#i rly was never satisfied with how this piece turned out tbh

[daeyumi]

To wake the Wind Fish 🏞️🥚🎼

[Linktober 2022 Day 24: Dream]

[tayegi]

Lu new rules is always worth the wait. I love it when the OC stood up to him. And Jungkook being whatever he’s trying to do is leaving us in suspense. But last the scene is perfect. I can picture that scene as if I was watching a drama. Especially when she say “it’ll be easy getting over you” and turn around VERY slowly. Gosh I just want to cry cause it’s beautifully written. JK probably scare that he’s not good enough for her?JEON JUNGKOOK you get on my nerves but I still love him.

jjiritjjiritgirl said:ohmygod the new chapter for new rules is so good ohmygod like i had to pause a lot when oc was calling jungkook out for being a coward. i wasnt the one going off but DAMN that felt good.

luxinfired said:OH SHIT I JUST FOUND OUT ABOUT THE NR UPDATE KXJABGZGQGHS Girl your writing is the best thing in the world! I love OC, she showed us her vulnerable side but then she goes and confronts Jungkook like that! That last scene was amazing, you tell them girl! Also I loved the conversation with Yoongi, I'm glad she was able to empathize with him immediately. I really want Yerin and him to find their own happiness, they deserve it~ Thank you for this wonderful piece of writing 💜

Anonymous said:jungkook a whole ass idiot

Anonymous said:Hi Lu!! U probably ddnt receive my ask from last time as well so Im writing this again! Well I just want to tell you that NR.11 WAS FUCKING AMAZING AND I'M SO SATISFIED WITH IT AND I CRIED! at first I expected OC to just yell at JK for his reaction when she confessed, thn have him tell her his story BUT SHIT SEEM SO DEEP HOLY SHIT! I feel so bad for oc and for the fact that she felt the need to say sorry? Thats kinda fucked up but I believe that's bc she was pretty shocked by his reaction[1–❄️🐰

Anonymous said:Also maybe I'm not the only one hatin' on JK, but damn boi better have a GOOD excuse to why the fuck is he being a pain in the ass, I mean.. I don't wanna judge him for his choices, but thats exactly what I wanna do BYE/ but like im pretty sure that he's been acting like a jerk to 'help OC get rid of her cancerous feelings' cuz I dnt think that he sees HER as a prob-in fact, he actually rly likes her- but he just cnt seem to accept her feelings that's so absurd.. [2—❄️🐰

Anonymous said:Like he was so happy to see her when he was with his team but once he remembered that he was supposed to ignore her he acted like he ddnt want to see her. And I really dnt know which part was he so embarrassed about when she came in calling him out in his own frat; was it bc she exposed his whipped ass in front of his we-dnt-do-feelings™ buddies? Or was it bc of sth else AMMA FUCKING SNAP! [3—❄️🐰

Anonymous said:And I really think that when OC told him that it's gonna be so easy to get over him now that he showed his true colors, like, I really think that it was a slap to his face. Cuz deep down, I dnt think he wants her to get over him and I know that shit will go down from here when the entire frat is mocking OC's speech, JM will know abt it, MJ might hear from him too AND HOPEFULLY SHE CAN KICK THE BULLSHIT OUT OF JK ONCE MORE! gosh Lu thank u so much for this amazing fic💕 u make my days😭[4/4]—❄️🐰

Anonymous said:holy mother of god wOW emphasis on the OW NR11 !!! Lu my god, idk how you've gotten me to love getting stabbed in the heart like this but !!! :,( thank you so much for updating and incorporating toxic masculinity and gaslighting into this chapter, they're such important issues and i just wish OC didn't have to deal with their effects. idk how long you're planning on making NR, all i hope for is that someone will treat OC right by the end *side-eyes JK, whispers "get it together, fool"*

Anonymous said:Thank you so much for yet another amazing chapter of NR!! I love how you write with so much detail about the thoughts of the OC when jk rejects her. For me, it heightens the emotions of the story so much and i love that I can feel what the OC feels - the initial embarrassment, the sadness, the anger. I also loved how the OC confronted JK and didn’t just dismiss her own emotions, acknowledging that they’re just as valid as JKs. Thank!!! You!!! :)

