#oc making is hard wahhhh

[w1tchcr4ftt]

I need more inspiration so im coming here before i inevitably pass out

im making an angel oc (like the one i posted rory)based on 1970s greaser looks and I need extra ideas cus all I got is that his name is reese and he plays the guitar and rides a motorcycle

my inspiration characters

danny zuko from grease and micheal from the lost boys

[rainbow-wolf120]

Haiii @rayix !! I like your silly goober! We need more shapshifters in the world 🤝 🤝

So um... I'm in a gift mood. So here's Joxster! I like his design and him being a shapshifter made me giggle :3

So I drew him and my own oc: Tempast! It's also a shapeshifter, but it is its whole thing than a side thing lol

They shifted into each other :D ! It's a little confusing because Tempast switches colors and Joxster doesn't but uhhhh

Anyway bye!!! I don't know how to talk to moots 🏃🏃

[benjineedssleep]

👋 7 and 11 for the "get to know your fic writer" asks, please!

ohhh these are solid ones. can't believe i actually have answers though LOLOL

here's the og post if anyone else wants to join in on the sillies -> Get to know your fic writer! if you were tagged, question 11 was asking for fic recs and ily <3

7. How do you choose which POV to write from?

it comes to me in a vision /hj

no but in all seriousness when i come up with ideas for any kind of story (drabble, one shot, short fic, long fic, doesn't matter) they kind of come with a built in pov. i don't think there's ever been a time when i've struggled to come up with a character who i want to tell the story. i think a part of this has to do with the fact some semblance of conflict comes prepackaged with my ideas and conflict is always tied to a person for me.

like with my current short fic, the premise was always that sam was to have a struggle with the reality of being alone in x amount of time because i see sam as a very family/community oriented person. so i guess in this instance you can say my pov choices not only stem from the story idea itself, but the idea stems from some core aspect of a character and their personality.

does that make any sense? i hope it does D:

11. Link your three favorite fics right now.

the sambastian brainrot is actually insane however:

You've Really Got Me by softwisp

this fic is genuinely one of the most well written and captivating fics i've read in a long fucking time. it's also so fascinating because it's written in this super internal monologue-y stream of consciousness way that i've literally never seen before.

please note this fic is sexually explicit tho lmao

The Sunshine of Your Smile by Andrea_P_Quintell

this fucking fic ALTERED MY BRAIN CHEMISTRY. i remember reading this and texting my friend at the speed of LIGHT when i finished. i think about it now and then and honestly it's due for a reread. also finding out @shortysus4 wrote this has me *slamming fist on table* /pos y'all are so mf-ing talented holy shit--

Frog Rock by wheneveryouwantto

this was the fic that converted me to the sambastian religion. i don't even know how i started shipping them i just know i read this and something in me went "wait a goddamn minute", saw the possibilities, and went insane. and it's not even like it was the first sdv/sambastian fic i ever read. there were others but this was the fic that flipped the switch. @superpyodan i'm looking at you and i'm bowing LMFAO

YOU ALSO GET BONUSES

i've been low key invested in the little snippets of @superpyodan's oc (kenny) x alex fic and @eemamminy-art's oc (mallory) x alex fic that they both post. i haven't committed to the fics themselves just yet HOWEVER i can say both of their ocs live rent free in my head. one day i will have the mentals to pick up the fics but for now they're bonuses for straight vibes alone XD

also if you're tagged here and had absolutely no idea i fucked with your writing that hard i am SO SORRY-- i've been a lurker for 4 months and only started showing my face like a month ago wahhhh D:

[neonmetro]

I just want to say (as if I haven't made it obvious) that my brain has been filled with your silly goobers JAJDJXJCJXJDJJGV

AT THE MOMENT SPECIFICALLY WAR AND EZRA???? IDK MAN THEY HAVE JUST BEEN CROWDING MY MIND THEY ARE SO SILLY WAHHHH 😭💖💖💖💖

Virgil is also like, so cool BUT WHO AM I KIDDING LITTERALLY ALL OF YOUR OCS ARE

WAR IS HONESTLY SO SILLY LIKE I LOVE THEM SO MUCH BUT I JUST LOVE ALL OF THE APOCALYPSE HORSEMEN SO IDK SKSNKSJCJGG

Their design is so coolio and sick !!! WAHHHHHH

Words also cannot DESCRIBE how much I have been thinking about Ezra lately like chat it's just "woah,... she is soooo cool" AND JUST HER DESIGN IS SO COOL TO ME

I could go on and ON about the Apocalypse horsemen guys, they are just so silly !!!! I love them so much.

All of project Martyr are also just to DIE for. Honestly I just love them all so much, don't know a lot about them (would love too though *makes wild gestures*) but they are so JWJSJDJFHF AMAZING (guys SAMYAZA???? OML I LOVE THEM)

And I love Deco and Eve <333 but they are always in my mind so LIKE

Corp heads is just a whole other rodeo *Drops on knees in defeat* honestly I could talk about my brainrot with the corp heads and it would kill someone /J

It's so hard not to talk about all of Novaturient and just be like "I LOVE ALL OF THEM SO MUCH *Inserts paragraph talking about the sillies and how brainrotted I am and just blasting people*"

Can you tell I wrote this ask just to fan girl??? It's not Uly anon without fangirling to be honessttt /SILLY

SO SORRY for such a long ask, school is tmwr, and I REALLY just love your silly babies smmm

-Ulysses loving anon

GHGNGNGGHHGGNGGNH THANK YOU ULANON 😭😭😭😭😭 I'M SORRY I GOT TO THIS ASK SO LATE MY ASS WAS KIND OF GOING THROUGH THE DEMONS

THANK YOU FOR LIKING MY SILLY BLORBOS... RAHHH NUMERO UNO FANGIRL !!!

i loveee ezra's design 😭 techwear my beloved i need to do it more

HONESTLY EVERYONE YOU'RE NAME DROPPING IS WEARING SOME FORM OF TECHWEAR I THINK I'M SENSING A PATTERN HERE /J

i've been slowly writing at least projmar's story but like . well it's going to be jam packed with so much character shit i'll at least give you a snippet i wrote today...

