#i will say yhe rabbit 100% deserved to look hot and sexy here tho ........... sighsssss

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the rabbits 'death' was so anticlimactic, ill give em points tho for making her look all sad while hanging LOL

also since we're here n im not gonna make a whole post for it the ending wassss. fine. its okay ig....... it definitely doesnt hit like the book at all, at any point but eap the ending. like theyre Gone and then jeff is like hey ur soda! ZERO callback to the pizzeria at all like it has the exact opposite affect as the book. n like, the entire thing is like this lol. the dialogue flow sucks, the visuals r so unrefined i can recall every mistake in coloring etc in my head rn(and every single one is on the rabbit lmao💀) n the panelling even is so. :/ eugh

it wouldnt even be that bad to me if it was just one or two of these, like i could be more forgiving to the art if the dialogue actually gripped me. and i could forgive the dialogue if the art did more of the legwork for storytelling but together it just makes for a very very sadly bad comic.

this is the main issue w the comic to me, the dialogue doesnt grip me but the artwork also is too timid to take charge and lead the story either. they dont really work together or individually to the benefit of eachother.

i dont want to make it seem like i dont appreciate the work that was done here tho, Didi Esmeralda and Eva De La Cruz did a excellent job for what it was. comics arent easy by any means, and even if its not to my tastes i do not want to knock the work they did, literally everything except the rabbit was decent i think this is just another case of non furry artists drawing for furry franchises ejekndjndjdjd