#kaytlarambles asks

[kaytlarambles]

hello!! how is your 'massive fix-it' coming along? and do you care to share one of your favorite paragraphs bc um I would care to see one 👀

The massive fix-it is expanding the more I think about character relationships! But that’s perhaps not a bad thing? It also makes me glad I didn’t just post it impulsively, like I’ve wanted to many times, because I might have to backtrack and change/add things and that’s easier done when it’s not already published...

Anyway, one of my favourite paragraphs:

Irritably, Jiang Cheng shrugged him off. "What're you laughing at? Have you seen yourself? You look like you've been drowned and dragged backwards through a bush." When Wei Wuxian's laughing didn't stop, he sneered. "If you were any skinnier, I'd think you were a Water Ghost yourself."

[artsy-alice]

I love your art! It's so adorable. <3 Wen Ning in a scrunchie, Good Boy Wangji, all of it! <3 It's made me like the idea of modern Sancheng and that is creeping its way into the fics I have planned and I'm not complaining. xD

aaaa whenever someone says i got them into sangcheng i’m just... 🙈🙈🙈

thank you! <3

[kaytlarambles]

"hair" for the game, and failing that, just do one of the sentences with a bunny bc they're cute :D

There were like 4 mentions of hair in this chapter, I never realised. XD

"Stop making a fuss," Lan Wangji chided, but there was nothing behind it. "You've rolled onto the ground." With gentle hands, he lifted Wei Wuxian back into his lap, smoothing a hand over his hair and brushing the loose strands from his clammy face.

[kaytlarambles]

(yay hi! see, babby is being good and doing as they were told. in return, you must sleep and instead answer this tomorrow💖) "blush" for the game, and if you don't have that, "forget" or "music" ✨

I don’t have blush, surprisingly, but I did find “forget”. I wasn’t sure if it was meant to be a sentence or a paragraph, but the sentence would have been a massive let down, so went with the whole thing:

Lan Wangji had had no idea what to do. The needs to punish and pleasure, discipline and debauch, were warring within him and he could barely separate the two. He was furious, angrier than he could ever remember being, and he couldn't tell if it was directed more at himself or the man in front of him. He'd even demanded a fight with him, right there in the Library Pavilion! What a shameful travesty that would have been, had Wei Wuxian not parroted back his own clan's rules at him. That he should forget himself in a moment of frustration... He could only snap at him to get out, at that point. He had come completely undone and needed to rebuild that peerless jade immediately or he had no idea what he would do to Wei Wuxian.

Lan Wangji remembers his frustrated lust in the Library Pavilion, from the first chapter of my massive fix-it.