Anonymous said:hi lu! just wanted to day i love nr and that i appreciate the messages that you put in your writing. especially with the latest chapter, i relate so much to what nr yoongi is going through, and seeing that was a wonderful reminder that im not alone in this situation and that when you reach out, people will support you. again, thank you so much for writing and sharing these stories with us and i hope that you yourself have an amazing group of people who support and love you 💚💜

Anonymous said:I feel like waste it on me fits as bg music to the situation JK and OC are in after her confession in NR lol.. but anyways, just finished reading the latest chapter and wow. So many emotions. I'm so glad OC finally confronted JK, i love her fiery personality! Your writing really has me immersed in my own little bubble as I put myself in OC's shoes. Looking forward to the rest when the time comes, i'm curious to find out JK's backstory. Great work, Lu! 💕

Anonymous said:Ahh I just finished the update and its so heart wrenching. The emotions were so raw and realistic. And as hard as it was to read the pain the OC had to go through, I'm excited that either way things are moving in a new direction. She can't keep suppressing her feelings forever. Admitting feelings can be so difficult but afterwards its so freeing knowing that you're not holding anything back and being honest with yourself. I'm looking forward to the growth this will bring all of the characters.

Anonymous said:I just caught up to new rules and wow as someone who experienced a heartbreak that I never want to go through again THAT SHIT HURTED I felt the emotions of the o/c yelling at jungkook out of frustration and anger highkey wish I could’ve confronted the person that I had a relationship with in that manner yk to get it out of the system I think that way the healing is a faster process because you aren’t having an internal dialogue of what you could’ve said etc wow thank you for writing new rules! x

Anonymous said:I love the new NR chapter! It definitely hit home when you described how the OC felt after she got rejected. I love the end in this chapter. I love the OC's confrontation. I wish I could be a woman on a mission like her too. Yoongi's character got me namshooketh btw. I love how you added the lgbtq aspect into this fic. Everything about it is so realistic. And I love the gaslighting part in her confrontation so much! This is such a beautifully written fanfic. 😭❤

bekzzz said:You know what I really appreciate about New Rules. Mijoo and the Readers friendship. I love how they stuck together after everything. I also love how the reader is trying to reclaim her self esteem. I think calling Jungkook out was amazing for her. Also, maybe for him it will help him figure out his own feelings. Love is okay, being romantic is okay. It doesn't diminish masculinity or make someone weak. Thanks for this amazing update! Till next time.

Anonymous said:holy moly, new rules was eventful. i felt so much secondhand embarrassment when she was *rejected* by jk, and really hated nr jk for how he reacted... and then when oc, yerin and mijoo were together, and she felt like she needed to be the strong one. i really fucking felt that. it felt like a punch to the gut. but oc’s comments to jk really got me, and i have so much respect for her, yet pity her at the same time... as well as jk. thank you for the amazing update!! 😘 ly babe

Anonymous said:Dear god my heart was pounding all throughout that chapter lmao. How the heck you gotta get me so involved my body freaks out whenever you update New Rules? For real tho I feel for Yoongi- I know what it's like to have people be ready to ridicule and drop you for something you can't change about yourself, so that got me real good. I do hope that JK and MC are able to work themselves out they are by far one of the most interesting pairings I've read about thus far (praying for a happy ending)

Anonymous said:HOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOD! I WAS NOT EXPECTING THIS! Girl, you threw me for a loop. JK's reaction was pretty close to what I thought it would be, albeit more hostile which makes me so fucking curious like BABY WHO HURT YOU?!?!?! Yoongi turning Yerin down because he's gay just wow. I had zero inclination until the second he said it and the whole conversation was just gorgeous. And that final stomp into the frat house and speech were just glorious. Thank you my love

