#officially immortalized as the i am death scribbler what more could i ask for

[himehikoshrine]

Now that the translation is complete and live, I want to share these side by side. On the left is the original page from Puppet, and the right is my English version. This went through so many iterations, and I still maintain the one we chose is more legible than the original, but I'm happy with how it turned out. The second panel was tough to crack, but I hope people like the solution I ultimately went with. I think overall the vibe is preserved.

We decided to preserve the JP in the color spread as it would change it too much to try to redo it, but its part of the same lines I suspect you'll recognize. It did take a bit to decode and we had to consult someone to make sure we were getting the kanji matched up. The first two lines are just in hiragana, though in the game they are usually shown in kanji, but this makes them look really cool scrawled between the figures.