#i would read 50 chapters of this tbh
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+ CHAPTER FIVE // SECRET SOCIETY
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Tags — mentions of violence, mentions of throwing up, Toge is suchhhh a loser, getting rejected but not getting rejected yfm (you’ll see when you read)




Toge banged his head against the wall repeatedly after sending that text
“MY AURA ITS GONE”
do you guys see what’s happening. Do we know what’s happening next chapter
im gonna start posting these as often as I can because I wanna get this series done tbh, so expect frequent updates!!
panda fully intends to order the nachos again
Okay so hypothetically if I had the next 5 series in my drafts rn what would you say it goes kuroo, Armin, Megumi, Armin, Gojo in no specific order apart from Kuroo being first also the next two fics I got something cooking up for Yuta and ur not gonna like it considering doing more than one series at once because I like working on a multitude of things but I’m scared of losing the plot opinions????
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Emergency commissions/donations to help me move!
Hey all! I'm in a tough financial spot with a very unexpected $1000 move-out fee, and I need some help!
So I am offering fic commissions AND background/landscape art - That's right, writing AND art, for the prices below! I also will accept donations, but I feel more comfortable offering art, etc.
Donations:
I will accept donations if you just wanna help out! If you'd like to pay for a commission, keep scrolling.
If you would just like to donate without a commission, here is my Ko-Fi!
Fanfiction commissions:
Won't write:
fandoms I know nothing about (DM me if you'd like something outside of Gravity Falls work, though I'm sure that's where most of my following is)
gore
any type of thing that would get me cancelled on twitter dot com (come on guys, im a YouTuber now)
Will write:
Just about anything else tbh. OCs, melodrama, angst, hurt-comfort, you name it.
NSFW (for adult customers only. im not writing this for teenagers. do your homework)
Rates: $25 per 1k words, with a 150 word buffer. (Meaning, if I write 1150 words, I'm not charging you extra, it'll still be $25)
Send an ask or a DM if you are interested!
Note: I will not be posting these on Ao3, due to Ao3's "no money for fics" rules.
Examples of my fics, if you want to check out my work:
Note: Jersey Boy is my oldest fic (literally 8 years old and still going). The first couple chapters are pretty rough imo. The latter chapters are more in line with my capabilities. Also, yes, this fic is still being written, it's just being written between jobs and between work on YouTube vids, and I have less available time for it than I used to. Pay me to finish more of Jersey Boy (/s)
Background art commissions:
So, 90% of the artists I know tell me that background/environment art is one of the parts of the process they dislike the most. But it's actually my favorite thing to draw!
I actually don't feel comfortable enough in my drawing of characters to feel good about charging people for those, but I think I can consistently do some background art!
Examples of my art/pricing below!
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#gravity falls#art commissions#open commissions#writing commissions#signal boost#help me out if you are willing and able#or just share!
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//CN & TW server spoilers, GLB server miscs
I was overwhelmed to make any rounded post but I will try to make sense now XD
Anyway first in order, the one we wait the most when April arrives is here! Artem!


The theme for 5th Bday related to their early career, so I was hoping for Junior Attorney Artem because we did see bits from his Intern/Graduate Attorney Era in Day and Night SSR and Belle Nuit d'Amour SSR, and we know how he is as Senior Attorney now. He mentioned that he was more like her back then in Dream & Hereafter card, and a soon-to-retired attorney told Rosa about Artem style used to being a bit aggressive (they were talking about chess but it's not hard to see, it's also about his approach as attorney too). Also in line with a past we read in Day and Night SSR, someone who doesn't even think of the risk he might face because there is someone who needs his help and his lines in the 5th Bday PV!! I need to dissect his mind (very very fond)
I am very excited about this card, especially with the artemrosa art very much a callback to Belle Nuit d'Amour pre evol, i can't wait to pull it and I hope it delivers story-wise!!

Also finished the rerun free mr a few days ago and you definitely can get it for free again but there is no s-chips and namecard in rerun.
And the baby zuo ran puzzle..... so soft

Well, Zuo Ran's 5th Birthday event starts like April 18, so that's Friday business. I already secured funds to get it XD
Now, about the GLB server LOL
Usually I didn't address it much but some special cases since two unexpected features came earlier.
First of all, Flight of Fancy feature.

Every ML garden (this is an old screenshot tbh) where collecting nectar that eventually gathers itself, so it will reach 100% to unlock the page of the story (there are four pages per story).
Very easy feature, in general, level up skills/structure (25%/50%/75% you will get currency to level it up), collecting nectar (don't let it reach limit so it can keep gathering) then get the ornaments for the garden after finished stories (like the one marked with hands in my screenshot).
Skill/Structure I am talking about (I am currently unlocking newest lu jinghe story in tw server)

In this update, there should be two stories: One related to Main Story and from ML POV and the other one from Outsider POV.
I am very much an absolute shill for Main Story, so I always encourage everyone to read that first. It's the story with these illustrations:

(XZML ENGRAVED IN DNA)
If my mind doesn't fail me, it should be like this for the one related to the Main Story:
Zuo Ran - Post Chapter 6
Mo Yi - During Chapter 13
Xia Yan - Post Chapter 12
Lu Jinghe - During Chapter 12
Please read everyone's story because I genuinely enjoy them all!
Now the second feature, Memories of Love and Card Milestone Reward
I will be honest.... this is genuinely baffling simultaneously also the most hilarious decisions LOL
Because the Card Mksupposed to be after every ML's Dream & Hereafter series roll out. Baffling decisions because the current GLB server cards, none of the ML/All ML whaler would reach the namecard yet wwww
Anyway because it's here anyway, here how it will look:

For the reward itself, basically each card has points and each rarity has a certain amount of points, such as:
SSS: 50
SSR: 30
SR/MR: 8
R: 1
The reward for the card collecting is:
Badge: 300 points
Avatar Frame: 600 points
Cursor Effect: 1000 points
Namecard: 1600 points
In-between there is S-chips and materials.
Please note that it only works for the first one, the copy that comes after that is not counted.
For example for counting: in my TW acc, for Artem, I have 2 SSS, 8 SSR, 9 SR, 3MR and 12 R
So it's:
2 x 50= 100
8 x 30 = 240
9 x 8 = 72
3 x 8 = 24
12 x 1 = 12
Total: 448

Side notes, Cursor effect is for tap tap animation and it's like this:
Anyway that should be all, I am not sure if people read my post that much but I hope it helps.