GOD #()*($&*^#*&(*!)(!!! I MIGHT NEVER GET OVER THE FACT PEOPLE SHARE NOVATURI'S EXISTENCE TO PEOPLE THEY KNOW TOO ITS CRAZY TO ME

no i understand.... stay strong soldier in the school trenches may the blorbos keep you company...

[samantha-and-her-chaotic-desires]

“🖊“

EHUEHEUEHEHE surprise us w any of ur ocs B) SENDING MUCH LOVE UR WAYYY <333

WAHHHH TYTYTYTYYYY TYSM <3333

ALSO ANY OC? BET LOL HERE WE GOOOOOOOOOOOOO

"The Marvelous Mandisa" - Mandisa Sephtis:

FIRST IDEAS:

I wanted to do a Sphinx character for Lackadaisy! But oh my GOD she was so HARD TO DRAW. So WRINKLY. Nonetheless she's one of my favorite designs!

Her suit color palette is faded green and light brown, something subtle and not too flashy. She also has a rose regalia pinned on her jacket lapel.

Heeled boots heeled boots heeled boots heeled boots---

I didn't have much of a process, but she originally had a cane. Didn't like that idea, it made her too...showman-y, and don't get me wrong! I enjoy showmen, but it wasn't the vibe for her.

^This beautiful baby was my main inspiration for her design. I love Sphinxes <3333

I originally wanted to make her have two normal eyes and normal ears, but I gave her a glass eye---mainly for trying to figure out what I wanted to do/something new to try out!

I wanted to make her like...fifty years old, but she's in her thirties now lol plus she has three kids!

I wanted to make her of Persian-Egyptian descent, too!

Her voice claim would be Emily Blunt! Specifically Tempest Shadow from MLP lololol

FACTS/HEADCANONS:

She has three kids! Malachi, Cassandra, and Aziraphale. I honestly just picked names off the top of my head. Though Aziraphale was DEFINITELY because of Good Omens, and how I am not okay after that ending honestly, STILL NOT.

She is divorced: her husband Lorenzo was not kind to her as the years went on. Hence why she has a glass eye and scratches on her right eye. Her youngest son Aziraphale left with Lorenzo, Cassandra and Malachi staying behind with Mandisa.

Mandisa plays the violin: she used to perform with her second oldest, Cassandra, and her last show was in 1922, a month before Lorenzo left Mandisa.

She lives in the same apartment complex as Lacrimosa! Mandisa is also a hired assassin for Lacrimosa, working in the Rose Brigade

Her former occupation was a violinist and performer! Hence why she was called "The Marvelous Mandisa".

She loooooves making koshary for Malachi and Cassandra.

Koshary is an Egyptian dish (down below), and it consists of rice, lentils, macaroni, Vermicelli, tomato sauce, vegetable oil, onions, cumin, and coriander!

Her first name means "sweet" in Egyptian and African descent, and her last name means "eternal death", from Persian descent.

She is most likely to be redeemed.

She is bisexual! <3

ROLE/PURPOSE/OTHER STUFF:

Left hand woman to Lacrimosa! Though she kind of hates her guts most of the time...

She has a lover named James Monroe, a Maine Coon, and he is the SWEETEST THING to her.

She knows how to get her job done, quickly and painlessly, and she is a no-nonsense type of woman. She will NOT stand for lies or cheaters.

She doesn't play her violin much anymore...if anything, she plays it for Malachi and Cassandra. Other than that, she does not bring it out to the public: she fears for her already shattered reputation.

Her song if it were 2023 would be Don't Make Me by Malinda!

AAAAAAAAAAAAAA THIS WAS A BIT SHORTER THAN I HOPED, BUT I HOPE YOU ENJOY THIS!!! <3333

[starscreamirlofficial]

working 40 hrs next week :( at least my boss doesnt have me OCing at all but wahhhh im supposed to be part time :( AND its boost week tomorrow??? wails. grad season + boost week ??? hell hell hell hell hell hell hell hell hell hell hell hell hell hell hell hell hell hell hell hell hell whatever im just gonna have to dissociate extra hard through this just like i do every rough shift 💀 and maybe beg my boss to come in earlier on the busier days she has me opening bcz i am NOT good at multitasking yet 💀 esp on days i gotta put the truck away guh she better not get mad at me for not having the truck put away quickly bcz i know damn well i wont be able to. also rlly anxious bcz she has me closing one day by myself but. i never actually had actual training to close <:) like i had a few walkthroughs over the phone for some stuff but never actual in person training. like i know how to clean the store but the management side of things i only have a vague idea of. which isnt ideal bcz as a closing manager you gotta handle a lot of money related tasks <:) already fucked up once on my first day closing alone and didnt give two drivers their mileage money by accident (didnt understand how the checkout process works) and also left shit in the makeline which also rlly isnt good. guh this week is gonna be Hell i gotta make sure i stay on top of my meds

[kuudiwad]

Working on these two c:

I need to name them still and do their colors but i love their designs so far! Yall are the first to see these and i think imma post more cat rambles and sketches here so i can actually finalize my personal OC Clans

