#i put the heaviest focus in the intro bc that's what's really important for dragging in new readers
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me sitting on posting ladue chapter 2 bc im going thru edits for chapter 1
honestly it's kinda amazing how much my writing skills have improved in 2 years
#speculation nation#ladue shit#if u havent read the first chapter in Uh ages it'll be pretty worth rereading after i update it#which u will know when i do that. it will happen About when i post chapter 2.#im not changing the plot but im improving so much of the word choice#and a good amount of sentence structure. & various other grammatical choices#i put the heaviest focus in the intro bc that's what's really important for dragging in new readers#& putting less focus later on. if it's serviceable ive stopped caring lmfao#but changing anything that's Too glaring still.#overall tho it's pretty decent. im just a bit more picky nowadays i guess#& my style Has changed some#im gonna keep a copy of the original version for my own purposes. but what's on ao3 is gonna just be the updated version#ive already updated the tags & summary of the fic. keeping the core of it but Improving it#i guess if u care about knowing the original version of chapter 1 nows the chance to look at it??? idk why you would tho#i care about it as an example of my writing at the time. but that's about it lol#the relative inexperience is obvious to me. and so. i am improving it.#tired tho... i gotta hurry up lmao if i wanna post this b4 going to bed. Ugh
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