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#itd make the numerous hypocrisies of the characters such more effective drama too
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The style of this narration is killing me bc it bounces between "here's X character's truth" and dry sections of lore super arbitrarily. Tomino I just need to know if you know which ideologies n pop sci are total junk. Pls.
#more recent chapters have framed 'overpopulation' as an ecofash rhetoric as it should lol
#but iirc early on the concept was taken at face value in a drier section like 'yeah forced space immigration fixed overpopulation guys'
#this translation has formatting errors lol so maybe its a case of not having scare quotes where they should be
#but given how poor the pacing is and how the sci fi is so much better at physics than biology i still blame him tho lol
#its a shame too bc i think expermention w format is warranted wrt newtype scenes
#breaking the formatting to get across the immediacy of a change in consiousness
#but having angle brackets AND free indirect narraration or whatever the POV is too much lol
#pick one and do it well! i want the narrative equivalent of a cut in SO bad
#itd make the numerous hypocrisies of the characters such more effective drama too
#get clear cut dramatic irony instead of conflicting info that reads more like continuity errors
#actually ig the 'amuro was still a virgin' punchline works well but thats the only obviously intentional example i can think of
#literacy attempt
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