Celestialclan is on pause for rn but i for more freedom to play with Pearlclan so they are getting past and current day versions cuz i have a story that i want to start in the past where they start the clan then we yadda yadda it wasnt a problem UNTIL TODAY! Haha!😅

**this is not current day Pearlclan, this is Past Pearlclan ✨**

These cats are gonna be one of Pearlclan’s strongest warriors and their first medicine cat (i need a new name for these two but im strugglin lmao)

The warrior is so fluffyyyyyy i love her so much and shes got a huge personality with the paws to back it up! Im thinking of making her a warrior from a clan that defied starclan and was torn apart. Leaving the lands she used to know, due to land development. She follows as many rules lf the clans as she can as a rogue but longs for the companionship of a true clan backed by Starclan. (You know until i mess with it for LORE and fun twists hehehehehe)

The med cat was saved from an cat breeder, where most of the starting cats in Pearlclan escaped from, by the warrior and Pearlstar. He is very smart and a bit grumpy, he does actually crave power now that he is in the wild but finds it harder to gain due to his small size, being mixed with munchkin cat. Starclan does speak to him when he finds a sign from them. ***im being intentionally vague for now***

I swear to god hes not jayfeather coded, hes little power thirsty evil man coded but by technicality is not evil man coded

Cat rambles cat rambles i just wanna talk about my cats but finalizing story is hard WAHHHH but i did finish Pearlstar and his mate so ill be good and write something so i can post them next c:

[xnaochi]

hi! I love your art and your interesting OCs!! Have good day!

aaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAAAA HAFIKDJJFAHKD THABK THABK sobbing iLY FKJALDS

[schrikes]

Sorry meant ocs to submit for requestsand or suggestions! Wahhhh

huh okay, im assuming you’re the same anon sending these all these asks? so i just wanna say full disclosure that i am a hobby artist with a full time (non art) job and i draw in my free time for fun when i have the energy and inspiration to do so. i don’t get a lot of questions like this uhhh ever so im sorry that i didn’t give you a very good and clear answer when you previously sent the ask about rules/guidelines for suggestions bc i genuinely have no experience with fielding this type of ask and what to expect tbh lol. because now i have to reply and say that imo drawing someone’s oc is very different (TO ME) than asking me to draw, for example, a touhou character i might have already wanted to do a drawing of or a picture of vriska eating a hot dog while skateboarding you know?

when you sent your previous asks i was not even considering that it would be a request for me to draw your oc at all, because requests & suggestions imply something very different to me than drawing a person’s oc. LIKEEE i’m not trying to sound like a jackass bc i know i’m literally just a guy with a blog that has like less than 100 followers drawing art for fun but drawing a strangers oc is a lot of pressure and i take it seriously! interpreting the source material someone gives me and making sure it actually looks like their original character is super hard even if i get really really good references!

this is a really long winded way of saying sorry, but i won’t draw your oc for free as a request or suggestion! but if you are genuinely interested in having me draw something like that i would be happy to message you privately about doing it as a commission at a super reasonable rate. thanks for your understanding!

[valkavavaart]

hi im bored so im doing an oc thing

i decided i wannan do this w multiple soooo im going wwww ophelia, alice, and beatrice thats all bye

1. how easy is it to make them angry? do they show their anger or hide it?

ophelia - it's kinda easy to get under her skin, and she holds a grudge so if u piss her off then she won't forget it. but also she doesn't really ACT on grudges, she'll just be a little rude next time u talk to her. she doesnt really show much emotion but does kind of having a permanent :| or >:| on her face, so she'll look annoyed even if she isn't...

beatrice - generally just being rude or annoying will make her mad, but she gets over things within seconds and doesn't take people all that seriously to begin with, so it's not like pissing her off will do much. she'll be like pouty and tell u to knock it off, but she also doesnt rlly care

alice - it's difficult to make alice mad. like you have to be SO annoying or hurt him in such a drastic way for him to get pissed. usually when hes mad hes still all smiley and happy tho so he'd kinda just be >:)

2. do they believe in soulmates

ophelia - she believes in them in the sense that one person may have multiple people that can come into their lives and be considered a soulmate bc nothing is permanent and blah blah blah she doesnt rlly care tho

beatrice - she doesn't believe in soulmates but enjoys soulmate au fanfiction

alice - he definitely believes in soulmates and fate drawing people together, but is conistantly disappointed when he finds out people he like arent destined to stay with him

3. do they have any pet peeves?

ophelia - people with no concept of personal space (unless theyre like merrick or one of her close friends)

beatrice - ppl who eat w their mouth open

alice - the sound of violins

4. do they have a happy place? somewhere they go in their heads when they need to relax?

ophelia - oph just goes to the library man

beatrice - she doesnt need one bc shes always vibing

alice - when the man needs to relax hes either drunk as hell or hanging out with as many friends as he can get together, spending time alone with his thoughts is literally a nightmare for alice

5. at what stage of their life were they the happiest?

ophelia - the current stage of her life

beatrice - there hasnt been a stage where beatrice hasnt had fun :) she doesnt have anything to worry about!

alice - the current stage of his life

6. at what stage of their life were they the least happy

ophelia - the ages of 12-17

alice - any time he gets to the point in a relationship where he breaks up w someone and then he goes into "my life sucks wahhhh" mode for a few months

7. at a bar are they more likely to buy someone a drink, or have someone buy them a drink?

ophelia & beatrice - have someone else buy them a drink

alice - buy someone a drink

8. have they ever broken any bones? if yes, how?

ophelia - when her powers manifested at the age of 12, oph lost the ability to feel physical pain which lead to her straining herself more. she'd get into accidents or push herself too hard because she couldn't feel that it hurt and wold get injured through that (and she still does, but she has more knowledge of her limits now) so i guess she wouldve broken some bones through stuff thanks to that.

beatrice - never ever broken a bone!! she drinks a lot of milk to keep her bones STURDY :)

alice - has broken like his arm or fingers or just anything in that area due to a fight or something. he'll probably have broken a leg at some point too. again, probably in a fight. or maybe he fell out a tree. who knows.

