#im talking from experience and am low key ashamed lol

[iwantabatlleaxe]

I feel like I can tell when a writer uses character ai or some other variation, even if not using ai for writing.

It's like all is focused on action.

You know the "and the curtains were blue" thing? It's like we lost the beauty of description, the pacing that words can bring.

You should spend time describing things, writing is a painting form, you focus on what you want to draw attention on.

Like describe how that scar feels! Personify objects! Compare things! Create patterns to make me guess what the curtains being blue means!

But I've noticed the lack of that recently and it's just :( to me