#in the second person. my highschool creative writing project was like idk 1000 words? about my own ocs in a fantasy au based off of miitopi

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- ask me things you want to know about me

how you doing.

- why you follow me

Mash

- what’s on your mind/what you’re thinking about

Donnie from Rottmnt

- a compliment

your art style is very round and my brain likes it

- make me choose between two things

Water or air

- ask for advice

Do I write good angst or romance, and how can I make it better

- tell me a secret

I have plans for Keg and Juice.

- things you associate me with

Mash

- anything!!!!

I think I made this too surrounded by myself. So I’ll ask what is your favorite color, food, and drink.

(this is the Farmer Juice mod if you don’t know who I am. I understand)

-im doing well!!!! recently got a conditional offer to my top uni so yahoo!!!

-i promise ill do more with him soon. my brains been blasting itself with other stuff as of late

-im thinking about my ocs. currently redesgining some of them

-ive not had much chance to read much of your writing so i'll give some admittedly quite vague writing advice that goes for anyone. i don't consider myself to be much of a writer though.

primarily id suggest toying around with more show don't tell and different sentence starters as apposed to just a name or a pronoun if im to apply this i can go from:

''Mash slowly opens the door and nervously looks outside''

to

''Slowly, Mash grasps the doorknob, peeking though the crack as the door creaks open''

im communicating the same thing but it becomes a bit more interesting to read and a fair bit more descriptive

- hell yeah keg and juice

-hell yeah mash my funny little guy

-my favorite colour is pink [shocking] my favorite food is salmon [if were turning it into a meal, put some herb cream cheese and lemon on that fish and side it with some garlic baby potatoes and sweetcorn] and my favorite drink is probably pineapple juice