P.S.: After Artem's 4th Birthday, it definitely is Forever Young 4SSR event. Prepare your pulls XD
See you later ^^
#tears of themis spoilers#tears of themis#tot#tot spoilers#artem wing#vyn richter#luke pearce#marius von hagen#zuo ran#mo yi#xia yan#lu jinghe#tot artem#tot vyn#tot luke#tot marius
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Do you like Clangen and Sabertoothed cats? Great, me too!
My name is Pav and this is my clangen blog! <Start reading here>
Important Things
🧓 Im a '99 bby so please don't DM if you're a minor (actually would prefer no unexpected DMs period tbh, im anxious)
⛏️ I work 12hrs 7 days, week on/week off, meaning I will completely vanish 50% of the time and there's nothing I can do about it
🦘 I'm also an Aussie, so my time zone is weird even when I'm not at work (So if I don't reply, im not ignoring u! ;v;-b )
❔️Asks and Anons are turned on! Please read the FAQ below before asking to avoid repeats c:
😻 I read all the tags and replies even if I don't reply. Tysm everyone saying nice things, it makes my day ;v;
😵💫 My focus changes like the weather lately, so while I'm Hoping I'll be able to keep this up, please don't get Life Or Death Invested c':
Tags
#mammothmoon -all chapters are tagged with this
#moon (1/2/3/etc) -each moon is tagged by number, and in-character asks from given moons
#mammothask -asks sent to me (will also tag who asks them)
#mammothfanart -art of my silly sabercats by other blogs, tysm!
#mammothref -character references (or possibly species refs if i make them eventually)
#paleo stuff -anything where I'm nerding about paleo biology etc
#ooc/#Pav chatter -Pav updates about Pav! or asks directed to me
#blood/gore/animal death/etc -tagged straight as is if you need to block them!
FAQ
This will be added to as I get more asks and replies to go off!
How often do you post pages?
I try for at least once every 2 weeks, as I spend 50% of my life in the outback with no ability to draw!
Where/ when is Mammothclan set?
In late pleistocene North America, around 12ka ago, during the Younger Dryas!
What species are the cats?
They're Homotherium serum, a scimitar toothed cat.
How paleo accurate is this setting?
Relatively accurate? There's not going to be any species out of their time and place, but I'm not super bothered by, say, exact plant species and how realistic certain story aspects are.
Can I ask the characters' questions?
You can, but I can't promise to answer all of them!
Are we allowed to include characters as cameos/ draw fanart?
Yes definitely absolutely!!!!
You are also welcome to change them to regular cats if that fits better cx (please don't humanise them though, I find that specifically very uncanny)
What mode are you playing on Clangen/ what toggles?
Expanded mode, mass extinctions on, cheating on, "pregnancy ignores biology" off, unknown second parent pregnancies off (bc in my trial run every queen was constantly spawning kittens at lightspeed, no ty)
How far ahead are you from the pages you've drawn?
Currently 40moons ahead, cause I like playing the long game with foreshadowing >:3c
Where do you download Clangen?
Here!
Could you elaborate on/ explain content of (page/panel/speech bubble) that confused me?
Sure! If something is unclear, but it seems like it should be explained, please ask and I'll make sure to clarify c:
Can you tell me about (character backstory/spoilers/ aspect of lore not touched on in comic yet)?
No! I don't want to spoil those kinds of things, I'd rather they come up naturally in the comic than dump them under an ask.
I'm a firm believer that if it doesn't happen in text, it's not cannon.
#clangen#homotherium#mammothclan#pinned post#ive never done this before#but i think its a good idea bc ive Already gotten repeat asks cx#warrior cats#comic#warriors#webcomic
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All 50 “honest favorite character” prompts for Smaug
( @izunias-meme-hole )
1. Do you project onto this character?
More like the other way around lmao
2. Did you always like this character?
YES HE IS MY PRECIOUS
3. What first drew you to this character?
D R A G O N and also I love riddles
4. Did you initially dislike/hate this character?
I loved him instantly. Great villain counterpart for Bilbo, their interactions are so perfect
5. If this character were a woman, would you honestly still like them? Or in reverse, what if they were a man?
If they didn’t mess with his character/appearance the way they normally do in art I wouldn’t but I do not want to see the weird hourglass figure big lips and eyelashes thing they do to Girls tm in art to him. Let female dragons be cool and imposing. Like Zubeia from the Dragon Prince. If they did it like that nah he could still be cool as a woman dragon
6. Do you have any nicknames or pet names you use for this character?
Does it count if I had a crested gecko named Smaug once that I nicknamed Smecko (Smaug+gecko)
7. Does the character’s age matter to you?
In that he wouldn’t have the same imposing effect if he was just a tiny hatchling yeah but further than that not particularly
8. Does the character’s looks/design matter to you?
Yaya he looks so cooool classic dragon look and total banger. Both in what he looks like in the movie and in Tolkien’s own drawings of him. Although tbh I think I might like Tolkien’s drawings a little more, there’s something fairytale about them that is soooo good. But I also do love how you can see the fire moving up his throat in the movies
9. Does this character remind you of anyone you know? Does that affect how you see them?
No lmao
10. Do you see yourself in this character even without projecting?
Not besides a love of shiny rocks and riddles lol
11. How did you “fall in love” with this character?
I was very young and the Hobbit was an early introduction to all my favorite things (fantasy, dragons, swords). I was primed to unleash all my previously unused enthusiasm upon the first dragon in sight. And he is The dragon
12. If you could write effortlessly and as much as you wanted, what story (s) would you write for this character?
Ooo hmmm probably a Smaug pov of events, that would be fun
13. If you could draw effortlessly and as much as you wanted, what scene (s) would you draw for this character?
Him burning Bard to a tiny crisp 🥰 and/or him and Genesis having fun with arson together
14. Are you physically attracted to this character?
No lmao unless you mean aesthetically he is a very cool looking dragon
15. Are your thoughts surrounding this character usually sexual, non-sexual, or a mix of both?
Non
16. Have you ever cried when thinking about this character? Genuinely?
I don’t believe so
17. Have you ever felt physical pain over this character? (ex: physical heartache).
BARD WHY DID U KILL HIM :( not really lol
18. Do you prefer to see this character suffer or know peace? Angst or comfort? Both?
LET THE FOOLISH HUMANOIDS BASK IN HIS GRAND MAJESTY. ALL SHALL BURN BEFORE HIM and no pesky black arrows and pessimistic hater bowmen
19. Does this character serve as a stress ball/ security blanket for you? Something you run to after a bad day to feel safe or happier?
