#i know i shouldnt feel bad because im a total beginner & if ppl are mean to me about writing bad theyre not worth it anyway but it still

[shrikebrother]

i've written a blurb for something i've kind of been working on but it feels clunky & i don't know how to fix it. i would show it here to ask for advice but i'm afraid of getting judged bc my writing is bad 😭 if anyone can give like, feedback or edit suggestions & wouldn't mind seeing me stumble trying to write words please let me know . do be warned i will probably be asking you for advice a lot which i know can get annoying