9. do they have any memories/experiences they'd rather forget?

ophelia - she generally wants to brush most of her teen years away and forget things relating to her family, but also cant bring herself to hate them despite how garbage they are, so,

beatrice - there are probably a few conversations she's had with alice and percy that she's like to never remember ever again

alice - he cherishes all his memories, good or bad! he always thinks that he can learn from his mistakes and hardships! even though all he does is repeat the exact same things over and over and o

10. what is their favourite memory from their childhood?

ophelia - although her parents have always been cold to her, they used to go camping when she was about 9-10ish, and she always enjoyed spending time with her siblings around then.

beatrice - in the method she had been created she technically never was a child um. but in her early life, she enjoyed hanging out with levi! :D

alice - haha

11. do they have a "type" that they are usually attracted to?

ophelia - no

beatrice - bea will generally befriend anyone if theyre cute or theyre like her guy friends. as for a partner, she wants someone thats at LEAST a head taller than her normal form (her regular form is 5'5"), they need to be someone that likes hugs, someone who would coddle her, someone who would cosplay with/for her, someone who would buy her things..

alice - his "type" is just "someone interesting", but he thinks all people are interesting in their own right- you have to be SUUUUUUPER boring for him to not be into you in some way.

12. do they have any favourite possessions?

ophelia - ALL her alien plushies (most of which were gifts from merrick)

beatrice - everything inside her wardrobe

alice - cleaver

13. do they have any tattoos? if no, would they ever consider getting one?

ophelia - she doesn't have any, and doesn't really want one, but she's seen some real cool space ones, and--

beatrice - tattoos vanish when she changes her form unless she focuses REALLY hard on keeping it there, so she's given up on trying to get one to be permanent.

alice - he doesn't have any, but thinks that getting a sleeve would be cool. he doesn't have any idea for what he wants, though, so he hasn't bothered getting one. he also gets worried that if he gets one of his current aesthetic, he'll get bored of it and have to do something drastic to remove it.

14. do they have any piercings? if no, would they ever consider getting any?

ophelia - has her ears pierced

beatrice - doesn't want piercings, wears clip-on earrings

alice - wants a tongue piercing r belly-button piercing maybe.. and ear piercing might also be cool...

15. what is their dream house like?

ophelia - she'd like to live in a small town on the coast or something.. she doesn't really mind living in a small house since it'd just be her and merrick. but also if she had a house with an observatory, she'd love that a LOT. generally just wants somewhere nice and laid back.

beatrice - due to her void realm taking the form of whatever she wants, she has her dream home! it's literally just an apartment with a few rooms, but it has enough space for all the stuff she wants.

alice - he's in a similar position to Beatrice in that he already has his own dream place bc teehee void realm. He's a little more selfish in that he gave himself a big house with lots of space and rooms for him to fill with stuff- but also he wanted somewhere big so that all his friends could stay with him :)

16. what is something about them that people would not expect just by looking at them?

ophelia - UHHH just how lazy she is, probably.. woman barely tolerates having to jog somewhere please let her sit down

beatrice - idk probably the fact she befriends murder boys like alice

alice - all the music he listens to is like crazy frog and caramelldansen

17. how good are they at choosing gifts for others?

ophelia - she'll either just outright ask you what you want, or she'll give you money or a gift card, she doesn't like having to guess for people

beatrice - she literally picks gifts for other people based on what SHE likes.. like she'll get u something cause she tinks it's cute it doesn't matter if u've ever mentioned it before

alice - if ur his friend then he will have a list of all ur interests in the back of his brain at all times and does a pretty good job picking out gifts thanks to that

18. do they have a certain skill that they're particularly proud of?

ophelia - she's very good at researching things and digging up information that a lot of people can't find so she thinks that's kind of epic for her

beatrice - she's good at dancing, video games, and memorizing things. she will show off these skills as much as she can.

alice - umm... eyeball removal...?

19. how would a stranger they just met describe them?

ophelia - UHHHH... she's just polite to strangers so i think she'd be described as just that?? she doesnt really leave lasting impressions on people

beatrice - cute, bubbly, maybe super annoying

alice - friendly? :D

20. how would a close friend they've known for a long time describe them?

ophelia - kinda stupid but really cute

beatrice - just a lil ray of sunshine :)

alice - if you're asking like.. kai or beatrice then it's "he's cute and fun and pretty and nice to hang out with!!" but if youre asking like percy or nero then its "hes creepy and gross and im gonna beat his ass"

[cinnaminsvga]

Hi hey hello, new follow here!! I just finished Body of Mine, and I’M STILL CHORTLING!!! This piece was SO charming and unique. You have a very YOU style of writing that has your signature that I very much enjoyed. First of all, I thought the roommates, magic, and shifter aus blended very well to create a unique and memorable world. Second of all, “lucky for you, Yoongi had the arm span of a toddler.” HAHAHA I’M HOWLING. You had me cackling throughout the entire piece, making BOM so enjoyable.