I have gone back to reading the Smaug chapter or watching the Smaug scenes before yeah and it is such an instant :D warm blanket
20. Do you feel affectionate towards this character?
THATS MY BOYYYYYY YIPPEE ARSON
21. Are your feelings about this character platonic, romantic, or familial? All of these feelings at once maybe?
He is my first dragon…that should be its own category
22. Do you think you will always love this character?
YES NOTHING COULD MAKE ME HATE YOU KING (UNDER THE MOUNTAIN)
23. Has this character permanently altered or impacted your psyche in a way you won’t forget?
D R A G O N S he incited my love of them. He was the catalyst
24. Do you ever dream about this character? If so, describe a dream you once had about them.
I’m sure I have but I can’t remember an instance rn
25. What kind of fan-fiction do you read about this character? If you don’t read fan-fics about them, why not?
I actually have not. I have no idea what I would find if I went looking
26. If you look for this character’s name on AO3, what tags are you including or excluding?
Anything nsfw I guess?
27. Do you like to ship this character with other characters or do you prefer not to?
Nah let him live his life in peace with only his beloved gold. Aroace icon tbh
28. Do you get defensive about this character? If yes, then why?
FUCK OFF BARD I WANTED MORE AND YOU ENDED IT >:( (lmao I know it had to happen but I beef with him on principle)
29. Do you affectionately bully this character?
Not really
30. Are you especially sensitive about this character?
Nah
31. Are you ashamed of liking this character?
NO HOW COULD I BE ASHAMED OF SMAUG THE CHIEF CALAMITY OF OUR AGE
32. If you could make this character a meal, what would you make them?
Roast bowman 🥰
33. Are you “blinded by love” for this character or do you accept any flaws they may have?
HE DID NOTHING WRONG DO YOU HEAR ME. AND EVEN IF HE DID HE LOOKED GOOD DOING IT
34. Does this character inspire you with little things in your daily life?
Maybe? Not that I can think of specifically atm?
35. Has this character ever prevented you from sleeping because you can’t stop thinking about them?
Oh I’m sure he did when I first saw Desolation in theaters, I get excited jitters after seeing movies I’m passionate about like that. And I’m counting all the times I’ve stayed up late reading the Hobbit
36. Do you feel a spiritual/soulmate connection with this character?
HE IS MY BOY HE WAS THE FIRST DOMINO IN MY DRAGON LOVING PATH. IT WAS MEANT TO BE
37. Is your love for this character a secret from people you know in real life?
Absolutely not lmao
38. Do you tend to joke more about dying or killing for this character? Both? What causes the distinction?
Killing. Bard
39. Do you feel lovesick over this character?
I don’t think so
40. Are you very empathetic towards this character? When they feel a certain way in the story, do you feel those emotions too?
It’s more of an I am pointing wildly screaming THATS MY SMAUG THE GREAT AND TERRIBLE at the screen/page situation
41. Do you prefer to interact with this character directly via self-insert/reader type content? Or do you enjoy seeing them mostly with other characters in the story and/or your OCs?
Uhh either way ig. But him and Bilbo interacting is probably my favorite
42. If you could, would you write this character a song or poem?
Sure why not
43. What type of weather makes you think of this character?
When it’s really windy and stormy-overcast but not raining. Just the ominous sense of encroaching doom and wonder
44. Which season makes you think of this character?
Winter bc desolation hehe
45. Do you feel as if you are intimately familiar with this character?
I have known him since kindergarten so I should hope so
46. How much do bad interpretations of this character upset you?
Idk what a bad interpretation would be exactly. I’m sure if I heard one I would loudly defend him. But mostly I do so jokingly lol
47. Does this character ever make you laugh sincerely?
He’s more of a jumping up and down excitedly situation than a laughing one. But if crazed giggling counts
48. What’s your favorite physical/design feature for this character?
He’s a classic red-and-gold fairytale dragon and it just hits so good. Classic trope for a reason. Also I love the mental image of his jewel-encrusted waistcoat
49. What’s your favorite personality trait in this character?
Mmmm I love his vanity ngl, he’s a little shit and I adore that. I think we should all speak in riddles about ourselves. Imposter syndrome would be cured instantly. That might just fix Genesis
50. Link your fav song, playlist, aesthetic board, fan-fiction, reference pile, personal artwork, analysis post, meme, headcanon, or quote for this character. Whichever one (s) you are most comfortable with!
Not gonna put a picture of it here bc I’m too lazy to go ask permission atm but I have a lovely painting of his eye in that close up shot from the end of Unexpected Journey where it opens that @/fridgefanatic did for me around the time it came out hanging in the corner of my room
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Ok so I didn’t see that you’d posted til the 17th, which is atrocious but I’ve been up to stuff and not on ao3 as much
I am indescribably hyped to read the new chapter, the glorious days that you post panthera are always fabulous
Onto the notes, major spoilers for Feast, chapter 76 of Panthera Noire!
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Dear god it’s refreshing to read your writing again, something about your style just hits right, specially cause I’m a bit hung over rn blegh
Gabriels nightmare is incredibly written, the fact that panthera does give this grown man nightmares is genuinely hysterical and utterly deserved.
Ehehehe your dialogue for gabriel is splendid, don’t like how he treats nooroo but the idea of him putting the broach on his night shirt is amusing, do you think he does it super fast cause hes para and like jabs his thumb while putting it on?