Anonymous said:first of all i want to thank you for the new chapter, it was such a surprise since you was so busy these past months so thank you for taking some time to write. now about the new chapter... my heart was beating so fucking fast the whole time, it’s amazing how well you’re able to express the feelings of the characters and make us all (well at least me) fell connected to the story. i’ve said this before, but the most amazing thing about nr (beside the plot & characters) is how relatable it is

Anonymous said:🎃(1) OH MY GOD YOU ARE SO CUTE AND AT SOME POINTS I AM not making any sense so be prepared 😥 💜💜 I hope I don't bore you /// Ok, here we go. ( /// means another scene or change of subject and --- means same scene but next line. Also I'll use the 🎃 emoji for Halloween's sake 😊) Damn that's gonna be so long 😥 oh well. /// Akakakakak first of all, great start! It lights up the heavy mood. And tbh who wouldn't get distracted from a half naked jk. 😏 ///

Anonymous said:🎃(2)Akskfhlskfajfkf I'm smiling. My heart is clenched tho. (I'm reading the kiss scene in the beginning) /// Why do I feel him saying I like you too won't be the way our oc means. My heart is confused. --- Fuck. --- Fuuuck... ///Ok, there's no way he would look at her with disgust. Come on giiirl. Don't fall for the lies our brain tells us. ---Ok, scratch that last. WHAT THE FUCK JEON JUNGKOOK. 😬 ----I wanna hug the oc and tell her that he is afraid and stupid for acting that way.

Anonymous said:🎃(3) That she is more than what she thinks. And like wtf he might be a star athlete and a stund but wtf about not being good enough?! Askfkddskkas. fuuck. //// You are not supposed to be fucking anything. Let it ouuut. They love you and it will help.--- Ok I get the point with it not being about you. (Ahahahahaha I'm on a roller coaster, sawrryyy) ---- Oh yaaaasss, I liiive for angry oc! You go guurl! ---- Well, if he is gay that would explain a lot. --

Anonymous said:🎃(4) ---"Trust me when I say that it would be entirely impossible with me" bruh. He is gay. --- Oh shit, he is gay...... 😶 ---- Now I'm sad. Ahahah and now I wanna hug him too . And I love the oc for being a good friend and I love that he reminds me of one of my closest friends being a tsundere.😢 /// Way to go yoongles, woop woop!! that sonofabiish. 🌚🌚---Wow when yoongi relaxed I realised I was holding my breath. Wtf ahahaha

Anonymous said:🎃(5) /// Aish. I'm getting angry at jk and angry at the oc for taking his bullshit and not being angry ahahah. ----- WHAT THE FUCK JEON KUNGKOOK WHY YOU BEING SO "TOUGH" AND "MANLY" YOU FUCKIN FUCKER 👿 (about him smiling at first and then being fake macho) ----- My eyes grew when you wrote she headed to jk frathouse 👀 --- I'm crossing my fingers for a buttkicking session, sth like mijoo did to the oc. Maybe a power point presentation of why he likes her too. Ahahah ---

Anonymous said:Ooo girl I am FIRED UP. You write so well that I can always fell the emotions OC feels. I was sad and hurt, shocked, and really mad. JK is such an asshole for making OC feel like her feelings weren't valid. He really does need to grow up. Good on OC for realizing that. And I don't know why he's putting up such a front when he's been such a good person thus far but BITCH IT BEST BE A GOOD REASON. So I'm assuming yerin has got the bad ending? Bc she doesn't know about yoongi being gay n shes hurt?