[cont.] “I don’t want that vermin to gain the ability to speak. I can just tell no one is going to enjoy what he has to say.” “Whoa… I didn’t know yoongi has a fucking eject button.” HAHAHA she is hilarious and the way she handles him as she tries to find his “eject button” and he gives her the wide-eyed look with his mouth agape… I can’t stop seeing the shook hamster meme HAHAHA and I loved the scene with his first transformation. The “poof” and pink smoke, how fitting haha “He was incredibly wide; it

[cont.] almost made no sense that he was a hamster just a few seconds ago. What did he do, bench press sunflower seeds all day?” and “C’mon, human! Bring me your finest garments because my handsomely sculpted testicles are starting to shrivel up from the cold.” HAHAHA THE WAY YOU HAVE ME ROLLLING THOOOO!!! The humor in the fic just keeeeeps comin, “… prompting you to grad the small rodent and squeeze him like a squeaky to. (And what do you know – he even squeaks like one too!) OMGGG poor Jin HAHAHA but

[cont.] when he realizes she’s forgotten his birthday, I could feel how disappointed and hurt he was :( and the way she tries so hard to make it up to him has me endeared. You can tell she cares a lot for him, even tho he’s a rodenty brat. The scene where they’re sitting on his bed going over the rules for the 10 wishes was one of my faves. The fact that she already knows he’s going to ask for world domination and uh… bodily enlargement really alludes to just how well she understands him. Also, that

[cont.] piece of dialogue is really fucking funny HAHAH “Seokjin looks down at his crotch dejectedly.” Is he trying to tear a woman apart or something?!?! And when he makes his first wish- I about died laughing. So unexpected, but also, makes so much sense. “That little bunny bitch! Thinks he’s hot shit… I want him to finally get a taste of his own medicine! HAHAH ok, I think I’m on my third point rn, but it’s about Seokjin’s characterization. He’s SO chaotic, SO jin-esque with a dash of narcissism. You

[cont.] You killed it with his personality in this fic, bravo!! Like I know he’s the sweetest, most caring man, but will act like a him-bo to put a smile on your face and I love it! “My balls are where the ladies get their babies” HAHAH I’M CRYING WHY IS HE LIKE THIS “pink is for happiness, right?” ohhhhh boy things are about to get iiiiiiiiinteresting. And I HAVE TO ASK but… what happened that one time she penetrated his asshole with her finger?!? Lastly, that smut scene tho…. PHEW with or without that

[cont.] horny juice, I feel like seokjin would’ve delivered!!! I appreciated how attentive he was towards her pleasure, eating her out (re: appetizer HAHA) and making sure he wasn’t hurting her upon penetration. Overall, you had me laughing throughout this entire piece until the smut and then I was horny laughing. Last thing I gotta ask, but since jin’s a hamster shifter… how’s that libido tho ;) hope you are well, thank you for sharing them with us!! Pls accept all my love!! ps interesting that his

[cont.] that his transformation scent is caramel and mint.... given he has such a disdain for mint choc chip ice cream HAHAHA

WOOOOOW THIS IS SUCH A SWEET MESSAGE?? HOLY HELL THIS REALLY PUT SUCH A BIG SMILE ON MY FACE AHHHH YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH YOUR COMMENTS MEAN TO ME 😭

im so happy that i was able to make you laugh a lot with this fic!! that was pretty much my biggest goal when i was writing this (i’m not a very good smut writer, so i thought that if i could focus more on the humor aspect of the fic, i could make up for what i was lacking in HAHAHA) 

thank you also for saying that i nailed his personality 😭 i love writing jin so much, mostly because i can have so much fun making him this chaotic and over-the-top character and it makes me laugh just thinking of him doing/saying these things that i write... you’re SO RIGHT THO about him acting like a himbo just to make you smile... honestly, in this fic, he was mostly just acting stupid bc he knows it makes the oc smile... deep inside, he’s an incredibly sweet and caring person (oc even mentions that he takes care of her whenever she’s feeling stressed) which just makes him even more lovable?? idk i just love him so much you have NO idea...

and thank you for horny laughing at the smut HAJSDHAJS I REALLY TRIED MY BEST AND I HOPE IT WAS GOOD ENOUGH WAHHHH SERIOUSLY THO THIS ASK GAVE ME SO MUCH LIFE THANK YOU FOR MAKING MY DAY/WEEK/MONTH/YEAR!! I LOVE YOU

((and yes, as a hamster shifter... he’s got a sex drive like NO ONE’S business... idk how he survived months living with the oc without jumping her... just shows how much of a gentleman he actually is *sob* and yes i made his transformation scent caramel bc he’s sweet but mint bc... idk i always associate mint with old people?? HASJDHASJSAKJD NOT SAYING HES OLD BUT he do be acting like a cranky grandpa sometimes... i love that part of him tho LMAO but then again i also hate mint choco chip so... hmm... idk my brain works in mysterious ways HAHAHAH))

[ahundredtimesover]

Hi Mimi!!

I am enjoying the story, Mimi! I initially set out to wait until you posted all and then binge read, but I couldn't help it. I'm currently on summer break from school, and have lots of time. But also, I realized you're posting every 3 to 4 days (like OMG thank you!), and then learning you write everything in one go fueled me to support you as you're releasing each chapter! You've worked so hard and we need to return the favor!

Okay on to my thoughts. I usually can separate the character of Jin in fiction from real life Jin, so that's definitely not a problem. But I definitely love how I as a reader don't have to start from a blank canvas because we all have a certain idea of Jin already, and then the stories build from there. You do a great job at building the character, the world, the conflict, the resolution, and manage to do it with so much depth and build in lessons that are just perfect.

