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Me again! So after you answered my question I decided to create some ocs based on menhera and I wanted some constructive criticism

Basically they’re sisters who have been through a lot. The older sister on the right has suffered through depression, self harm, and eating disorders due to constantly worrying about her sister’s health. She’s trying to get better but has made a few attempts (I used train tracks on one of her stockings as an example).

The younger sister on the right hates hospitals and how adults push all their problems onto her sister.

They will have a happy ending but for now they’re going through the wringer

omg they're so cute! I like how they represent mental health issues from physical sickness vs mental sickness. I think my favorite detail is the railway stocking, it's super subtle but meaningful at the same time.

I think thematically you've nailed it and I'd love to see more of them! The outfits look great too :) My only constructive criticism is to make sure all the patterns on the clothing are free to use. For example, I'm pretty sure the black pattern on the older sister's shirt is okay to use? But I recognize the younger sister's shirt as being from King-Lulu_Deer. While they allow some of their pixel art to be used (the ones marked as F2U), I think they don't allow use of their patterns because they sell them on RedBubble. I also recognize FrostedSoSweet (the pink sleeve, and maybe some of the other patterns?). I'm not sure what her policy on her patterns is, but if they haven't said they can be used it's usually best to assume the answer is no. So my only recommendation is to see if you can find safe to use patterns. I might have some in this blog's assets tag, just be sure to check any conditions of use the artist might have.

feel free to send in more about them if you want! They're super cute and I'd love to see how their story develops :)

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