Anonymous said:(1/3🧟‍♂️) New Rules is probably my favorite non-published work that I’ve ever read and I really just want to thank you for being willing to share your writing with us! So, I feel like a lot went down in this chapter. I saw another anon say they thought Jk’s issues stemmed from a previous relationship. The girl probably made him feel like relationships in general are toxic, and as a result he’s completely unwilling to put himself in that kind of vulnerable position again? (1/3)

Anonymous said:(2/3🧟‍♂️) Similar to how the oc is feeling about being rejected, like she was stupid to let herself feel something for him, that’s why I think her barging in and calling him out in front of his friends got to him. (2/3)

Anonymous said:(3/3🧟‍♂️) All in all though, this chapter was really well written (like they all are lol) and I just wanted to take a moment to let you know how much I appreciate all the work you put into your writings bc they’ve really inspired me to educate myself on feminism and just a lot of things in general I’d never thought about before. Thanks again, Lu! I hope you have a wonderful week 💜💜 (3/3)

Anonymous said:wow lu, thank you for the newest nr update! my thoughts on my first reading: jungkook's reaction was shocking for the emotional side of me, not the logical side. I still feel for oc tho. yoongi being gay? didnt expect that & now I feel bad for assuming his sexuality, glad he talked to OC abt it bc it must have been hard to hold that secret. oc calling out jungkook? shes much braver than me, & I agree, jk's actions seem off. will reread & send reactions after, again thank you for writing/sharing!

There is literally nothing i love more than reading your thoughts and reactions!!! i have no idea how my writing will affect others, so to hear this is the most rewarding thing ever. thank you so much my lovely, passionate readers. You mean the world to me!!!

[alucywarner]

~♥ PRIVACY PLEASE ♥~

[Here we go. Nice fun post that we’ll enjoy after the horrors inflicted upon us by these people’s children. Imagine this; the children (by the children I mean, Jarmen) are called into the living area by the parents, and maybe this concerns both of them a little bit, but not enough to where either of them are nervous, or anything. 

So, they sit, and it is Mr. Harper who is speaking up first. He gestures to the other parents.]

We just wanted to let the two of you know that we were going out to dinner. Like a double date, I suppose. Feel free to order in whatever you’d like on my tab.

[And I’m sure both Carmen and Jordan are looking kinda confused, because, welp, what parents in their right minds would leave two teenagers with each other like that while they went out? Then again, Mr. Rivera probably thought his precious daughter was the epitome of innocence, so... maybe he thought nothing of it-- that was, until he decided it was his turn to talk.]

No disrespect to your son, Ryder, but I do want the kids [he says ‘the kids’ but looks dead at Jordan.] to realize that there are boundaries and rules set, and I will be keeping in touch throughout the night. So, I don’t want any funny business happening. [Fatherly cop-like eyebrow raise, again directed more at Jordan than his own child.]

Oh, yes, of course. Good point. Right. I’ll be keeping up with you too, Jordan.

[Jordan looks slightly mortified.] You said it’s just a double date? Are we even gonna be alone?? [Because he’s expecting the company of Julian and Sophie, actually.] 

A few of your brother and Sophie’s school friends are visiting them, so they’re going out with them tonight. So, yes, you’ll be here alone. [Jordan side-eyes Carmen who’s lips appear to be pursed.]

And that is why I said we’ll be keeping in touch with the two of you.

[Carmen’s finally gonna jump in.] Dad, Jordan and I are like brother and sister. [Lol. Not yet.] Don’t be silly~.

[Another hard side-eye from Jordan who probably also rolls his eyes covertly, but ya know.]

Hm. [Mr. Rivera’s eyes are on Jordan now, because he does not believe the boy feels that way, and he is correct af, but that’s beside the point, because his precious angel princess said that is the case, and so he believes her. Yup. She would never let the scrub touch her, right? Mhm. Okay, Mr. Rivera.]

No funny business, sir. Promise.

[This seems to satisfy the arguably way-too-trusting parents. And they’re very soon on their way to their dinner. (Julian and Sophie had been gone all day with said school friends.) Now the children are alone, and they probably haven’t said much to each other, and maybe they haven’t even been in the same room together, but yeah, Carmen did get hungry eventually, so she did have to come back through the living area for that purpose.

And so, just as Carmen is about to mention that maybe they should think about getting some dang food to eat, because she gets hangry real quick, Jordan, who has been on the couch probably since the parents called them in there, stands up and turns to look at Carmen who was probably behind him since she just walked in.]

Brother and sister~? [Eyebrow raise.]

What?

