#most notably peaky stormy story which i just read
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augh I love d4dj but it's strength is really not in storytelling and the missed potential of some stories I've read is really bothering me
#most notably peaky stormy story which i just read#i did enjoy it but i think it (like many other stories) would've benefitted from more chapters and more time for character introspection#it just felt resolved too quickly#but yeah other issues i have is#photon should feel more like a professional unit. having a producer and manager occasionally show up is not enough to really emphasise it#i wish peaky had just finished their third year at hs because i think that would be more of an interesting take on their characters#a lot of their stories revolve around conflict between collective aims as a group and individual aims as well as clashes between members#so i think that combined with the new pressures of navigating young adult life and adding work or college into the mix would be interesting#rondo should feel more like an exclusive unit. they're not very exclusive if theyre doing lives left right and center lbr#they should also feel more professional imo#i wish there were more backgrounds because a lot are reused for different locations#which is FINE but i wish there was more yk?#i wish important side characters like the photon manager and alter ego manager had sprites#i could go on for a while but ill stop now
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