Daw juleka and rose being cute, this won’t last will it…
What on earth is alix’s dad doing up a mountain in tibet? I can’t remember this episode aside from a few clips so idk if this is pulled from canon or if this is something you’ve made up. Either way why was he up there he’s a little museum guy
Oh em gee marinette pov!! A rare delicacy
I love when alix jokes about things she shouldn’t know. How about a bunny miraculous indeed…
Oh marinette… the guilt Juleka feels about lying about her identity is like a whole different brand to what marinette feels when obfuscating the truth, marinette can like compartmentalise it into justifying her actions until it gets to someone really close but even then shes like welp its for their sake and mine cant do anything about it
None of that is important i just like it
Something something chess metaphor for how marinette uses the heroes and either she is the queen in these scenarios or panthera is and marinette is the king…
Tbh plagg calling wayzz a bootlicker kinda bangs, they’re quite literally gods and concepts and have been through loads of holders, the relationships for kwamis and their holders is always a bit weird to me, ach its something i fixed in my own stuff
Hmm interesting how juleka can hear so well, it would be funny if she’d just seen juleka hanging out with master fu but that’s more comedic value than plot progression
I really do love how you’ve got panthera and Fu’s relationship, there’s respect but also he’s not another person who she bends over backwards to accommodate like ladybug its a very good balance
Fu’s reaction to Feast is splendid, and interesting backstory… he’s like old as balls so i never really thought about his parents, i think i assumed he was born into the order but being abandoned is a curious twist, you’ve given me something to think about for my own work actually, even if its never mentioned its helpful for how to write him
Its been 3 days i got distracted and went to the club, dreadnought oldest rock club in scotland :D omg panthera would fucking love the dreddy i feel so at home with the like 50 year old goths who live there
Anyway, i also got ill so remembering about this was like amazing
I love how theatrically juleka and plagg speak even tho they’re like totally serious
Omg i hate gabriel. I understand him most of the time but ugh the fact that he’s acting like that towards nathalie when she’s going through the same thing emily did is just enraging
I mean i get that it might make him act more weird but still
Poor wee adrien man
Omg panthera acting like spiderman always gets me, its her little interactions with people that are so cute even tho she doesn’t know them but she does she makes so much effort to be down to earth with people ach
Fantastic chase scene, but alos hello?? Not Juleka trying to scheme if they can just save the miraculous and leave fu to Feast thats insane girl
“There's my girl” on god ladybug do you not hear yourself speak?? Thats your wife girl…
The type of friendship they have is sooo… married 40 years the spark died out but they still bicker and rely on each other. One of my pals and i act like that sometimes it’s good fun
Oh dear i feel so bad for Fu, like he makes bad decisions but mann that guys traumatised
I do love how panthera is like this horror entity type thing while ladybug seems to be more human. Panthera is a danger to all old men with high blood pressure fr
Honestly seeing LB fight without the suit is interesting but I’ll always adore Panthera or Juleka fighting without the suit, tho we did get a little bit of that last chapter, and, obviously, in the theatre arc
OH MY GOATS
I always love seeing civilians banding together against the akuma, alix having a molotov is so in character, i bet a hundred smackaroos she got the booze from Anarka
I like marinettes conversation with Fu, i cant articulate why but its a good scene
YAY more ladynoire flirting for no fucking reason we are so back
I mean we need to be for chat blank to hit as hard…
On that note i forgot what a goated season season 3 is, what with chat blank, reflektdoll with the kwami swap, timetagger time travel... And more i’ve forgotten
Good question why IS her plan always vore???
This actual made me cackle, awesome comedy cap
Oh no why’re we getting into Fu and Feasts relationship… youre making me attached to the senti monster bro i can’t have that
Oh fire tine ‘lego’ skeleton… i hate how the guardians lived after being eaten by Feast like I know the miraculous cure fixes shit but i feel like it should only fix the stuff that LB has been directly involved with. I don’t know whether you’ll keep the guardians dead or not but i can hope!
NOOO feast dying is just making me like really sad bro he was just hungry…
Monkey hands on head over here
Oh marinette the least subtle person in the world… actually just pmo cause i was wanting panthera to bring it up tho i guess it is proper evidence that marinette hasnt and her reasons make some sense but ugh
Toxic yuri continues cant wait for it to explode… maybe thats connected to the chat blanc incident?
I think the dissonance between how panthera sees him as a person who made mistakes and still holds him accountable while ladybug sees him as this tragic story who just needs to be coddled and taken care of is interesting
NOOOO FU WHY make them both guardians omg no. i mean yes its important cause its such a big deal, tho i cant see some of the conflict in season for coming about based off of marinettes vehemence to not put out too many miraculous when season four was crazy for handing them out like candy… we’ll just have to see how it plays out i suppose
Oh wait hang on am i diot? Is marinette just too focussed on herself to see that Fu has also been training panthera or is panthera missing some information? She might be missing some stuff with how she delegated asking for the B team miraculous to be permanent to marinette…
Hmm
I do like how set on killing hawkmoth panthera is, her scales of justice are perhaps a bit skewed and deviant, devient superego… yeah lets not psychoanalyse this using freud
AWESOME CHAPTER!!! Sorry it took so long for me to read i am busy with college bullshit… home stretch this year thank fuck
HEHEHE ITS ALL GODO IM GLAD YOU ENJOYED!!!! I had so much goddamn fun with this chapter and being able to set so much stuff just here has been a blast.
As for Marinette, Fu, Juleka, and all the guardian stuff. You're right on Marinette being too focused! In her pov, it says Fu stares directly at her when referring to guardians. In Juleka's, he stares at both of them
Marinette has never considered Fu may have been teaching Panthera the same shit hes been teaching her. In her eyes, shes been trained for this job and only her!
And so she brunt forces that worldview whenever she talks to juleka, esp about the miraculouses.
In her eyes, Panthera doesnt know as much as she does! So of course shes taking the lead, of course she's not making the right decision on letting the others have their miraculouses full time- of course its right for her to take control! Fu knows best, and Ladybug knows what Fu wants, so Ladybug knows best!
It's not meant to be demeaning, its not meant to strip Pantheras autonomy, but it does!
And thats a pattern with them. Ladybug is the plan guy and that has gotten to her head about how they treat their partnership.
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Is It Bad That The Main Character’s a Roleplayer?
Korean Name: 주인공이 컨셉충이면 곤란한가요
Genre: Action, Adventure, Comedy, Drama, Fantasy, Psychological
Synopsis:
I’m a roleplayer. A gamer who creates characters according to their classes and happily acts as them.
“Don’t… Touch me……”
“Talk more and see if you can handle my wrath……”
My current character was a Demon Knight who kept a Demon sealed in his right arm! One day while I was just acting as my character and enjoying the game as usual……
“Log out.”
[This command cannot be carried out.]
“……? Log out.”
[This command cannot be carried out.]
“……???”
And as if not being able to log out wasn’t enough…
“You disgusting Demon! So you finally took over Sir Demon Knight’s body!”
“My eyes cannot be deceived! Sir Demon Knight isn’t that kind!”
Because of my damn companions I couldn’t even stop role playing!
Can this role playing gamer faithful to their setting ever return to reality?
Novel Updates Link: https://www.novelupdates.com/series/is-it-bad-that-the-main-characters-a-roleplayer/
Personal Review:
I’m writing this when I’m at chapter 200, so I’m nowhere near finished this novel, but I’ve loved this from chapter one. Honestly, I love the way this novel weaves comedy and tragedy together ( the latest chapters I’ve been reading have been steadily ripping my heart out 🥲).
Let’s break this down into sections.
World building: it’s done quiet well when one considers other novels surrounding game transmigrations. Personally, I thought it was just the right amount for this particular set up. Though, there isn’t a lot in the beginning, as MC still thinks he’s in a game at that point :) it does get fleshed out more later on.
Plot: while I’m only 200 chapters in, I will say I love the pacing of this novel. The plot is very action heavy, but the characters do get a few breaks between the crises they have to deal with. Each arc is intersecting, and so far none have been too rushed or dragged out. While the beginning of the novel may seem dragged out to some, I reckon that it was one of the best beginnings for a novel of this genre. I honestly think I would have done the same thing in his position tbh. If you do find the pace slow though, read up to around chapter 50 before giving up (I can’t remember exactly where the arc picks up speed but it’s around there somewhere).
