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i read the last chapter of just ome touch and now i judt finished rereading the whole thing and oh my god, I've got things to say. first of all.. THANK YOU!!! this was everything i wanted and needed in a fic and you wrote it so perfectly and used the concept so well and just!!! so so good!!! i loved the ending. so many times a fic ends right after they get together and I'm always so unsatisfied because i want to know more, yknow? like just tiny things if ciera and hartley make it or how other people react or stuff like that and the way you finished it off with like the narrating what happens and it was just perfect!! also your writing style is so nice to read and just the last sentence "it's a nice ring" toes it together so well because there's still a future for them but also not as abrupt yknow? also dream would 100% try to propose at someone's wedding just because it made him so emotional and mushy like i can see that!! your writing feels really authentic and in my opinion you characterise them so well. I've read george pov so often were it just felt so wrong but your george and his thoughts and emotions felt so real. the way you portrayed the other characters also really stuck with me because it didn't feel like you just used them for the plot or anything but made them feel alive and and real. larray for example. (i think you mentioned how you were uncertain about his characterisation but it was incredible imo!!
i said it before i think bit the sentence "an man can dream but a man can't have dream" made me pause again completely. like i read it and then just sat there staring into the void.
georges journey meant a lot to me. the struggle of 'i'm straight because what else would i be, i just did things with the other sex even tho i never really enjoyed it' to 'making experiences that confuse you completely' to 'choosing the most logical label (i love dthe way you said that btw, like him doing maths of not being attracted to any women but to dream and dream is a man so he must be gay)' to 'total disaster confusion' to 'there's something that actually feels right and describes who i am' you really nailed that i think. i think this exact journey is so personal and familiar for lots of queer folks and I'm most likely not the only one that can identify with that a lot.
last but not least, thank you from a personal note. usually i avoid reading unfinished fics at all cost because a) I'm too scared that it won't get finished and b) my brain is a sieve and i just can't remember stuff for the life of me. but your fic intrigued me so much that i did follow the weekly updates and boy, did some things happen during that time. i graduated, went on vacation, moved two times and started my new job and you and your fic stayed with me during that and it was always a little highlight during all that uncertainty and stress.
hqve some flowers ๐ and chocolate ๐ซ and a cat ๐โโฌ because cats are cute and yeah, i really appreciate you and your writing <3 !!!
I've been sitting on this ask 1) because i love it so much and it's so nice and 2) because it has some spoilers and I wanted to wait a little bit before blasting them everything
THANK YOU omg thank you for saying such nice things!
Everyone's journey is so personal and unique. I still have trouble to this day explaining that one night stands don't do anything for me. They just make me uncomfortable and for a long time I had no idea why since everyone else in college seemed to be fine with it
If it helps at all watching a character go through something similar, then i can die happy lol
I can't believe so many things happened while this was coming out and all I did was drive across the city a few times and go to my parents' neighborhood pool
Lucky you, experiencing life!
Thanks for reading along as the chapters dropped and thank you for such a sweet ask :DDD
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