Once I get out of EXPOSITION and BACKGROUND SETUP™ I feel like more of my writing style will come out. But then again there is no critical eye like your own, so bleg.
Normally I write a whole story out before I post it, but this is an exercise in fic practice so maybe I’m just critical because normally I can see how the whole thing ties into the story start to end but I HAVEN’T WRITTEN THE END YET SO