I’d hate to see how you treated your brother if you had one, if we’re like brother and sister.

What’d you want me to tell my dad?

I dunno.

‘Hey, Dad, you totally should keep checking in, because I’ve actually slept with Jordan a few times.’? Sorry, I’d rather not.

You could’ve just said we’re friends, or something.

It wouldn’t have satisfied him. Believe me.

Brother and sister though??

I wouldn’t fuck my brother if you’re concerned you’re getting yourself involved with someone into incest~. [But she’d fuck ur brother tho. Jsjs.]

That’s not my point, Carmen.

Then what is your point, Jordan?

[He pauses, and then he huffs a nice big puffy huff.] I don’t have a point.

[A huff of her own.] I don’t see you as a brother, you know. [Or a friend. Or a romantic interest. Or anything but a warm body, tbh. But... yeah.]

Yeah? What am I then?

Jordan? I don’t know.

Good defining term there. 

It doesn’t need a definition.

But I-- [A sigh.] Yup. You’re right. It is what it is.

Am I wrong about that?

I didn’t say you were wrong. I said you were right. I just agreed with you.

Or are you just saying what you think I want to hear~?

Why are you trying to get me to say something?

I only ask in case you have something you want to say. [He starts to say something then stops himself. Carmen eye rolls.] Say it, Harper.

[A scoff, bc, rly, he doesn’t want to say anything, but the lady commands it.] Maybe it’s just fucking confusing, Carmen.

What’s so confusing about all of this?

You. You are. I feel like I have no clue where I stand with you. Like, are we-- are we friends? Are we... something else? I get it’s not romance, but I struggle to understand what the deal is.

Then maybe don’t try to understand, and take it at face value.

I don’t even know what face value is anymore.

Don’t think about it at all then. It’s so not important in the grand scheme of things.

It’s important for my s a n i t y, though.

Oh my God. You talk way too fucking much sometimes.

I just want to get it! 

shIT. GET THIS AND SHUT. UP.

[Yeah, Dad. Brother and sister. Definitely. And yeah once more, that definitely succeeded in getting him to shut up for the moment. Because, boy, he just wouLDN’T GIVE UP TRYING TO PUT A LABEL ON THIS SHIT. Indeed, it was driving poor little Carmen nuts, but congrats, honey, you played yourself. Because you think the only way to get him to shut up is to let him get it in, but that’s onLY MAKING YOUR PROBLEM WORSE. THINK FOR A SECOND. YOU GRADUATED WITH HONORS. YOU’RE SUPPOSED TO BE SMART.

So, take a guess? He’s hype as hell. Because, really, once the kissing starts, he’s not really looking for a way to define things. He’s just looking for a way to get clothes off. AND GUESS WHAT? THAT’S HAPPENING TOO. And before Carmen knows it, she’s being lifted up and carried. Oh, no. Not to one of the rooms. That’s just too far away, isn’t it Jordan? Yup. So, where’s the closest place for us? THE COUCH. JESUS CHRIST. Plop down they go. Just sitting. Casually sitting and making out. Losing clothes. You know the deal. Until here comes more dumb stuff. Here it come.]

So, brother, huh?

[Annoyed scoff of irritation, like don’t ruin the mood by taLKING, JORDAN.] My God, do you ever stop?

[And instead of a verbal answer (good.), we get a turn and a backwards shove, and it’s further down onto the couch they go as we lose more pieces of clothing in the desperate attempts to get Jordan Harper to stOP asking about what the definition of “Jarmen” was. What Carmen clearly doesn’t realize is that she is BONING HERSELF RIGHT NOW. IT’S NOT ACTUALLY JORDAN, NO. IT’S HERSELF.  Like, honey, really. To initiate this when he’s asking what you are... You stupid soul. You should know better.

But the dealing is done, and there’s no turning back from this point on, my dear girl. What has Jerica told me? Made your bed, made the mess, and LAY IN IT. Or, in this case, lay on the couch!!!!!! SMH, YOU CAN’T BE HELPED.]

[THE END. SMDH.]