#i think spurred me onto the line of thinking of ? how implicitly coercive are the wishes? if they can react violently when pushed hard?
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🤝🤝🤝 Thank you!! and aaaaa i think everyone could stand to think about the posession more. it haunts meeee. like what the hell man it's such a big unanswered question!! I'm like 80% sure it's gotta be universe wish stuff but it might not be?! like if it's not then what is it?? but if it is the wish... like... then what insane consequences right?? RIGHT????
also seeing the lines. hold on i'll put it in rot13 to censor it for any of my followers who haven't read yet. seeing these lines in your fic
Va Onzobhpur, n lrne nsgre gur ybbcf’ raq, Fvsseva xrcg rirelguvat ur jnagrq. Vapyhqvat lbh.
^ this shit made me lean toward my screen and lock the fuck in. this is when i knew you were on the same wavelength as me.
also god the use of the word 'dictated' and the shifting of blame that comes with it. really good. gonna be thinking about the wording you used in those passages a lot.
via your last comic, i think youd have a great time reading Tidelocked by faedemon. its like your braincells found eachother across time and space and went “hey what if Loop was suffering actually because they no longer had autonomy due to the wish”
well i've sure read it now !! damn !!!
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@moipale hi this fucking rips? 🤝 i am grabbing you i have nothing particularly coherent to say but this was very very well written! The flow of the prose was very nice and there were a lot of really good moments of rhythm!! As someone who is dialogue-heavy in my writing i can really respect a more prose heavy piece like this it is super well done. Massive fan of that method of loop getting their body back also. really fucking good.
i don't wanna say anything specific in this ask because people should go read it for themselves but the bit with the [objects] in [the location] was so fucking inspired. perfect pairing down and microcosm of theme. well done
#i could pick out random lines for a hot bit saying This Shit Made Me Go Oh Fuck Yeah This Guy Gets It but that would be a lot of them#its wild to be seen as a fancreator whos looked up to btw ive only just crawled back out of my 5+ year OC hole.#im like blinking into the light over here youre telling me people like my stuff what. hwuhh?#but very nice to hear thank u :)#also the homestuck pull isnt actually random lol. the thing that got me thinking about the posession in the first place was UltDirk and his#use of narration and the terminals. that in specific has fundamentally changed the way i approach Narrators in fiction and thus kinda like#i think spurred me onto the line of thinking of ? how implicitly coercive are the wishes? if they can react violently when pushed hard?#just like how the terminal narration reads like intrusive thoughts in act 1-4 or is noticed by mind players in acts 6 and beyond#it's a leap but considering um.#dirk “suicide as public spectacle to escape a dead-end timeline” strider 🤝 siffrin “star-eater” no last name#and also. gestures. AR. my mind was in that space throughout a lot of ISAT#not that dirk and siffrin are similar characters outside of their fear of endings. theyre actually polar opposites for a lot of things.#but it's why i specifically was on the trail of the posession the second i saw it like SO WHAT DOES THAT.... IMPLY..... THEN.....#and so i hand these connections to you fellow homestuck and go IDK MAN I THINK THE LENS HELPS SOMETIMES...#isat spoilers#lucabytetalks
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