I love the way you incorporated the dead stars element. Gosh it was beautiful, and poetic.

I was initially frustrated with Jin's character because he is fickle. He isn't being fair to Seri. But then the cliffhanger where he goes to see Seri to break things off... he finally made a choice. I'm like good, finally, make a CHOICE even if it hurts someone, just stop prolonging it. I'm left with the lingering question of will OC reciprocate right away? I see her in the future feeling immensely bad for being a homewrecker because she already does feel bad and they're only "faking" it. I do wonder what Seri will do/say in the next chapter tho! We haven't heard much from her except to say she is fine with the whole arrangement.

The cliffhangers are welcomed because I have learned to read multiple fics at the same time so I'm not yearning so much for the next chapter of a story LOL.

I never saw Seri or Namjoon as the villain either... I saw complexity. Complexity that waits to be unraveled by our characters. I see Namjoon as lofty and a free spirit. Seri, I don't know her well enough to judge her except that she was okay with being a secret for five years :( which makes me sad. There is an element of filial piety with OC and Jin that I see. I also think when you're taking on a new role running a huge corporation you don't have much time for building a relationship. It's like Seri was the starter wife (sorry to sound crude!), but that's not to say that she didn't mean anything to Jin and vice versa. I'm waiting for him and her to explain things tho. Okay, that's it for now.

I'm sure I missed a lot of things in this but I just wanted to offer you something in the form of feedback because you deserve to know that there are those who are thinking of your story, and reading them!

Thank you for putting the time in to share your wonderful stories with us!! I'm looking forward to reading the rest of The Light of Dead Stars!

Anyway, these are my thoughts for now. Feel better, and take care Mimi! <3333333

Wahhhh this was so lovely to read 🥹🥹 feedback lets me know if there’s something else to tweak or clarify in the next chapters hehe and I tend to be a little protective of my characters and want readers to understand their humanness and complexity. I like that word and you described it well. Even if we only hear bits and pieces of Namjoon and Seri, I think there’s enough for us to understand them a little and their own desires (we’ll know more about Seri in chapter 7!) and how those affect our main characters, too.

And yes, about Jin. I wanted to show the juxtaposition of professional Jin and personal Jin and how they’re so different. There are things people lose in the midst of becoming successful and working for the good graces of their families; we can see that with both Jin and OC. And you do know OC well 😉 but I can assure you that more will happen involving all our characters and I’m excited to know how you think!

Like that you enjoyed the dead stars conversation, too! Thank you so much for this; it truly means a lot to know what you think of the story 🥰🥰🥰

[yuzukult]

i am so invested in yours but not yours oh my god the new chapter has me on the edge of my seat LMFAO i'm excited for the next update!!!! (take your time tho i know you said you were getting stuck while writing so i will be here waiting patiently <3)

WAHHHH ngl asks / comments like these make me :( bc it means that people are actually reading and looking forward to my works :( it’s been hard for me to reach out to my carat audience bc my fics tend to be lengthy or not just purely a smut scenario

but thank you !! for reading and being so patient :) i find myself writing my other fic (it’s a love triangle + racing!au with seokmin x oc x wonwoo) but mostly because it’s been so long and i still haven’t finished yet and it’s bugging me !! but your ask is a reminder to go back to yours but not yours 😭 i’m glad to hear you are enjoying it so far :)

[bonniefront]

How do you have so little likes ur ocs stories are amazing!!!

* WAHHHH THANK YOU!!!

* It always makes me so happy whenever people say they enjoy my OCs. I've been making OCs for like five years now so it's always great hearing that my hard work has paid off <3

* Not a lot of people seem interested in OC stuff but I don't mind because I create art and characters for me <3

[spindashed]

(via https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y1dV4YriZVM)

Over time, if you follow my blog, you will see me write “counter articles” in response to the fandom, and non-fandom videos, reviews... etc.

Lets begin!

1.) “Have an actual story this time.” I can partially agree with this.  I do agree that having a in-depth story per console game adds to the value of the experience. More so than stories that are short and simplistic. Sonic Unleashed had an amazing story, and it’s gameplay was great!  I loved the daytime stages, and I personally LOVED the nighttime stages too!(The werehog was a nice touch, it gave flavour to the story, and it had a very “God of War” vibe to it, both the game mechanics and the fact that you had to solve puzzles.. Huge points from myself especially since I love the God of war series.) That said! phrasing your first rant with: “Have an actual story this time.” Is quite an ignorant statement.. 

I strongly feel you’re grasping at straws with this one, because I could easily sit here and list the “actual stories” from each game. Sure some games had shorter plots, or plots that weren’t seriously in-depth like Unleashed, but there are stories there. Saying otherwise is just straight up ignorant.  Besides! Sometimes simplicity is best.

2.) “Only put fan favourite characters in the game’s story if it’s for a legitimate purpose, however, no more of the ‘The adventures of Sonic and Tails’.” This one is a funny subject. When Sega had Sonic’s friends in game as playable’s, there came a point where   people were LITERALLY bitching and complaining about how they’re so sick and tired of Sonic’s friends!!!! That all they wanted was “SONIC” as a playable..

Now that Sonic has been the only playable in most games, fans are now complaining about how they want Sonic’s friends back.. Smh.

For some fans, having certain characters as playable’s (I.e. Shadow.), would bring a lot of joy... Fortunately with myself, I’ve been a Sonic fan since 1991, and usually have a preference to only use Sonic, so I’m personally happy with Sonic only games. But my personal preference aside; I think it’s safe to say fans of specific characters would be far happier to see their favourites appear even if they are NPC’s (Non playable characters) oppose to them not appearing whatsoever..  In my personal opinion, I’d say if Sega/Sonic Team decide to have a NPC appear, they should have them doing something, even if it’s an Easter egg kind of thing in the background for fans to catch.