Fight Scenes: I need to touch on this separately. The fight scenes are so well written. I adore the action genre, but it’s rare to find fight scenes as well written as this. Especially the boss raids. I love those scenes so much djhdhjedbjsdhks.
Romance: non-existent.
Side Characters: there’s a lot of things I can’t touch on here without spoiling. The characters are fairly well written and each get their own developments and honestly, I love them all so much. Although, I will say that the main group have slower development than one might expect. Since MC has a lot of walls up, their backgrounds aren’t fleshed out until later on, and even then most still only have foreshadowing for said backgrounds at chapter 200. I will say, given their personalities though, it does match with them to not reveal a lot. Also, their personalities are fleshed out well, especially due to the occasional chapters that are in their POV’s. As of this point in the novel, Deathbringer owns my heart. I love the main groups dynamics with the MC (I feel like, even though them getting closer is slow-paced and bumpy, it fits given the mc’s situation and persona) and how each of them interact with each other as well.
Mentality: I’m referring to the main character with this. If you can’t do heavy topics, this novel is probably not the best for you. MC struggles a lot, he’s just good a hiding it, even from the reader. Can’t elaborate further due to spoilers, just know that a fair few of the things he does will make a lot of sense after learning more surrounding this.
Foreshadowing: there is so much. It’s done really well, and honestly, I don’t even know what half of it is for yet, but as an Ex-rank fan, I know how to pick up on hints in novels. But for the ones that have obviously had the related topics revealed, it was well-done.
Main Character: this man right here is going to make you cry and laugh at the same time. And cringe. His inner dialogue is amazing, with half of his thoughts being comedic and the other half being damn tragic. The more I get to know about him, the more I love him tbh. Some people may find his attitude annoying at some points, but once learning more about the previous life, it is so easy to see why he acts the way he does at some points. Honestly, I just want to give him a hug so badly. I will say, this novel does explore what is means to be human quite a bit, and that is a necessary point to be aware of to understand the main characters thoughts and actions (In my opinion it is anyways).
System / Game: this topic here is complicated. The game that MC gets trapped in isn’t elaborated on a lot, but given the foreshadowing showing up about the system, it’s easy to conclude it’s actually important to the plot later on. Can’t really say more on this topic, since it involves spoilers and nothings actually been confirmed at the point I’m at.
Anyway, go read this!! And feel free to tell my any thoughts :). I’ll probably be posting my thoughts as I read more of this, but those will contain spoilers soooooo.
Personal rating:
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ / 5
Where to read:
I would recommend reading this story on Reaper Scans, since they have up to chapter 210 currently updated. Edit: Reaper Scans has shut down so this is no longer available.
If you want to read further, the raws are available on booktoki:
https://booktoki468.com/novel/108111?stx=주인공이+컨셉충이면+곤란한가요&book=완결소설
Have a good day, and have fun reading!! 🦦
#is it bad that the main character’s a roleplayer?#주인공이 컨셉충이면 곤란한가요#Is it Difficult if the Main Character is a Concept Bug#주컨곤#demon knight#recommendations#review#this story needs more fans
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Abigail Headcanons
Summary: A collection of loose hc that I have for the daughter character that I've created in the past for the moon boys and the reader
Warnings: Not much. Abi does canonically have a pet tarantula though so beware of that.
Author’s Snip: I just miss her tbh
I’ll shut up now. Enjoy! And don’t be afraid to request.
Her full legal name is just Abigail L/N-Spector, but in spirit she is Abigail L/N-Spector-Lockley-Grant, you and the boys call her that as a joke but also when you’re mad at her when she’s done something bad.
She’s fluent in both Spanish and French because Steven and Jake taught her both languages respectively since the day she could talk. This actually caused a bit of an issue in the later years of her school career because she was fluent to the point that she would have just passed both common and advance classes. So she just had a free period during the time she would have had her language classes.
She has a pet tarantula she’s named Maple. She got her when she was around 11 or 12 because she wanted one as a pet. The boys set a really high mark to see how dedicated and responsible she could be while also hoping that maybe by the time she reached it she’d want a “normal simple pet” like her own fish, or hamster, maybe a turtle, or literally anything else. But when she reached that goal she still wanted a tarantula and the boys promised and they are unfortunately fathers of their word. Thankfully she’s the only one who handles her because she’s HER pet, but Steven is scared of Maple, Marc isn’t too bothered as long as Abi keeps her away from him, and Jake is okay with her and is actually quite fond of her and will take a gander at her in her tank whenever he’s in Abi’s room.
She has a bad habit of chewing her pens and pencils. She’s tried breaking this habit and was vaguely successful, but it’s only when she’s in public or around others. When she’s in private she still does it.
Her favorite subject in school was biology, anatomy, and psychology. Her least favorite was math and physics. She thinks math is boring. That’s also why she dislikes physics but she also had straight up beef with her physics teacher. Why there was beef? The world may never know.
As a kid, Steven would encourage her to read books by paying her 50 cents for every chapter she read. This was basically her allowance until she was given a real allowance later in her life because she had read so many chapters that she’d have a good amount of money saved up from all the books she’d read.
Abi was taught to always be polite and respectful and follow the golden rule. But is she decides that she’s had enough and wants to put people in their place she will very much do so and will verbally eviscerate them. She has Steven’s sass and Marc’s temper in there somewhere and she’s not afraid to use it. Along with Jake’s self defense lessons in case someone wants to fight. This may or may not be where the physics teacher beef originated from.
She can see Khonshu and they have a unique grandfather and granddaughter dynamic. Khonshu denies that he has an attachment to Abi but he secretly cares for her to a considerable degree and was unofficially a part of her life and he secretly goes out of his way to protect in case she’s ever in danger. Sometimes she messes with him by calling him grandpa and other iterations. He calls her “little worm” or “smallest worm” but when he wants to soften up her calls her “Starlight” or “Stardust”.
In addition, Khonshu was banned from giving permission to Abi as a kid by you and the boys because he’d give her permission on things that you didn’t want her to do. So there was a rule made that “Grandpa Khonshu’s permission doesn’t count.”
