Oh the animatic I would create for Candela Obscura: Eye For An Eye if I could
To the tune of Take Me Out to the Ballgame:
Take me out: Sean, gun shouldered, leads the party down the darkening railroad tunnel
To the ballgame: At the gate with the eye, Sean tosses a rope so they can climb over the wall
Take me out: They don’t climb fast enough as the train approaches, Sean pulls out a grenade
To the crowd: Sean blows up the gate, pulls Nathaniel through to safety at the last minute
Buy me some peanuts: Everyone realizes the lighthouse is dead and they’re surrounded by many many eyes
And cracker jacks: Auntie Bee starts scattering her bag of bloodied feed to distract the squid dogs
I don’t care: Everyone else moves to the lighthouse while Sean holds off squid dogs with his gun-club
If I never come back: Nathaniel orders Sean back, and he makes it up the rope just in time
For it’s root: A rift in reality opens up, the huge creature pushes through with too-big hands and smile
Root: Nathaniel collapses, a thread and blue ball rising out of his chest toward the creature
Root: Marion pushes Auntie Bee out of the way then collapses, threadless
For the home team: Auntie Bee grabs Jean and pulls her to the astrolabe as Sean stands firm
If they don’t win: Jean flips through the book until Auntie B reaches out to steady her and nods
It’s a shame: The creature smiles, its hand coming down like a cage over Marion
For it’s one: Sean raises his gun and shoots, the flash fades to the image of a rushing river (in sepia)
Two: Sean shoots, the flash fades to an image of a face behind a cracked door (in red)
Three strikes: Jean moves her hands in arcane shapes to sew the rift closed
You’re out: The creature rears back, disappearing back into the rift except for its severed hand
In the old: A ghostly image of Jean’s father kisses her head, Auntie Bee comes to her side
Ball: Nathan wakes, one eye white, while Sean pushes the hand away and kneels next to Marion
Game: Marion wakes, gasping, then screams
There's one final wide shot of the upside-down lighthouse's light coming back on and making a single sweep through the darkness
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