3.) “Don’t reply too much on nostalgia.” Alright! Green Hill Zone crybabies need to get over themselves. Wahhh, Green Hill Zone is back... Why! Wahhhh.. Are you sure you’re even a Sonic fan? The Green Hill Zone was LITERALLY the FIRST stage in the series!  It was brought back, because it’s timeless it’s iconic just like Sonic himself. The Green Hill Zone is like Mario’s Mushroom Kingdom, like Cloud Strife’s Midgard, like Link’s Hyrule... I can go on..  Not to mention: It has COMPLETE justification to reappear in Sonic Forces, considering it’s where Classic Sonic spends a lot of his time. (This has been verified by direct source: “Sonic revisit GHZ often, because he really likes that Zone.”)

If Classic Sonic is brought back to the present time, where else would you expect him to be found? Gtfo.

(Green Hill Zone) “A lot of us are getting sick of it..”

Speak for yourself. I should also note, the most vocal fans in our fandom, often also tend to be the haters.. The same crybabies that whine about everything.(Wahhh Sonic’s eyes are green. Wahhh Sonic’s arms are blue...)

4.) “Stage to stage is fine, but if you’re gonna have a hub don’t be lazy with it.”

a.) I loved Sonic Unleashed too. I give you that.

b.) If you actually played the game in full, and paid attention to the concept of the story, you’d understand that the hub world stages being completely “white” was justified, and even when you bring life back into it, the background stays white because Time Eater FUCKING ATE TIME!

If there is nothing left in existence other than pocket zones (a.k.a the hub worlds.), it’s either going to be white space, or black space. Deal with it.

c.) Sonic Generations was one of the best games of the modern era... I think based on what the game was in it’s overall entirety, we can cut the hub world’s details some slack. Besides, what glorious games have you made? Talk is cheap, remember this.

5.) “No stupid cringe worthy jokes.” Alrighty, I can agree with this one.  Knowing how to blend good humour in with the right action and seriousness is key for greatness.

I feel that because Sega has begun aiming the games at a younger audience, despite the fact that the younger audience of today actually play the same “serious” games that we adults play..  The jokes can come off a bit much sometimes.  I’ve been a long time reader of the Archie comics (Which I’m sad to see it’s probably been canceled.) That said, I’d enjoy seeing Ian Flynn write for Sonic games, I think he’d be a wicked asset to the games.

6.) “If you’re going to have Wisps be more creative and actually make them fun.” I’ve said this before and I’ll say it again! For people who ACTUALLY play the games.. They obviously served a purpose in “Sonic Colours” storyline.

It was literally explained in “Sonic Runners”, why the Wisps were still in Sonic’s world. (After the events of Sonic Colours, some Wisps liked Sonic’s world so much, they decided to stay on earth/mobius.)

In Sonic Lost World, they were completely optional to use or not. Plus Wisps are basically items/power ups. KEY WORDS: “Optional to use.”

I don’t see anyone complaining about it when Mario uses his reoccurring power ups, so why must Sonic fans be so cringe.. And lastly, I’m starting to think people in our fandom are headass af..  This time around, in Sonic Forces, the Wisps aren’t there like they have been in the past. They are now “Wispons” as in they power up “Avatar’s” gadgets. (Maybe spend less time complaining, and pay a little more attention to the content revealed.. smh.) 

The fact that people are actually complaining about basically an item/power up, which the Wisps literally are; is as headass beyond words as can be..

7.) “Make sure the custom character feature lives up to the hype.”

a.) Sega literally stated “Avatar” (Which is what Sega calls him/her.) plays a heavy role in the events/story of Sonic Forces. Again you would know this if you actually paid attention over flapping lips.

b.) Sega/Aaron Webber also literally stated that the Avatar character doesn’t actually talk, voice actors have been hired, and they do grunt and have voicing to some extent. This may or may not be something that will change. But as far as things go at the moment, they won’t have any real lines.

c.) Avatar is each person’s PERSONAL OC, which literally means, if Avatar doesn't live up to the hype, you as a player failed. Sega is simply giving fans a tool, it’s up to the fans on how to use it.

8.) “Have a Super Sonic final boss fight.” I agree having Super Sonic in the games is fun, mostly because I love Sonic including each of his forms..  But I find this one ironic, because you were literally just complaining about how Green Hill Zone has been back too many times, and how the Wisps were back again.. And yet you want “Super Sonic” to be just that. (Perfect example of the crybaby logic at it’s best.)  Thank you for proving my point. *Thumb up!*

9.) “Try as hard as you possibly can to not make the game short.” I think you should go try to make your own game.  It’s easy to talk, but if you have no experience in the industry that’s quite the ignorant statement man..  But don’t get me entirely wrong. I understand where you’re coming from. Games are not cheap these days, and feeling like we have some good content to really dig deep into goes a long way.

10.) “No stupid power up that spawns when you die too much so you can skip ahead to the next checkpoint. Not only does activating it happen on accident, but it’s like the game is holding my hand.” It’s funny, because Mario games have an option where if you die around 3 times, you have the option to let Luigi complete the stage for you. (I.e. skip the stage.)  And no one complains about that. The only catch from what I understand is skipping a stage in a Mario game will keep you from unlocking everything in-game.  I think it’s a pretty fair, or good optional thing to have.