#moon knight#moonknight#moon knight x reader#moonknight x reader#steven grant#jake lockley#marc spector#marc spector x reader#steven grant x reader#jake lockely x reader
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I have to know… have you ever found any good fics recently? like güd ones, king and country kinda of good?
tbh nothing of the caliber of my favorite fics, all of which were written like over 10 years ago </3
but as far as like the smutty longfic of my dreams there's one currently still being updated called restricted section. sometimes the updates take a while, but it's the only fic i've at all invested myself in in the past year. but it is like 50% smut and if bratty sub frank/older dom gerard kinky bdsm (and also theyre in love) fic isn't your thing then like it really probably won't be your thing.
if people have recs for more recent stuff i'm open! but despite the rec i just gave i tend to stay away from wips bc i hate things not being finished. i'm allowing myself to read this one bc the author has an excellent track record. but like the 3+ months or so between the last chapter and the one that was posted last week actually killed me bc i check for updates EVERY DAY lmfao. i wont start a wip from an author who doesn't have years of completed works under their belt bc we all know how it burns when they get abandoned. but if anything completed is good, let me know!
also like. what happened to oneshots? like even long oneshots. like i have been all things unholy is a oneshot. no chapters. posted as a whole. i miss that and i feel like i NEVER go on ao3 anymore and see like someone has just dropped 60k of frerard into the universe...i wish they would.
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ninjago is layed out so shittily tbh. the two (2) pilots weren't originally part of the first season but now they are. we have multiple "seasons" that are just one episode. nobody can remember how many seasons we actually have off the top of their head because of that. the main show is actually 2/3 different ones— s1 and s2, s3-10, s11-onwards. we changed character designs and some voices halfway through the series because of the spin-off movie that was almost entirely different than the show. the first two seasons are 20+ episode, the next 7 are 10 episodes each with a main character each season. season 10 is literally only four fucking episodes for some reason. season 11 has two different chapters (fire and ice) and it's literally the only season that does that. for seasons 11+ the episodes were shortened to ten minutes but we got double the number of them. most people count day of the departed (between seasons 6 and 7) as it's own in-between episode and not a season, but also count the island (fuck idr. s14 and s15 i think) as it's own season—which, by the way, first released in ten minute parts (it was a single episode) that were not cut well. and it was only in french. we had to rely on french people and google translate to tell us the plot. i don't think ive ever fully watched it in english. dotd, by the way, is not on netflix despite the rest of the shows being there, and while you don't have to watch it, it is an important episode to watch because a character stops being a ghost during it, the main villain of the next season was in it, and it's just generally confusing as a kid to have not watched it. there is a recap series that is only on youtube. there are about a million comics, almost none of which really matter or affect the main plot. however. in the last season the main characters lose their powers and, almost immediately after that, a sequel show that is actually distinct enough from the first one to be it's own show releases, in which... they have their powers back. because they went and got them back in a comic. which i can guarantee most people did not read bc we could not be bothered to look for it hard enough online.
said sequel show is back to 20 episode seasons and 20+ minute episodes thankfully. however whole seasons keep consistently getting leaked way before they're supposed to drop (most of the time they're in english. most of the time.) which leads to 50% of fans watching them, 49% thinking people who watch them early are monsters, 1% not really caring, and a whole lot of people watching the leaked versions and then watching the official ones months later because they feel bad. this keeps happening. it happened with the old show too. they released a trailer for the second-to-last season of the main show months after it officially released. months. the final season was released in two parts (parts. not chapters.) and on netflix the island (again. a single episode) is credited as being the part one to seabound (an entire season). they somehow fucked up the timing so bad with the final few episodes of the final season so that they were literally putting out several filler episodes (not even good ones. they could have been erased and the plot would have been better.) before the finale which made it feel like they had too much time on their hands. and then the finale felt extremely rushed. they had an 18 episode season (3 hours of showtime) with ~5 filler episodes that did nothing at all so you would assume they were just killing time. and then they essentially panicked and shoved everything together really fast in the finale. i still don't know how they did that. incomprehensible choices were made during production and i hope to never be in a room with any of the people who made it.
#also they keep stealing my aus for the new show but whatever....i digress....#ninjago#ninjago dragons rising#this is a fucking mess#dragons rising seems to be doing okay format wise. for now. but they really need to get better security or some shit#because we keep seeing entire seasons get leaked 6+ months before they actually come out lmaoooo
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update on uh… my feelings about writing atm?
I’ve been really enjoying doing rewrites and edits on my upcoming* longfic, which is such a relief lol.
I had 12 chapters written out before I started posting my echo longfic (TD) on tumblr, and then I got carried away with that and this one (shadows of kamino) went by the wayside. Then anytime I went back to it, and especially since my writing had improved a lot (imo hehe), I would just hate all of it. I loved my characters and did a lot of behind the scenes development of them, but reading what I’d already written was just weird. It was like I was telling the story, but I just wasn’t doing it right. It was basically hard to edit because it already felt like I’d written the story so poorly that I couldn’t rectify it and would have to start again.
Anywayyyyy recently I’ve actually broken through the barrier and managed to start adding, changing, and taking away stuff in a way that doesn’t feel like me hating my past self for writing so poorly lol. I’m starting to be excited about the story again and ig it it’s just nice. I was definitely about to give up, cause tbh it’s going to take me so long to finish — I’ve got up to chapter 30 planned out in detail rn but it’ll probably end up at 50.
yeah idk how to conclude that bit so… yeah.
lowkey writing these event requests is taking years off my life rn 😭 they’re such fun ideas but why are you all so ANGSTY. My GOD. I’ll get through them dw, but it’ll take me a while. I feel like I keep saying this but I really wanna just let it be known. I’d probably classify myself as a slow writer? maybe? and also the tendency to make fics longer to try and flesh out characters more is really taking me recently. I’m trying to restrain myself a little for the sake of my sanity lol. We’ll see how that goes.
ok. that is all :)
*upcoming could mean anytime in the next 6 months+ lol, perhaps I shall just bite the bullet and post the first chapter when I’ve finished editing it idk
#trex rambles#sometimes you just have to scream into the void yanno?#ahhhh I am excited to start posting SoK but also very scared 😁#you know how it goes
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AO3 Wrapped 2024
I was tagged by @lilolilyr to post my AO3 stats for 2024. Thank you!! <3
Please note that all titles/words highlighted in colors are clickable!
Works published: 19 total, 13 of which were for Hacks, and six of which were for The Devil Wears Prada.
Word count: 96,568. Shame I didn't reach 100k I guess (I was SO close, too), but oh well.
Kudos: 3,427 as of Jan 6, 2025
Hits: 67,797
Bookmarks: 445
Subsciptions: 401
Most popular by kudos: Partners, at 601. Oh, hey, it's reached 600 kudos since I last checked!!! The first fic of mine to go over that threshold :')
Most hits: the joys of spring, at a whopping 18,445! The hit count is so high that it's even closing in on my second most popular Camren fic (19,463 hits). Still, it'll be a long way to go to get to the top spot, where my most popular Camren fic currently sits at 27,821 hits. At the same time, it's been less than a year for this one, and seven for the others, soooo... who knows what'll happen!
