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auremberite · 8 days ago

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reread the Omen of the Stars for the first time in a decade and,, brevity is the soul of wit, but the surviving narrators don't even get a SINGLE conversation post-final battle??? where's my plot structure triangle???

#warriors #warrior cats #i made the mistake of starting this with a fineliner and couldn't add as much value as i wanted #meant to be a post-melatonin pre-sleep doodle but it got away from me #NO RESOLUTION WHATSOEVER SO #like ALL THREE major villain deaths were like 2 sentences each #and all the same cause of death???#LIKE??? everyone dies except a few cats the end :) is NOT a conclusion to a TWELVE book arc!!!#LET THEM TALK TO EACH OTHER EVEN BREIFLY #AFAIK THESE CHARACTERS DONT NARRATE AGAIN SO ITS LIKE. OKAY BUT HOW DOES IVYPOOL FEEEEEEL.#my art #comic #jayfeather #lionblaze #dovewing #ivypool #fanwork

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