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taz-writes · 1 year ago

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so i tentatively started working on feilan again the other day?

just one hitch: because it has been FOUR ENTIRE YEARS since i got anything substantive done with this, i am rewriting from the bottom up again… my writing style has just changed way too much to keep working on the same core.

also, chapter 1 isn’t working the way i want it to anymore. it’s very charming, i still adore it, but it does not establish sayara as the type of person i want her to be… so new plot hook here we go!!!

patch notes: sayara is no longer a complete fucking idiot, and now remembers that the convention of tribes exists. jokes about defacing libraries replaced with jokes about pocket rocks, which MIGHT just come into play in the finale… ;)

#taz talks #feilan #look it just never made sense that sayara is as invested in politics and as ambitious as she is #but then she didn’t remember the CoT was happening and needed a whole pages long explainer reminder???#she’s not an idiot #in the new version i’m opening with her making a Persuasive Argument to brennadine abt how she should totally be allowed to go #brennadine isn’t having it but her dad actually IS #hence the last minute invitation #the spontaneous doriel decision that changed the fate of a nation…..

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