Longest: Once again, the answer is the joys of spring! the joys of spring has exactly 30,000 words in 30 chapters. (My greatest accomplishment in 2024 tbh lol.)
Shortest: Well, technically speaking, it's Exclusive at 50 words. It's not a fic, though. It's a manip, and the article I wrote to go along with it is just... an afterthought. Which is why I'm going to go with That's not very in love with me of you at 500 words.
Most comments: the joys of spring once again, which got 145 comment threads.
Favorite comment: This one from @prozac-shaped-urn, hands down.
Wow!! I never thought I'd see the day where someone would give me a run for my money in the smut department, but you absolutely have!!! I'm highly impressed! The em dashes really add a heightened level of anticipation to the scene, and I like the hyperfocus on internal senses. The imagery of galaxies behind Ava's eyes speaks to the full-body domino effect of pleasure. It's very well executed. I'm over here taking deep breaths and consciously unclenching my jaw. Ya got me hot and bothered, ngl. Ava swallows. Blood rushes to her head, and she knows without a doubt that her face is red. She’s hot, burning hot, and she can’t pay attention long enough to hear the rest of what Deborah is saying. Not shaming, then. Accusing? Is Deborah accusing her of— Ava stares ahead and licks her lips. It’s all she can do to try not to be too obvious about the absolute state of her underwear. She’s so fucking—why is this not turning her off? Why is being scolded by Deborah doing it for her? “Come.” “Huh?” The way I also had the 'Huh?' reaction to reading 'Come' skldjfalkdjsf It spreads from her core to her stomach, to her thighs. And then to her heart, and to her arms, to her legs and head and her everything. / Ava swears something bursts behind her eyes. It might be a firework. It might be a meteor. It might be an entire fucking galaxy. / The galaxy behind her eyes explodes into a wall of white while her body pulses, her stomach contracting along with those pulses. This focus on internal senses is what I wish everyone would include in their smut. But writing erotica is a skill! It takes time to learn how to meld senses together to create an immersive reading experience, and I think you've done that well. Consider me a fan! <3
I didn't reply to it for days on end when I got it, I just wanted to read it over and over again. And I'm still not over it. Like. I'm deserving of this much praise????? Me???? Ahhsbjhdsvjcjdhb!!!!!
Fics that made me cry: The one fic that had any angst in it, Shattered Remains. Writing it felt really good. I loved it. But it did also make me very emotional.
Fics that made me smile: I don't really remember anything but the one fic that literally cracked me up every single time I attempted to read or edit it. Keepin' You Hangin' On The Telephone. My fiancée and I (jokingly, at first) tried coming up with absolutely ridiculous euphemisms for the vulva and vagina and after telling @wilfriede about it, they made me keep every single one of them. Without tagging the fic as crack, or warning people about it. And, honestly? It was kind of a blast. People liked it despite the horrendous euphemisms, and we three got a huge kick out of it and laughed about it for ages lol.
Gifts: Five! That's all the gifts I've ever received! :))) I got two Hacks fics from @lilolilyr, and three podfics from @wilfriede! Two of those were my own works, which made the gifts even more exciting! Like. Their Podfic of Bitte bitte mich is literally perfect. It's exactly how I imagined it and how I would have read it myself. (And you should totally listen to it.)
Collaborations: One! My first collaboration ever, in fact! Dare Me to Tell You the Truth was written by me, recorded by @wilfriede and me, and edited by @wilfriede for Pod Together 2024! As well as my first collab, this was also my first ever podfic. For either of those, I couldn't have asked for a better person to work with, honestly. @wilfriede -- thank you for your enthusiasm, your excitement, and your patience! You're awesome! (As are all of your podfics!)
Events: As mentioned above, Pod Together 2024. My first (and only) event :)
Word count read: I didn't read much, and I also don't keep track of my read fics. Probably somewhere between 150k and 250k, if that.
Bookmarks: I've added eight this year, making it a grand total of 27.
Once again, thank you very much to @lilolilyr for tagging me :)
I'm going to go ahead now and tag @prozac-shaped-urn, @wilfriede, @nic-writes-sometimes and @nachdenklich-tj. I can't think of anyone else who's a writer!!!!! If you see this and want to post your stats, though, go right ahead!! <3
#ao3 wrapped 2024#as usual. i'm going to tell y'all that i love getting tagged in these things#because i love talking about myself lmao#fanfiction#myfanfic#tagged:sk
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As an actual yuri warrior, I think Minori would like sweet, fluffy stuff. She'd probably die when the couple finally gets to the handholding 50 chapters in (only halfway kidding). It's just a feeling, but I think her and Kohane would binge Bloom into You together, and maybe it would be funny if she got all of Leo/Need into "The Guy She Was Interested in Wasn't a Guy at All" (Great manga, if you haven't read it). Because, uh. Music.
I usually wouldn't do another ask this quickly, but this is important business.
i need minori to read the moon on a rainy night so bad bc its like. peak yuri manga for me (but thats probably biased bc of the deaf love interest) but yeah tbh she can be any yuri reader i just know she loves giggling and kicking her feet whenever something yuriful happens in the manga 😭😭
#emotanswers#also i agree i think shihosaki out of everyone in leoni would be interested in the green yuri manga the most#saki tugging shiho and pointing into the manga like look. ur the one mistook as a boy#“why” “bc you kinda have the same vibe”#very yuriful indeed
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Haha I’m the same way lol, any time I see or hear anything about Indiana I perk up, see and old abandoned buildings lol, I go to sleep wondering how you’re doing, wake up thinking about you and if you got any sleep hehe, I can’t turn on the tv without checking tubi first lol, you’re my princess and you’re so special to me I don’t know what I would do without you hehe
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omg 😭😭😭😭😭🥰🥰🥰 ofjfjrhhf i just smiled so big. i love that you pay attention to the little things it makes me feel loved 😭💕 i wish i could show you this Indiana history book i bought but i donated it after i read it. it was kinda insane, the cover was all “Hoosier Life” in crocheted looking font, but then you open it and there was a chapter about like one of the first KKK chapters, and it was just tacked in there with a bunch of positive stuff so it was like …. errr i think this book is celebrating it? so insane. i hoard books but i felt dirty keeping that one around
my favorite indiana lore is the circus!!!!
a few people have already figured out where i live so idc anymore tbh— Parks & Rec is based on my hometown (yes it really is that stupid). we also got James Dean and Garfield which i think is neat

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Theoretically, if I ever were to consider writing a TF One Shattered Glass retelling/continuation, I would definitely base it off of Animal Farm.