11.) “Either change Sonic’s Voice or Roger Craig Smith Improves.” Jason Griffin was one of my favourite voice actors, no doubt! But Roger isn’t all that bad. Not to mention the voice actors do actively try to improve, but they’re also doing what Sega directs them to do. As far as I’m concern, this is a complaint based on bias, and is not worthy of the “my opinion” title.

12.) “Have a moment in the story that somewhat shocks the player.” Plot twist are great, but when you have fans that wear the “expect card” right on their forehead, even if Sega comes up with a pretty good plot twist, I’m sure the fans will find something to complain about. (Notice 99% of your video is a big complaint?) 

13.) ”Have Unleashed-esque presentation.” I can agree with you on how epic Sonic Unleashed was all day. And I would love a “Unleashed-esque” presentation/depth to all the games. But lets be real, you and I both know the loud people in our fandom will find something to complain about regardless.

14.) “Don’t be kiddy.” I’ve been saying this one for a long time now. Sonic should always be catered to us long time old fans. The younger fans will come into the fandom on their own.

One of the hottest games for people was the “Call of Duty” games. Despite being rated for the older crowd, I cannot begin to tell you how many underaged kids were playing these.

My point is, kids like what we older fans like.  (I should also note, I have never cared for the COD games.)

15.) “Make the gameplay more open than in previous games.” “Sonic Boom Rise of Lyric” was an open world game.

It was also meant to be a much fuller and in-depth game, but due to being rushed, and having to have massive game content cuts, it ended up being what it was. (Check out Sonic Synergy. What Sonic Boom RoL was meant to be, and it looks amazing.)

16.) “Fix the Ranking System.” This is the first time I’ve heard anyone complain about the rank system...

This one is also a ironic one, because if you check out the Mario games, those games are some of the easiest brain dead games you can play..... People eat them up, and yet when Sonic is time to time easier going, it’s a bad thing? Smh.

17.) “Fix the Ranking system animations.”  This one is a bit better of an opinion.  I did enjoy how Sonic would react to the rank in Unleashed, and how the music was dictated based on your play quality.

(I feel this one was an actual constructive criticism. Thus I accept this one.)

18.) “Have Crush 40.” There have been a few games without Crush 40 that had some real great OSTs. “Sonic Unleashed” was one of them. What I will say with this one is: I’d love more rock and even metal tracks in future games.. 

19.) “Have actual boss fights this time.” I’m pretty sure we’ll get a good serving of decent boss fights with Sonic Forces. 

20.) “Fix the Classic Sonic Physics.” a.) Plenty of people wanted Classic Sonic back. And when Sega brought him back, being true to the cringe our fandom is judged on, the crybabies haters started pushing the bandwagon for all who wanted a ride...

b.) Classic Sonic had pretty damn well the play style he had in the classic games, I think you’ve lost your damn mind.

(*Note: I should add, anyone who dislikes Classic Sonic is headass.  Without Classic Sonic, there would be no Modern Sonic. Respect the roots.)

21.) “Don’t make the final boss Eggman.” I’m not sure if I want to slap you or strangle you for this one.

Eggman is Sonic’s fucking nemesis. Get over yourself. Mario has Bowser, Cloud has Sephiroth, Ryu has Bison, Megaman has Dr.Wily, Blah blah blah blah.. The list goes on forever.

Every Super hero has his main villain. And it’s not ALWAYS Eggman. Sonic has fought other main bosses just as equally as everyone else in their own respective games.

22.) “Eliminate the lives system.” SMFH! That’s all I can do for this one.

This is by far one of the most ridiculous things I've ever heard. I guess every other game best get rid of the lives system too right? Get the fuck outta here.

24.) “Put the Chaos Emeralds in the story.” Adding the Chaos Emeralds for the sake of adding them for what tiny fan service addition they give to the story, just like throwing in Super Sonic for the mere fan service would be literally no different from just throwing random Sonic friends into the story for mere fan service, your arguments are literally contradictory as fuck. Smh.

25.) “No false Advertising.” As mentioned earlier: Sonic Boom was what it was strictly because the game was rushed, and “Big Red Button” literally got a last minute notice that it was for the weaker system compared to what they had been making it for. Thus the game had significant content cuts, and was released incomplete.

Hence why Sega literally gave a public apology.

26.) “Bring back humans to raise the stakes.” Humans have both appeared and been absent across games. This will not make a difference to overall game quality so once again, this is a ridiculous complaint.

27.) Just make a good Sonic game please, is that too much to ask?” a.) Sonic fan’s expressing their opinions makes the game better ONLY if it’s constructive criticism! The games will not ever be better when the bitching and complaining is void of a positive point to improve said game. (i.e. “the constructive” part.).

b.) “I call it actually caring.” *See 27a. If you still cannot comprehend that, might I suggest getting a cat scan? 

28.) “I’m in grade school.” Why is it, school kids always seem to think they know it all. lmao.

29.) “This is not a Sonic hate video.” Than how about making a video with a overall positive tone. This entire video was nothing but the same tired bs.. Complain, complain, complain.

Try talking about what you love, and if you’re going to give constructive criticism, back it up with a positive fix. 

This fandom is already far too full of haters, and bandwagon riders that can’t think for themselves, we don’t need any more of that cringe.

“Sonic is my SECOND favourite game franchises.” Of course it is. 

*Closing Note: The Sonic hate, complaining for the sake of complaining, and constant negative tone with out purposeful point is tired af guys. It’s also far from cool. Don’t be a bandwagon baby.

If you are in this fandom, and all you think of is negativity when Sonic comes to mind, it’s time to leave the fandom and never come back.