so cute
episode 2:
yo matt is still in space where are you man
okay i’m gonna say it, but i’m wary of romelle
krolia is so annoyed right now i love her
yo is krolia gonna see kolivan???
cosmic wolf is the sweetest space dog ever
so someone got a hold of Lotor’s tech.... so haggar/honerva???
hmmmm pirates?? that stole galra tech and equipment
lance and keith’s teamwork is amazing
yooooo mama krolia protecting her boys
how did romelle take that guy out
you’ve got to be kidding me
these girls can’t work with anyone
episode 3:
coran is still in the black lion
yo this crew looks to be all made of galra hybrids yo
zethrid is so gay, ezor is so gay, and they are gay together
acxa whoa babeeeeeeeeeeee you look so good
acxa got cute ass horns
she’s always been sweet on the one with the flippity hair lmfao wowwwwww ezor
holy hell is this show going with acxa/keith now omfg i love it
acxa is so hot i’m dying
three years ago??!??!!?!?!?!
got damn
episode 4:
yoooo this season is all over the fucking place omg
omg it’s saw
keith is fucking adorable
this episode is cray 
zarkon is so cute
what the hell is going on omfg “the dumb one”
omg antok ANTOK YOU BUTT
LOTOR TOO CUTE
wt flying f
haggar snack pack omfg
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why does keith always have to do his model pose lmao
episode 5:
yooooo krolia taking care of her kids i love her
kolivan please let it be kolivan
let krolia be reunited with her people
askdjsalkdjasdkajdlasj where are the fucking BLADES?!?!?!?!
are you fucking saying that all these people are fucking ddead
kolivan is dead? are you fuck waittttttt
holy shittttttttttt no way holy fucking hell what the hell just happened
keith you gotta save your entire family again
yo thse druids are fucking scary
so haggar has exiled people what???
allura baby you are the best
let kolivan live please
krolia my sweet peach
episode 6:
what in the hell
these guys cant catch a fucking break yo
lemme say that no sleep keith looks hot as fuck so yeah
they hallucinating
hunk saving the day again
so this thing has been hunting them for ever, angler fish style
these kids need a vacation jfc
episode 7:
i can just feel from “part 1″ that this is gonna be intense
where the hell is matt????
damn sendak done fucked up 
let’s see what the hell happens with this garrison
colleen gonna kill these ppl
garrison being shady as usual
sam preach baby preach
but you literally just let the blue lion go, iverson
LMFAO these graduates lmfao
yo though, they all just went through all this resistance and then the galra just dropkicked them???!?!!
colleen is the real mvp
omg the family videos
admiral got her ass handed to her yo
episode 8:
is sendak behind it
yupppp
yoooo he’s got nothing else to do with his time, like just retire my man. get married to some dude, have som children and shut up
iverson yooooooooooooooooooo
is that adam doing what he does best, telling ppl what to do
wowwwwwwww listen to holt
world war 3
veronica??????? is that lance’s sister????
I KNEW ITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
episode 9:
everybody be fitting into those things
keith is so pissed right now
omg this is so hearbreaking tbh
their whole planet is just like every other one that theyve liberated before
omg these ppl and they families
keith is such a good boy
this giffin kid is sooooo fucking annoying. he antagonizes everyone
keith and hunk omgggggggggg
these characters have all come such a long way
a royal galran?!?!?!?!!? lmao okay sendak
episode 10:
yo shiro’s knew fucking arm is boss
damn i love the way lance interacts with his sister
sendak has earth locked down holy shit
veronica lmfao
why the hell is he doing this, never mind keith answered
........
where the hell has romelle been these past few meetings and such
and didn’t kolivan say that the altean colony was empty?????
is the romelle theory correct?!??!?!?!?!
allura and lance yessssssssss
yo something weird is going on and i’m not really sure what is happening
they were ready for you bcause there is someone on the inside
ROMELLE
THE FUCKING ADMIRAL WTF
i dont understand your whole planet is going to be killed and you’re okay with that
wow what a fucking traitor
episode 11:
these kids gonna go through another fucking trial
lmfao the admiral thought
she thought yo, she thought
but seriously where the hell is romelle?
yo coran i love you, the castleship is going to power the atlas woot woot
shiro is all grown up, captain shirogane, i love you
shiro, fire when ready, yeah fire into my gay ass
but seriously, where the FUCK is ROMELLE?
remotely. they are remotely controlling them. i love it.
welp snitches get stitches 
episode 12:
another part one
i think sendak is just jelly he didint get a chance ot pilot the red lion for zarkon lmao
lmfao yes they will
sendak has already stated he doesnt give a shit about people
but like after this is all said and done theres still going to be a power vacuum within the galra society. this isn’t gonna be over
shiro is so bae when he’s dishing out orders omg
this boy better not die i cant lose him
stop making shiro suffer jfc
shiro better be okay, let shiro retire please
yo showdown since season one
keith saving his husband. AGAIN.
episode 13:
haggar or comet???
oh nooooooo its fucking lotor
or zarkon?
or? who?????!?!?
okay so my guesses: haggar, lotor, or zarkon.... or...
ROMELLE! lmao
part of me really feels like it may be haggar because she had spent her time in some kind of quintessence field but idk
it felt like the komar
it’s haggar omg
it’s fucking haggar who else uses magic like that
wow they cant catch a break
OMFG
omg shay came to visit
kolivan and krolia yooooooooo
acxa yooooooo
haggar took those alteans yo
now let these people rest
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