A few more details/ideas below the cut bc of TF1 spoilers.
Also, it's been a while since I've last read Animal Farm so I'm sorry in case I got any names wrong/am a bit wonky on the plot. I don't have my copy with me right now, so I can't look any of it up.
Characters
Quintessons = Humans Sentinel = The Farmer Orion = Napoleon D-16 = Snowball Elita-1 = The third pig (?) Various miners = the other animals
First Half of the Movie
The first part of the movie would largely stay the same except that Orion is not as naive or nice. Instead, he's clearly power hungry, he saves Jazz not bc he cares about his co-worker/friend dying but bc Jazz will be in his debt, he's looking for the Matrix not bc he wants to help the miners but bc it will make him more powerful and maybe even allow him to overpower Sentinel.
I think I'd even keep D's darker moments - he can still want to kill Sentinel, but I don't think he'd try to kill Starscream anymore. Mostly bc the High Guard's motto has changed to sth like "Together We Are Strong" (no, that's not a quote from Reinhardt in Overwatch - you are imagining things). Not yet sure if it's him or Orion executing Sentinel.
Pretty sure I would have them abandon Bee (who is slightly more bitter and jaded than in the movie) in Sublevel 50, though. Maybe it's even B-127 who wants to go back bc he is afraid of the things (punishments) that may be awaiting him in the outside world and they just let him, Orion maybe even convinces him that it's better to stay safe down there. This way, he has one less competitor for power. Then they move on and never think about it again. D might remember him later, once he's Megatron and banished and go back to get him bc he realises that that was very fucked up. But tbh. as much as it hurts my heart to treat my blorbo like that, I think it would be the best statement for the story if B just vanished from the story and we never get to see him again. Because this time they (Orion) are not out to actually improve stuff. They just want to change who's in power.
Rest of the plot till they return to Iacon stays largely the same for now.
Some more plot points:
The uprising of the miners/Orion leading them into battle? That's the Great Battle between Animals and Humans.
Sentinel's execution? That's the animals banishing the humans from the farm.
Orion receiving the Matrix ? That's the pigs taking control of the political system of the farm bc they are "best suited" to it. All seems to be fine and dainty for a bit. :) (Not yet sure how Orion would receive the Matrix. Not yet sure if he actually even gets it. If he does, it's not almost sentient like it is in the movie where it only bonds with good leaders. Instead it is just a pure power-up. Instead of Megatron, Orion gets the transformation/power-up scene.)
All the miners receiving T-Cogs? First Liberation of the Animals. All Animals Are Equal.
Optimus banishing Megatron (would happen later than in the movie - only after the first functionist rules have been introduced)? That's Napoleon banishing Snowball. We don't see Megatron (or the High Guard) again for the rest of the story.
Some more:
Not yet entirely sure what I would replace the windmill with. Maybe some sort energon refectory/distribution system.
The everchanging/vanishing rules on the farm? Some animals are more equal than others? That's OP and his governement slowly introducing more and more functionist rules.
It ends, rather suddenly, when one day one of the miners realises that oh damn, OP is barely distinguishable from Sentinel. Except instead of cogless miners we now have Functionism.
Maybe there is another racing scene with two new miners (Hot Rod, anyone?) And someone, maybe Jazz or a random NPC we met in the first chapters/during the first racing scene is like: Huh, when did we start needing miners again?
And that's it.
Maybe, if I'm weak, there'd be an epilogue/additional oneshot where we get to see B-127, Megatron & co. again and learn what happened to them. But at the same time, I think that would dramatically weaken the story. + It would be depressing af bc they are not in a good place.
#transformers#tf one#tf one spoilers#I feel like I need to stop having NEW ideas#Just very glad that my copy of Animal Farm is living with my parents right now#so I physically can't start this AU until christmas#And have to work on ongoing wips until then#some miners are more equal than others#edited for a few misspellings/typos/brain afk typing mistakes
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hiiiiii waltzing into your inbox at 3:30 am with 60 screenshots as per. this is elli's chapter 3 read pt 1 featuring cameos from another mutual (imagine me just continually pulling bsdtuals out of my pocket like clown handkerchiefs) who is also going to start tsp soon and has a tendency to randomly go mia for days hence why they haven't been spotted before in these






























I would say this is less the handkerchief trick and more of an endless clown car scenario. I feel like I'm watching your bsdtuals spill out of a gutted Volkswagen beetle.
Alrighty, chapter three ( YIKES ) here we go.
The lack of live updates is actually quite interesting??? I think, of all the chapters to do it on, three is definitely A Choice ( considering the dream sequence and everything ) but the Shaking coming out of nowhere, just like infrequent distress calls is incredibly funny.
Ah. Yes. The massive cast...I'd smile and say I'm handling it well but if I'm being honest, it's a lot for me too. Especially with the added layer of mystery and conspiracy and everyone being a liar ( and me being the one who has to untangle and weave all the facts together ). I'm just glad I don't have to do any of the extra work that this being an original work would present--like setting and developing the characters--since I have the advantage of this being a fanfic set in familiar territory ( WIA was like that too now that I'm realizing it. Maybe I'm just lazy????? ).
I'd LOVE to be r2d2 ( maybe I already am <- has the entire history of star wars in his head ).
"MARK TWAIN IS SO SEXY" say it LOUDER for the people in the back!!!!!!!!!!!
just kidding. or yes. or no. i don't know. I've said this before but I'm weirdly attached to this guy it's a disease I don't know why it happened or how it happened ( considering they made him Ugly in the anime ) but it did and now everyone who reads tsp has to deal with my barely contained and unsubtle feelings about him whenever there's a 70s precinct scene.
Back on the 'everyone's a liar' note. I wanted to make it very clear with the switch from 70s M.E. to 50s Dazai and Yosano interacting in the morgue that people lie. It's expected! Especially when everyone is trying so hard to protect themselves and their interests. Characters that tell the truth, though veiled by riddles and white lies, are common because they advance the plot but not realistic. If the cops came to me and asked if I was at In N Out on Friday at 7pm ( and I was? ) I'm lying just on principle tbh.
hello to the new mutual ( Max? ) I hope they haven't been giving you a lot of grief over this.
nyxi cutting in every so often to be normal about Yosano is KILLING me. it's like a recurring bit in these. never fails to make me smile.
"Already hearing that dazai is a complete and utter failure in this fic" oh like you wouldn't believe.
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